我是哈工大计算机系07级的学生 高考的时候语文成绩还不错 全省排名第四
我希望我所谈的一些语文方面的学习经验与感受 会对你有所启发 也希望你能实现自己的大学梦
语文:在高考中,主要分两大块(基础跟作文).
基础90分,作文60分。
1)作文,在备考的过程中,关键是注意积累素材,
关注实际生活以及时事政治。
譬如通过报刊,杂志,网络,电视等等,
体验不同文体的练习,(记述文,议论文,说明文)。
在保持基础扎实的前提下,可以体验创新。
创新,文体的创新(结构),内容的创新(内容),
甚至是思想的创新(主题)。
在答题的过程中注意控制自己的时间。
控制在60分钟内完成。
同时要注意控制字数800-850字左右。
针对高考阅卷的特点,
作文成功需要注意以下几点:
a)字迹:如果平时字迹潦草,答题时力求工整(阅读问答题也是这样)。
这个是老师印象分中主要的一部分。
b)标题:切忌不要用主题做标题。标题力求创新。
但如果想不出新颖的标题,就采用普通的做法。(不要专牛角尖)
c)结构:议论文:采用的是三段论。(引论,议论,结论)
记述文:采用的顺叙,倒叙,插叙。(常用的做法是选取单一的记述方法。特例:在顺序中有部分段落插叙)
说明文:采用的举例子,列数据,打比方等等
(在我的高中学习过程中,说明文应用文可能是出现在小作文中考察。)
应用文:很多时候体裁的创新可以用应用文的形式来体现。
但备考的过程中需注意的是应用文中不同文体的结构如书信,通知,电报......
行文不论是采用哪种文体,结构清晰很关键。
一段不宜太冗长,也不宜象武侠小说中,段段都是一句话。
d)行文:过程中要紧扣主题,不要偏题,跑题。这就是说在拿到作文的时候要静下心来,
花几分钟的时间构思。一般是5-10分钟(5分钟内为宜)。尤其要注意标点符号。
(高考的判分规则是错3个标点,作文整体达优秀后扣1分)(高考作文判卷时间一般是1-3分钟
甚至是几十秒),高考作文中,印象对分数的评判很关键。
e)结尾:根据不同文体,有所不同。但象记述文,结尾的时候最好是发表一下自己的观点(感受)。
象议论文,结尾的时候最好是重述一下自己的论点,前后照应。
2)基础,在高三备考的时候去主攻基础是不可取的。
象简简单单的一道字音,或者字形的选择题倘若去耗费大量的复习时间。
难免有点拣芝麻丢西瓜的味道。
我的建议:每天利用5-15分钟零散的时间去看看学校复习资料。
但关键的是:顺其自然,不要强记。
做基础题,速度一定要快,不要犹豫不决。
如果答题过程中感觉拿不准,可以用铅笔答题。在试卷的题号处标一个不起眼的小标记。
但在答题的时候尊重自己的第一感觉。
注:在高考的时候,答题的过程试卷上是可以用铅笔的。但答题卡上必须按照要求用2B铅笔或者0.5的签字笔。
试卷上用铅笔答题方便检查与更改,也保证了卷面的整洁。
写作万金油,有好的作文素材哪怕会语文挂科
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谁来推荐几个就是作文的"万金油"最好有具体事例
我总认为红楼梦的伟大之处在于它体现了一种败落的趋势,不管是家族的,爱情的,仕途的,都是走向没落,这在喜聚不喜散,爱好大团圆结尾的中国古典小说中并不多见。
我不得不感谢续者高鄂,尽管他在很多方面跟不上曹雪芹的思想,但他至少让黛玉死了,管她登仙还是辞世,至少她别了宝玉,很好很好。
不是说我天生残忍喜欢看别人的悲剧,但是,不是有句话说吗?塞翁失马,焉之非福?对于黛玉这样一个脆弱的封建少女来说,死,是她的解脱,是她所有悲剧的终结,是她的幸福。
当她在地下安静的沉眠时,看着宝玉仍在凡世寻找出路,不得不说,她还是幸福的。
或许两个人都是浪漫的人,浪漫的人天生就不该相遇,因为生活不是浪漫,生活会将浪漫消磨得一干二净,最终,红玫瑰变成了墙上的蚊子血,白玫瑰成了胸口粘着的白米饭。
所以,就让浪漫在最美的时候画上句号,在彼此的心中,留下幸福的回忆。
可是也许你会说,黛玉死的很悲惨,一点也不浪漫,关于这点,我是不赞成高鄂的续书的,也许曹雪芹的本意非此,也许黛玉确实应该泪尽证前缘,这样不是更好吗?她牵挂着宝玉,用她全部的热情为这一知己痛哭,怀着深深的思念,这样的死,何尝不是高贵神圣的,然而高鄂没有这样写,他最终让黛玉...我总认为红楼梦的伟大之处在于它体现了一种败落的趋势,不管是家族的,爱情的,仕途的,都是走向没落,这在喜聚不喜散,爱好大团圆结尾的中国古典小说中并不多见。
我不得不感谢续者高鄂,尽管他在很多方面跟不上曹雪芹的思想,但他至少让黛玉死了,管她登仙还是辞世,至少她别了宝玉,很好很好。
不是说我天生残忍喜欢看别人的悲剧,但是,不是有句话说吗?塞翁失马,焉之非福?对于黛玉这样一个脆弱的封建少女来说,死,是她的解脱,是她所有悲剧的终结,是她的幸福。
当她在地下安静的沉眠时,看着宝玉仍在凡世寻找出路,不得不说,她还是幸福的。
或许两个人都是浪漫的人,浪漫的人天生就不该相遇,因为生活不是浪漫,生活会将浪漫消磨得一干二净,最终,红玫瑰变成了墙上的蚊子血,白玫瑰成了胸口粘着的白米饭。
所以,就让浪漫在最美的时候画上句号,在彼此的心中,留下幸福的回忆。
可是也许你会说,黛玉死的很悲惨,一点也不浪漫,关于这点,我是不赞成高鄂的续书的,也许曹雪芹的本意非此,也许黛玉确实应该泪尽证前缘,这样不是更好吗?她牵挂着宝玉,用她全部的热情为这一知己痛哭,怀着深深的思念,这样的死,何尝不是高贵神圣的,然而高鄂没有这样写,他最终让黛玉很庸俗的指天愤恨,气极而亡。
这不象我们认识的那个高傲自赏的黛玉,反而象个情场失意的一般女子。
尽管如此,她最终是在贾府垮倒前离开这是非之地的,否则以她的脆弱,恐怕受不了那么大的刺激。
宝玉是个纨绔子弟,他不是一个顶天立地的男子汉,他能给予黛玉的其实很少,谈不上保护与安慰,他自己尚且是需要别人保护的弱者,所以在他身边,黛玉是得不到幸福的。
所以能带着回忆离开他,是一种幸福。
宝玉自己能给予黛玉的只是几句好话,他连痴情都谈不上,看看宝钗的下场,不得不说黛玉是幸福的,当然有人说宝钗需要的只是宝二奶奶的宝座,她并不在乎宝玉,是这样吗?难道有一个天生喜欢孤独的女子吗,不管怎么说,寂寞的独守空房总是悲惨的。
何况所谓宝二奶奶的宝座她是不是坐上了还是个问题。
如果贾府不倒台,至少宝钗还有容身之地,至少没了丈夫还有富贵,但是不是这样呢?最终贾府沦落到了白茫茫大地真干净的地步,那宝二奶奶的头衔之于宝钗还有何等意义呢?没有幸福的生活,没有丈夫的关爱,寂寞的独自生,独自死,难道不是更大的悲剧吗?我一直疑心宝玉并不是因为黛玉而离开贾府的,否则他不会娶宝钗。
他最终的出世是因为他的世界发生了惊天动地的变化,他的象牙塔坍塌了,他终于明白他的斗争,他的思想其实全部是依附着家庭,他的家倒了,他的一切也完了,什么思想啊,斗争啊,统统没了,他不得不离家出走,也许是为了避祸。
可以试想一下,你能想象黛玉洗手下厨做羹汤的场景吗?穿着破衣烂裙,甚至是要依靠袭人的救济,然后她当然无法再刻薄人,说闲话,只能独自垂泪,不关爱情,而是生活。
当生活给宝黛的爱情画上巨大的问号时,黛玉能一如既往的爱着宝玉吗?我想不会,恐怕是要大水狂淹龙王庙的。
然后宝玉最终受不了家庭的压力,还是一走了之,这是很有可能的,他没有照顾好宝钗,负担不起生活,同样对于黛玉,他也不过如此。
另一种可能,万一贾府能重整旗鼓,兰桂齐芳,黛玉和宝玉依旧过着他们幸福的日子,多少年以后,宝玉也许会突然发现黛玉皱纹满面,然后会发现身边的袭人竟如同当年的赵姨娘,然后爱情就在岁月中流逝,然后宝玉会回忆那个珠圆玉润的宝姐姐。
其实爱情就是很短暂的,至少这横刀截断的爱情给了我们很多美好的幻想和期待,就象杰克之于罗丝,他是她生命中最美的回忆,却不是唯一。
最好什么作文都能用上的万金油其他的
Recently, the problem of … has aroused people's concern. 最近,…问题已引起人们的关注. Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题. Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face. 如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了. It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that… 人们一般认为… Many people insist that… 很多人坚持认为… With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that… 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为… A lot of people seem to think that… 很多人似乎认为… 引出不同观点: People's views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… . However, others believe that…. 人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为….. 然而其他人却认为... People may have different opinions on… 人们对…可能会有不同的见解. Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异. There are different opinions among people as to… 关于…. 人们的观点大不相同. Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同. 结尾 Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that… 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论… Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that… 考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论… Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that… 因此,我们最好得出这样的结论… There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. 毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点. All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. 总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题. 提出建议: It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了. It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of … 该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了. There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of … 毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视. Obviously,…. If we want to do something… , it is essential that… 显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是… Only in this way can we… 只有这样,我们才能… It must be realized that… 我们必须意识到… 预示后果: Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the chances are that… will lead us in danger. 很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险. No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that… 毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会… It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. 很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展. 论证 From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that… 我无法完全同意这一观点…. Personally, I am standing on the side of … 就个人而言,我站在…的一边. I sincerely believe that… 我真诚地相信… In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do…. 在我个人看来,做…比做…更明智. Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why… 给出原因: This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, … 这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, … 第二, … 第三, … Why did… ? For one thing… For another…. Perhaps the primary reason is… 为什么会…? 一个原因是… 令一个原因是… 或许其主要原因是…. I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows. 我十分赞同这一论述,即…,其主要原因如下: 列出解决办法: Here are some suggestions for handling… 这是如何处理某事的一些建议. The best way to solve the troubles is… 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是… People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题. 批判错误观点和做法: As far as something is concerned, …. 就某事而言,… It was obvious that… 很显然,…. It may be true that…, but it doesn't mean that… 可能…是对的,但这并不意味着… It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn't ignore that… 认为….是很自然的,但我们不应忽视…. There is no evidence to suggest that… 没有证据表明… 如何连接 强调 still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, ...
英语作文万金油的句子 高三用 来点有水平的
我今年高考,英语作文23分,希望可以帮到你。
这是高三留下来的资料。
一、英语书信的常见写作模板 开头部分: How nice to hear from you again. Let me tell you something about the activity. I'm glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th. I'm pleased to hear that you're coming to China for a visit. I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America. 结尾部分:With best wishes.I'm looking forward to your reply.I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier. 二、口头通知常见写作模板 呼语及开场白部分:Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 正文部分:All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen carefully and we'll have a discussion in groups.Please come on time and don't be late. 结束语部分:Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you'll have a nice time here.That's all. Thank you. 三、议论文模板1.正反观点式议论文模板 导入: 第1段:Recently we've had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题) Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧) 正文: 第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点) Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由) 第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点) Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What's more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由) 结论: 第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点) オ2.“A或者B”类议论文模板: 导入: 第1段: Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages. 正文: 第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因) 第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势) 结论: 第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论) 3.观点论述类议论文模板: 导入: 第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题 As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对) The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下) 正文: 第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由) 结论: 第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构)4."How to"类议论文模板: 导入: 第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题 正文: 第2段: Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法) 结论: 第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法) 四、图表作文写作模板 The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明).We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化, the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议). 五、图画类写作模板:1.开头 Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture... 2.衔接句 As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life. 3.结尾句 In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...其实英语作文字体可以占很大的比重,多背诵模板,多练字,绝对不会低于22分的,望采纳,不懂的再问。
写平凡事物中的美的作文
每当我走过一条条被打扫得干干净净的公路,脑海中浮现出那一幕幕的情景…… 清洁工,大家一定不陌生吧!多么平凡的一个人啊!每当天蒙蒙亮时,他们就出来在宁静的小巷里来回打扫,穿梭着。
垃圾车里的垃圾逐渐增多,我们的城市也干净了,微多的尘土在一片炙热的心间被驱散,垃圾也在美丽的身影消失了。
人们渐渐出来了,清洁工阿姨带着她的一身疲倦和恶臭离开了。
当夜深人静的时候,她又出现了,一身朴素的衣裳,又是一个灿烂的笑容浮现在眼前,豆大的汗珠由小变大在她的头上滚动,像美好的辛勤交织在人们的心里留下了深刻的印象。
这样,清洁工阿姨每天早出晚归,从不间断,不管是赤日炎炎的夏天,还是刮风下雨的冬天,不管头上的骄阳有多炙热,还是台风登临的日子,她总是在每天同样的时间出现在人们的眼前。
她的手,她的人,她的每一处都是令人深思而又平凡的。
一个双休日的早晨,天还没亮,一切都在沉睡中,生意人的几声叫唤就把我从睡梦中惊醒,我起床走出家门,马上感觉到炎热的气息!而清洁工阿姨呢?看着她汗流满面的样子,在我眼中,显得平凡而高尚,只见她举起扫把,认真、一丝不苟的扫起来,一把,二把……地上的垃圾越来越少了,阿姨头上的汗珠却越来越多了。
一双劳累的手,一把汗,一个整洁的城市这难道不是最好的见证,他们是最美的,是最平凡而最高尚的人。
沸沸扬扬的灰尘,难忘的恶臭向着清洁工阿姨们来了,路过的人们看到这样,便立即捂鼻而去,还念叨着“臭死了,臭死了!”他们只是这样侧身一过,就被刺鼻的恶臭所驱赶了,而清洁工阿姨呢?她要在这样的环境里承受更多的恶臭,这是常人所难以忍受的,他们是在为我们的城市整洁而付出这样的代价啊!他们不怕被嘲笑,勇敢地接受人们给他们的讥讽,多么高尚的品质啊!看到如此情景,我的心底,一股敬佩之情在燃烧。
我走上去,与那个阿姨搭起话来: “阿姨,您,这样的天气您也是一直来打扫吗?” “当然,这是我应该做的,我们清洁工不就是打扫城市卫生的!” “难道你们不觉得累吗?” “看到城市的整洁,我们的累就到九霄云外去了” 听了她的一番话,我不由地随之荡动,她是一个默默付出,而不求回报的人,她付出了无比的艰辛,回报是我们大家的。
以往清洁工给我们的印象就是恶臭、低贱,人们一看到她就会联想到“垃圾人”的称号,而现在,我对他们的有了新的看法,如若不是他们的劳动,怎么会有我们干净的家园呢? 她匆匆地来,也匆匆地走了,去寻找她的下一站了,她那远去的背景真的好美,好美……不知不觉,都12月了。
今天的天气好冷。
天灰蒙蒙的,北风在耳旁不停地呼啸,强大的力量撩起行人散乱的头发,路上的人都“全副武装”。
这种天气,就是拿一百万元钱给我,我也不会踏出家门。
可天公不作美,鞋却坏了,只得冒着严寒、狂风去补鞋。
唉…… 路上,风,狠狠地刮,刮得我的脸生疼。
我不禁想:大冷天气,补鞋人会出来吗?一串串问号从脑中嘣地出来!骑着骑着,远远就瞅见补鞋人模糊的身影。
近了,他那破旧单薄的棉衣,皱纹满面苍老的脸,毫无遮挡的印进我的眼帘,心里隐隐有着一种怜悯与同情。
“爷爷,请给我修一修鞋子,它坏了。
” 补鞋人接过去,啊,这是一双生满老茧、布满沧桑的手呀!寒风使他的手变得通红铁青。
补鞋人哈了哈手,吃力地干了起来。
我站在一旁看着,心中有种莫名的感动。
一种暖流遍及全身,永远流淌…… 鞋补好了,眼眶盈满了泪水,不知为何。
当我离开时,回头一看,补鞋人干瘦的身影忽而变得高大。
平凡,美!平凡事物中的美作文当我上学,放学,走在街上时,当我路过杨柳依依的湖边时,当我看到一排排树随风舞动时,都情不自禁地赞叹大自然的美。
可,又是谁,制造了这美呢?答案是:园林工人。
我的眼前仿佛出现了这样的景象:一群群工人挥着铁锹、铁铲,在一个个树坑前卖力地干活。
看,他们有的用铲用力的铲土,那一层土变魔法似的不知不觉的变成了一个又一个土堆;他们有的正在用水壶给树苗浇水,这些树苗好像正在开心地向工人们点头;他们还有的正在种苗,他们把苗放在土炕里,并用挖出来的土把坑填平,仿佛看到了这些树苗茁壮成长的情景。
他们忙得汗流浃背,但脸上却挂着幸福的微笑。
因为,他们是快乐的,充实的,幸福的。
工人们用汗水换来了美。
这是和谐的美,这是自然的美,这更是心灵的美啊!关于描写平凡事物中的美文章美,是一个谁都喜欢的字眼;美,无处不在。
有人曾经说过:“这个世界并不缺少美,而是缺少发现美的眼睛。
”的确是这样。
世界上有许多平凡的事物,这些平凡的事物中又蕴含着各种各样的美。
我所在的班级——绿茵小学404班就是一个平凡而又拥有许多美的集体。
在我的班级——404班中,到处充满着美。
有关爱美,有宽容美,有谦让美,还有团结美……一位同学肚子不舒服了,大家马上递给他万金油;一位同学做错了事,老师和同学们都没有责备他,而是给他讲清道理;排队升旗的时候,同学们既整齐,又井然有序,整个队伍呈现出和谐美。
这样的美还有很多很多。
就拿不久前的事来说吧,我...
有没有什么高考英语作文万金油句子?
How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I'm glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.I'm pleased to hear that you're coming to China for a visit.I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
有没有什么高考英语作文万金油句子
看作文书没什么大用处啊。
尤其讨厌背模板。
试想,改卷老师看到一个这么开头结尾的,两个也如此,分数会高么?即使模板再好,也让人产生抄袭的感觉。
作文关键是把基础扎实后,多写,找个专业的老师进行点播指导,虽然花点钱,但却很受益。
后天就高考了,有没有应急的英语作文万金油的句子给点?
英语作文万能句子 山重水覆疑无路,柳暗花明又一村 A sudden glimpse of hope in the dark mist of bewilderment,it`s a long lane that has no turning. 万事开头难 The first step is always difficult. 万丈高楼平地起 High buildings rise from the ground. 有利必有弊 Everything has its advantages as well as disadvantages. 机不可失,时不再来 Don`t lose a golden opportunity, it is never foud again. 谋事在人,成事在天 Man proposes, God disposes. 人逢喜事精神爽 People are in high spirits when involved in happy events. 人生如梦 Life is but like a passing dream. 仁者见仁,智者见智 A true man loves the mountains, a wise man loves the sea. 人非圣贤,孰能无过 All men but saints are apt to make mistakes. 失败是成功之母 Failure is the mother of success. 一失足成千古恨 A single slip can cause a lasting sorrow. 有所不为,而后有所为 You must be able to refrain yourself in some matters in order to accomplish others. 饮水不忘挖井人 Don`t forget the well – diggers when you drink from this well 己所不欲,勿施于人 Don`t do to others what you don`t want others to do to you 发表于 2009-12-14 23:38 2# 一)比较 1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages. 2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B. 3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that... 4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that... 5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages. 6.Like anything else, it has its faults. 7.A and B has several points in common. 8.A bears some resemblances to B. 9.However, the same is not applicable to B. 10. A and B differ in several ways. 11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects. 12. People used to think ..., but things are different now. 13. The same is true of B. 14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks. 15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ... 二)原因 1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation. A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem). 2. The answer to this problem involves many factors. 3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that... 4. The factors that contribute to this situation include... 5. The change in ...largely results from the fact that... 6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are... 7. Part of the explanations for it is that ... One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ... Another contributing factor (cause ) is ... Perhaps the primary factor is that … But the fundamental cause is that ... 三)后果 1. It may give rise to a host of problems. 2. The immediate result it produces is ... 3. It will exercise a profound influence upon... 4. Its consequence can be so great that... 四)批驳 1)It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out. 2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact. 3) Some people say ..., but it does not hold water. 4) Many of us have been under the illusion that... 5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is. 6) It makes no sense to argue for ... 7) Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ... 8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ... 9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ... 五)举例 1) A good case in point is ... 2) As an illustration, we may take ... 3) Such examples might be given easily. 4) ...is often cited as an example. 六)证明 1) No one can deny the fact that ... 2) The idea is hardly supported by facts. 3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ... 4) Recent studies indicate that ... 5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ... 6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ... 七)开篇 1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ... 2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic. 4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ... 5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ... 6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular. 7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ... 8) According to a recent survey, ... 9) With the rapid development of ..., ... 八)结尾 1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ... 2) It is high time that strict measures were taken
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