假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?
写作要点:
1.表明自己的看法;
2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明);
3.提出至少两条建议
要求:
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。4.书写需清晰、工整。
范文:
Hi, TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.
希望能帮到你 嘿嘿
2011陕西高考英语作文范文,今年的陕西作文是什么?麻烦给一篇范文吧。
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?
写作要点:
1.表明自己的看法;
2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明);
3.提出至少两条建议
要求:
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。4.书写需清晰、工整。
范文:
Hi, TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.
上面是试题 下面是范文,希望能帮到你
2014陕西高考英语作文??
不必紧张,高考一个老师该那么多张卷子,每个老师改一道题,格式什么的没人仔细考,你英语字要是不错,前2句话没错,至少能的1半分
2015陕西省全国统一考试英语作文翻译
2015陕西省全国统一考试英语作文
2015 Shaanxi province unified national examination for English Writing
2012陕西高考英语作文
假定你是李华。下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织的一次活动,请根据写作要点并参考图画内容,为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。
写作要点:
1.活动的策划; 2.教室的布置;
3.活动的内容; 4.你的感想。
注意:
1.短文词数不少于100;
2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数;
3.可根据情况增减细节,详略得当;
4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers’ Day; she did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.
As Teachers’ Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. On the afternoon of September 10,some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons, and others went to buy cakes, drinks and fruits. The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words, which read “Happy Teachers’ Day!”
Entering the classroom, Ms. Li was surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers’ Day!” Wang Hua, our monitor, presented her with the prepared flowers. Some of the girls sang songs for Ms. Li, and three boys showed their Gongfu talent. Before we left, we enjoyed a new English song by Ms. Li. Ms. Li spent a wonderful time with us, but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance.
是这个吗,不是的话我再改,追加的话是人情,不加也是本分,
请大家多提意见。
陕西省三校生高考英语作文
教学目标:1、训练学生如何观察生活 2、什么是作文的选材 3、掌握选材应注意的一些原则及方法; 4、校园生活作文选材训练。 教学重难点: 掌握怎样从校园生活中选材。 教学时数: 课时课前准备: 搜集素材,用相机抓拍一些校园生活的花絮;精选学生自己的优秀习作,做 文字的润色和修改。 教学过程: 一、情境导入:一提起写作文,许多同学就感到头痛,提起笔望着题目发呆,总觉得无话可 说。平时有些同学聊天谈论学校生活时,眉飞色舞、滔滔不绝,到这时候也开始 犯难了。有一幅对联就生动地描写出了同学们面对作文题时的痛苦情形。 上联:苦坐苦想苦不堪言 下联:愁纲愁情愁眉苦脸 横批:写不出来 但是班里一些作文写得好的同学,拿到作文题目总是思如泉涌,有写不完的 新鲜事。文章生动有趣吸引别人,得到老师的表扬,同学的羡慕。他们的作文成 功的秘诀在哪里呢?我想,首先一点有一双慧眼,有一颗敏感的心,善于观察和 感悟生活,并从中选择贴切的材料,表达我们阳光向上的人生志向和情趣。今天 我们一起研究探讨作文应如何选材。 (课件展示)从生活中找“米”――校园生活作文选材训练 什么是选材: 蜜蜂采花酿蜜,首先是能够发现鲜花,唐代诗人罗隐咏蜜蜂的诗句有“不论 平地与高山,无限风光尽被占”,要远远近近、大大小小的花都能感受到才行; 其次,不是所有的花都能酿蜜,只有精心挑选、精心酿制,才有甘甜可口的蜂蜜。 选材是根据主题需要,有目的的选择恰当的材料来表现主题,产生最好的效果。 二、校园生活花絮 老师活动: 讲述:作文的素材应来自于生活,要学会从生活中去寻找,对同学们来说, 最丰富多彩的莫过于校园生活了。大家来到中学已经半年了,亲身经历、耳闻目 睹的大大小小的事情应该不少了。下面我们就一起来回顾一下半年来的校园生 学生活动:请几位同学说一说校园生活[老师]同学们都注意到了校园内发生的一些像军训、运动会、圣诞节这样的集体 活动,说得很好。老师用相机也抓拍了校园生活中的一些花絮,大家一起来欣赏 一下吧。 [课件播放校园生活照片:校园里:如为一位患癌症的职工捐款、中午食堂、 游泳馆、艺术宫,班级生活:如值日、老师进班、为班级班费收集瓶子等] [教师] 我们的校园生活是多彩的,有趣的同学、尽职的老师、生动的课堂、 花样繁多的选修课、热闹的文体活动、美味的食堂,有这么多丰富的素材,你还 怕写不出好作文吗? 三、精彩佳作展示 上周我们的作文是:“校园生活”要求写一篇记叙文。有不少同学写得非常 好。下面给大家展示一下几位同学的作文及片断,看看他们在选材上有什么特 点?我请作者把它朗读一遍,然后谈谈他们自己选材的心得。 课时目标:学生进行写作,在教师指导下交流修改。 教学过程: 一、指导学生进行构思并打腹稿、列提纲。教师巡回指导。及时对学生的问 题进行指导解答。 二、组织学生将自己的作文构思互相交流,以便起到相互启发的作用。三、学生打草稿,如有不懂得问题,可以请教身边的同学,也可以请教老师。 在老师和同学的帮助下编写边修改。 四、学生草稿完成的,互相交换修改,未完成的继续完成。 五、组织学生以三到五人为一组,互相交换阅读平息本族成员的习作,提出 意见和建议,并指定专人将同学们的发言记录下来。 六、各小组负责纪录的同学向全班汇报本组交流的情况,并推荐出本组优秀 习作,由作者本人朗读给全班同学,大家共同进行评价。进一步推选出最佳作文 七、对最佳作文的作者进行表扬。八、教师对本次作文训练情况进行总结,提出进一步加强作文水平的要求。 附:教学范文 傻妞的幸福生活 在1990 年的春天,一个胖乎乎的小丫头在一个平凡的小镇上出生了,这便 是我们可爱的傻妞小姐。傻妞的爹妈见到新生的女儿欢喜的不得了,给她取了个 名叫“琪乐”,意思是希望女儿长得如花似玉并且幸福快乐一辈子。 人如其名,小时侯的傻妞便是家属大院中的开心果,不论谁见到她,都会被 她的快乐所感染。傻妞嘴巴很甜,像沾上了蜜似的,难怪有好多人都宠着她呢! 正因为这样,傻妞才整天嘻嘻哈哈,蹦蹦跳跳的带着一帮小家伙满家属大院的乱 从小傻妞就像个小子似的,疯起来找不着影,心思也从未放在学习上,至使她老是不上不下的,惹得爹妈在那吹胡子瞪眼,硬是把她锁在家里,成绩才有了 一点点上升。 傻妞不但像个假小子而且是个惹祸精,到处惹是生非。记得在傻妞七八岁时, 爹妈为了能让她更好的学骑自行车特地买了辆“好孩子”牌的自行车。新车拿到 手时,傻妞甭提有多高兴了,立马推出来与小伙伴们分享,看得小伙伴们眼红极 了,纷纷回家向他们的爹妈要自行车。于是乎,第二天一个个都推着新车出来要 玩,还在院子里开展了骑车大赛,纵观所有选手,只有傻妞骑得像模像样。正当 傻妞神气十足的时候发生了一起“交通事故”——咱可爱的傻妞小姐连人带车的 翻进旁边的阴沟中,人没怎么受伤但把车蹭得花花绿绿的,还有一个刹车给摔坏 了。这可把傻妞急的像热锅上的蚂蚁,于是我们的傻妞一直躲在小伙伴的家中不 敢回家,直到天黑了,爹妈找来了才眼汪汪的回了家,挨了顿骂,清理好擦伤才 去睡觉,第二天又嘻嘻哈哈的“疯”来了。 傻妞也是个懂事的孩子,小学四五年级时便帮妈妈干活了。傻妞是贪吃的, 一碗香喷喷的蛋炒饭引来了不少大人的心。噢!忘了说,咱傻妞曾因为舞铲弄勺 而引起了火灾,不过火势不大,仅仅只是油锅着火了,把厨房里的半墙壁给烧黑 了。事后问其原因,傻妞支支吾吾的说:“肚子饿想吃东西,为了看电视而又忘 了有东西在锅中,所以……” 傻妞就是这样一个稀里糊涂的小丫头,但傻妞也有坚持的一面,小学毕业后 便开始自己照顾自己,开始了她的求学旅程,一个人面对着许多风雨,学会了许 多懂得了许多,连爹妈都说她变了,她长大了。但唯一不变的就是她迷死人不偿 命的微笑。 好了,在此祝愿我们的傻妞学业有成,永远的幸福快乐,正如她的名字一
2012湖北、陕西、福建高考英语作文,要答案!!!
Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.
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