范文一:中考英语短文改错
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中考英语短文改错
I have come in China for two years. My friends in 1. __________
England sometimes write to me, ask me how long 2. __________
I’ll stay here, when I’m thinking of returning 3. __________
home. The answer of their questions is simple: I 4. __________
do not know when I return home. At the moment, 5. __________
I have no reason to return back to England. I like 6. __________
living in China; I enjoy meeting Chinese people 7. __________
and travel around the country. My work is very 8. __________
interested, and there are so many things I don’t know 9. __________
about China that I hope to discover it in the future. 10. ________
【答案解析】
1. 将come改为been。come是终止性动词,不与时间段连用。
2. 将ask改为asking。现在分词作伴随状语。
3. 在when前加and。 when引导的从句与how long引导的从句是两个并列的宾语从句(作asking的宾语)。
4. 将of改为to。在answer, key, way, entrance等名词后,习惯上用介词to。
5. 在return前加will。这是将来时。注意:不要误以为when引导的是时间状语从句,用一般现在时代替将来时。事实上,when引导的是宾语从句。
6. 去掉back或将return改为go。因为return=go back。
7. 此行正确。
8. 将travel改为traveling。因为traveling与meeting并列,作enjoy的宾语。
9. 将interested改为interesting。表示某事物“令人??的”用-ing形容词;-ed形容词则表示某人“感到??的”。
10. 将it改为them。因为此处是指many things。
Thank you for your offer invite me to the free 1. __________
summer English course in your school. As for my 2. __________
choice of the two courses, I’d prefer the five-weeks 3. __________
course for 50 hours. This would allows me more 4. __________
time to see your beautiful country while learned 5. __________
language. I’d like to do some traveling and make 6. __________
a few new friends. In all the subjects I’m learning 7. __________
at school, I like English best. I hope me to take this 8. __________
chance to improve my spoken English level as much 9. __________
as possibly. I believe I will have a wonderful time 10. _________
in England this summer.
【答案解析】
1. 把invite改为inviting。现在分词作定语修饰offer。
2. 此行正确。
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3. 把five-weeks改为five-week。“数词+连字符号+名词”作定语,其中的名词要用单数。
4. 把allows改为allow。在助动词will, would及情态动词can, may, must等后面,永远要用动词原形。
5. 把learned改为learning。while learning=while I’m learning。
6. 在language前加the。特指英语这种语言。
7. 把In改为Of。subjects“科目”,English是其中一个“科目”,表示最高级的比较范围,若是整体与个别的关系,就用of。指时间、地点范围,才用in。
8. 去掉me。主语希望自己做某事,直接用hope to do sth,事实上,也不能用hope sb to do sth这一句型。
9. 去掉level。这是中文式英语。improve=make?better。
10. 把possibly改为possible。as?as possible(尽??)是习语。
We’ve just moved in a house and we want to 1. _____
buy a new color television set, and I’m not 2. _____
sure about a size. Maybe we should buy a big 3. _____
one. If we buy a small one, we might have 4. _____
to change for it in a few years’ time for a bigger 5. _____
one. My husband thinks it’s no necessary to buy 6. _____
a very big one. He said our sitting room isn’t very 7. _____
big. If we put in a very big television, they will 8. _____
be bad for our eyes. Anyway, we’d better to make 9. _____
quick decision because the price may go up soon. 10. ____
【答案解析】
1. in改为into。in“在??里”表静态的位置;而into则表动态的位置,意为“进入”。
2. and改为but。前后句之间是转折关系。
3. a改为the。这里表特指,指要买的电视机的大小。
4. 此行正确。
5. 去掉第一个for。“把A物换成B物”的英语表达是change A for B。文章中该句句意为“几年之后就要把小电视换成大电视”。
6. no改为not。因为no是形容词,修饰名词,而necessary是形容词,所以要用副词not来修饰。
7. said改为says。因为上下文都是用的一般现在时,这里指现在的思想,现在的想法。
8. they改为it。这里指的是the big television。
9. 去掉to。had better后接动词原形。
10. quick前加a。make a decision意为“作出决定”。
改错题思路
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1 通读全文,了解文意
2 以一个句子为单位思考
3 中考改错题有1:1:2:6的规律,即正确一行,缺词一行,多词1/2行,错词6行
4 主要改错思路:
1)以一个句子为单位,找出主语,谓语或主语,系表结构(即句子的主要部分)
2)谓语动词单复数一致,有无一句话出现2个动词(尤其注意原形动词)。
3)时态错误,主从句时态错误。或通篇文章是现在时态,突然出现一般过去时态,尤其没有时间状语。
4)被动语态误用
5)固定短语误用或混用:so...that....写成so....and... Because of写成because for,be known as/for混用,give in /give
out误用
6)单词错用:adj/adv混用,近义词误用:loud/aloud,拼写错误,n的可数不可数,v延续与短暂性,及物与不及物。
7)逻辑错误:(1)连词误用(and/but误用,so/because, then/however...)
(2)人称乱用:Sally(女名)后面人称代词用he,或者单复数混用如:前面是说复数名词(things)后面用it/itself/its来代替。
范文二:中考英语短文改错
篇一:2014年中考英语短文改错十七篇及答案
2014年中考英语短文改错十七篇及答案
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Many years ago a poor man grew an orange tree. 1. _______ On the tree there were many fine oranges. Some day he found 2. _______ one of them was so big as a football . He took it 3. _______ for the king . The king was so happy that he gave the4. _______ poor man lots money. When a rich man heard of it , 5. _______ he said for himself ,“I’ll take my gold cup to the king 6. _______ and he will give me much money . Next day the king received7. _______ from the cup . The king was very fond of the cup and he told 8. _______ the rich man,“I have an orange . It beautiful than the cup, 9. _______ so I have decided to give it to you as the reward instead money.10. _______
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One day a doctor was starting his morning works. Suddenly 1. _______ a man ran his room. His face was red
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and he could 2. _______ only say“Quick! Quick!”The doctor thought he can be 3. _______ very ill. His assistant helped to get the poor man sit in 4. _______ a chair. The doctor gave the man some medicine to make 5. _______ him to sleep. Then he looked into the man's mouth and 6. _______ pulled out all the bad tooths. As soon as the man woke 7. _______ up, he said“Quick, doctor, Quick,”with a low voice.8. _______ “It's all over now,”the doctor told him.“You don't understand,” 9. _______ said the man.“I came to tell you your house is on the fire.” 10. _______
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Every morning John goes to work by trains. He always1. _________ buys a newspaper , it helps to make the time pass more quickly . 2. _________ One Thursday morning, he turned on the sports3. _________ page . He wanted to see the report about an important 4. _________ football match the night before . The report was such 5. _________
interesting that he forgot to get off at his station . He didn’t know it when he saw the sea. He got off6. _________ at the next station , and had to wait long time for a 7. _________ train to go back . Of course, he arrived very late
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8. _________ at the office . His boss were very angry when Tom told him9. _________ why he was late . “Work is very more important than football ! ” 10. _________
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Dear Ralph,
I’m a senior student. I have be in love with a boy 1.————
for three years.
But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly 2. ————
to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter 3.————
he said, “We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait 4. ————
to see until we have any chance after graduation.” So 5. ————
after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about 6.————
go out . But he said he didn’t want to. He just 7.
————
wanted to sleep and watched TV. 8. ————
What do you think I should do? Do you think 9.
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I should continue to love him and give up? 10.————
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Nowadays,almost every family has TV set,and almost
1___________________.
everyone likes watching TV.TV has become part of our lives 2___________________. TV has many advantages,for example,it informs us the 3___________________.
latest news which is happening in the world;it can open our 4___________________.
eyes,enlarge our knowledge and also help us to see more 5___________________.
about the world.But,it also has some disadvantages.People 6___________________.
waste too much time in watching TV and his normal life 7___________________.
and work are affected.To the children who they spend too 8___________________.
much time in watching TV,it can do harmful to their sight 9___________________.
and healthy.So we should control the time of watching TV. 10___________________.
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Dear Tom,
I am very sorry to have learned that your parents killed in 1___________________.
the September 11th Incident.In this attack the World 2___________________.
Trade Center,that was one of the tallest buildings 3___________________.
in the world,was completely destroyed and thousand of 4___________________.
people lost their lives.I'm very angry with the terrorist 5___________________.
activities.We against all forms of terrorist activities 6___________________.
and supported the war against the terrorism.
7___________________.
Don't be too sad.Don't lose your heart.After all,the majority 8___________________.
of the people in the world love peace.I wish you can recover 9___________________. from the sad as soon as possible.Do take care of yourself. 10___________________.
Best wishes.
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Li Ming,who has been working as postman for 1___________________.
two years,always wears a suit of green uniforms. 2___________________.
He worked with care as well as with effort.He 3___________________.
serves for the people heart and soul.Every day he 4___________________.
gets up early to deliver newspapers or magazines. 5___________________.
He is so careful and he has never been wrong. 6___________________.
One day he had to send a dead letter and it happened 7___________________.
to be raining hardly outside.But he set out immediately. 8___________________.
He had asked nearly everybody in the district after 9___________________.
he managed to hand letter to the right person. 10___________________.
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On Saturday,July 22nd,there will have a few visits to 1___________________.
different places.Everybody is welcomed.All the visitors 2___________________.
will be divided into four groups,Each groups of visitors 3___________________.
can visit one of the place such as a factory,a farm,a 4___________________.
school or hospital,Please sign your name at the Service 5___________________.
desk by 9:00 pm and say which place you wish to visit it. 6___________________.
We'll set out after the breakfast at eight in the morning 7___________________.
and came back in the afternoon.We'll have lunch at the 8___________________.
place of visit.We hope you a pleasant journey. 9___________________.
Do tell me your choice by 9:00.That's all,thank you. 10___________________.
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It is on Sunday today.Early in the morning my
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1___________________.
classmate and I went to Xi Shan by bus to plant 2___________________.
trees.As soon as we got there,we began work. 3___________________.
Some were digging,some planted,and there were 4___________________.
still some watering.Both of us were trying hard to 5___________________.
plant as much as we could.All of us were afraid of 6___________________.
falling behind.After work,we were wet all over.Looking 7___________________.
at lines of young trees,we forgot our tiredness.We 8___________________.
came back at 12.we all think it is necessary of us to take 9___________________.
part in this kind of physically labor.
10___________________.
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Dear editor,
My name is Xiao Hai,boy student in senior Three. I
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don't think it is necessary to write the “S” in a capital letter what do you think, Editor? 1___________________.
Recently I've read in Shanghai Students' Post that 2___________________.
you need some students reporters.I am anxious to 3___________________.
be one of them.I very like English.I have been 4___________________.
learned it since eight years ago.Now I can talk 5___________________.
with foreigners with English.I can read China Daily. 6___________________.
I took the first place in writing an English composition 7___________________. contest.Besides,I do well in a computer competition. 8___________________. Would you be so kind as to receive me? 9___________________.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon. 10___________________.
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A group of cows refused to across yellow lines which 1___________________. had painted on a road near their farm in Somerset.The 2___________________. markings
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were painted as a traffic calming measure,but
3___________________.
experts think the cows may believe in it is a cattle grid (格
子). 4___________________. Farmer Gordan Brinson said he was surprised on the reaction 5___________________. the animals has to the lines.”We were bringing them in for 6___________________. the winter,but had to get them over the yellow lineslots 7___________________. of yellow stripes across the road.When the cattle came the
8___________________. lines,they stopped and would not go.The cattle was not the 9___________________. only animals unused to the new lines.The horses had troubles 10___________________. going over it as wellthey tried to jump the lines.”
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Dear Tom,
How time flies!It's two weeks after the beginning
1___________________.
of our summer holiday.How are you going along recently? 2___________________. I've been staying with my uncle.I found interesting
3___________________.
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to live here.However,I feel a bit alone,because I have 4___________________. no friends to play but my fiveyearold cousin.My 5___________________. uncle permitted me to invite you to here.Therefore,
6___________________.
I send the email to you and hope you to come here.
7___________________.
Please write to me as quickly as you make up your
8___________________.
mind.Take Bus No.225 from Xiamen Road and it
9___________________.
will spend you an hour to get to the bus stop.I'll meet 10___________________. you there.
Yours truly,
LiMing
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We’ve just moved in a house and we want to 1. _____
buy a new color television set, and I’m not 2. _____
sure about a size. Maybe we should buy a big 3. _____
one. If we buy a small one, we might have 4. _____
to change for it in a few years’ time for a bigger 5.
_____one. My husband thinks it’s no necessary to buy 6.
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_____a very big one. He said our sitting room isn’t very 7.
_____big. If we put in a very big television, they will 8.
_____be bad for our eyes. Anyway, we’d better to make 9.
_____quick decision because the price may go up soon. 10. ____
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I live in the country and my father was a farmer. 1. __________ He is now forty-five year old. Because of years of 2. __________hard work, he looks old than his age.
When I was 3. __________young, he is used to tell me the
importance of study. 4. __________Father knows little about English and other subjects, 5. __________but he usually
gives me some good advices on how 6. __________to learn my lessons good. He is not only kind to me 7. __________but also very strict in me. With his help, I’ve made 8.
__________great progress. I’ll never to forget what he
taught 9. __________me. I think my father is best father in the world. 10. _________
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Thank you for your offer invite me to the free 1. __________
篇二:2015人教版中考英语短文改错经典试题
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dirty and poisonous that people don?t dare swim will be prevented in the near future. 3. Dear Abby,
How are you? Today I?ve got They can?t in the capital instead. Then I?ll be able to ,Best wishes Jane
1. __________ 2. __________ 3. __________ 4. __________ 5. __________ 6. __________ 7. __________ 8. __________ 9. __________ 10. _________ 1
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1._________ 2. _________ 3._________
5. Good morning !
My name is Andy .I?m da. I ?m eighteen .
That?s all , thank you6.
4._________ 5._________ 6. _________ 7._________ 8. _________ 10. _________
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7. Dear Tina ,
1. _________ 2. _________ Yours , Yan Hong8. Dear friends ,
3. _________ 4. _________ 5. _________ 6. _________
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Mary is my best friend. We?re but now I live at Beijing and she lives inGuangzhou. We don?t look each other very often, but we?re in touch all the times. I often write
1. 2. 3. 4 .
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_____________to Mary and telling her about the things
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thatare happened at my company, and she often writes to me about her work. We talk in the phone
once a week. Sometime I call her on hercar phone, and we send e-mail to each other. We?re really luck. There are so many ways
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himself, “I?ll take my gold cup to the king
the rich man,“I have an orange. It?s
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Every morning Steve went to work by train. As he 1 __________ has a long trip, he always buys a newspapers. It helps
2 __________ make the time passing more quickly. One Tuesday 3 __________ morning, he turned over the sports page. He wanted 4 __________ to see the report about an important football match
5 __________ the night before. The report was so interesting that he
forgot to get off at his station. He did not know it unless
6 __________ he saw the sea. He got off at the next station, and had to waiting
7 __________
a long time for a train to go back. There was no doubt that he arrive 8 __________ late at the office. His boss was angrily when Sieve told him9 _________ why he was late. “Work is very important than football! ”.10 _________
he shouted.
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3___________4___________ 5___________ 6. ___________ 7____________ doesn? 8___________9___________ 10___________15.
Today is Saturday. Students don?1_____________ It?2____________ 3___________
is doing her homework. “Get up. Larry.” says his mother. “” 4_________ Larry doesn? 5____________
6____________ “Three times five is fifteen.” 7___________ Larry?s mother doesn? 8____________ Larry?s room and hears him reading. She is angry. She asks,
“”9____________ “I don?t know.” “Aren?t you reading?” “”10__________ Answer the boy,”but I?m not listening”!
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篇三:中考英语短文改错考点详解及真题解析
中考英语短文改错考点详解及真题解析
一.中考英语短文改错考点?非谓语动词错误
非谓语动词包括不定式、分词、动名词3种形式。如:
(1) In 1943 Jacques Coustean and his friend made it possible by invent the scuba machine. (杭州市中考题)
「说明」invent改为inventing,inventing是动名词,作
介词by的宾语。
(2) Many people like travel by air, but Jim?s family
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think that traveling by train is the best. (杭州市中考题)
「说明」travel改为to travel或traveling,不定式或动名词作动词like的动词宾语。
(3) Many countries began look for ways to go into space.
(广元市中考题)
「说明」look改为looking或to look,不定式或动名词作动词began的动词宾语
(4) School children walked with their shirts,coasts and anything else they could find pull up over their noses. (苏州市中考题)
「说明」pull改为pulled,“with+宾语+动词的过去分词”结构作伴随状语,with结构中宾语与动词之间是逻辑被动关系。
(5) The people of the desert have to keep move from
place to place. (重庆市中考题)
「说明」move改为moving,keep doing sth有“继续做某事”的意思。
二. 中考英语短文改错考点?比较等级错误
(1) It is much cheap and far more enjoyable than a
rushed trip by air. (杭州市中考题)
「说明」cheap改为 cheaper, much, far, still, a little, a bit修饰形容词或副词的比较级,加强语气。
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(2) They made people healthier and live long. (广元市中
考题)
「说明」long改为比较级形式longer,与healthier是平
行结构。
形容词、副词的误用主要指形容词,副词的混用。
(3) Scientists wanted to see how good their bodies
worked when they had different things.
「说明」good改为well,well作副词,修饰动词worked.
(4) By this time most people had a very well life. (广元市
中考题)
「说明」well改为good, good作形容词,修饰名词life.
三. 中考英语短文改错考点?句法错误
1. 并列连词的混用
(1) The world was known to man and the universe was
not. (广元市中考题)
「说明」根据行文逻辑,表示并列关系的and 应改为表示
转折关系的but.
(2) Coustean was very interested in diving deep into the
sea, but wanted to be an explorer. (杭州市中考题)
「说明」根据行文逻辑,表示转折关系的but 应改为表
示并列关系的and.
(3) They would never refuse to help people in trouble,
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but they would give them food and water. (重庆市中考题)
「说明」根据行文逻辑,表示表示转折关系的but 应改为表示并列关系的and.
(4) He has been to many interesting places in Beijing, and he has not yet been to many other parts of China. (杭州市中考题)
「说明」根据行文逻辑,表示并列关系的and 应改为表示转折关系的but.
(5) “So something must be done to keep the air nice or
clean,” said the scientists. (苏州市中考题)
「说明」根据行文逻辑,表示选择关系的or 应改为表示并列关系的and.
(6) “ I know only a chicken is too little for a king?s
evening meal. But I have brought a wolf for you besides the
chicken.” (郴州市中考题)
「说明」根据行文逻辑,表示表示转折关系的But 应改为表示因果关系的So.
2. 连接词的用法错误
这类错误考查句子与句子之间的关系。连接词的使用错误往往会使句子的逻辑关系发生改变,甚至造成句子的语义逻辑混乱。要想把这类错误纠正出来,需要考生对上下文有总体的理解,头脑中有个大概的框架。如:
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(1) They had a wonderful train ride to Chengdu after
they went on to Mount Emei by bus. (杭州市中考题)
「说明」根据句子的意思将after改为before,表示“他们坐汽车去峨眉山之前,愉快地坐火车先到了成都”。
(2) The result is that they eat a light breakfast, they will work better. (镇江市中考题)
「说明」在 that 后增加if 或when .在表语从句that if / when they eat a light breakfast, they will work better中,包含有if或when引导的状语从句,修饰句子they will work better.句子翻译成:(实验) 结果是如果他们少量地吃点早餐,会工作得更出色。
(3) It?s different from how people think. (镇江市中考题)
「说明」将how 改为what,what people think是一个宾语从句,疑问代词what在从句中充当宾语,有“……的”之意。
四. 中考英语短文改错考点?时态与语态错误
1. 时态考点错误
时态错误几乎是短文改错中必设的改错题类。要有目的地去检查文中的每一个谓语动词的时态与上下文、语境以及该句的时间状语是否相符和一致。如:
(1) “You are my younger brother. You had it at first.” (郴州市中考题)
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「说明」had 改为have,因为这是一个一般现在时态的句
子。
(2) Last week he goes to Mount Emei in Sichuan Province with his family. (杭州市中考题)
「说明」goes改为went,与一般过去时态的时间状语last
week保持一致。
(3) Not too long ago, people can?t go scuba diving on Hainan Island, or anywhere else. (杭州市中考题)
「说明」can?t 改为couldn?t,与一般过去时态的时间
状语not too long ago保持一致。
2. 语态考点错误
汉语表达习惯上有时不加“被”字也能表示被动意义,因
而有些考生对被动语态不敏感。如:
(1) “Many thousands of trees must be plant every year,” he said. (安徽省中考题)
「说明」plant改为planted,构成被动语态。
(2) “Sand can be sweeping into the air when there is a
drought…” (苏州市中考题)
「说明」sweeping改为swept,构成被动语态。
(3) He also was liked to make videos.
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范文三:中考短文改错
中考短文改错专项练习
A A
Our school held an English speech contest each year. 1. __________
Han Meimei won the first prize in last year. Everyone was 2. __________ sure that she was going to the champion again this year. 3. __________ Yet to our surprise, she, instead of getting the first prize, 4. __________ coming out second in the end. When the judge at the 5. __________ contest announced the results, Han Meimei felt so sadly 6. __________ that she almost cried. Therefore, she was not discouraged. 7. __________ When the second prize was given to her, she said to her, 8. __________
―The prize is not of important. I am going to work still 9. __________
hard to improve my English speaking ability. 10.___________
对的:打?
该行缺少一个单词:在缺词处加“?”,然后在后面的横线上改正
该行有单词是错误的:在错误单词下划“,”,然后在后面的横线上改正
Dear Sir,
I’m glad to introduce my friend Li Ming to you.
He was born on July 15, in 1974 in Beijing. 1._________________ He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986. 2._________________ When he was in middle school, he did good in maths, 3._________________ physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating 4._________________ from the No.4 High School, he entered into Beijing 5._________________ University study physics. After four years of hard 6._________________ work there, he went to the United States for farther 7._________________ study. Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor’s 8._________________
degree in physics this year. He is now in good health
but would like to make contributions to our country. 9._________________ I should be most grateful if you would consider my
recommendation. Looking forward to receive your early reply. 10._________________
C C
I read a report about an traffic in a 1. _________ newspaper. One day, four child went to park. 2. _________ Three of them stood in front of the gate of the park. 3. _________ waving to the other boy. The boy was running through 4. _________ the road while a car came and then the accident 5. _________ take place. The boy lay on the road in blood. Everybody 6. _________ rushed to help him. One calling the hospital, one gave 7. _________ him first aid, one stopped the car driver. After reading it 8. _________
I think we should be carefully when crossing the road. 9. _________ Everybody should abbey traffic rules and value your life. 10. __________
D D
It rained very heavy last summer and the little 1._____________ stream nearly our house because a river. It burst 2. _____________ bank and the fields all round were soon full with water. 3. _____________ Luckily, the water didn’t reach any of the houses 4. _____________
in our village. And the bursting water from the river 5. _____________ carry away our beautiful wooden bridge, which was 6. _____________ more than three hundreds years old and we were very 7._____________ sorry to lose the oldest thing which we had had for 8. _____________ such long time. We’re building a new one, but it will 9. _____________
be the same bridge which we had before. 10. ____________
E E
Dear students,
The Students Union have decided to organize a music week 1(_________
It will be hold in the first week of May. The 2(_________
activities include singing pop songs and play classical 3(_________
and folk music. Bring your own music instruments, 4(_________
please. A music contest will be included, either. The 5(_________
students who take the part in the contest will listen 6(_________
to part of a song and a piece of music, and then 7(_________
guess where it comes from. If you’d like take part in 8(_________
the music week, please come and sign up for it before April 9(_________
20th. The place for the activities will be announced late. 10(_________
Come to the great fun!
F F
Today is Sunday. I have been studying all day long. On 1________ the morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to 2________ drink because the water supply had cut off. The water came 3________ back in the evening. I did Maths then. I didn’t stop after 12 a.m. 4________
After a short lunch I had the break. Then I went to 5________ my Sunday English Class. After a long and tired class for 6________ more than two hours, I got to home. Some work had been 7________ done but some hadn’t. I have to review all my subject such 8________
as Chinese, English, Politics and History as well. That’s 9________
terribly! Especially when there was no water. 10________
KEYS: KEYS:
A
1. held—holds 2.去掉 “in” 3. to 后加be 4. no error 5. coming—came
6. sadly—sad 7. Therefore—However 8. her—herself
9. 去掉of 或important 改为 importance 10. hard—harder )
B
1. 去掉 “in” 2. 正确 3. good--well 4. fond前加 of 5. 去掉into
6. study前加to 7. farther--further 8.get--got 9. but--and 10. looking--look
C
1. an –a 2. child—children 3. 正确 4. through—across 5. while—when 6. take –took 7. calling—called 8. one 前加and 9. carefully—careful 10. your- his
D
1(heavy—heavily 2(nearly,near 3(with,of 4(? 5(And,But
6(carry,carried 7(hundreds,hundred 8(which,that 9(such后加a 10(which,as
E
1. have--- has 2. hold---held. 3. play---playing. 4. music---musical. 5. either--- too.
6. the去掉 7. and---or 8. like后加to. 9. 对 10.late ---later
F
1. On? In 2. have? had 3.had后加 been 4.after ? until 5. the ? a
6.tired ?tiring 7.to 去掉 8.subject? subjects 9. ? 10. terribly?terrible
范文四:中考英语短文改错训练
A
I live in the country and my father was a farmer. 1. __________
He is now forty-five year old. Because of years of 2. __________
hard work, he looks old than his age. When I was 3. __________
young, he used to tell me the importance study. 4. __________
Father knows little about English and other subjects, 5. __________
but he usually gives me some good advices on how 6. __________
to learn my lessons good. He is not only kind to me 7. __________
but also very strict in me. With his help, I’ve made 8. __________
great progress. I’ll never to forget what he taught 9. __________
me. I think my father is best father in the world. 10. _________
B
We’ve just moved in a house and we want to 1.
buy a new color television set, and I’m not 2.
sure about a size. Maybe we should buy a big 3.
one. If we buy a small one, we might have 4.
to change it in a few years’ time a bigger 5.
one. My husband thinks it’s no necessary to buy 6.
a very big one. He said our sitting room isn’t very 7.
big. If we put in a very big television, they will 8.
be bad for our eyes. Anyway, we’d better to 9.
make quick decision because the price may go up soon. 10.
C
Most families in China hoped their single children will 1.
have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 2.
So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 3.
homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 4.
The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 5.
wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 6.
attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many 7.
people already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 8.
Shouldn’t we draw a lessons from the accidents? Now our 9.
government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 10.
D
Nowadays, almost every family has TV set, and almost 1.
everyone likes watching TV. TV has become a part of our life. 2.
TV has any advantages, for example, it informs us of the 3.
latest news which is happening in the world; it can open our 4.
eyes, enlarge our knowledge and also help us to see more 5.
about the world.it also has some disadvantages. People 6.
waste too much time in watching TV and his normal life 7.
and work are affected.To the children who they spend too 8.
much times in watching TV, it can do harm to their sight 9.
and healthy. So we should control the time of watching TV.
10.
E
The Huaihe River has been serious polluted. Day and night 1.
millions of tons of waste water is being poured it from 2.
hundreds of factories. The waste water is harmful. At present 3.
there is no fish in it. The river water cannot be drunk. People in 4.
either bank have to dig wells to take drinking water. The Huaihe 5.
River is such dirty and poisonous that people don’t dare swim 6.
in it. Something must be done to stopping the pollution. The 7.
government and the people near the river must try to clear water 8.
as soon as possible. Now special attention has been pay to the 9.
pollution by the government and more scientists. The pollution 10.
will be prevented in the near future.
F Dear Abby,
How are you? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you. 1.
I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 2.
further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam 3.
for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, 4.
my parents are not happy about it. They are strongly against I 5.
going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me 6.
for a whole year and they are afraid I will feel alone. They can’t 7.
imagine a girl so young living alone. They advise me to studying 8.
in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living them. 9.
How can I persuade them to accept the fact that I have grown up? 10.
Best wishes Jane
【参考答案】
A
1.was →is 2.year →years 3.old →older 4. 加of 在importance 后 5. √
6.advices →advice 7.good →well 8.in →with 9. 去掉to 10.best 前加the
B
1.in →into 2.and →but 3.a →the 4. √ 5.time 后加for
6.no → not 7.said →says 8.they →it 9. 去掉to 10.quick 前加a
C
1.hoped →hope 2.in →with 3.do →are 4.have 前加to 5. 去掉第二个to 6. √
7.his →their 8.already →have 9.lessons →lesson 10. making→carrying
D
1. has后加a 2. life→lives 3. any→many 4. which→that 5. √
6. 在it 前加However 7. his→their 8. 去掉they 9. times→time 10. healthy→health
E
1. serious→seriously 2. it前加 into 3. √ 4. in→on 5. take→get
6. such→so 7. stopping→stop 8. water前加the 9. pay→paid 10. 去掉more
A
I have come in China for two years. My friends in 1. __________
England sometimes write to me, ask me how long 2. __________
I’ll stay here, when I’m thinking of returning 3. __________
home. The answer of their questions is simple: I 4. __________
do not know when I return home. At the moment, 5. __________
I have no reason to return back to England. I like 6. __________
living in China; I enjoy meeting Chinese people 7. __________
and travel around the country. My work is very 8. __________
interested, and there are so many things I don’t know 9. __________
about China that I hope to discover it in the future. 10. ________
B
Dear Li Hong,
Next Monday was my birthday. I‘m going 1._______
to hold a birthday party at the home in the 2._______
evening. It will start on 7:30. Would you like 3._______
come ? I have also invited some other 4._______
classmate of ours and some of my friends. 5._______
I live at Guangming Road. You can taking 6._______
No 23 or No 45 bus and get up at the end of 7._______
Guangming Road. Then walk left for 50 metres. 8._______
It‘s a red house with white door. You can’t 9._______
miss it. I hope you will go. 10._______
Yours ever Liu Mei
C
Mary is my best friend. We’re all from Henan, 1. _____
but now I live in Beijing when she lives in 2. _____
Guangzhou. We don’t look each other very often, 3. _____
but we’re keep in touch all the time. I often write 4 . _____
to Mary and telling her about the things that 5. _____
are happened at my company, and she often 6. _____
writes to me about her work. We talk on phone 7. _____
once a week. Sometime I call her on her 8. _____
car phone, or we send e-mail to each other. 9. _____
We’re really luck. There are so many ways 10. ____
we can keep in touch with each other.
D
Charles Dickens, one of the English writer, 1___
was born in an small town in England. When he was 2____
twelve, he could go to the school. Two years later, 3___
he had to work. After work, he often go to the library 4____
to read books. Then he wrote lot of stories. Dickens 5___
died over a hundred years ago, and people still read 6____
his books on great interest. 7___
E
Many years ago a poor man grew an orange tree. 1. ___
On the tree there were many fine oranges. Some day he found 2. ___
one of them was so big as a football. He took it 3. ___
for the king. The king was so happy that he gave the 4. __
poor man lots money. When a rich man heard of it, 5. ___
he said for himself, “I’ll take my gold cup to the king 6. __
and he will give me much money. Next day the king received 7. __
from the cup. The king was very fond of the cup and he told 8. __
the rich man,“I have an orange. It’s beautiful than the cup, 9. ___
so I have decided to give it to you as the reward instead money. 10. __
F
Have you ever heard from the saying: All work and no 1 __________
play make Jack a dull boy? What this means is that if you 2 __________
study all the times you will become a boring person. You 3 __________
must go out and having fun with your friends, otherwise 4 __________
you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with the 5 __________
person who that only works and studies. Perhaps you have 6 __________
a confidence problem. Please try remember that the work 7 __________
you do is for yourself rather than for anyone else. You do 8 __________
not have to compete your classmates. No one can be 9 __________
happier in studying seven days and seven nights a week. 10 _________
G
Dear Tracy,
Although I'm 16 years old,but my father still treats 1 __________
me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my opinions. 2 __________
He is very strict with me and often punishes me about 3 __________
leaving things lying around in the house while he did this 4 __________
all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to 5 __________
follow. But he often says:“Doing as I say,not as I do.” 6 __________
Even worse,he points out my past mistakes to guests, 7 __________
making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t 8 __________
bear what he does. I have been tried many times 9 __________
to talk with he but he never listens. Please, help me. 10 _________
Puzzled
H
Every morning Steve went to work by train. As he 1 __________
has a long trip, he always buys newspaper. It helps 2 __________
make the time passing more quickly. One Tuesday 3 __________
morning, he turned over the sports page. He wanted 4 __________
to see the report about an important football match 5 __________
the night before. The report was so interesting that he 6 __________
forgot to get off at his station. He did not know it unless 7 __________
he saw the sea. He got off at the next station, and had to wait 8 __________
a long time for a train to go back. It was no doubt that he arrived 9 __________
late at the office. His boss was angry when Sieve told to him 10 _________
why hewas late. “Work is very important than football! ”. he shouted.
【参考答案】
A
1.come →been 2.ask →asking 3. when 前加and 4.of →to 5. return 前加will
6. 去掉back 或将return 改为go 7. √ 8.travel →traveling 9.interested →interesting
10.it →them
B
1.was →is 2. 去掉to 3.on →at 4. come 前加 to 5.classmate →classmates 6.taking →take 7.up →off 8. √ 9. white前加a 10. go→come
C
1.all →both 2. when改为and 或while 3.look →see
4. 去掉keep 或把we ’re 改为we 5. telling→tell 6.happened →happening 7. phone前加the 8.sometime →sometimes 9. √ 10.luck →lucky
D
1.writer →writers 2.an →a 3. 去掉the 4. go →went 5. 在lot 前加a 或将lot 改成lots 6.and →but 7.on →with
E
1. √ 2. Some → one 3. so→as 4. for→to 5. lots→lots of 6. for→to 7. Next→The next 8. from 删去 9. beautiful→more beautiful 10. instead→instead of F
1.from —of/about 2.make —makes 3.times —time 4.having —have 5.him —them 6.去掉that 7.try 后加to 8.√ 9.compete 加against/with 10.happier —happy
G
1. 去掉but 2.children →child 3.about →for 4.did →does 5. 在all 后加the
6.Doing →Do 7. √ 8.hurting →hurt 9. 去掉been 10.he →him
H
1. went →goes 2. newspaper 前面加 a 3. passing →pass 4. over →to 5. see →read 6. unless →until 7. √ 8. It 改为There 9. 去掉to 10. very →more
范文五:高一语文短文改错练习
高一语文短文改错练习
1.下面这段话中有几处毛病,请在错误的地方画上横线,依次标上序号,然后指出病因并改
正这些错误:
龙卷风袭来时,路上行人跑到附近的商店躲避。一家不大的商店,挤满了路过的避难人,
突然小商店被龙卷风刮得倒塌了,狂风过后,人们从废墟中救出三十多名遇难者,迅速送到
医院抢救。经医生诊治后,有将近十余人因伤势较重,仍需留在医院继续治疗。 ① ② ③
2.下面一段话有语病,请找出并加以修改。
几年前,在国内彩电市场严重滞销的情况下①,长虹电器厂大幅度率先削价销售②,亏
本是免不了的,但迎来了产销两旺,经济效益一下子跃居全国内行业前茅。可见亏本经营的
妙处在于,他貌似不应有的亏本③,获取了更大的盈利。在市场竞争入去激烈的今天,我们
的企业如果善于把握“亏本“策略④,就能取得锦上添花和柳暗花明的效果⑤;反过来,死
把住”只赚不赔“的框框,不肯牺牲眼前的小利,弄不好的到会连血本都会亏掉的⑥。
3.下面一段文字在表达上存在一些毛病,请找出文中的4处毛病并改正。
在北京召开的第三十届国际地质大会上,世界水文专家协会主席歇尔.奈特曾披露:“全
世界至少有5万人每天死于由水污染引起的各种疾病,反展中国家每年大约有2500多万人
死于饮用不洁净的水。“中国水利部部长钮茂生日前发出警告:如果不迅速采取行动,在30
年内,中国就会发生干净水源枯竭。最近的一项调查表明,饮用水质已经成为12亿中国人
生存问题。保护环境,改善水质,是当前中国一个刻不容缓的课题。
① ② ③ ④
4.修改以下几个病句
①新民主主义时期所要解决的矛盾和所要实现的任务,已经胜利地完成了。修改:
②这种药一问世,便受到病人的欢迎,因为临床治疗效果证明,这是有效治疗高血压的
方法。修改:
③他像一支蜡烛,虽然照亮了别人,却毁灭了自己。这样的人生多有价值啊!修改:
④厂里规定,中档产品价格不超过300-500元。修改:
⑤中国大陆和港台歌星的联袂演出博得了当场观众的热烈掌声,对各位歌星精彩的表演
给予了很高的评价。修改:
5.下面是从某同学所写的一封应聘信中摘录来的,在语序,语法和语义表达上有一些毛病。
请找出文中的毛病,在他们下面划横线并标上序号,然后将序号和修改结果填入文后的表中。
我叫李文文,女,现年19岁。1996年在xx县职业高中毕业。身高1.7米,体重56公
斤。擅长导游、厨师业务,热爱本职工作。今见《xx晚报》刊载贵公司聘任广告,我特写
信来报名应聘。届时再来参加面试。
① ② ③ ④ ⑤
6.下面是一则广告,除内容方面问题外,在语法、句意表达上也有一些毛病,读后完成文后
⑴⑵题。
广告
为了加强精神文明建设①,本新村已新建了许多袋装垃圾收集房②。从7月18日起③,
居民的生活垃圾一律用所料袋包装完毕后④,投入其中的所料桶内⑤。工业垃圾、建筑垃圾
一律不准包装后投入⑥,请与居委会联系后另行处理⑦,否则罚款⑧。
此致
敬礼 第三居委会
1997年7月12日
⑴指出格式方面的毛病:
⑵指出语言表达的毛病并改正:
8.下面是一份请示报告,在行文上存在一些毛病,读后请完成⑴⑵两小题。xxx区教育局:
按照调整我区中学教育结构的需要,98-99学年度我校的高一年级将扩大招生,原来的
五个教学班增加到十个教学班。由于我校教室本已十分严重不足,因此急需新建教室五间。
现虽经我们多方积极进行筹措,但仍无法自行解决全部的基建经费,请迅速将所需款项拨到
我校,以解燃眉之急。特此请示,希复。
xx中学
x年x月x日
⑴找出文中5处毛病,在它们的下面划横线,并表上序号。
⑵按序号将改正结果填在下面横线上
① ② ③ ④ ⑤
9.下面一则文稿在表达上有五处不妥当,请指出并改正。
通告
为提高电话网的通讯能力,我公司将对辖区电话局的交换机进行升级改造,现依据《中华人
民年共和国电信条例》,将有关事项宣布如下:
撇工程将与2009年6月10日20时至11月8时施工,在此期间会影响青山区电话用户
的正常通话。交换机升级后,用户原有的一些业务功能(如闹钟、呼叫转移等)需要重新设
置:热线和呼出限制的设置方法也有变化。
如有疑问,欢迎提出。本公司客服电话:87654321。
对工程施工给贵用户造成的不便,我们深感不安。请与理解和支持。
天网通讯有限公司青山分公司
10.找出下面文段在语言表达方面的两处错误,并加以改正。
徜徉在天安门广场,人民英雄纪念碑那巍峨的碑体、优美的轮廓、饰有卷云与垂幔的碑
顶,无一不让人顿生瞻仰、思念之情。这座纪念碑是由杰出建筑学家梁思成主持设计的。这
一点,想必尽人皆知;对于他的助手、当代中国建筑大师吴良镛也参与了有关设计方案的讨
论,或许鲜为人知。
错误 改正
第一处:
第二处:
练习参考答案
1. ①“路过的避难人”改为“避难的过路人”或“避难的人”
②“救出三十多名遇难者”改为“救出三十多名受伤群众”
③“将近十余人”删去“将近”或“余”
2. ① 把“市场”删去②将“大幅度”与“率先”对调;③将“它”改为“以”④将“和”
改为“或”⑤删去“弄不好的”中的“的”字
3. ①“全世界至少有5万人每天死于??”将“每天”移至“至少”之前
②“中国就会发生干净水源枯竭”,在末句加“的危机”
③“饮用水质已经成为12亿中国人生存的尖锐问题”,改为“饮用水质已成为威胁12
亿中国人生存的尖锐问题”。
4. ①改为“新民主主义时期所要解决的矛盾已经解决了,所要完成的任务已经胜利完成
了”。
②将“方法改为“药物”
③“虽然毁灭了自己,却照亮了别人”。
④将“不超过”改为“在??之间”
⑤第2个分句缺主语,加“观众”。
5. ①“身高1.7米”调至“1996年??”之前。
②“体重56公斤”一句删去。
③“擅长”改为“学习”,“业务”改为“专业”。
④“本职”改为“这两项”。
⑤“刊载贵公司聘任广告”改为“刊载的贵公司招聘广告”。
6. ⑴①②③④ ⑵①将“电风扇”改为“x牌x型的电风扇”。
③“一年试销”与“深受欢迎”,删去“由于”一词。
④不符合实际情况,因各商店包括书店、食品店等。把“各商店”改为“各电器商场和各大百货商场的电器专柜”
⑥应注明厂址、联系人
7. ⑴“此致”“敬礼”应删去;落款应在右下角。
⑵①应改为“为了环境的清洁卫生”。 ④改为“生活垃圾一律用塑料袋包好后” ⑥应把“包装后”删去。
8. ⑴①按照调整我区中学教育结构的需要
②原来的五十教学班增加到十个教学班
③由于我校教室本已十分严重不足
④现虽然经我们多方积极进行筹措
⑤请迅速将所需款项拨到我校
⑵①“按照”改为“根据”。②在“原来”前加“由”。③删掉“十分”④删掉“进行”⑤改为“承望能给予拨款”
9.“宣布”改为“通告”;“撇”改为“本”;“提出”改为“垂询”;“贵用户”改为“您”;“不安”改为“歉意”。
10.第一处:顿生瞻仰、思念之情 改为顿生敬仰、思念之情(或去掉“瞻仰””)
第二处:对于他的助手至于他的助手(或“对于”改为“而”,或去掉“对于”)