英文的自我评价怎么写

Hello, everyone! My name is Ann.i am 12 years old. i have black eyes and a small mouth. i study very hard and in my spare time, i usually go to the library to read more books. As Francis Bacon says, study makes a man wise, i regard study as my main duty. in my hometown, there are many kinds of fruits, such as bananas, watermelon, pineapple and so on. Pineapple is my favarite fruit, what about you? if you come to my hometown, i will show you around and treat you to many kinds of food.

　　hello everyone my name is xxx（你的名字）.i'm 16（你的年龄） years old.my favorite book is xxx(书的名字）.my favorite colour are black、white and blue.on weekends，i like to go to the park with my good friends.i usually take care of my pet after school.last week，i went to school and began to read book.our teacher tell us to be good with our classmates.and we think is important.i went to a restaurant yesterday.the waiter asked me what i want.i sat down the chair and speak slowly.i said i would like to have a bowl of noodles.later he give me two big bowls of noodles.i felt angry and go out.i can't stand somebody make me embarred.