近5年高考英语作文情况

范文一：近5年高考英语作文情况

一共5年的，十年的破了2万字，足足超了一倍字数限制，汗一个，发了一半，

压缩了一下，我罗列了，从最近的到06年的四川高考卷，都是先题目，再范文。

一、地首先是2010年的

假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要

点准备一篇英文发言稿。

1.过去对成年的向往;

2.现在的感受和认识;

3.将来的目标及措施。

参考词汇:责任 responsibility

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯;

3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)

One possible version:

Good morning, everyone !

The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.”

As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I

could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked. Now I’m a grown-up,

but I find things do not go as I expected. Although I can enjoy more freedom, at

the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this, but also

more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the

future to make my life more meaningful. To reach the goal, I must first try my

best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university.(106words)

Thank you for your listening.

二、再来是2009年的

假设你是李华。你的外国笔友Jane 打算于七月来中国，特来信了解中国的社交

习俗。

请你用英语回一封信，从以下几个方面作具体介绍。

1.见面时的问候方式;

2.对赞美的回答方或;

3.接收礼物时的回应方式;

4.餐宴礼节。

注意:

1.词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Jane,

Glad to hear from you and you're welcome to China July.

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I hope what's mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

范文

Dear Jane，

Glad to hear from you and you're welcome to China in July.The following are some Chinese customs.

Firstly，we greet each other by saying“Hello”or asking such questions as

”to express our care.Secondly，“Where are you going,”or “Are you busy,

when praised，we reply with “Oh，no～”or“I'm overpraised” to show good

manners.Next，when receiving a gift，we usually say “It's unnecessary”

besides“Thanks”to show politeness and then put it away.Finally，at dinner

parties，we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone's health or success to show that we're warm.

Anyhow，different cultures，different customs.If you“Do as the Romans do

when in Rome”，you'll enjoy more of your stay here.

I hope what's mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey. Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

三、接下来是2008年的作文

你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，主题为:保护环境从我做起。请你根据下图所

示写一篇英语短文。

注意:

1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

What can I do for our environment?

Everyone can do something for our environment.

【内容要点】

1、离开教室要关灯，节约用电;

2、节约用纸，保护森林;

3、不用纸杯和筷子

4、自己根据实际情况可添加一些与保护环境有关的细节

One Possible Version:

What can I do for environment?

Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening, I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and

第 2 页共 4 页

disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood. I believe that doing all these small thins will improve our environment and help make our world better to live in.

四、接下来是2007年的

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry 最近来信，询问你高考后的暑期安排。

请胸根据以下要点,用英语回一封信,说明你的计划,并简述理由。

1(休息; 2.读书; 3.陪伴父母; 4.参加社会活动;

注意:1.词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数);

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯;

3.参考词汇:

高考——college entrance examination

社会活动——social activities

Dear Henry,

I’m glad to receive your letter. ............. Best wishes!

Li Hua 范文 I’m glad to receive your letter. It’s a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination.

First of all, a good rest is needed because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. Of course, I’ll do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. I’ll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. They’ve done so much for me, you know. If possible, I’ll take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society.

Best wishes!

Li Hua

五、最后是2006年的

假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Nick将于八月来四川旅游，特来信询问有关旅

游景点情况。请根据下表所提供的要点，写一封回信，并表示盼望他的到来。

旅游资源

许多世界著名的风景名胜，如九寨沟(海子:清澈见低;色彩斑斓)都江堰水

利工程(2，000多年历史;仍在发挥作用)

范文二：近5年高考英语满分作文及专家点评

2004-2009年高考英语满分作文及名师评析

2009高考英语满分作文

【全国卷I海南、宁夏】

【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的

房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括:

外出购物 1.

2.替房东还书

3.Tracy 来电话留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消

2)此事已告知Susan

3) 尽快回电

100左右; 注意:1. 词数

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Mrs. Wilson,

I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee

tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

Yours,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，

生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类

书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要

仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。

【北京卷】

【试题回放】情景作文

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊

区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行

动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。

注意:词数不少于60

提示词:郊区 suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

【名师点评】

本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，

在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

【北京卷】

【试题回放】开放作文

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that

chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a

simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

【名师点评】

本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷

发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使

用得熟练而准确。

【江苏卷】

【试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算

机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下

表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。

鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪??

鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除??编辑文本，搜索信息??

收发邮件，选购商品??

点播音乐，下载电影??

如果过分依赖鼠标?? (请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点)

注意:

1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。

3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.

For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.

A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.

【名师点评】

本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，

适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。文章说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用词恰当、准确。

不失为一篇满分作文

2008高考英语满分作文

【全国卷】

【试题回放】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关

注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三

岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信:

1、自我介绍;2、祝贺苏琳生日;3、感谢工作人员;4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意:1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。

例文:

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.

About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard

work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下:

1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。

这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表

达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对

美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结

合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，

生育

好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy

life in the US.

我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏

琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。

评析:定语从句的使用。

【北京卷】

【试题回放】假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our

Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春

游到春游结束的完整过程。

注意: 词数不少于60.

提示词: 游乐园 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin

Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

We were tired but happy.

【名师点评】

本情景作文的内容要点如下:1.讨论;2.爬山;3.检拾别人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。内容要

点可用不同方式表达。本文覆盖了所有内容要点，较好地完成了试题规定的任务。其中，写

作主题突出，详略得当，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，而且有效的使用了语句间的连接成

分，使全文机构紧凑。本文叙述清楚，描写细致，准确运用了很多富有表现力的词和句型，

例如:“set off early”，“enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view”, ”were

shocked to see litter here and there “等，将活动的情形很形象地描述了出来。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1 set off 出发 2. litter n.废弃物 3.respectively adv.分别地

1.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful 好句

view .

在爬山时，我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景。

1. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there,

such as bottles and banana peels.

然而，当我们登上山顶，被眼前的一幕惊呆了:瓶子和香蕉皮这样的废弃物到处都是。

评析:细节描写，生动形象。“shock”一词也用得生动传神。

【江苏卷】

【试题回放】实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。

为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系

谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，??

老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，??

同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，??

怎样倾听(请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。)

注意:

、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 1

2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone.

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve

interpersonal relationship.

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

Thank you for your listening!

【名师点评】

这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅地表达

出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所

使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列

的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。

积累卡片英汉互译

1.promote v .促进 2. interpersonal adj.人际的3. generation gap. 代沟好词

4. open-minded adj. 虚心的

好句1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

同学之间应该互相倾听，这样他们可以互相学习和帮助，也会形成友谊。

评析:复杂句的组合，被动句的使用。

2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.

我想强调的是我们每个人都应该更多的倾听他人。

评析:复合句的使用。

【湖北卷】

【试题回放】假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，

要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。

要点:1. 问题:手机不响铃，不能发短信;该产品已售完，无法更换;型号新，无配件，

无法维修。 2. 要求:公司应尽快予以更换。

注意:1. 词数为100左右;

2. 参考词汇:配件—— spare part;

3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);

4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。

Dear Sir，

I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Bu Manyi

【名师点评】

本文内容要点齐全，语言丰富，结构合理，如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况，

中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委，最后明确提出自己的要求，明白流

畅，将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚，较好的完成了任务。全文以一般过去时为基调，结

合主动语态与被动语态，并使用了so, but, therefore 等连接词，使文章结构完整严密。

固定短语，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的语言显得地道而精炼。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1. disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.绝望的3. consideration n.体谅

好句To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.

令我失望的是，他说因为在中国是新款手机，所以没有配件来修理。

评析:复杂句的组织; to my disappointment, 常用短语。

2007高考英语满分作文

【全国卷II】

【试题回放】

一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其写一

篇文字介绍。主要内容包括:

1.地点:距白山入口处500米;

2.房间及价格:单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.

餐饮:餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池:全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。

注意:1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person

room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double?

person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

【名师点评】

本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文

章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也

很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。

评析:bring great convenience，带来便利。

【安徽卷】

【试题回放】

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校

格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与

你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回

信，主要内容如下:

l 表示赞成。

l 提出你喜欢的栏目。

l 简要说明理由。

注意:

1. 词数100左右。

2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考栏目:栏目—column 4.

Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省今年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。

仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得

不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一

夕所能写出来的。

比如说:my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且

文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。

【江苏卷】

【试题回放】2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中

，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。小学校同时进行，江苏省1

教育部倡导学生:

u 每天锻炼一小时

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情

况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意:

1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2、词数:120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、参考词汇:阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone,

The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10:00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007

in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.

So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名师点评】

本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。

积累卡片

好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡

好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour

a day and can work healthily for 50 years.

教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。

评析:advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。

2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.

如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。

评析:虚拟语气。

【重庆卷】

【试题回放】

据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括:

自我介绍

得知的情况

表示鼓励

打算为她做什么

祝她早日康复

注意:

1. 信的格式已为你写好

2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。

词数100左右。 3.

4. 请在答题卡上作答。

Dear Amy,

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will

donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如I?m sorry to hear

that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰

了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。

积累卡片

好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠

好句1. I?m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.

我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。

好处:which引导限制性定语从句。

2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!

好处:掷地有声，语言准确。

作文题目

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请

你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房

面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意:1(词数:100左右:

2(参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).

I?m very happy to receive your letter, and I?m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I?ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还

使用了以?which，?引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考

场佳作。

Dear Bob,

Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there?re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I?U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.

Best wishes !

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾

末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。

Dear Bob,

How are you these days?

I?m so glad to know that you?ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I?ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It?s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you?ll like it. If not, I?ll try to find another place for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句

运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

作文:

Dear Bob,

I?m glad to hear from you.

Welcome to our city in september. I?ve found a suitable house for you.

The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I?ll try my best to help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitable house”、“not far from??等，

另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。

范文三：(可印)近5年高考英语作文高频词汇

近 5年高考英语作文高频词汇 500

1. to

2. the

3. and

4. you

5. for

6. that

7. can

8. our

9. your 10. with 11. will 12. have 13. more 14. English 15. dear 16. from 17. about 18. should 19. students 20. good 21. school 22. life 23. them 24. this 25. help 26. what 27. her 28. make 29. very 30. some 31. their 32. know 33. think 34. which 35. Chinese 36. were 37. work 38. better 39. learn 40. when 41. class 42. well

43. also

44. his

45. people

46. because

47. she

48. one

49. would

50. first

51. thank

52. yours

53. day

54. things

55. had

56. possible

57. such

58. has

59. may

60. college

61. how much

62. only

63. smile

64. take

65. China

66. great

67. hope

68. other

69. others

70. there

71. use

72. words

73. world

74. into

75. most

76. parents

77. understand

78. best

79. many

80. part

81. read

82. study

83. than 84. besides 85. competition 86. learning 87. need 88. reading 89. want 90. always 91. each 92. forward 93. friends 94. happy 95. listening 96. teacher 97. together 98. activities 99. both 100. everyone 101. give 102. hard 103. important 104. home 105. morning 106. new 107. speech 108. three 109. who 110. enjoy 111. improve 112. letter 113. Mr.

114. then 115. two

116. able 117. after 118. afternoon 119. find 120. however 121. just

122. last

123. prefer

124. Sir 125. something 126. try 127. writing 128. any 129. ask 130. did 131. feel 132. glad 133. live 134. looking 135. never 136. next 137. often 138. today 139. while 140. wishes 141. active 142. advice 143. bag 144. beautiful 145. games 146. here 147. interesting 148. interested 149. myself 150. June 151. middle 152. monitor 153. off 154. own 155. share 156. since 157. soon 158. sorry 159. still 160. taught 161. went 162. where 163. yourself 164. away 165. back 166. bird 167. book

168. children

169. classroom

170. different

171. even

172. every

173. experience

174. kind

175. knowledge

176. made

177. necessary

178. Olympic

179. please

180. ready

181. same

182. short

183. sure

184. tell

185. these

186. whole

187. why

188. without

189. years

190. ago

191. animal

192. another

193. around

194. believe

195. boy

196. care

197. classmates

198. column

199. contest

200. country

201. everything

202. family

203. finally

204. following

205. given

206. held

207. keep

208. library

209. Madam

210. meet

211. original 212. really 213. reason 214. remember 215. sincerely 216. sleep

217. street

218. suggestions 219. talk

220. therefore 221. welcome 222. along 223. articles 224. convenient 225. early

226. elderly 227. examination 228. express 229. film

230. grow

231. idea

232. information 233. language 234. learned 235. leave

236. means 237. mother 238. mouse 239. open

240. opinion 241. opportunity 242. place

243. several 244. skills

245. spend — spent 246. sports 247. success 248. summer 249. thankful 250. trying 251. visit

252. whenever

253. admire

254. agree

255. almost

256. among

257. anything 258. anyway 259. become 260. bring

261. build

262. choose(chosen) 263. communicate 264. composition 265. computer 266. daily

267. decided 268. difficult 269. during

270. easily

271. enough

272. excited

273. famous

274. future

275. grandpa 276. group

277. grown

278. happened 279. hear

280. helpful

281. high

282. holiday 283. job

284. less

285. meaningful 286. mind

287. months

288. mountain 289. once

290. person

291. plan

292. practice 293. problem 294. receive

295. regards 296. respect

297. Saturday

298. second

299. senior

300. show

301. small

302. society

303. spare

304. story

305. suitcase

306. thought

307. told

308. topic

309. tourists

310. travel

311. tree

312. truly

313. turn

314. Union

315. volunteer

316. above

317. advantages

318. before

319. below

320. birthday

321. body

322. cell phone

323. child

324. close

325. comfortable

326. common

327. compass

328. consideration

329. course

330. describe

331. develop

332. enter

333. entrance

334. example

335. exercise

336. eyesight

337. favor

338. feelings

339. felt

340. firstly 341. flowers 342. food 343. free

344. Friday 345. friendship 346. hotel 347. hours 348. individually 349. Internet 350. invite 351. July 352. leave — left 353. lesson 354. little 355. magazine 356. magic 357. members 358. money 359. must 360. newspapers 361. nothing 362. order 363. pen

364. pencil 365. percent 366. personally 367. photos 368. pleasure 369. polite 370. post 371. power 372. praise 373. present 374. protect 375. province 376. return 377. secondly 378. shooting 379. situation 380. sunshine 381. survey

382. swimming 383. train 384. university 385. usually 386. website 387. whether 388. while 389. young 390. according to 391. alone 392. already 393. American 394. attention 395. August 396. author 397. bought 398. busy 399. camp 400. center 401. chance 402. charge 403. chopsticks 404. clear 405. climb 406. community 407. cooking 408. copy 409. courage 410. dance 411. delighted 412. diary 413. editor 414. efficiently 415. efforts 416. encourage 417. explain 418. fail

419. flight 420. foreign 421. friendly 422. gentleman 423. grateful 424. handle 425. health

426. housework

427. immediately

428. instructions

429. interview

430. join

431. mail

432. mention

433. methods

434. model

435. Monday

436. month

437. national

438. noodles

439. notice

440. offer

441. organize

442. ourselves

443. outdoor

444. popular

445. prepare

446. professor

447. program

448. proud

449. realize

450. recommend

451. rubbish

452. schoolmates

453. serious

454. sometimes

455. special

456. spoken

457. start

458. street

459. strong

460. suggest

461. suggestions

462. sunglasses

463. table

464. team

465. thinking

466. thus

467. tired

468. touch 469. trouble 470. understand 471. vacation 472. within 473. wonderful 474. wrong 475. ability 476. accept 477. adapt to 478. address 479. advisor 480. afraid 481. although 482. atmosphere 483. between 484. brave 485. business 486. campus 487. celebrate 488. colorful 489. confident 490. discuss 491. discussion 492. downtown 493. education 494. enrich 495. energy 496. especially 497. expensive 498. government 499. harmonious 500. meanwhile 501. recently 502. safety 503. suddenly 504. teenagers 505. vocabulary

范文四：新课标2高考近5年英语作文整理

2015

假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院陪老人们过重阳节，请给外教露西写一封邮件，要他一起前往，内容包括：

1、出发及返回时间

2、活动：包饺子，表演节目等。

结束语已写好。

2014

一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。

1、家庭

2、工作

3、业余生活。

开头语已写好。

2013

假如你是李华，自制了一些中国结。给开网店的朋友Tom写一封信，请他代卖，要点包括：

1、外观（尺寸颜色材料）

2、象征意义

3、价格

开头语已写好。

2012

假如你是李华，你们班的同学决定为小明举办生日宴会，请你邀请外教Susan参加，要点如下：

1、时间:周五晚八点至九点

2、地点：学生俱乐部

3、内容：生日歌蛋糕游戏

4、要求：准备小礼物

开头已写好。

2011

假定你是李华，你所喜欢的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据下面内容给主编写一封信，

1、说明你是该报的忠实读者

2、赞赏该报的优点

①、兼顾国内外新闻

②、介绍名人成功故事

3、提出建议：

4、刊登指导英语学习的文章

开头语已写好。

注：08、09、10 全是写信

范文五：广东近5年高考作文

近五年高考作文试题

24. 阅读下面的文字,根据要求作文。 (60分) (2010年)

你我为邻,相互依存。 “你” 可以是有形的,也可以是无形的; “邻”无法回避,却可有所选择。

请你根据自己的生活体验与感受,以“与你为邻”为标题写一篇文章,自定文体,不少于 800字。

24. 阅读下面的文字,根据要求作文。 (60分) (2011年)

大千世界, “原点”无所不在, “原点”可以是道路的起点,可以是长河的源头,可以是坐标的中心,可以是事物的根本……

请以“回到原点”为标题 ,联系生活体验与认识,写一篇文章,自定文体,不少于 800个字

(含标点符号) 。

【作文解析】

一、审题:

提示语里有这样几个关键词, “大千世界”告诉考生思维要放得开,写作范围无所不包; “无所不在”是指考生要选准一个切入点; “道路的起点” “长河的源头” “坐标的中心” “事物的根本” 提示考生什么叫“原点” ,弱化了考生审题的难度; “联系生活体验与认识” ,指明了考生可以选择的文体,或是记叙文,或是议论文。

“原点”究竟是什么?它的的本意是指出发的地方,提示语里的“原点” ,都是其比喻义。那么,文题“回到原点”这个动宾结构的词组,亦即回到初始的状态。也就是说,这个“原点” 代表或者象征着一种美好的东西,例如“人之初,性本善”即是典型一例,这也回答了为什么要 “回到原点”的原因。当然, “原点”也代表了一种蒙昧、启蒙和混沌。禅界有言:人生有三重境界——看山是山,看水是水;看山不是山,看水不是水;看山还是山,看水还是水。最高的境界就是回到原点,经历沧桑岁月,历览世事变幻,回归本真,再次回到原点。新加坡有部电视剧就叫《原点》 ,故事叙述 3名好友自小就许下同一个愿望,但因长大后的 3人有了不同的际遇,从此分道扬镳,好友变成了仇敌、情侣也两地分离。这是不能回到原点的悲剧。

因此,这个原点考生很容易联想到一切的真善美、纯自然的环境、淳朴的民风等等,那么, 与此相关的主题就范围更广了。

二、立意:

解决了“回到原点”的“原点”问题,下一步就是要解决为什么要“回到原点” 。

很显然,提示语的提示就是应该回到源头,这个“原点”应该是美好的。因此立意当在这个主旨范围之内,正所谓“人之初,性本善” ,没有污染的河源是纯净的,没有出发的起点是充满希望的,没有道德堕落的社会是和谐的,没有冲突的家庭是幸福的,这就是“原点”的内涵。因此, 文章立意的角度很多,人性回归本真,道德回归真善美,生命、成长、青春、奋斗、环境、心灵、诚信、公德等等,都是文章立意的重点。

最佳的立意在于强烈的现实针对性和时效性,以及选取的一个角度:一个家庭的矛盾冲突、一段友情的回归、一段成长道路的自我反思。这些都是考生最熟悉的生活,可以信手拈来。三、构思:

本题构思的难度在于作文提示语与文题的距离, 提示语只简单地提示原点, 而文题却多了 “回到” ,因此,构思全文的关键在于“为什么要回到原点” 。也就是说,不论是记叙文还是散文、议论文,都要有这样一个过程:美好的原点——破坏、矛盾冲突——回到原点。例如:纯净的环境

——发展破坏——治理、恢复环境;幸福家庭——矛盾冲突——回归幸福;纯洁的友情——伤害 ——恢复友情。

四、文体选择:

写作要求里的“生活体验与认识”告诉考生,可以写成记叙文或者散文、议论文。

根据立意的要求,估计记叙文比例会比往年有增加,亲情、友情将是考生选择最多的题材。考生之中也有单亲家庭的,如果考生来自一个离异家庭,写作一段父母和合的故事,将是佳作。特别是写考生自己游走在父母之间,积极撮合,将是最大的亮点。记叙文要求考生注重细节描写和心理刻画,这是成功的要素。

议论文的写作依然是考生的第一选择。哲理思辨是衡量作文的第一标准,考生如果能够针对 “原点”进行辩证的分析,在行文安排上层层深入,即为上等佳作。例如:正反对比论证, “回到原点”的美好与不能“回到原点”的悲剧两相对照,哲理意味就会浓厚一些。

五、素材应用:

“回到原点”的提示语“大千世界”就告诉考生,可以选择的素材比比皆是,但是广东高考作文讲究素材的鲜活,虽然可以写历史人文,但在运用上要慎之又慎,更多地选择现实生活中的素材。世界的战争与和平,历史朝代的变迁,都是可以运用的。

现实生活的素材更多,从假冒伪劣到品牌效应,从坑蒙拐骗偷到诚信社会,从史玉柱到 3Q 之争,都可以作为素材;反面的事例可以选择“我爸是李刚” “药家鑫案件” “苏丹红” “瘦肉精” “三鹿奶粉事件” “醉驾”等等。选择这些鲜活素材,在于行文之中的哲理思索,正面的例子要阐释迷失的经历之后的“回到原点” ,反面的素材阐释没有“回到原点”的危害。

名言可以引用:“古今之成大事业、大学问者,必经过三种之境界:‘昨夜西风凋碧树。独上高楼,望尽天涯路。 ’此第一境也。 ‘衣带渐宽终不悔,为伊消得人憔悴。 ’此第二境也。 ‘众里寻他千百度,蓦然回首,那人却在,灯火阑珊处。 ’此第三境也。此等语皆非大词人不能道。然遽以此意解释诸词,恐为晏欧诸公所不许也。 ” “看山是山,看水是岁;看山不是山,看水不是水;看山还是山,看水还是水。 ”

24. 阅读下面的文字,根据要求作文。 (60分) (2012年)

醉心于古文化研究的英国历史学家汤因比曾经说过,如果可以选择出生的时代与地点出生在公元一世纪的中国 , 因为当时那里处于佛教文化、印度文化希腊文化、波斯文化和中国文化等多种文化交汇地带。

居里夫人在写给外甥女涵娜的信上说:“你写信对我说, 你愿意生在一世纪以前??伊雷娜则对我肯定地的说过,她宁愿生的晚些,生在未来的世纪里。我认为,人们在每个时期都可以过很有趣而且有用的生活。 ”

上面的材料引发了你怎样的思考?请结合自己的体验与感悟,写一篇文章。

要求:①自选角度,自拟标题,自定文体。②不少于 800字。③不得套作,不得抄袭。【解析】该作文题是对往年广东高考作文的一次重大突破。完全开放式的命题方式让考生耳目一新。材料中的核心内容是“生活在那个时代(时期)好”,也就是说考生可以选择“穿越时空” 回到过去或者飞向未来,或者“活在当下”,只要能写出时代特征及时代魅力,那么文章的立意就完成了,审题的难度就相对降低了。

构思方面,考生可以选择贴近现实,贴近日常生活的兴奋点,将个人的志趣充分的表达出来,也可以穿越时空,将自己超越现实条件,把对生命的价值的思考与追求表达出来。此外,结合理想和现实的关系,表达自己的思考。

24.阅读下面的文字,根据要求作文。(2013年)

有一个人白手起家,成了富翁。他为人慷慨,热心于慈善事业。

一天,他了解到有三个贫困家庭,生活难以为继。他同情这几个家庭的处境,决定向他们提供捐助。

一家十分感激,高兴地接受了他的帮助。

一家犹豫着接受了,但声明一定会偿还。

一家谢谢他的好意,但认为这是一种施舍,拒绝了。

要求:

①自选角度,确定立意, 自拟标题 ,文体不限。

②不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围。

③不少于 800字。

④不得套作,不得抄袭。

作文分析:

第一家:感激恩赐第二家:懂得回报第三家:敢于自立

富翁:推己及人耕耘慈善,坚实行动,不必计较别人的看法。

24.阅读下面的文字,根据要求作文。(2014年)

黑白胶片的时代,照片很少,只记录下人生的几个瞬间,在家人一次次的翻看中,它能唤起许多永不褪色的记忆。但照片渐渐泛黄,日益模糊。

数码技术的时代,照片很多,记录着日常生活的点点滴滴,可以随进上传到网络与人分享。它从不泛黄,永不模糊,但在快速浏览与频繁更新中,值得珍惜的“点滴”也可能被稀释。

要求:①自选角度,确定立意, 自拟标题, 文体不限。

②不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围。

③不少于 800字。

④不得套作,不得抄袭。

参考:作文题目,很有回忆性、价值性,以“照片”为主题,材料隐含了人与科技关系的探讨, 又以熟悉的生活材料为切入点,陈述了相片技术和人生活中的关系,相片科技给人情感体验带来的改变与影响,但是并没有提出自己的判断,留给我们给予判断和写作的空间。引导人们思考:

1、人与科技的关系;

2、相片等影像科技如何改变与影响我们的生活。 (不同时代,科技改变生活)

3、此现象之我见 ,结合照相以及科技与人的关系进行思考和联想;科技与人的关系,从情感体验等展开着手。

4、在材料的基础上选择其他能反映科技与人关系的材料展开联想与想象。

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