写作是本人的老本行,高中一般都是21-23这个级别,大学英语作文被老师在班上推介为范文!
对于作文,我说的最多的就是:不走寻常路!你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文,拿来背背,你就成为高手了,其实大错特错!因为我看了之后也觉得一般,甚至有些拙劣,哗众取宠的味道,比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be
good at ,importance,very much,depend on,in my opinion ,completely
这样低等的写作词汇,说它低等,那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知,阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了!
要写出高人一等的作文,我觉得并不难,只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇(越高级越好),写作句型,就足可以应对常规的高考,四六级考试……(我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别,四六级的作文都是110多分)
首先是语法,在你的语法达到一定层次之后,你就可以追求更多的变化了,比如,用虚拟语气句型it
is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we
should……,又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等,这样可以增加你的语法亮点,让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮,在你的试卷上多扫射一番!
其次,是词汇,我觉得,在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上,作文便应该以词汇取胜,因为在这个层次上,大家的语法都差不多,没什么变化,唯一有变化的就是你的词汇!给你打个比方吧,很多想到“许多”就用many,但是你别忘了many
a ;handsome;massive,innumerable,a multitude of
;很多人想到“专家”就写expert,但很少人会想到specialist,很多人在想到“擅长”这词,就写be good at
,却不知还有更高级的表达法:be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才,就体现在这些细微的差别上!
再次,是怎么将文章润色,从而使你的文章大放异彩!关于这方面,我觉得我自己使用最多的,也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”,包括如下几个方面:尽可能地在形容词前使用副词,在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词,在过去分词前加入副词,在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……,总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词.我觉得这样做有一个好处,那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满,比如:
1.The
regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular
physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part,the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The
majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them
with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The
majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will
undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their
interpersonal skills tremendously!
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
最后,我建议你,平时读报,或者做题的时候,发现有好的句子好的词汇,你要抄下来,长期下来,你的作文会有提高的,需要说明的是,这个提高过程可能很缓慢,但是最后能收到很好的效果,以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别,靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇,句型,句子.
初中英语话题作文
1.My family 我的家Hello, everyone, I'm Liu Dongdong. I'm a student. There are three people in my family—my father, mother and I.My father is 40 years old. He is a worker. I think he is a good worker. Because he works very hard. He gets up very early every day and he works for more than 10 hours a day. So he is always busy, he looks very tired when he gets home. He likes reading newspapers. He usually reads it after supper. So he gets lots of news.My mother is 38 years old. She is a worker too. She works in a very small factory. She is not tall and she has two big eyes. She loves me and she is good for me. She always buys some books for me. She wants me to be a top student. She also cares for my diet and life.I' m 15 years old. I wear glasses. I like reading. I always read books after school. I like singing, too. My favorite singer is Jay Chou. His music is very nice. What do you think of him? I also like making friends. If you want to meet me, please write to me.Oh, my parents love me and I love them, too. My family is a happy family.2.My Hometown 我的家乡In the east of China, there is a small city---Haimen. I was born there. Today, I am telling you about my hometown. Haimen is not far from Shanghai. It's at the mouth of the Changjiang River. Haimen is a modern city. There are lots of high buildings in it. Most of us live in flats. We like to live in flats because we can be close to our friends. In the center of Haimen, there are many shops. You can buy some nice things here. Things in most shops aren't expensive. You can pay a little money and they are yours. My hometown is a beautiful city. On each of the roads, there are some big trees and nice flowers. The roads are also very clean. They make people happy and comfortable. The seasons here are very nice. I like autumn best. It's neither hot nor cold. A poem says “Flyer of summer come to my window to sing, then fly away. And yellow leaves of autumn, which have no songs, just fall there with a sign.” It's very cool.I love Haimen. It's a nice place to live. Welcome to my hometown.3.A Trip To Shanghai 一次去上海的旅行I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-day holiday. It took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai from my home in Haimen. We stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day, I just stayed in the hotel and rested. On the second day, my brother and I went to Nanjing Road. It's the busiest street in Shanghai. When we got there, there were lots of people. We walked from one shop to another. I bought two T-shirts and two pairs of trousers for the coming summer. The T-shirts and trousers I bought are all white because white is my favourite colour. My brother also bought some clothes. On the third day, my mother took me to Jinjiang Entertainment Centre. It was full of people. I played many kinds of games there. I had a good time. The other days, I went to some other interesting places, such as the Oriental Bright Pearl TV Tower, the Huangpu River and Shanghai International Conference Centre. I didn't forget to do my homework in the evening. I had a full and happy holiday.4.To introduce myself 自我介绍Hello, everyone! My name is Winnie. I'm a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao. I'm an active, lovely, and clever girl. In the school my favorite subject is math. Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well. But I like it. I believe that if you try your best, everything can be done well. I also like sports very much. Such as, running, volleyball and so on. I'm kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me.I hope we can be good friends! OK. This is me .A sunny girl.5.The Way to Keep Healthy 保持健康的方法It's important for us to be healthy all our life. We can't study or work well without healthy body. there're many ways to keep healthy. First of all, we should keep taking exercises every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. After school, we can spend an hour playing ball games. If we live in a high-rise, we can walk upstairs or downstairs. Second, we should have a balanced diet. Finally, we must remember: "Early to bed, early to rise is the way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise." 6.The Importance of Electricity 电的重要性 When you go to work in the morning and find that traffic lights don't work, the traffic jam will certainly happen. A patient needs to be operated on at once. What will happen if the operation cannot be made because of the electricity. Without electricity, we can neither watch TV, listen to the tape, nor chat on line. Electricity is closely related to our daily life. How terrible it would be if there were no electricity! 7.Theres No Story without ...
四个英语话题作文。
Which colleage do you want to attent?I like BeiJing Universty, Beijing is the capital of China, with good cultural enviroment and a certain economic strength, the educational condition here is really excellent. All the top student work hard and dream to go there, my brother was one of them, became a part of that campus 4 years ago. athought my score is far lower than the expectation, I will try my best.
话题英语作文 急用!!!
1.Taking exercise is very important. 锻炼是非常重要的. 2.We can improve our health by taking exercise. 我们可以通过锻炼来强健我们的体魄. 3.We should take enough exercise in our spear time. 我们应该用我们空闲的时间来适当锻炼. 4.Nowadays there are many way for people to take exercise.For example,... 现在有很多方法可以锻炼身体,比如说 5.Taking exercise is good for not only our health but also our study. 锻炼不紧对健康有益,而且对学习也有好处. 6.In aword,it is a good kind of sport which can help us to keep healthy. 一句话,这是可以保持健康的好的运动. 7.I think running is not only a kind of helpful exercise,but also a good habit. 我想跑步不紧是一个好的锻炼的方式,并且是一个好的习惯. 8.I think we can do sth instead of doing sth. 我想我们现在动手.1.I'm excited that the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in beijing.I'm proud of my country. 2.Beijing will hold the 2008 Olympic Games. 3.The 29th Olympic Games are coming soon.It is our duty to do something for it. 4.I believe the 2008 Olympic Games will be successful. 5.Beijing is the capital of China. 6.Beijing is famous for many places of interest,like the Great Wall,the Summer Palace,and so on. 7.Great changes have taken place in Beijing. 8.We're looking forward to the 2008 Olympic Games. 9.As a cutizen of beijing,we should try our best to do something for our city.1.我为2008年奥运会在北京举行感到非常激动。
我为我的祖国而骄傲。
2.北京将会举办2008奥运会 3.第29届奥运会即将到来。
我们有责任做点什么。
4.我相信2008奥运会会成功举办 5.北京是中国的首都 6.北京以许多风景名胜著名,例如长城 故宫等等 7.北京有了非常大的变化 8.我们很期待2008奥运会 9.作为一名北京市民,我们应该尽力为北京做点什么.
以“英语学习”为话题的文章
当全球化成为一种趋势时,因为国际交流越来越多,英语学习变得越来越重要了。
人们为了谋求更好的工作而练习自己的英语能力,加入了英语学习的大军,我也不例外。
我们怎么能学好英语呢?不同的人们会有不同的学习方法去提高英语水平,以下是他的一些建议。
第一,我想对于英语学习者来说,最重要的是我们应该对英语感兴趣,毕竟兴趣是最好的老师。
就拿我哥哥的例子来说吧,当他还是个小孩子的时候就对英语感兴趣了,他会时常模仿他们咿呀学语,尽管他不知道我究竟在说些什么。
他对另外一种完全不同的语言产生了强烈的好奇。
所以当他从高中毕业后,他选择了主修英语,因为他爱学英语,而且他希望他将来从事的职业与英语有关。
要想学好英语,就要经常性地使用英语。
我们在真正的英语语境中用英语交流得越多,英语就会用的越溜。
学英语需要付出很多,但请不要放弃,要有耐性,世上无难事只怕有心人。
许多母语不是英语的留学生初到英语国家留学的时候,他们的英语水平很低,但是一段时间过后,他们的英语能力突飞猛进,到了让人难以置信的地步。
那是因为他们生活在了和母语不同的另外一种语境里面,这就意味着,他们不能用自己的母语去听、去阅读、去写作、去和别人交流,这种状况迫使他们每天频繁地大量使用英语。
日复一日,他们英语就这样练出来了。
为了学好英语,我们还要随时随地尽可能地尝试用英语思考。
当我们看见一些东西后,就要立刻联想到它的英文名称,然后造句。
当我们学习一个新动词时,我们应该学习它变化多端的变换形式。
这对学习单词非常重要。
还有,参加英语培训班,取得一些学习方法和技巧也是有必要的,比如说现在有个很火的英语培训机构叫做“疯狂英语”,是由李扬创办的,这种英语学习法就是教你怎样联系英语口语,非常有效。
比如说,一口气念完一个长句子,并记录时间,以作比较。
还有模仿英语是母语的人说英语时候的发音、语音、语调、语气等,因为一口标准的英语是非常拉风的。
因特网也是学习英语的利器。
你可以在网上搜寻和下载英语内容的多媒体,比如英文歌曲和电影等,然后听、看、学习。
同时你也可以下载学习英语的各种软件,然后在电脑上使用。
中考英语作文范文
The Earth——Our Mother The earth is like our mother. She gives life to all the living things on the earth. Once she was beautiful and rich, but now she becomes dirty and poor. It is due to what we have done to her. Floods, draughts, acid rain…,these are the punishments from nature. Everyone should know that there is only one earth, lf we go on treating her like this, it won' t be fit for us to live in any longer. It's time for us to love her, take good care of her and cure her. 地球就像我们的母亲,她给了地球上所有生物生命。
当初她很美丽和富饶,但是现在她变的肮脏和贫瘠。
这都是由于我们对他做的。
洪水、干旱、酸雨……这些都是自然的惩罚。
每个人都应该知道地球只有一个,如果我们继续像这样对待他,他将不会再适合我我们居住。
现在是我们爱她,照顾她和治疗他的时候了。
Clothes play an important role in our daily lives. They protect us from the strong wind in cold winter and prevent us from the unbearable heat in hot summer. They can even make men handsome and women attractive. They also distinguish people in different fields. For example, we can tell a soldier from a policeman simply by the uniforms they are wearing. Clothes will continue to develop to satisfy our individual tastes. They will become more comfortable, colorful, fashionable, and varied. People will find in the market more clothes they like to reflect their personalities.服装在我日常生活中扮演很重要的角色。
他们保护我们不受冬日寒风和夏日酷热的伤害。
他们甚至能使男人变得帅气女人变得有吸引力。
他们也可以区分不同领域的人。
例如,他们可以单纯的从制服上区别军人和警察。
服饰会继续发展来满足我们个人的喜好。
他们会成为更舒适,丰富多彩,时尚并且各种各样的。
人们会发现在商场更多他们喜欢的反映他们个性的服饰。
Pollution When we read newspapers, we often come across the word pollution. This word was not familiar to the people some decades ago. But now, it is a serious threat to us because.it means the poisoning of the air, seas, rivers and lands, which would do harm to our health. There are many factories that bring pollution to us. We can not have fresh air in the morning. On land, the accumulation of rubbish in the streets may dirty the city and ruin our health. If we do mot fight against pollution, surely one day all of us will be killed. 污染——一个社会问题 我们看报的时候,经常会看到“污染”这个词。
这个词对于几十年前的人来说并不熟悉。
然而对于我们来说,它是一个严重的威胁,因为它意味着危害空气、海洋、河流和土地,进而对我们造成伤害。
有很多工厂给我们带来了污染。
早上我们呼吸不到新鲜的空气。
在陆地上,街道上乱扔的垃圾不仅影响市容,还危害我们的健康。
我们如果不对污染采取措施,总有一天我们会被杀死的。
To Be a Teacher or a Businessman Nowadays the graduates would rather be businessmen than teachers when they hunt for jobs. Why? Firstly, business is a very challenging field with risks and competition while teaching is not. So many students tend to apply for a job with high payment in a short time after graduation. Secondly, compared with teaching in school, doing business is more exciting and challenging. In a sentence, which one will you choose? It depends on yourself. 当老师还是商人 近几年来毕业生们找工作的时候宁愿去做商人而不愿意当老师。
那么,这是为什么? 首先,商业是一个带有风险和竞争且具有挑战性的领域,而教育不是。
因此,一些学生毕业后倾向于短期内得到高报酬的工作。
其次,比起在校当老师,从商更让人激动,更有挑战性 总之,选择哪条道路,最终还是看你自己。
My spring festival This year I have a very unforgettable spring festival with my family. On New Year's Eve, all the family members got together to have a big dinner in the restaurant. During the dinner we said some good hopes to each other. Lots of money was given to children as a lunar New Year gift by the adults. We enjoyed ourselves very much Thanks to this spring festival, I met some relatives whom I haven't met for a long time. And I got lot of pocket money. I think the spring festival is the unforgettable day I have in my winter holiday!
以“英语学习”为话题的作文
Learning English has become a culture phenomenon around the world. In china , students obligated to learn English from elementary school.but most parents let their children access English from kindergarten.because no parents want their children to lose from the beginning. but no everyone like learning English . there are many students even resist English .consequently , students become two totally different groups. In my opinion , English has become a common communication tool.nowadays ,one who can't speak English is hard to get a broad recognization. so,we should learn English . someone don't like it. I think the reason is they don't find the interest in learning English . just be more careful and find interests in learning it .I believe you will be succeeded !
高中英语话题作文材料
Smoking and Health-吸烟与健康 About Internet-关于因特网 The Problem of Food-食品问题 Add Feet-添足 Accompany Us Studying-陪读 Early Rising-早起 My Dream-我的梦想 Going Abroad-出国 Correct Directions-辨明方向 真正的美-True Beauty 读书的价值-The Value of Reading Books 空余时间的利用-Use of Free Time 环境与发展-Development and the Environment假设你是新华中学的学生李华,得知某英文报招聘兼职记者,你有意应聘,请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。
*表示感兴趣 *说明优势:知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历 *希望得到回复 One possible version: Dear Sir or Madam, I'm a student from Xinhua Middle School. I'm glad to learn that you want a few part-time English reporters. I'm quite interested in it. I think I'm fit for the job. As a student, I've read a lot and have much knowledge in many fields. I'm fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others. Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. So I'm sure I can do the job well if I get the position. I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 假设你是李晓平,是“江苏中学”的学生。
请你围绕“建设和谐社会''的主题,根据下面 所给出的要点提示,用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。
要点提示:1.人与社会:祖国、家乡、学校,热爱关心 2.人与人:家人、师长、同学,诚信互助 3.人与自然:能源、环境、动植物,爱惜保护 4.你的态度:(内容由考生自己拟定) 注意:1.词数:100左右。
倡议书的开头、结尾以及提示句已为你写好,不计人词数。
2.内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。
A Letter to High School Students in Jiangsu Dear fellow students, Our government is aiming to build a "harmonious society" (和谐社会). I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As high school students, what should we do? As for myself,Dear fellow students, let's start fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute! Li Xiaoping From Jiangsu High School Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively. You should write at least 120 words, and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese) below: 1. 认为读书要有选择 2. 认为应当博览群书 3. 我的看法 When it comes to the issue of reading selectively or extensively, different people have different opinions. It is held by some people that one should read selectively. But it is also believed by other people that one should read extensively. Those who hold the first opinion think that one's time and energy are limited and one can never read as many books as he wishes. In contrast, those who hold the second view think that to know the world from all perspectives one should absorb a variety of knowledge by reading extensively. As to me, I agree with the former opinion. Admittedly, one can absorb more knowledge by reading extensively, but it doesn't follow that one should read without discrimination. As one's time and energy are limited. One should devote his limited time and energy to reading relevant and beneficial books. It is a waste of time to read irrelevant books. Furthermore, some books are harmful to one's mind. If we don't read books selectively, we will be led astray by harmful books. Is recycling textbooks a good suggestion? 请你以Is recycling textbooks a good suggestion为题,写一篇100词左右的稿件表示赞同,你的理由是: 1. 可以节省资源,减少浪费; 2。
书上的笔记很有用;3。
国外(如澳大利亚)已有成功的做法;4。
其它。
Recently, a debate concerning whether we should recycle our textbooks or not has appeared in our school. As far as I am concerned, we ought to recycle textbooks as a way of protecting environment. For one thing, recycling textbooks can not only save natural resources such as wood, but also reduce the waste of material. For another, the notes on the textbooks, made by the graduated students are of much help to those who want to reuse the books. As a current research show , recycling books has been proved an effective way in Australia, which obtains a quantity of benefits from this new-developed method. To sum up, I consider recycling textbooks useful and helpful. I hope it can come into being in our daily life as soon as possible.
求Friendship为话题的英语作文
What should you do when you have a fight with your friend.But things can not always be happy, you should choose a friend? You have to talk to him or her, if you have a bad day. Even the best friends have fights, a good friend could listen to your complaints and do his or her best to help you. You plant the seed and take care of it to make it grow? It is not because a person has money or good looks, you can write a letter, say what your friend did wrong and talk about why you did this or that. For example. When there is no one around. But how do you find real friendship and keep it. what makes a good friend, you can't be too shy:Tell him or her how you are feeling. Remember that friendship is one of the most important things in your life. You should make each other happy and share your lives. If he or she doesn't want to talk. Sally says founding friendship is just like planting a tree. To make a friend, have a good talk?The American writer Sally Seamans tells young students some smart ways to find friends. A good friend should be kind and patient.FirstEveryone needs friends.There are three steps to be friends again
关于健康话题的英语作文
In current society, people have known the importance of keeping healthy and good life habit. In the past, people ate three meals at home, and they ate more vegetables and less meat and fish. They were very strong and seldom went to see doctors. Now life is better, people eat more meat, fish, eggs and other food with more fat. They often go out for good meals with their families and friends. But they get easy to be ill, Why?I think more meat and fish, less exercise are bad for health. Good rest, less meat and fish, more vegetables and enough exercise are good for health. So I exercise every day. My eating habits are pretty good. I eat a lot of vegetables. I eat fruit and drink milk every day. I drink a cup of water 15 minutes before each meal and eat much vegetables and fruit. Of course, I love junk food, too, and I eat it once a week. And I sleep nine hours every day.The better we get into good eating habits, the happier our life becomes
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