一、要明确关系型作文话题及其命制特点
所谓关系型作文话题,就是由两个或两个以上的词语或短语并列组合而成的一种话题形式,具体操作的过程中必须兼顾话题构成的各个要素,清楚地点明其间关系.如:“失去与获得”、“感情的亲疏与对事物的认知”等.
就拿高中语文新教材第二册所收史铁生的《我与地坛》来说,其文题就可以看成是一个典型的话题,行文中作者就很好兼顾了“我”与“地坛”这两个要素:一方面具体描述了“我”在地坛的所见所闻所为所思,另一方面又深刻地交代了“地坛”给我的人生感悟,使我完成了生命意义的思考,让我走出了人生的低谷、鼓足了生命气,从而揭示了两个要素间的关系,即“地坛是我的精神家园”.
需提请注意的是,构成关系型话题的各要素间的关系大多呈现出一种开放性,其思维方向、价值取向都不是唯一的.如2003年高考作文话题,就可从不同角度作不同理①从正面看,感情的亲疏有助于对客观事物的认识.由此可谈及融洽的人际关系、良好的人文环境及情人眼里出西施,真挚的感情引导健康的审美意识(爱憎分明).②从反面看,感情的亲疏有害于对客观事物的认识.由此可谈及任人唯亲、偏信则暗、徇情枉法、有失公允及恨乌及屋等.③全面地看,感情有亲有疏,但对客观事物的认知不能受情感亲疏而左右.
“智子疑邻”是寓言故事,导引出的话题是“感情亲疏和对事物的认知”.材料和话题给考生的提示颇多:如“类似”与“相反”,“亲疏”与“远近”,“正误”与“深浅”,“有关”与“无关”等,这就拓展了考生的思维空间.很明显,这是一个“关系型”的话题,重在考查考生的理性思辨的能力.以一般高中学生的生活阅历、文化积累和认识能力来看,应当大大有话可说.如小到邻里关系、人际交往,大到国际争端、官场政治、提干用人;远有邹忌讽齐王纳谏,近有形形色色的网络交友、偶像崇拜;正面有祁黄羊荐人不避亲与仇、孔明挥泪斩马谡,反面如智子疑邻、因情障目而倾国的事例等等;还可以对感情与认知从理论上与实践上作种种或肯定或否定的阐述、抒发.话题限制在何处,开放在哪里?考生必须把握住这一“游戏规则”.考生抓住了“感情”与“理性认知”这个“点”,就有许多的角度可供选择了,在这“点”的限制下,思维、情感、才华、个性就可以尽情飞扬了.
二、要辨明关系型作文话题要素间的关系
关系型话题作文,重在考查考生的思辨能力.故构思作文之前,最重要的是要用辩证思维的方法,辨清构成话题的词和词、短语和短语之间的特定关系.笔者认为,关系型作文话题要素之间的关系主要有以下几种:
1.对立统一关系:就是各要素单一来看是对立矛盾的,但实质上它们又相互依存、相辅相成、和谐统一.也可称之为无此无彼式.如“自由与纪律”这个话题,辨证唯物主义告诉我们,没有“自由”无所谓“纪律”,没有“纪律”也就没有“自由”,二者对立统一.当然,根据这种关系可变通理解为:没有纪律,就不可能有真正的自由;人要有自由,但自由要受纪律约束.再如“平凡与伟大”,从一定意义上讲,这个话题可理解为:没有“平凡”也就不会有“伟大”.还可理解为:平凡蕴育伟大;伟大源自平凡;我们只有从平凡的点滴小事做起,才能构筑伟大人格的大厦.
2.是非取舍关系:即指关系型话题的诸要素之间是一是一非、一对一错的关系,对它们只能有所取舍选择.也可称之为有此无彼式.如“偏见与关爱”,我们只能理解为“要消除偏见,勇于关爱”,若作其他理解则是不科学的.
3.并非绝对关系:即指构成话题的诸要素之间存在着某种关系,但这种关系不是一成不变的.也可称之为有此未必有彼式.如“痛苦与成功”这个话题,我们可理解为“成功来自痛苦的磨砺”.但痛苦之后不全是成功,成功也并非全部源自痛苦.再如“名师与高徒”,可理解为“名师出高徒”,也可理解为“名师未必出高徒”或“高徒未必出自名师”.
4.并列共存关系:即指构成话题的诸要素之间存在着一种平等并列的关系,几个要素可以同时共存.也可称之为有此有彼式.如“谦虚与表现”,对此就可诠释为“既要谦虚待人,又要善于表现自己”;对“成人与成才”也要理解为“要成人,更要成才”或“先要成人,后要成才”.再如“和而不同”,则须理解为“既要做到‘和’,又要做到‘不同’”,意即“既要善于调和矛盾,与别人和谐相处,同时又要有不同于别人的独立见解,不能随风倒、随大流”.
回顾2003年全国高考,“感情亲疏和对事物的认知”这个关系型话题作文,因其制约因素的严格,几与前几年话题作文形成断裂,不少考生缺乏心理准备和知识准备,不会审题或审题不严,作文答卷偏题离题者非常普遍.再看2004年高考,全国15份试卷,除4份试卷外其余所有试卷均延续关系型话题作文模式,对考生审题能力再次提出高要求,但遗憾我们的许多考生依然未能从上年考生的惨败中汲取教训,好好把握关系型话题作文话题关系肢间的辩证关系,在审题上遭遇滑铁卢.纵观话题作文发展趋势,我们可以断言,关系型话题作文代表高考作文新的发展方向,因为限制性的加强,必然要求考生在审题上加强训练,练就过硬的审题基本功,这样才能以不变应万变,在高考作文中占据主动.
针对关系型话题作文特点,我们认为应将审题的重点放在审读话题这一环,在把握话题内部辩证关系上做文章.这就需要考生在平常多体悟唯物辩证法的思想精髓,如能联系地看问题(而不是孤立地看问题)、能一分为二地看问题(而不是片面地看问题)、能用发展的眼光看问题(而不是用静止的眼光看问题)等等.并最终能理论联系实际,在具体的话题作文审题中加以灵活运用.
以2003年全国高考卷为例,面对“感情亲疏和对事物的认知”这个关系型话题作文,考生首先应准确判断出其内部关系肢间存在的一种因果关系——因为感情的亲疏不同,所以对事物的认知也不同.这样,考生在审题时就可以从两者的因果关系入手,多角度、多层面地深入思考.其次,考生要运用辩证法思想,在把握两者之间因果关系的是否必然性上做文章.即思考是否感情亲就一定对认知事物产生正面影响,或者恰恰相反;是否感情疏就一定对认知事物产生负面影响,亦或者恰恰相反.最后,在种种不同的思考中把握住根本性、结论性的东西,将其作为文章的主题思想.
审读关系型话题作文的话题,还要注意克服以下两种误差:
误差一:抓住一点,不及其余.既然是关系型话题作文,审题时就应当重点把握话题内部两个关系肢之间的关系,关涉两点,在两点之间寻找突好口.而我们的考生在审题时最容易犯的一个毛病恰恰是割裂了两者的联系,在行文时大谈一点,却对另外一点置之不理,以致造成偏题、离题.如笔者所在浙江省2004年高考话题作文“人文素养与发展”,话题内部存在一种条件关系——人文素养的高或低,制约着发展空间的大小.考生在审题时即要全面审视这种条件关系.但从考生作文来看,许多离题作文都没有能从两者关系入手,而是或空谈人文素养,或大侃发展,这种“抓住一点,不及其余”的做法当然最后“坑害”的还是考生自己.
误差二:泛论关系,不见重点.有人想,既然是关系型话题作文,只要能抓住话题内部两个关系肢关系,在关系上做足文章就行了,于是就在行文中泛论关系,最终使文章陷于泛泛而谈,空洞无物的泥潭.关系型话题作文要突出关系不假,但文章还应该有侧重,要分清楚矛盾的主要方面与次要方面,要善于敏锐地捕捉重点,敢于突出重点,做到两点论与重点论的统一.2004年高考全国卷话题作文“遭遇挫折和放大痛苦”,在审题时考生当然应准确把握两个关系肢间的关系,但面对挫折,人们的选择有许多种,有人化解痛苦,有人放大痛苦,有人则以平常心视之,选择不同,人生的境界也大有高低.如果考生在审题时能以“遭遇挫折”为侧重点,能够从如何对待挫折这个角度切入去行文,而不是流于表面的于两者关系间泛泛而谈,那么文章将在深度和广度上得到有力的拓展.
2017年高考英语作文范文10篇,赶紧学起来!
2017年高考英语作文范文10篇,赶紧学起来!#暑假学习打卡##逢考必过#
求各种类型的高中英语作文范文
作文模版精华模版1 some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. but other people take an opposite side. they firmly believe that 观点2. as for me, i agree to the former/latter idea. there are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. first of all, 论据1. more importantly, 论据2. most important of all, 论据3. in summary, 总结观点. as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心. 或 from above, we can predict that 预测. 模版2 people hold different views about x. some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. as far as i am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. for one thing, 论据1. for another, 论据2. last but not the least, 论据3. to conclude, 总结观点. as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心. 或 from above, we can predict that 预测. 模版3 there is no consensus of opinions among people about x(争论的焦点)。
some people are of the view that 观点1,while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。
as far as i am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. the reasons are obvious. first of all, 论据1。
furthermore, 论据2。
among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. that is, 论据3。
a natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心. 或 from above, we can predict that 预测.1)We should take some effective measures. 2)We should try our best to overcome(con quer)the difficulties. 3)We should do our utmost in doing sth. 4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.11.表示结论 1)In short,it can be said that... 2)It may be briefly summed up as follows. 3)From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that ...12.套语 1)It's well known to us that ... 2)As is known to us,... 3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about. 4)From the graph(table,chart)listed above,it can be seen that ... 5)As aproverb says,“Where there is a will,there is a way.)开篇 1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ... 2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic. 4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ... 5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ... 6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular. 7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ... 8) According to a recent survey, ... 9) With the rapid development of ..., ... 八)结尾 1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ... 2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ... 3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ... 4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ... 5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help. 6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ... 7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up. 8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly. 9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ... 10) Taking all these into account, we ... 11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...二、用于描写图表和数据 1. It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998. 2. There is an increase of 20% in total this year. 3. It has been increased by a factor of 4since 1995. 4. It would be expected to increase 5 times. 5. The table shows a three times increase over that of last year. 6. It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996. 7. The total number was lowered by 10%. 8. It rose from 10-15 percent of the total this year. 9. Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent. 10. The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995. 11. It has decreased almost two and half times, compared with… 三、用于解释性和阐述性论说文 1.Everybody knows that… 2.It can be easily proved that… 3. It is true that… 4. No one can deny that 5. One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is… 6. The chief reason is that… 7. We must recognize that… 8. There is on doubt that… 9. I am of the opinion that… 10. This can be expressed as follows; 11. To take …for an example… 12. We have reason to believe that 13. Now that we know that… 14. Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned… 15. The change in …largely results from the fact that 16. There are several causes for this significant growth in…,first …,second …,finally…17. A number of factors could account for the development in… 18. Perhaps the primary reason is… 19. It is chiefly responsible of… 20. The reasons for…are complicated, And probably they are ...
关于人际关系的英语作文
http://www.eduzhai.net/yingyu/606/687/yingyu_224052.html 这里面是<;如何有效沟通>该怎样和母亲沟通how to communicate with my mother--高考英语作文--英语作文网该怎样和母亲沟通 how to communicate with my mother假如你是一名中学生,叫李晓华,请根据下表内容用英语写信给某报社Just ask栏目的主持人Ralph,请求帮助解决一个长期困扰你的问题。
你的情况 1、学习成绩好。
2、爱母亲。
3、有点害怕母亲。
你母亲的情况 1、大学教授,工作勤奋。
很少有时间和你说话。
2、对你很严,易发脾气。
你的问题 1、很少交流。
2、希望互相了解。
3、不知如何沟通。
参考范文: Dear Ralph, Im a middle school student. Im writing to tell you my problem which has troubled me for a long time. It is the relationship between my mother and me. My mother is a university professor,who works very hard. She is strict with me,but she is so busy with her work that she finds little time to talk to me. I love her and I do well in my studies,but I still feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper easily. I dont know how to communicate with her. Maybe its because we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts . I hope we can know more about each other and understood each other better. I do hope well be closer. What can I do? Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Xiaohua
英语 论述型作文模版
展开全部 高中英语论述型作文主要都是观点对比类文章,本人认为最好分为三段式: 第一段:直入主题,介绍一方观点并叙述理由 第二段:介绍另一方观点并阐述理由 第三段:你自己的观点现将常用模板提供,希望对你有所帮助!要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1. 有一些人认为...2. 另一些人认为...3. 我的看法...The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .另外,还有经常考到的三个题型就是阐述问题型、问题解决型和说明利弊型,也将模板提供如下,仅供参考!阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.2. 分析并举例使其更充实.The good old proverb ----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三).In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1. 问题现状2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1. 说明事物现状2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的优点之二).But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)
英语作文 邻里关系
用英语写一段话,简单描述你去机场或车站接人的一次经历。
On October 1st this year, I went to the Beijing Railway station to pick up one of my friends, who was going to spend his holidays in Beijing. It was the first time for me to pick up someone in the railway station. So I didn't know exactly what to do. I arrived there half an hour earlier and asked the officials for some information. Thanks to their help, I found my friend easily. 两地间的步行或乘车路线。
参考范文: It is about ten minutes' walk from the South Gate of Peking University to the Weiming Lake. Walk up the Wusi Road for about 5 minutes, and turn right at the end of the road, where you can see the library on the left. Walk on for about 50 meters and then turn left at the first turning. Go along the road, and you will find the Weiming Lake on the left. If you cannot find it, you may ask the students on campus. They are very helpful. 你的一次购物经历。
参考范文: Last weekend I went shopping with my friend in the Yinzuo supermarket. We found that a lot of goods were in sold discount, so we bought many things including food, drink and something else that we may use very often. We thought they were both good and cheap. My friend and I often go to the Yinzuo Supermarket because it is not very far from our university and it is also a supermarket that is worth trusting. 介绍一所学校 The Hebei Province Shijiazhuang deer spring city has one " the Eastern household management " school, is the national only one household management professional specialized middle school, started from last year face the entire province impoverished area to recruit impoverished lives, the educational system two years, every year 2500 Yuan school expenses and 500 Yuan lived the lodging allowance all all exempt, the after student graduated has the school issues the certificate and is responsible to arrange the work, and so on the student officially started the after work 50% returns it first three monthly salaries the school, continued as the school to implement education helping the poor plan the fund.
英语作文:英语的重要性
展开全部 英语的重要性 1/4 篇名 英语的重要性 作者 陈书萱.国立虎尾高中.三年一班 PDF created with pdfFactory trial version www.pdffactory.com 英语的重要性 2/4 壹●前言 全球化的时代已经来临,贸易往来,资讯传递,文化交流……更是任何国家赖以 生存的不二法门.因此迈向国际化才是现代人的生存之道,想要出人头地,就必 须具有国际观,并且具有口语的沟通能力,才是明智之举.然而现今最强势的国 家莫过於美国,美语更是全世界通用的语言,所以学好美语才有资格踏入国际的 世界.如果国人没有好的美语能力,真的是一件极为严重的大事,毕竟台湾只是 一个极小的海岛,却容纳二千多万的人民,必须依赖国际贸易才有办法维持国人 的生活,再说全世界使用繁体中文的国家只有台湾了,因此我们更须靠自己的力 量走出囿限,迈向国际化.没有先天国际上的优势没关系,重要的是国人能靠自 己后天上的努力开创出一片耀眼的天空,打响台湾的名号,让全世界的人都能认 识台湾就像认识美国一样,再度展现台湾的经济奇迹与科技上的先进技术,重振 昔日的雄风而更胜之. 贰●正文 一,为什麽要学英文 於地球村的世界里,交流是必然的,因此我们必须学好英语这个国际通用的语 言,才能让我们走向国际化的世界.并且有专家指出使用二种语言以上的人罹患 老年痴呆症的机率明显比一般人来得低,因此学英语是最好的选择了.既可降低 患病机率,又可具有迈向国际的基本能力,何乐而不为呢 二,英语的重要性 学英语不只是为了国际化的需求,更重要的是为了我们自己本身知识的扩充.这 又怎麽说呢 因为西方的科技领先我们,进步且有许多好文章,好的研究丛书都 是用英文写成的;为了能进一步探索研究,扩展们我的知识与专业技能,首先必 须学好英语,才有办法不假他人之手翻译,而能得到最真实的第一手资料. 01.英语口语的重要性 在全球经济体系中,英文成为重要的沟通语言,要与世界接轨,流利的口语能力 势将成为重要的关键.虽然,有多数国人的英文读写能力相当不错,但口语的表 达和理解能力,对於大多数台湾人而言却是一大碍.因此,在这个竞争愈趋激烈 的市场上,英语口语能力便成为英语教育中非常重的一环.今日,台湾的英语教 者,不要只是要著重英语的读写技巧,应该体认到提升学生听说能力的重要 性.(注一) PDF created with pdfFactory trial version www.pdffactory.com 英语的重要性 3/4 02.英文重要,中文系也要用英文上课 元智大学不仅要求学生必须修满四分之一英文上课学分,甚至连中文系也开了全 英文上课的课程,希望让学生毕业后晓得怎麽用英文介绍中国文化.(注二) 三,肯下工夫就会成功 我们常说学习一件新事物很困难,但只要抱持著不懈的决心与毅力,终究能实现 学成的梦想.倘若只是嘴巴上说说,永远也不可能踏出重要的第一步.举例来说: 比那有钱的和尚考虑东考虑西,嫌这不足,嫌那困难,迟迟不肯踏出步伐,终 究没有成功的一天;反观那位穷和尚,只凭著一只钵,一双腿,靠著沿途化缘, 恳求帮助,终於凭著恒心与毅力成功从南海归来.因此只要肯按部就班,循序渐 进,就一定会成功的. 四,学英文应有的态度 在台湾的教育型态下,学生大多数的考试,阅读,写作的能力不错,但在听力与 口语沟通能力上就只能用「差」来形容了.许多高中生,大学生甚至不敢和外国 朋友说上几句英语,只因他们的口语能力不好,但愈是如此就愈不敢开口,口语 能力也就一直烂下去,不会进步.学而至此,又有何用呢 记得我在某篇报章上 看过以下的说法,「你会因为外国人的中文说得不好而嘲笑他吗 如果你的答案 是『No』,那麽你觉得外国朋友们会因你的英文说得不好而嘲笑你吗 想要进 步,最重要的一点就是要不怕丢脸.」看了之后,我突然觉得豁然,因为这是一 个很简单却需要勇气去承认,去实行的问题,只有放开自我,才能得到更多. 01.不放弃英文 要学好英文,游政琦的第一条经验守则就是不要放弃它,不论你的英文在过去有 多烂或平平的像早餐的蛋饼一样,只要你有动机想学好它,你就把过去考不及格 或其他受折的阴影给扫到一旁,就算学得再怎麽不理想,别忘了,你早已经比一 些美国的文盲人士还多背了一些单字了.要先对自己有信心,然后才能持续进行 这种令你快乐的英文才会快乐的学习过程.(注三) 02.学英语的正确方法 想学好英语并不是只看课本就够的,还需要多读课外读物,如:英语杂志,英 语小说,……等等,虽然这也是众所皆知的事,但却很难真正去实行吧!毕竟 PDF created with pdfFactory trial version www.pdffactory.com 英语的重要性 4/4 这其中所受的苦与挫折并非所有人都能熬得过来.但倘若我们能拿出自己的恒 心,并选对学习方法,我们就可以快乐学习,轻松获得.第一步先选一些自己 比较熟悉的英语故事书(如:白雪公主,灰姑娘,伊索寓言)做为培养阅读课外 书的习惯,一来单字较简易,二来内容又颇为引人入胜,若再加上多听朗读 CD,并且跟著开口说,如此一而再,再而三周而复始,日子一久英语能力便 会在无形中慢慢地增长,进而有了深厚的基础.尔后再加上多多阅读英语杂 志,报刊,多看,...
求现象分析型英语四级作文范文
范文来自《2010年6月英语四级作文考前预测范文》预测作文(四)Teenagers' Studying Abroad1. 现在有很多青少年出国留学2. 有些人认为这种做法是有益的3. 我认为这种观点是不对的【范文】Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad, there are more and more-teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools. Many people, especially the parents, think it will certainly do good to their chidren because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance. Moreover, the quality of overseas education is often higher, thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future. After careful consideration, I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, early independent life is not necessarily good, if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand, the educational quality is also a question—too many foreign schools aim at earning money. When the children come back, who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here?We can see clearly that although teenagers' studying abroad may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about. It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investigation before going abroad.【点评】第一段指出当前某种普遍的做法,之后分两点阐述人们支持这种做法的原因;第二段首句鲜明地指出自己反驳的意见,然后分两点来阐述理由;最后一段进行总结,并请当事人在做出决定前多加斟酌。
范文首句点题,指出青少年留学这一现象,并给出支持者的理由,即独立的生活会教会他们自信和坚持不懈,而且国外的教学水平会让学生进入更好的大学、找到更好的工作。
第二段给出反对理由。
首先,早期独立不一定是件好事。
另外,太多的国外学校的目标是挣钱,所以它们的教学质量是令人质疑的。
末段总结说青少年留学可能会带来好处,但令人担忧的问题也很多。
第一段第三句中的stand a better chance of表示“有更好的机会做某事”。
第二段首句中的biased表示“偏激的,存有偏见的”;第三句中的aim at表示“目的在于”;第四句中的guarantee表示“保证”,adapt to表示“适应”,fierce表示“激烈的”,修饰competition(竞争)。
英语六级对比选择型作文及其写作模板有哪些?
模板一: ①It is widely believed that______(指出现象). What's more, ______(进一步阐述该现象). Many people strongly advocate it owing to______(支持原因). However,_______(相关因素),people's ideas vary. ②On the one hand, some people hold that ______(第一种观点及原因).On the other hand,a great many people insist that _______(第二种观点及原因). ③As far as I am concerned, however, ______(自己的态度及理由).Therefore, it is time that_____(得出结论). 模板二: ①A great many people______(提出观点). First and foremost,some people incline to______(赞成原因1).What's more, they maintain that______(赞成原因2). ②On the contrary, the vast majority of people assume that_______(提出相反的观点). ③In my opinion,______(提出自己的观点).For one thing,______(理由1). For another,______(理由2). 模板三: ①With the development of society, people attach more importance to ______(提出现象).They regard it as______(进一步阐述该现象). ②Should we______(提出观点)?______(相关答案).To begin with,______(理由1).What's more,_______(理由2). ③For my part, ______(表明自己的态度). Most importantly, _______(进行进一步阐述).
【与和有关的话题作文】关系型话题作文搜集关于**与**之类的关系型...
首先一、要明确关系型作文话题及其命制特点 所谓关系型作文话题,就是由两个或两个以上的词语或短语并列组合而成的一种话题形式,具体操作的过程中必须兼顾话题构成的各个要素,清楚地点明其间关系。
如:“失去与获得”、“感情的亲疏与对事物的认知”等。
就拿高中语文新教材第二册所收史铁生的《我与地坛》来说,其文题就可以看成是一个典型的话题,行文中作者就很好兼顾了“我”与“地坛”这两个要素:一方面具体描述了“我”在地坛的所见所闻所为所思,另一方面又深刻地交代了“地坛”给我的人生感悟,使我完成了生命意义的思考,让我走出了人生的低谷、鼓足了生命气,从而揭示了两个要素间的关系,即“地坛是我的精神家园”。
需提请注意的是,构成关系型话题的各要素间的关系大多呈现出一种开放性,其思维方向、价值取向都不是唯一的。
如2003年高考作文话题,就可从不同角度作不同理解:①从正面看,感情的亲疏有助于对客观事物的认识。
由此可谈及融洽的人际关系、良好的人文环境及情人眼里出西施,真挚的感情引导健康的审美意识(爱憎分明)。
②从反面看,感情的亲疏有害于对客观事物的认识。
由此可谈及任人唯亲、偏信则暗、徇情枉法、有失公允及恨乌及屋等。
③全面地看,感情有亲有疏,但对客观事物的认知不能受情感亲疏而左右。
“智子疑邻”是寓言故事,导引出的话题是“感情亲疏和对事物的认知”。
材料和话题给考生的提示颇多:如“类似”与“相反”,“亲疏”与“远近”,“正误”与“深浅”,“有关”与“无关”等,这就拓展了考生的思维空间。
很明显,这是一个“关系型”的话题,重在考查考生的理性思辨的能力。
以一般高中学生的生活阅历、文化积累和认识能力来看,应当大大有话可说。
如小到邻里关系、人际交往,大到国际争端、官场政治、提干用人;远有邹忌讽齐王纳谏,近有形形色色的网络交友、偶像崇拜;正面有祁黄羊荐人不避亲与仇、孔明挥泪斩马谡,反面如智子疑邻、因情障目而倾国的事例等等;还可以对感情与认知从理论上与实践上作种种或肯定或否定的阐述、抒发。
话题限制在何处,开放在哪里?考生必须把握住这一“游戏规则”。
考生抓住了“感情”与“理性认知”这个“点”,就有许多的角度可供选择了,在这“点”的限制下,思维、情感、才华、个性就可以尽情飞扬了。
二、要辨明关系型作文话题要素间的关系 关系型话题作文,重在考查考生的思辨能力。
故构思作文之前,最重要的是要用辩证思维的方法,辨清构成话题的词和词、短语和短语之间的特定关系。
笔者认为,关系型作文话题要素之间的关系主要有以下几种: 1.对立统一关系:就是各要素单一来看是对立矛盾的,但实质上它们又相互依存、相辅相成、和谐统一。
也可称之为无此无彼式。
如“自由与纪律”这个话题,辨证唯物主义告诉我们,没有“自由”无所谓“纪律”,没有“纪律”也就没有“自由”,二者对立统一。
当然,根据这种关系可变通理解为:没有纪律,就不可能有真正的自由;人要有自由,但自由要受纪律约束。
再如“平凡与伟大”,从一定意义上讲,这个话题可理解为:没有“平凡”也就不会有“伟大”。
还可理解为:平凡蕴育伟大;伟大源自平凡;我们只有从平凡的点滴小事做起,才能构筑伟大人格的大厦。
2.是非取舍关系:即指关系型话题的诸要素之间是一是一非、一对一错的关系,对它们只能有所取舍选择。
也可称之为有此无彼式。
如“偏见与关爱”,我们只能理解为“要消除偏见,勇于关爱”,若作其他理解则是不科学的。
3.并非绝对关系:即指构成话题的诸要素之间存在着某种关系,但这种关系不是一成不变的。
也可称之为有此未必有彼式。
如“痛苦与成功”这个话题,我们可理解为“成功来自痛苦的磨砺”。
但痛苦之后不全是成功,成功也并非全部源自痛苦。
再如“名师与高徒”,可理解为“名师出高徒”,也可理解为“名师未必出高徒”或“高徒未必出自名师”。
4.并列共存关系:即指构成话题的诸要素之间存在着一种平等并列的关系,几个要素可以同时共存。
也可称之为有此有彼式。
如“谦虚与表现”,对此就可诠释为“既要谦虚待人,又要善于表现自己”;对“成人与成才”也要理解为“要成人,更要成才”或“先要成人,后要成才”。
再如“和而不同”,则须理解为“既要做到‘和’,又要做到‘不同’”,意即“既要善于调和矛盾,与别人和谐相处,同时又要有不同于别人的独立见解,不能随风倒、随大流”。
回顾2003年全国高考,“感情亲疏和对事物的认知”这个关系型话题作文,因其制约因素的严格,几与前几年话题作文形成断裂,不少考生缺乏心理准备和知识准备,不会审题或审题不严,作文答卷偏题离题者非常普遍。
再看2004年高考,全国15份试卷,除4份试卷外其余所有试卷均延续关系型话题作文模式,对考生审题能力再次提出高要求,但遗憾我们的许多考生依然未能从上年考生的惨败中汲取教训,好好把握关系型话题作文话题关系肢间的辩证关系,在审题上遭遇滑铁卢。
纵观话题作文发展趋势,我们可以断言,关系型话题作文代表高考作文新的发展...
英语 论述型作文模版
高中英语论述型作文主要都是观点对比类文章,本人认为最好分为三段式: 第一段:直入主题,介绍一方观点并叙述理由 第二段:介绍另一方观点并阐述理由 第三段:你自己的观点现将常用模板提供,希望对你有所帮助!要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1. 有一些人认为...2. 另一些人认为...3. 我的看法...The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .另外,还有经常考到的三个题型就是阐述问题型、问题解决型和说明利弊型,也将模板提供如下,仅供参考!阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.2. 分析并举例使其更充实.The good old proverb ----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三).In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1. 问题现状2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1. 说明事物现状2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的优点之二).But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)
英语四级作文说明利弊型有什么作文模板?
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的优点之二). But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点). Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法). (From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)。
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