高考英语短文改错真题2014

范文一：高考英语短文改错真题 2014-2015年高考英语真题_短文改错2015带解析

短文改错

1.【2015?陕西】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分，满

分15分)

My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.

At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, ―I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.‖

My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me

enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

【答案】

76.去掉in

77.anything 改为something

78.better改成best

79.decide改成decided

80.step 改为steps

81.well改成good

82.after改成when/while

83.a改为the

84.just后加to

85.enjoy改为enjoying

【考点定位】考查短文改错

【名师点睛】这篇短文改错是记叙文，短文的内容和学生的日常生活有关。错误之处的设置都是平常学生容易错的地方。考查点比较全面，各种词性都考查到了，也涉及到一些语法知识的考查，如:非谓语动词，时态等。

2.【2015?四川】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分，共15分)

Hi, Janice,

It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I

really want share with you some of the

problems I have been experiencing.

As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and

after school. We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It’s been three Saturdays

now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go

anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?

Please help with me and give me some advice.

Grace

【答案】

61.加上to

62. tell--told

63. friend--friends

64.sing--singing

65. many--much

66.so--but

67. How--What

68. are--were

69. him--them

70. 去掉with

【解析】

试题分析:文章主要通过一封求助信，写出了写信人的困扰。作者交了三个新朋友，经常一起去卡拉OK唱歌，但其实作者并不喜欢这样，他想知道自己该怎么做才不会失去这段友谊。

61.加上to 考查动词want的用法，want用不定式担当状语，故加上to。句意为:我真地很想和你分享一下我经历的问题。

62. tell—told 考查时态。根据时间状语last time可知，此句需要用一般过去时，故把tell改成told。句意为正如我上次告诉你的那样。

63. friend—friends 考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意为:我在这儿交了三个新朋友。

64.sing—singing 考查动名词担当宾语。本句考查句型spend?(in)doing sth结构，故把sing改成singing。

65. many—much 考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意为:那真的花费很多。

66.so--but考查连词。上一分句意为:我不想再去;下一分句意为:我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。

67. How—What 考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，表示事情，故用what而非how。注意首字母要大写。

68. are—were 考查虚拟语气。根据句子可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不相符，故把are改成were。句意为:如果你是我,?。

69. him—them 考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them而非him。句意为:你会和他们说吗,

70. 去掉with 考查动词。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意为:请帮帮我，给我一些建议。

【考点定位】考查短文纠错

【名师点睛】本篇文章考查学生的短文纠错能力。短文纠错能力考查的范围较广，如各类词类用法和各种语法知识。本篇文章中既考查了词类用法如:61、63、65、66、69、70题，也考查了学生的语法知识如:62、64、67、68，涉及多种语法知识。要求考生要通读全文，把握大意，还要逐读各句才能找出错误所在。

3.【2015?浙江】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分)

My old classroom was interesting because three side of the

classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side

of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.

【答案】

side-sides from-to sit-sitting easy-easily is-was them-it not 删除 in hurry- in a hurry felt-feel If-Although/Though

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇介绍教室的文章。

side-sides 考查名词的单复数。根据前面的three，此处应

该使用复数形式 from-to考查介词搭配 make of与make

from两者都常用在被动语态中,表示―某物由.构成的‖. make of 的原材料是看的到的,即平常我们说的物理现象,比如The chair is made of wood.椅子是有木头做成的。而make from的原材料是看不到的,比如Paper is made from the trees. 纸张是由木材做成的.是一种化学变化,从纸上是看不出一棵树滴.

sit-sitting考查动名词动词enjoy后接 ing形式。 easy-easily考查副词此处的副词修饰动词see is-was考查动词的谓语时态根据前后句的谓语时态都是使用过去的，所以这里面也需要用过去时态。

them-it考查代词此处的it指代的是学校。删除not 考查意思是否表否定该句的意思应该是表达肯定而不是否定所以要删除not in hurry- in a hurry考查冠词 in a hurry 意为―立刻‖，也是一个固定搭配 felt-feel 考查使役动词的法。 Make sb do sth,是使役动词的用法。

If-Although/Though考查连词的用法，根据句意―尽管在我读书的时候我是一个小孩，但我不会忘记它‖表达让步，而不是条件。而且翻译为如果意思上也不通。

【考点定位】短文改错

【名师点睛】这种题目对语法的要求很高，要求注意上下

文的，以及单词的用法，以及特殊用法、固定搭配等。其实

这一些错误很有可能是在写作中会出现，所以，加强写作的

练习对于这一种题目，也是有帮助的。另外，这种题目也可

以改编一下，成为语法填空的题目。

4.【2015?新课标全国II】

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 One

day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,―How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ‖ Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

【答案】

71. parent改为parents

72. on改为in

73. very去掉

74. looks改为looking

75. where改为that 或者去掉 where

76. begun改为began

77. telling改为told

78. a改为the

79. saw后加his

80. terrible改为terribly

【考点定位】语法填空。

【名师点睛】通过短短的100多个词，使考生能正确运用

各类词和固定搭配，如动词、名词、副词、代词和连词，辨

别并改正错误。总的说来，本题都是学生平时书面表达中常

见的错误。多读多练习就能找出问题所在，也能对写作有帮

助。

5.【2015?新课标全国I】

When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail

to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .

【答案】

76. think –thought

77. countryside前加the

78. or—and

79. on—with

80. been去掉

81. seriously—serious

82. airs—air

83. much—many

84. found—find

85. your—our

【解析】

试题分析:作者是孩子的时候，梦想生活在城市。二作者现在生活在城市，却向往着家乡，因为那里更少的污染。

76. think –thought句意:我认为生活在那儿很快乐。时态用法错误。这里用一般过去时，表示―过去认为‖

77. countryside前加the 句意:但是我想念农村的家乡。这里countryside是特指，故用定冠词the。

78. or—and句意:那里山绿并且空气新鲜。连词用法错误。前后句为并列关系，故用连词and。

79. on—with句意:随着工业化的发展。短语搭配错误。

短语with the development of随着??的发展。

80. been去掉句意:许多研究表明。语态用法错误。主语

与动词为主动关系，这里不需要用被动语态。

81. seriously—serious句意:全球变暖已经成为严重的问

题。词性用法错误。修饰名词，前面用形容词修饰。

82. airs—air 句意:我们呼吸的空气变得越来越脏。名词

用法错误。名词air为不可数名词。

83. much—many句意:许多罕见的动物已经消失。名词

animal为可数名词，故用many修饰。

84. found—find句意:我们必须找到方法来保护我们的地

球。动词用法错误。情态动词must后接动词原形。

85. your—our句意:我们必须找到方法来保护我们的地

球。代词用法错误。这里应当是保护我们的环境。

【考点定位】短文改错。

(2014届黑龙江省哈三中高三上学期第三次验收)

As is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old. The first step is to have child get rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in

water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water.

【答案】 1.去掉that

2. town改成 towns

3. particularly 改成particular

4. which改成where

5. were改成are

6. have与child之间加a

7. with water 改成 of water

8. teaching改成taught

9. with改成without

10. him改成himself

(2014届浙江省温州中学高三上学期期中)

Dear Mr. Black,

I’m very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get help from you in my English learning. And I’m afraid I cannot go to your place in this summer. I’ve promised my grandmother, she lives in the country, to spend this summer with her. She misses me too

much that I find difficult to refuse her request. I’m busy

preparing for my examinations in present. I planned to visit you in winter if it’s convenient to you.

Best wishes.

Yours truly,

Li Ying

【答案】

1. thank改为thankful

2. come改为coming

3. dreamed改为dreaming

4. And改为But 5. 去掉in

6. she改为who

7. too改为so

8. find后面加it

9. in改为at

10. planned改为plan

(2014届浙江省浙北名校联盟高三上学期期中联考)

One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devote all my spare time to practise it. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination, which made me great disappointed. So I asked my grandpa for advice when I

got to home. Hearing that I told him, he said, ―To some extent, examination results are sometime unexpected by your study level. You can’t judge your progress by one

examination.‖ He encouraged myself to work hard for long time to check my results. I took my grandpa’s advice. Now I

realize that the process of learning is much more important and my English is more better than before. From my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinion from old people.

【答案】

1. devote ? devoted

2. practise ? practicing

3. great ? greatly

4. 去掉to。

5. that ? what

6. sometime ?sometimes

7. myself ? me

8. for和long 之间加a。

9. more ? much

10. opinion ? opinions

(2013-2014学年内蒙古包头市一中高三入学考试)

A man was driving on the road. Suddenly his cars stopped. He got out of the car tried to find out the trouble. ―It’s the

motor.‖ Said the voice behind him. He was surprising and

turned around. But he saw only an old horse. ―Did you say something?‖ he asked. ―I said you should check yours motor.‖ The horse replied. The man rushed to the nearest house. With a very excited voice, he told the farmer had happened. The farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitement. He explained, ―He didn’t know anything about

cars. He can only repeat what I often say.

【答案】

1. cars改成car 2. tried?trying

3. the?a

4. surprising?surprised

5. something?anything

6. yours? your

7. With ?In

8. the farmer?had ?what

9. therefore?however

10. didn’t?doesn’t

(2014届浙江省江山实验中学高三上学期第一次阶段性测

试)

It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English Club. Although we have been members for a short period of times, we have made a great progress. That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!

【答案】

1. real--really

2. weekend--weekends

3. times--time

4. 去掉a

5. 去掉much

6. and--but

7. his--their

8. interested--interesting

9. us?have

10. see--seeing

(2014届浙江省湖州市八校高三上学期第二次联考)

I can’t swim so I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood, I think that three reasons might explain fear. Firstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was a child, as my mother had an unreasonable fear of it. Therefore, I was taught to see to the water as something danger. Secondly, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see something, and

this increased my fear. What’s worse, for a child I once saw

a neighbor drowned. Since then I have been more frightening.

【答案】

1. so—because

2. look—looking

3. 加the

4. am—was

5. 去掉to

6. danger--dangerous

7. glass--glasses

8. something---anything

9. for--as

10. frightening—frightened

(2014届云南省部分名校高三第一次联考(11月)

People often have troubles getting used to a new culture. They are usually curious when they first arrive a foreign country. Therefore, if they stay for a long time, they may start to feel different stages of culture shock. They can feel alone or sad because he can’t deal with the local people.

How quick people get used to culture differences may be depend on the way they learn. That’s a problem if they can’

t speak the language. On other hand, some can study the situation and make good guesses about the culture. When they finally began to understand some of the language and make some new friends, they will gradually enjoy themselves and feel satisfying.

【答案】

1. troubles改为trouble。

2. arrive后加in。

3. Therefore改为However。

4. alone改为lonely。

5. he改为they。

6. quick改为quickly。

7. may be depend on中删去be。

8. other前加the。

9. began改为begin。

10. satisfying改为satisfied。

(2014届黑龙江哈师大附中高三上学期期中)

【答案】

1. shall---should

2. specially---special

3. responding to

4. the best

5. appreciation

6. will prefer ---prefer

7. which---what

8. bringing

9. means

10. ourselves

(2014届河北省衡水中学高三上学期四调考试) Thanks for you mail. I’m glad to know you are interested in the

2014 Florida Winter Camp. It will be held from January 27

to February 13, during that time you will get wonderful experience. You will have chances to improve your speaking English in the courses providing. Also, activities arranged for you to spend weekends together with your host family, so you can learn American English in authentic situations. However, a trip to the local Disneyland will certainly add up the fun of the camp.

Join in the camp and you will have the better knowledge of American culture and life. You are sure to benefit from it.

Yours truly

Li Hua

【答案】

1. you?your

2. that?which

3. 在―get‖后面加a或experienc?experiences

4. speaking?spoken

5. providing?provided

6. 在―arranged‖前面加are

7. However?Besides/Also/Morever

8. up? to

9. 去掉in

10. the?a

(2014届河南省南阳市高三五校联谊期中考试)

My neighbor Jackie is always consideration to others. One day , I was going to deliver a speech at an institute while I found my car wouldn’t get started. I rushed to the street to hire a taxi. Just at that time I come across Jackie. He was hurried going to attend his sick mother in hospital.

Furthermore, when he learned about my problems, he didn’t hesitate to give me a lift. I arrived at the lecture hall in time, when the audience had been present . I owe my great thanks to my neighbour Jackie , he is a person ready to help the others at any time.

【答案】

1. consideration改成considerate

2. While改成when

3. come改成came

4. hurried改成hurriedly

5. attend后面加to

6. Furthermore改成however

7. problems改成problem8. when改成where 9. he改成

who 10. 去掉the

(2014届黑龙江省齐齐哈尔实验中学高三上学期期中考

试)

I went hiking to a mountain with my friend last summer. It was a good trip in the beginning and something unexpected happened halfway. One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any far. Nobody

knew how to deal it. One girl tried to call her mum over her mobile phone, but there is no signal in the mountain area. Lucky we had brought a tent with us. We put it up and let him to rest in it. After taken some pills, he drank some water and ate some food. After a while, I felt much better and we walked on. We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.

【答案】

1. 第一句:friend改成friends;

2. 第二句:and改成but

3. 第三句:far改成farther

4. 第四句:deal 后加with

5. 第五句:is改成was

6. 第六句:Lucky改成Luckily

7. 第七句:去掉rest前面的to

8. 第八句:taken改成taking

9. 第九句:I改成he

10. 第十句:us改成ourselves

(2014届浙江省衢州一中高三上学期期中考试)

Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dormitory. Instead, they rented houses outside the school. There are advantages for them all. Living in a dormitory can increase friendship and cooperation among classmates, but of course it is safer(Besides, a dormitory is more like a

society, where enables students to learn to get along with the each other，thus preparing the social life later. As for renting houses to live lonely, it’s better for your study as you can

feel freely in your own room without being interrupted by others. As a result，you can have a plenty of time to devote yourself to review your lessons wholeheartedly. But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outside the school. Anyhow as a student, I prefer living in a dormitory.

【答案】

1. rented改为rent

2. all改为both

3. but改为and

4. where改为which

5. repairing后面加for

6. lonely改为alone

7. freely改为free 8. 去掉a 9. review改为reviewing

10. problem改为problems (2014届浙江省湖州中学高三上

学期期中考试)

Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30

minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

【答案】

1. 加上for

2. past ? passed

3. feet ? foot

4. when ? than

5. a ? the

6. other ? another

7. do ? did

8. possible ? possibly

9. 去掉it

10. lose ? losing

(2014届辽宁省抚顺市六校联合体高三上学期期中考试)

As students, all of us will be faced a problem after passed the college entrance examination. Should we choose a good major and a good university first? Here are some different ideas. Some more prefer to choose a major first so they can learn that they are interested in. In this way they can put their hearts into study and got their favorite jobs in the future. Other believe that the environment is important to one’s develop and that graduates from key universities are more likely to find good jobs. As long as I’m concerned, the

best choice is a good university if we can’t obtain all.

【答案】

1. faced后面加上with

2. passed改成passing

3. and改成or

4. Some后面的more 去掉

5. learn后面的that改成what

6. got改成get

7. Other改成Others

8. develop改成development

9. long改成far

10. all改成both

(2014届吉林省长春外国语学校高三上学期期中考试)

Dear Editor,

I’m the only daughter of my parents. So they worried about everything I do. For example,

when I ride my bike, my parents won’t let me to ride by

myself. They are afraid I might fall off my bike and hurt myself. They are taking great trouble to support a bike, with

my mother even carried a first-aid box. I’m not free to

ride and I often say angry, ―Why not let me ride alone?‖ Now, most family have one child. Parents want to do everything

for his children. This does no good on them. Too many love from parents may prevent

children from independent. In my opinion, parents should let their children do that they should do alone.

【答案】

1. worried—worry/加are

2. 去掉to

3. the--a

4. carried—carrying

5. angry—angrily 6. his--their 7. family--familie 8.

many--much 9. on--to 10. that--what

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范文二：初中英语短文改错带答案解析

初中英语短文改错带答案解析

初中英语短文改错

在中考英语考试中，我们经常会见到这样的题型----短文改错，短文改错应该怎么做,主要

是考察什么,做过这类题型的人应该知道，短文改错经常会考到一些搭配，还有基本语法，

所以，要掌握此类题型，一定要做好基础语法的学习。下面是小编给大家整理的短文改错题

目，带有解析，大家可以看看。更多英语短文改错可以直接查看初中英语学习网站---

小牛英语网http://www.niuyingyu.cn/czyy/。

短文改错一:

Welcome to our city. Now let me to introduce our city to you. Our city is a new modern

city. It set up in the early 1980s. But it has been developed very rapidly. From here

you can travel everywhere by the sea, by air or by land. Recently another freeway connects

with Beijing started being used, The places around our city is rich in natural resources.

And we have enough supply in electricity and energy resources. The public order is nice.

The government will support investors with many ways. We wish more foreign friend to

invest in our city.

1. _______ 2. _______ 3. _______

4. _______ 5. _______ 6. _______

7. _______ 8. _______ 9. _______

10. _______

Key:

1.去掉me后的to。

2.在set up前加was。

3.developed改为developing。

4.去掉by后面的the。

5.connects改为eonnectcd。

6.is改为are。

7. in改为of。

8.正确。

9.with改为in

10. friend 改为 friends。

短文改错二:

I live in the country and my father was a farmer. 1. __________

He is now forty-five year old. Because of years of 2. __________

hard work， he looks old than his age. When I was 3. __________

young， he is used to tell me the importance of study. 4. __________

Father knows little about English and other subjects， 5. __________

but he usually gives me some good advices on how 6. __________

to learn my lessons good. He is not only kind to me 7. __________

but also very strict in me. With his help， I’ve made 8. __________

great progress. I’ll never to forget what he taught 9. __________

me. I think my father is best father in the world. 10. _________

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1.was 改为 is。根据上下文的时态可知。

2. 第一个year改为years。因它受 forty-five 的修饰。

3. old 改为 older。因其后有表示比较的 than。

4. 去掉is。比较:used to=过去经常，be used to=习惯于。

5. 此行无错。

6. advices 改为 advice。advice 为不可数名词。

7. good 改为 well。修饰动词要用副词，不用形容词。

8. in 改为 with。be strict in后接某事，be strict with后接某人。

9. 去掉to。因助动词will后要接动词原形，不能接不定式。

10. best 前加 the。形容词最高级前通常要加定冠词。

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范文三：短文改错题目1

一

Many parents let their children to watch TV only during certain 1_______ hours. Televion shows ,,,, books or movies. A child 2______

can learn bad things from one of them and good things from 3______ others. Some shows help children to understand the news of 4_______ Washington and other parts of the world. Some program show us 5_______ people and place from other countries or other times in history. 6______ With television a child does not have to go to the zoo see animals. 7______ They can enjoy a wonderful baseball game at home. 8______

Some programes even teach children how to cook or how to use 9_____ tools. Television brings about many places and events to us. 10_____ 二

Mr Grey was a biology professor, and he had a big collection of rare bones which he was very proud. One year he managed 1________ to get a new and better job at an university. As MrGrey was 2________ very busy, his wife made the arrangements(安排)for all her 3________

possessions to be taken in a moving van(货车)to their new home 4_________

while he was away from work. The following week three men started 5________ out take the things out of MrGrey’s house and loading(装运) 6_________

them into the van as one of them brought out a large wooden box. 7________ He is just about to throw it into the van with all the other 8_______ things when Mrs Grey ran out from her house and said, “Please 9________

treat that box very gentle! That one has all my husbans’s bones 10_______

in it.” The man was so surprised that he nearly ,,,,ped the box on his feet.

三

There are more than 3000 languages in world today, 1___________ But only about 6 of them are major languages.

More than 300 million peoples speak English as their 2___________ First or native ;anguage. Another 300million speak it as A second language. No one know how 3__________

Many people speak it as foreign language. 4_________- Chinese is only language with more speakers than English. 5__________ This is because the huge population of Chinese. 6__________ English is the world’s the most important language and 7_________

It is the most wide used language. It is the language 8__________ Of international business,research and 9__________

Science. More than three-fourths of the

World’s mail is written by English. More than 10_________

Three-fifths of the world’s radio station use English.

四

As the young woman ran by,the old man sat on the park bench 1_____ asked, “What are you running for?” the woman smilles. 2_____

“I’m not running, I’m jogging,”she said, she continued 3_____

her slowly run through the park.. Everyday, in all kinds of 4_____ the weather, thousands of men and women jog. Why has 5____ jogging -----running slowly for long distances become so popular? Most joggers begin because they hear it is a very 6____ good exercise. Jogging make the heart stronger and helps 7_____

people loss weight. It can also help them feel better about themselves. 8_____

Many joggers feel that if they can succeed in 9_____ jogging, they can succeed in other thing,also. 10___

五

A boy who were cleaning shoes in the street said 1______ to a man pass by, “let me clean your boots, sir!” 2_____

The man didn’t want to have it cleaned, so he went 3______

away. But the boy said, “You needn’t to pay for it 4______

if you ,,,,.” The man agreed this. Soon one if his 5______

boots was cleaned. Then the man put out the another 6______ boot, but the boy said, “You’ll have pay for this one. 7______

I won’t clean it if you pay me first.” The man did 8______

not want to pay, so he went along with one 9______ clean boot and one dirty boot on.

People laughed him, “Look! What a mad man!” 10_____

范文四：20篇短文改错题目

2015届高考英语专项训练短文改错20篇

一

One night ,Mr Green went to a store to buy the shirt . The salesgirl showed him several shirts to choose . He had no idea which one would suit him . At last, he had made up his minds to buy an expensive shirt ,thinking that it might go well with his new trousers . On his way home ,he was very exciting . However ,when he got up the next day , tried the shirt and looked at it this way and that ,his excitement was gone away . He found it was not so nice to look at home than it is in the store .Knowing that he couldn’t possible change it , he thought he had better put it away and use it in the future .

二

I just came back from Britain last week . I was luckily enough to be one of the students from different country to visit the UK from Feb .16 to 28 . We paid a visit to a good many of places ,like London ,Oxford or the Lake District . I learned much about British culture and history in London ,where was my favourite . I also liked Oxford , in which I saw much more old buildings . The Lake District was beautiful ,but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there . The most excited thing for me in Britain was that I make a lot of friends there .

三

When I was young ,I didn’t know what friendship . When I stayed with my

friends ,a warm feeling came out of the bottom from my heart . Now I have grown up and got many friend . And I have been tasted the pleasant feeling of friendship .

When I am happy ,they are also happy and shared the happiness with me .When I make progress ,they will be very exciting . Instead ,when I am in a difficult situation ,they will offer help to me . So friendship is never an one-way ticket . If we want to get it ,we must treat others good at first . We should always be ready to help others, especially that they are in difficult situations.

四

Friendship is very importance. Everyone needs friendship . In all our lives we can’t live without friendship just as we can’t live without air and water . Friendship

makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front of us . But real friendship is no easy to come by . True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other . A good friend can always be a good teacher to us . By his advices we are persuading to go the right way . Therefore ,more friends we have ,the better we can improve ourselves .

五

I am glad to recommend my friend Li Ming to you . Li Ming was born in July 15 ,1974 in Beijing . He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986 . When he was in the middle school , he did good in maths ,physics and chemistry and fond of art . After graduating from No.4 High School ,he entered Beijing University study physics . After four year of hard work there ,he went to the United States for further study . Because of his excellent work ,he get a doctor’s degree in physics in last year .

He is now in good healthy but would like to make contributions to our country . I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation .

Looking forward to receive your early reply !

六

Last weekend , we went mountain-climbing . Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go . Setting off very early , we went along an extreme narrow road ,all in high spirites . On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house . We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter . At noon we reached top of the mountain . That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenes there . After having a short rest and sharing with the food we had brought ,we started going down . It rained even harder . We are wet to the skin ,and we still sang and laughed happily

七

Last week , I met a stranger who seemed to be losing . I offered to guide him to a place he wanted to go to ,but to my surprise ,he refused my offer to helping . I asked him why not . He told me that he was afraid I would ask him money if I helped him in this way . Then I fell into deep thoughts : was it money which came between us ? I agree that money is becoming more and more important in our society ,and it should not be everything . We should try my best to help others and trust each other . If everyone does this ,our society will be better and better .

八

Dear Mrs Winthorp ,

So my first week at college is over ! No lectures this morning so I think I would e-mail you and let you know what things are going .

I am glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm . I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor . There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so we can help each other on the course work . Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here .

Well , I had better to stop now . I am going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon ,for I have got some preparation to make ,keep in touch.

九

My interest has been in books instead in food since I went to high school . In the past I was real interested in all kinds of foods . In summer day I liked to buy ice cream and cold drink ,while in winter I liked to buy sweets and some another foods . Whenever I went for a walk with my parents I would ask them buy me something . However , after I went to the high school , I found I was putting on weight . So , I had to give up habit of eating my favourite foods . Now I like to spend money on all kinds of books ,and my parents were always complaining that I am a money spender .

十

Generally , we prefer to do thing the way we considered to be the best . However ,it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice

when we have serious problem in our lives . Parents have gained some life experience and they know what to act in different situations . That is why we should ask them for help first when they have problems . Therefore ,there are moments when we avoid them and do not want to follow them . With time passed , my brother as well as I have realized that our parents are right . Please turn for your parents when in trouble ,for they worth trusting and ready to offer help all the time .

十一

As is known to all ,water is the source of life . Man as well as plant and animals depend on water to live . Water is used as cooking ,washing ,swimming ,farming and so on . It is high time we save water now . With population is increasing fast ,more water is being needed ; with more water being polluted ,more water is available . Unless we do not save water , lack of water will cause terrible disasters to humans . What can we do save water ? Here are some measures to take . Firstly ,we should strengthen the sense of saving water . Secondly ,they should try our best to protect water from being polluted . Thirdly ,recycling water is a effective way to save water .

十二

I have learned that you are interested in Beijing Opera ,so I have come to give you two ticket for tomorrow evening’s Beijing Opera at Mei Langfang Theater . But

it is real a pity that you happened to be out . So I have to leave the tickets with this

note . The Opera will be put on by some famous actors or actresses . He is well worth watching . By the way ,I have read the two books you lent me ,that are very interested . This week ,I am busy review my lesson in order to pass the final exams. I am afraid of that I can’t go to the Opera together with you .

I hope you will have good time .

十三

China is an ancient civilization with cultures dating back more that 4000 year. Basic elements for the modern world such as paper ,gunpowder ,paper money or compasses originated in China . Today China is again at the forefront of world ,with Chinese goods reach all parts of the world . The Chinese culture have also fascinated many people . In the Shaolin Monasteries ,the Great Wall of China or the Forbidden City of Beijing ,China has its unique arts and architectures that what draw thousands of visitors every year . The Chinese food is equally popular around the world and it is loved by much non-Chinese . But in China ,the food can found in great varieties and is different in region to region . So join us and experience all these .

十四

Maria , a 91-year-old woman ,has an unbelievable experience last week . A group of thieves broke to her house but took nothing away with them . Maria remembered that the windows were broken and all her box were opened ,but nothing was missing . Instead ,she found a handwritten note that was said ,” This is help you get by .”

Beside the note there was some money . It seemed that the thieves realized how poor

Maria lived and decided not to take something --- but to help. One policeman who has been working for 40 years is surprising by this event too . Later Maria framed the note received from her friendly thieves but used the money to buy sweets for his great grandchildren .

十五

As students ,we have classes for early morning till late afternoon . Therefore ,take a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary . Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired .During the ten-minute break we did something to get rid of tiredness . What we need is to have real rest ,instead of getting even tired . So do not do anything that will make you too excited . My ten-minute break is always pleased . I usually take some exercise . Sometime I have a free chat with my classmates .When the new class begins ,I feel freshly again .

十六

I will never forget the story which happen on a bus the other day. It was a windy day . I got on a bus after school . A young lady was standing next to me . In a flash ,a strong wind blew through the window. The lady’s false hair has blown away .

To our surprises ,she was hairless . While she was wondering what to do it ,many passengers laughed loudly . But she managed to hold back her tears . Saw this ,I picked up her false hair and said ,”Don’t sad ,Miss. I am sure you hair will grow

soon.” When I glanced to other passengers ,they all quick nodded their heads with shame .

十七

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school . She holds the view what Senior Three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons . It seems to her that if I am allowed to do that ,I will be unable to control myself and forget all about my study . She also thinks it was bad for my eyes . But I really can not accept his ideas . In my opinion ,watch TV can relax ourselves after a day’s hard works . Beside ,it is important for us to know what has happened at home and at abroad . Thus ,we should not forbidden to watch TV .

十八

As a middle school student of Senior Three , I do sports one and two hours a day ,such as doing morning exercises, playing basketball ,long-distance running and so on . I think it is very helpful to me . Take exercise makes me even more healthier so that I will not be ill very often . What’s more , I also get myself relaxing in

different kinds of sports . Only in this way I do a better job in my study in high spirits . For doing physical exercise , I am becoming stronger and more confident than ago . I did think it is necessary for everybody to spend some time on sports every day so people’s health is important in modern life .

十九

Do you read review after you see a movie ? I used to do that ,but I usually wished I didn’t .I used to read so much about a movie on advance that often I ended up not go to see it at all . The writers point everything out that is wrong with the film ,and

seldom mentions anything good about one .They also tell us the importance things and even the ending of the movie . Lately I have changed way I choose movies to look .Now I never read reviews before a movie . I read them afterwards ,if necessary . I don’t watch the talk shows which people discuss movies .And I don’t ask other

people how they like of it. Now I enjoy myself even more .

二十

When Joe left university ,he got a good work in a bike factory .But after he had been worked there for some years ,he decided to change . So he put notice in several newspapers ,said what experience he had and the kind of job he would like to have .One of the answers he accepted was from a man was looking for a job ,too. This man wrote to him .”Dear sir ,when you get a new job ,be kind enough to give your name and address to your present boss as I have been trying to find a position as yours for a long time . After he reads the letter ,he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish .

答案

一

1 the ----- a 2 choose ------ choose from 3 had made up ----made up 4 minds---- mind 5 exciting ----- excited 6 in ------ on 7 gone away ----- gone 8 than ----- as 9 is ------ was 10 possible -----possibly

二

1 luckily --- lucky 2 country ---- countries 3 many of ----- many

4 or ---- and 5 where ----- which 6 much ----- many

7 pity ---- a pity 8 they ---- we 9 excited ----- exciting 10 make ----made

三

1 friendship --- friendship was 2 from----- of 3 friend---- friends 4 been 去掉 5 shared ----- share 6 exciting ---- excited

7 an ---- a 8 good ----- well 9 at 去掉 10 that ---- when

四

1 importance---important 2 and---- or 3 getting ---- get 4 kind ---- kinds 5 the front of ---- front of 6 no ---- not 7 understand----- understanding 8 advices ---- advice 9 persuading ---- persuaded 10 more ---- the more

五

1 the middle school--- middle school 2 good -----well 3 fond ---- was fond 4 study---- studying 5 year--- years

6 get ---got 7 in last year---- last year

8 healthy ----- health 9 but ----and 10 gratefully ---- grateful

六

1 go----- going 2 extreme----extremely 3 every---each or either 4 house---- houses 5 mixing ---- mixed 6 top---- the top 7 That ---- What 8 with 去掉 9 are --- were 10 and ---but

七

1 losing---lost 2 a ----- the 3 helping---- help 4why not ---- why 5 money ----- for money 6 thoughts-thought 7 which---- that 8 and---- but 9 my---- our 10 this --- it

八

1 what ---- how 2 anything ---- everything

3 find---- found 4 second---- the second 5 friend---- friends 6 on ---- with 7 warmly--- warm 8 to 去掉

9 mine --- my 10 for---so

九

1 instead ----- instead of 2 real ---- really 3 day ----days 4 drink -----drinks 5 another -----other 6 buy---to buy 7 the high school ---- high school 8 habit---- the habit 9 and ----- but 10 were ---- are

十

1 considered ------ consider 2 an advice ----- advice 3 experiences----- experience 4 what ----how 5 they ----we 6 Therefore ---- However 7 passed----passing 8 have ---has 9 for----to 1o worth--- are worth

十一

1 plant--- plants 2 depend---- depends 3 as ---- for 4 save---- saved 5 is increasing ---- increasing 6 more---less 7 Unless---- If 8 What can we do? save

water

to 9 they ----- we 10 a ---- an

十二

1 ticket ?tickets 2 real ?really 3 or ?and 4 He ?It

5 that ?which 6 interested?interesting 7 review ?reviewing

8 exams ?exam 9 of 去掉 10 a good time

十三

1 back ---- back to 2year---- years 3or ----and 4 in ----- from 5world前加the 6 reach---

reaching 7what draw---- draw 8 much--- many

9 found---be found 10 in ----from

十四

1 has ----- had 2 to ---- into 3 box---- boxes 4 was said ----said 5 This is help you ----This is to help 6 poor ----poorly 7 something -----anything 8 surprising ----surprised 9 but----and 10 his ----her

十五

1 for ---- from 2 take ----taking 3 class----classes 4 or ---- and 5 did ----- do 6 have real ----have a real 7even tired ----even more tired 8 pleased---- pleasing

9 Sometime----Sometimes 10 freshly---- fresh

十六

1 happen--- happened 2 a bus ----the bus 3 has----was 4 surprises-----surprise 5 do it ----do 6 Saw----seeing 7 sad---- be sad 8 you---- your 9 glanced to ----- glanced at 10 quick ----quickly

十七

1 about ---- with 2 what ------ that 3 fully ---- full 4 was ---- is 5 his ----- her 6 watch ---- watching 7 works ----- work 8 Besides---- Beside 9 第二个at删去

10 forbidden ------ be forbidden

十八

1 and--- or 2 helpfully----helpful 3 Take---- Taking 4 more healthier ----- healthier 5 relaxing ---- relaxed 6 I do----can/will I do 7 For----By 8 ago ----before /ever 9 did ---- do 10 so ---- because

十九

1 after---before 2 didn’t----- hadn’t 3 on ---- in

4 go----- going 5 mentions----- mention 6 one----it 7look----watch/see 8 changed way----changed the way 9 which ----where 10 like of it----- like it

二十

1 work --- job 2 had been worked-----had worked 3 put notice ----put a notice 4 said----saying 5 accepted ----received 6 a man was---a man who was 把was 去掉

7 your--- my 8 as ----like 9 reads---read 10 real-----really

范文五：短文改错专题解析版

短文改错专题解析版

1. 【山东省实验中学2016届高三上学期第三次诊断】短文改错（共10小题, 每小题1分, 满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Thomas,

I feel sorry to know your worries about getting fatter and fatter so that you have failed the sports test. Nothing can be more disappointment than that.

As far as I am concerned, there are many reasons cause your failure in a test. Firstly, you are very lazy to have regular sports. In fact, sports can help you keep fit and energy. Secondly, you eat too much meat, that makes you gain weight easily. Finally, you sleep more than you need. There was no denying that it is all these things that have caused your problem and your worries.

As I stated above, you should first eat less meat but more fruits and vegetable. And then you should have regular sports so that you can burn the fat that builds up in your body and to become slim.

Hope my advice is some help to you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

71.disappointment→disappointing

72. 加that/which;cause→causing

73.a→the

74.very→too

75.energy→energetic

76.that→which

77.was→is

78.vegetable→vegetables

79. 去掉and/to

80. 加

72. 加that/which;cause→causing考查关系词。可看成是一句从句，也可把cause 看成非谓语动词，所以加that/which;cause→causing。

73.a→the考查冠词。上文已经提到是体育测试了，此处特指，故用the 。

74.very→too考查副词。Too...to.. 结构，表示太.... 以至于不能.... ，故用too

75.energy→energetic考查形容词。Keep energetic保持活力，用energetic 。

76.that→which考查关系词。非限制性定语从句，故用which 。

77.was→is考查动词时态。本文使用一般现在时，用is 。

78.vegetable→vegetables考查名词。可数名词用复数，所以用vegetables 。

79. 去掉and/to考查连词和介词。可以表示一个结果，也可以表示并列，但是这两者不能并存，去掉and/to。

80. 加of 考查介词。Be of +名词与这个名词的形容词效果一样，加of 。

考点：考查了动词、介词、冠词、名词、形容词、时态等的用法

【学法指导】

在短文改错中常出现的错误主要有以下几类：

1. 名词单复数用错，可数与不可数名词的混用。比如第78小题more fruits and vegetable，可数名词用复数，所以用vegetables 。

2. 动词：时态和语态，常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时，中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象；或是及物动词后无宾语，或是不及物动词后加了宾语；需要接ing 形式的接了to ，或相反等。比如第77小题There was no denying that，本文使用一般现在时，用is 。

3. 形容词副词：常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反；关系副词where ， when ， why 等的缺失或错用。

4. 介词：主要是介词的多余或缺失，错用

5. 主谓一致性：第三人称单数漏掉s ，或主语为复数，谓语动词用了单数；再就是就近原则对主语的影响。

6. 冠词：定冠词the 的多余或缺失，如季节，月份，星期，球类及三餐活动，称呼头衔前等不能加the 的地方加了the 。比如73小题in a test，上文已经提到是体育测试了，此处特指，故用the 。

7. 数词：主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用。

8. 连词：不合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词（如but ）的时候用了承接连词（so ），或相反等等。

9. 代词：主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词，单数用了复数代词或相反；应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格，主格或相反，关系代词的错用或缺失。

10. 常用固定短语或固定用法及句型用错，比如第80小题Hope my advice is some help to you. ，Be of +名词=形容词的固定搭配使用错误，加of 。

2. 【湖北省武汉市武昌区2016届高三元月调研】

Dear Ms. Helen,

I am pleasing to offer you the position of after-sales manager in our company starting on 16 June, 2016. You were given the right to discuss this offer and to seek advices on the attached proposed agreement with your family, a lawyer, or someone else you trust. Unless you want some information on your employment rights, you can also contact the Employment Service Office or visiting our website.

Also, if you disagree this offer or wish to clarify something in it, please ring myself to discuss any issue you wish to raise.

If you are happy with the proposed terms and wish to accept an offer of employment, please sign this letter and return it to me by 1 June, 2016. In case of I have not heard from you by that date, this offer will be automatical withdrawn. Li Hua

【答案】

71.pleasing---pleased

72.were---are

73.advices---advice

74.Unless---If

75.visiting--- visit

76.disagree 后添加with

77.myself---me

78.an---the

79. 去掉please

80.automatical---automatically

【解析】

71.pleasing---pleased 考查形容词。形容人应该用-ed 形式的形容词，故改为pleased 。

72.were---are 考查时态。本文是一般现在时，故改为are 。

73.advices---advice 考查单复数。根据语境可知这里是单数形式的建议，故改为advice 。

74.Unless---If 考查虚拟语气。这里是表示疑问性的虚拟语气，需要表示“如果”的词汇，故改为If 。

75.visiting--- visit考查动词。Or 前后的动词的格式结构相同，前面是原形，后面也应是原形，故改为visit 。

76.disagree 后添加with 考查固定结构。Disagree with sth./sb.是固定结构，故添加with 。

考点：考查词汇和语法的运用。

3. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每句错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Many years before I failed the entrance exam and had to go to a ordinary college. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patiently to me. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere of classroom. Later, I decided to treasure for my college time. I worked hard but got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, that greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.

【答案】

81. before → ago

82. go to a → go to an

83. Disappointing → Disappointed

84. patiently → patient

85. treasure for → treasure

86. but → and

87. are → were

88. student → students

89. that → which

90. what → not what

【解析】

试题分析:

81. before → ago ago 表示“从现在起若干时间以前”，常与动词一般过去式连用。而且ago

只能作副词。before 表示“从过去某时起若干时间以前”，常与过去完成式连用。而before 既可作副词又可作介词和连词。此处应用ago 。

82. . go to a → go to an ordinary 以元音开头，因此应用不定冠词an 。

83. Disappointing → Disappointed disappointed感到失望的，disappointing 令人失望的，根据

句意，应用disappointed 。

84. patiently → patient 此处形容词作补语，故改为patient 。

85. treasure for → treasure treasure为及物动词，可直接接宾语，故改为treasure 。 86. but → and前后句并无转折联系，因此改为and 。

4. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

After a couple of year away from my hometown, I find it has changed a lot. The old fish shop across the street has gone. There exist now a park that has a small river run through. The factory on Friendship Street has been moved out the city and a sports center is now in their place. The market at corner of Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to my middle school was still there.

【答案】

71.year → years

72.has → is

73.exist → exists

74.run → running

75.moved out 后加of

76.their → its

77.corner 前加the

78.been 去掉

79.Besides → But

80.was → is

【解析】

试题分析：通过阅读并修改此短文，考查学生对固定搭配，动词时态和语态，名词的单复数问题，以及非谓语动词的辨别和运用。

71.year → years 考查可数名词的复数。a couple of 意思是：两三个，后面用复数名词years 。

72. 第二行的第一个has → is 考查形容词。gone 这里是形容词，所以用is 构成系表结构。

73.exist → exists 考查谓语动词。a park是主语，后置，所以用动词的单三形式exists 。

74.run → running 考查非谓语动词。，running through是定语修饰a small river，run 的逻辑主语是a small river，所以用动词的-ing 形式。

75.moved out 后加of 考查短语。move out of the city搬出这个城市。

76.their → its 考查代词。its 代替前面的a sports center，in one’s place 在某地。

77.corner 前加the 考查冠词，这里用the 表特指。

78.been 去掉考查语态。句意：在新华路拐角的市场已经让位于一个超市。这里是主动的关系，所以去掉been 。

79.Besides → But 考查关系词。前后表转折关系，用but ，Besides 的意思是：而且。

80.was → is 考查动词的时态。全文用一般现在时，所以用is ，was 是过去式。

考点：语篇理解以及语法知识。

5. 【广东省惠州市2016届高三上学期第三次调研】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号() ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My family was very poor when I was a child. My parents lost their jobs or lived with heavy pressure. As a result, I wanted to study hardly so as to have different future. During my high school life, I spent all my time studied those difficult subjects, which made me one of the best student in our school. After graduation, I was admitted in a key university where I meet a lot of interesting friends. Now, I am working in a big company and I am able to afford anything I wanted. What’s more, my parents also have been found new jobs. So I believe that our dream will came true if we try our best.

【答案】

51.or → and

52.hardly → hard

53.different future 前加a

54.studied → studying

55.student → students

56.in → to / into / by

57.meet → met

58.wanted →want

59. 去掉been

60.came → come

52.hardly → hard 考查副词。句意：我想努力地学习。hardly 几乎不，hard 努力。

53.different future 前加a 考查冠词。future 是可数名词，这里是指一个不同的未来，用a 。

54.studied → studying 考查固定搭配。spend time doing sth. 所以用studying 。

55.student → students 考查复数名词。one of 后面用复数名词students 。

56.in → to / into / by 考查固定搭配。be admitted to/ into / by 被…..录取。

57.meet → met 考查动词时态。本句是过去式，所以用动词的过去式met 。

58.wanted → want 考查动词时态。本句是一般现在时，所以用原形want 。

59. 去掉been 考查时态语态。主语和谓语之间是主动关系，所以去掉been 。

60.came → come 考查谓语动词。will 后用动词原形come 。

考点：短文改错。

6. 【四川省资阳市2016届高三上学期第二次诊断】请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One Monday afternoon, we were playing the basketball on the playground while Isuddenly slipped and fell over. On seeing that, all my classmates rushed to me. Under the help of several other students, Li Xiang, one of my best friend put me on his back and head for the clinic

immediately. It turned out that my right ankle got hurt but I had to be sent to hospital.He did not leave until ambulance arrived. The following day, he came to see me. To my

greatly relief, he brought textbooks with them and helped me with my lessons. It was a great pleasure to have such a devoting friend.

【答案】

71.playing 后去掉the

72.while → when

73.Under →With

74.friend →friends

75.head →headed

76.but→and/so

77.until 后面加the/an

78.greatly →great

79.them→him

80.devoting →devoted

【解析】

试题分析：通过阅读修改此短文，考查学生对英语语法的应用，包括连词，冠词，动词时态和语态，形容词和副词的区别，名词的单复数问题等。

71.playing 后去掉the 考查冠词。play basketball 没有冠词，意思是：打篮球。

72. while → when 考查固定搭配。be doing when 是固定用法，意思是：某事正在发生这时……。

73.Under → With 考查固定搭配。with the help of …在……的帮助下。所以Under →With。

74.friend → friends 考查名词。one of 后面用复数名词，所以friend→friends。

75.head → headed 考查动词的一致性。全文都是过去式，这里应该一致，所以head→headed。

76.but → and/so 考查连词。这里前后是并列或者因果关系，所以but→and/so。

77.until 后面加the/an 考查冠词。ambulance 是可数名词，前面用冠词the/an，表特指或泛指。

78.greatly → great 考查形容词。形容词 great 修饰名词relief 。

79.them → him 考查代词。他随身带来课本，所以用him 。

80.devoting → devoted 考查形容词。devoted 忠诚的修饰名词。

考点：语篇理解以及语法知识。

7. 【浙江省杭州市五校联盟2016届高三年级上学期第一次诊断】下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

This morning I went to the supermarket, buying a toy and went to see my nephew , a 8-year-old boy named Jack. She was playing with some of his friend in the yard when I arrived there. The moment he found that I came to see him with his most favorite toy, Jack jumped with joy. Every boy and girl present wanted very much to have a look the toy. However, Jack doesn’t want his friends to see it. He was about to hide the toy then I stopped him. “Let your friends to play with your toy as well, Jack — you must learn to share.” I said. Realized that he was wrong, Jack played with the toy together with his friends.

【答案】

71.buying 改为 bought

72.a 改为an

73.She 改为He

74.friend 改为 friends

75. 去掉most

76.look 后加 at

77.doesn’t改为 didn’t

78.then 改为 when

79. 去掉to

80.realized 改为

realizing

72.a 改为an 考查冠词。8-year-old 是元音开头，boy 是可数名词，一个用an 。

73.She 改为He 考查代词。这里指我8岁的侄子，所以She 改为He 。

74.friend 改为 friends 考查复数名词。some of 后用复数，所以friend 改为 friends 。

75. 去掉most 考查形容词的用法。favorite 最喜欢的，本身就含有最的意思，所以去掉most 。

76.look 后加 at 考查固定搭配。have a look at 看一眼……。

77.doesn’t改为 didn’t 考查时态的一致性。本文讲述过去的事情，所以用助动词didn’t。

78.then 改为 when 考查固定搭配。be about to do sth. when…意思是：正要做某事这时……。

79. 去掉to 考查固定搭配。let somebody do sth.让某人做某事，后面用动词原形做宾语补足语。

80.realized 改为 realizing 考查非谓语动词。Jack 是realize 的逻辑主语，所以用realizing 。考点：语篇理解以及语法知识。

8. 【安徽省“皖南八校”2016届高三第二次联考】Good morning, everyone!

I'd like to share a quote with you, which go like this: “Time is said to be money, but it is more-it is life.” It is true that time is great value. After all, anything is more precious than time. In our daily life, we've often been told that lose time will never return. To be honest, I am used to spend plenty of time playing computer games, what made me fall far behind my classmates. Have realized how much time l wasted, I've made up my minds to work hard to catch up with them. Wasting time is just like wasting part of our lives. Such valuable is time that if you want your dreams to come true, you should make the more of it.

【答案】

56.go---goes

57. 加of

58.anything--nothing

59.lose--lost

60. 去掉am

61.what--which

62.Have--Having,

63.minds--mind,

64.Such--So,

65.more---most/best

【解析】

试题分析：时间就是金钱、就是生命。本文是一篇号召珍惜时间的演讲。

56.go---goes 考查动词主谓一致。Which 引导定语从句指代一件事，谓语动词用单数，因此

go---goes 。

57.is 后面加of 考查介词。根据后面抽象名词value ，可知是be+of +名词结构，因此is 后面加of 。

58.if 考查连词。根据句意：没有什么能比时间珍贵，得知这里是表示否定，因此anything--nothing 。

59. lose--lost 考查非谓语动词。此处是表示被动完成，用过去分词结构，“失去的”，因此 lose--lost 。

60. 去掉am 考查动词短语。根据句意：我过去总是浪费大量时间玩电脑游戏，“过去常常”used to do，因此去掉am 。

61.what--which 考查关系代词。用Which 引导定语从句指代一件事“玩电脑”，因此what--which 。

9. 【河南省郑州市2016年高三上学期第一次质量预测】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9. You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed to me. I had no more choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory, for reading from the paper wasn’t allowing. The real moment began before I stood on the platform with my legs trembling or my mind blank. But my listeners were waiting patient. Gradually, I found me back, giving my speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of speak before a big audience had disappeared. Actually, now I’ve become a great speaker!

【答案】

71.make 后添加a

72.to---on

73. 去掉more

74.allowing---allowed

75.before---when

76.or---and

77.patiedt---patiently

78.me---myself

79.speak---speaking

80.had---has

【解析】

71.make 后添加a 考查固定结构。Make a speech意为“做一个演讲”，是固定结构，故添加a 。

72.to---on 考查短语。fix on意为“集中于”，故改为on 。

73. 去掉more 考查成分多于。根据句意可知这里是我没有选择，故去掉more 。

74.allowing---allowed 考查被动语态。这里是被允许，是被动语态，故改为allowed 。

75.before---when 考查固定结构。The moment…when是固定用法，故改为when 。

76.or---and 考查and 的用法。陈述句中的和用and 表示，故改为and 。

77.patiedt---patiently 考查副词。Patiently 用来形容wait ，故改为patiently 。

78.me---myself 考查固定结构。Find oneself back意为找回某人自己，故改为myself 。

79.speak---speaking 考查动词。Of 是介词，介词后面动词用-ing 的形式，故改为speaking 。

80.had---has 考查时态。本文是一般现在是，所以此处的完成时也应该是现在完成时，并且主语为单数，故改为has 。

考点：考查词汇和句型的运用。

10. 【山东省德州市2016届高三上学期期末统考】Dear Barbara，

How are you? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have admitted to Berkely school in California．More than 3000 students took exams for it，but only a few was chosen and I was one of them．Therefore ，my parents are not happy about it．They are strong against me going there ．They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel homesick．They can’t imagine so young a girl like me live alone．They advise me to choose a university near my home instead ．Then I would be able to continue living with them ．How can I persuade them to accept the fact what I have grown up?

Yours Faithfully

Jane Blair

【答案】

71. 去掉a

72. 加上been

73.was →were

74.Therefore→However

75.str ong→ strongly

76.too→so

77.of 去掉，或者of→ that

78.live→ living

79.would→ will

80.what→that

73.was →were考查谓语动词。主语I 后面应该用谓语动词were ，故把was 改成were 。

74.Therefore→However考查副词。根据上下文可知此处表示“转折”，所以应该用However ，故把Therefore 改成However 。

75.strong→ strongly 考查副词。此处副词strongly 用来修饰动词against ，故把strong 改成strongly 。

76.too→so考查连词。so…that…固定搭配，表示“如此……以至于”，故把too 改成so 。

77.of 去掉，或者of→ that考查介词。此处afraid 后面是句子，而be afraid of后面应该接短语，所以应该将of 去掉或者改成that 引导的宾语从句。

78. live→ living 考查动名词。Imagine doing sth. 固定搭配。所以imagine 后面应该接动词Ing 形式，故把live 改成living 。

79.would→ will考查情态动词。由于此处表达的是一般将来时的含义，所以应该用情态动词will ，故把would 改成will 。

80.what→that考查关系代词。此处the fact 后面接的从句是定语从句，用来修饰the fact ，

所以应该用关系代词that 修饰，故把what 改成that 。

11. 【山东省淄博市淄川第一中学2016届高三上学期期末】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Ladies and gentlemen，

It’s my honor to give a speech here．After-class activities play a important part in our school life ．Proper activities help enrich our lives，broaden our horizons or develop our personalities.

Mine own experience can serve as a case in point. When I was in Senior one，I become a member of our drama club，that I used to visit on weekends．Since my participation in various activities organizing by the club，I achieved a lot．

These activities bring me a lot of funs，provide me with good opportunities to develop new friend-ships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook ．With so much advantages shown above，why not to join us at once？

【答案】

71.a---an

72.or---and

73.Mine---Wy

74.become---became

75.that---which

76.organizing---organized

77.I 前添加have

78.funs---fun

79.much---many

80. 去掉to

【解析】

71.a---an 考查冠词。Important 的首字母发音是元音，前面冠词需要用an ，故改为an 。

72.or---and 考查and 的用法。陈述句中的和用and 表示，故改为and 。

73.Mine---My 考查形容词性物主代词。这里应该是形容词性的物主代词，故改为My 。

74.become---became 考查时态。本文为一般过去时，故改为became 。

75.that---which 考查非限制性定语从句。引导词在从句中不作任何成分，并且有逗号隔开，故改为which 。

76.organizing---organized 考查activities 和organize 之间构成被动关系，故改为organized 。

考点：考查词汇和句型的用法。

12. 【黑龙江省哈尔滨市第六中学2016届高三上学期期末】短文中共有10处语言错误，每句话最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出增加的词;

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼) 划掉;

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

Everyone has a dream. We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or toughly. As senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three years, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Anxious and pressure did discourage from me at times. Besides, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it.

I’m sure that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how challenged it is, I’ll make it come true. As the proverb said,” Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”

【答案】

1.achieve 改为achieving

2.toughly 改为tough

3.Senior 前加 a

4.that 改为what

5.anxious 改为anxiety

6. 去掉from

7.Besides 改为However

8.has 改为is

9.challenged 改为challenging

10.said 改为says

【解析】

1.achieve 改为achieving ；固定用法：be on the way to doing。这里的to 是介词，后面应该用动名词形式。故将achieve 改为achieving 。

2.toughly 改为tough ；考查形容词修饰系动词。is 是系动词，应该用形容词来修饰，toughly 是副词。故将toughly 改为tough 。

3.Senior 前加 a ；考查冠词。student 是可数名词。故在Senior 前加 a 。

4. 把equip myself with 后的that 改为what ；考查宾语从句。with 是介词，后面应该接宾语，that 不能引导宾语从句。故把equip myself with 后的that 改为what 。

5.anxious 改为anxiety ；这一句的主语是anxious and pressure，但是anxious 是形容词，不能做主语，故将anxious 改为anxiety 。

6. 去掉from ；固定用法。discourage 是及物动词，后面直接接名词。故去掉from 。

7.Besides 改为However ；前一句句意; 紧张和压力有时候确实会让我泄气。后一句句意：在老师和同学的鼓励下，我认为我可以成功。两句没有明显的并列关系，而是转折的关系，故将Besides 改为However 。

8.has 改为is ；固定句型：there be 句型。故将has 改为is 。

9.challenged 改为challenging ；考查challenge 的形容词词意。challenged 受到挑战的；challenging 具有挑战性的。而文中句意，根据上下文，应该是无论它有多具有挑战力…故将challenged 改为challenging 。

10.said 改为says ；常规用法。名言、谚语、俗语等是客观存在的，应该用一般现在时来表达，故将said 改为says 。

【名师点睛】

短文改错答题技巧

一、高考英语改错题的常见错误类型

1、谓语动词的时态和语态

2、句子结构和句子完整性

3、名词单复数及主谓一致问题

4、上下文语意和代词

5、介词固定搭配

6、固定（习惯）用法

7、形容词和副词是否误用及其比较等级是否正确；

8、冠词。取舍与选择是否正确

9、连词和从句引导词

10、非谓语动词的形式是否正确

二、命题趋势

词法错误、句法错误和行文逻辑

1. 一致关系：包括主谓一致、时态一致、代词指代一致等。

2. 平行结构：包括动词与动词相配，形容词与形容词相配，分词与分词相配，不定式与不定式相配等。常由并列连词或词组连接。如：and ， or ， but ，neither…nor…, as well as 等. 例如第7题，前一句句意; 紧张和压力有时候确实会让我泄气。后一句句意：在老师和同学的鼓励下，我认为我可以成功。两句没有明显的并列关系，而是转折的关系，故将Besides 改为However 。

3. 非谓语动词的用法：如to 的省略，过去分词与现在分词的误用等。

4．多余词或者缺词：常常是介词、副词等的多余或缺少。

例如第3题，student 是可数名词，但是在文章中既没有用复数形式，也没有冠词，因此可以知道这里缺冠词。故在Senior 前加 a 。

5．词性的混用。

6．行文逻辑判断等

三、注意事项：

（一）改前通读全文, 切忌拿来就改，这一步很关键。这一步的目标是了解短文的中心意思，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑。记叙文强调时间、地点、人物和事件四要素，在通读全文理解全文的同时把一些比较容易的或是明显的错误先改好

（二）分句阅读，逐行找错。在纠错时要仔细地读懂每一个句子，这时就要对文中的词法、句法和语篇（详见考查要点）角度着重分析和特别注意。把涉及到以上错误类型的词多斟酌一下。

（三）做将答案放回原文, 再重读全文。其目的主要是查看有无不符合逻辑, 语句不通畅, 不符合英语习惯的问题。

13. 【吉林省吉林大学附属中学2016届高三上学期第四次摸底】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn how to stop wasted water. One

of the step that we should take is to find ways of reusing them. Today in the most large cities, fresh water

is used only once and then it runs in a waste system. But it is possibly to pipe the used water to a purifying factory, when the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can be reused. But even if every large city purified and reused it’s water, we still would have enough water.

【答案】

1.was 改为is

2.wasted 改为wasting

3.step 改为steps

4.them 改为it

5.in the most large去掉the

6.in 改为into

7.possibly 改为possible

8.when 改为where

9.it’s改为its

10.would 后加

not

3.step 改为steps ；考查名词复数。one of +名词复数，表示…中之一。故将step 改为steps 。

4.them 改为it ；考查代词。这一句的句意：其中的一个步骤就是要拒绝浪费用水。这里的代词应该是代指浪费用水这一件事情，them 是复数。故将them 改为it 。

5.in the most large去掉the ；考查冠词的用法。most 表示最高级时前面才需要加定冠词the, 而此处是“大多数”的意思，故将the 去掉。

6.in 改为into ；考查介词的用法。in 是表示的动作位置的静态介词，表示“在…里面”；而into 是表示动作方向的动态介词，表示“到…里面去”，常与表示动作的动词（如：come, go, run, rush等）连用，故将in 改为into 。

7.possibly 改为possible ；考查系动词的用法。is 是系动词，后面一般接名词，形容词等。possibly 是副词。故将possibly 改为possible 。

8.when 改为where ；考查非限制性定语从句。先行词factory 是一个地点名词，所以应该用地点关系副词where 来引导定语从句。故将when 改为where 。

9.it’s改为its ；考查代词。every large city purified and reused it’s water,句意：每个大城市都净化并且重新利用它的废水。it’s是it is的缩写形式，故将it’s改为its 。

10.would 后加not ；根据上文内容可知此处说的是将来没有水来利用，表示否定意思，故在would 后加not 。

【名师点睛】

短文改错答题技巧

一、高考英语改错题的常见错误类型

1、谓语动词的时态和语态

2、句子结构和句子完整性

3、名词单复数及主谓一致问题

4、上下文语意和代词

5、介词固定搭配

6、固定（习惯）用法

7、形容词和副词是否误用及其比较等级是否正确；

8、冠词。取舍与选择是否正确

9、连词和从句引导词

10、非谓语动词的形式是否正确

二、命题趋势

词法错误、句法错误和行文逻辑

2. 一致关系：包括主谓一致、时态一致、代词指代一致等。

2. 平行结构：包括动词与动词相配，形容词与形容词相配，分词与分词相配，不定式与不定式相配等。常由并列连词或词组连接。如：and ， or ， but ，neit her…nor…, as well as 等.

3. 非谓语动词的用法：如to 的省略，过去分词与现在分词的误用等。

4．多余词或者缺词：常常是介词、副词等的多余或缺少。

例如第5题，考查冠词的用法。most 表示最高级时前面才需要加定冠词the, 而此处是“大多数”的意思，故将the 去掉。

5．词性的混用。

6．行文逻辑判断等

三、注意事项：

（三）做将答案放回原文, 再重读全文。其目的主要是查看有无不符合逻辑, 语句不通畅, 不符合英语习惯的问题。

考点：考查短文改错

14. 【河南省商丘市2015届高三第二次模拟考试】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每句错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

【答案】

91. before → ago

92. go to a → go to an

93. Disappointing → Disappointed

94. patiently → patient

95. treasure for → treasure

96. but → and

97. are → were

98. student → students

99. that → which

100. what → not what

【解析】

试题分析:

87. before → ago ago 表示“从现在起若干时间以前”，常与动词一般过去式连用。而且ago

只能作副词。before 表示“从过去某时起若干时间以前”，常与过去完成式连用。而before 既可作副词又可作介词和连词。此处应用ago 。

88. . go to a → go to an ordinary 以元音开头，因此应用不定冠词an 。

89. Disappointing → Disappointed disappointed感到失望的，disappointing 令人失望的，根据

句意，应用disappointed 。

90. patiently → patient 此处形容词作补语，故改为patient 。

91. treasure for → treasure treasure为及物动词，可直接接宾语，故改为treasure 。 92. but → and前后句并无转折联系，因此改为and 。

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