作文评分标准
本题满分为15分,成绩分为六个档次:13-15分、10-12分、7-9分、4-6分、1-3分和0分。各档次的评分标准见下表:
评 分 标 准
13-15分
切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺、连贯,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
10-12分
切题。表达思想清楚,文字较连贯,但有少量语言错误。
7-9分
基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。
4-6分
基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
1-3分
条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
0分
未作答,或只有几个孤立的词,或作文与主题毫不相关。
四级英语作文范文
Nowadays, there are more and more [某种现象] in [某种场合]. It is estimated that [相关数据]. Why have there been so many [某种现象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [原因一]. Besides, [原因二]. The third one is [原因三]. To sum up, the main cause of [某种现象] is due to [最主要原因]. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, [解决办法一]. On the other hand, [解决办法二]. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某种现象]. Nowadays, there are more and more [ghost writers / 枪手] in [China's examinations / 中国的考场]. It is estimated that [5% examinees are ghost writers / 5%的应试者是枪手]. Why have there been so many [ghost writers / 枪手]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [hirers' ignorance / 雇主无知]. Besides, [hirers' indolence / 雇主懒惰]. The third one is [hirers' obtusity / 雇主迟钝]. To sum up, the main cause of [ghost writers / 枪手] is due to [hirers' low IQ / 雇主智商低]. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, [flagellation / 鞭打]. On the other hand, [decapitation / 斩首]. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [ghost writers / 枪手].
英语作文四级 求范文
提供两篇,供参考.Practice MakesPerfect “Practice makes perfect”means that if you do an activity regularly, you will become good at it.Anyone who has had sufficient practice in doing a particular job may perform better and more quickly than those with little practic.Take English learning for example. When we learn English, we have to learn grammar, words and phrases.It is not so difficult for us to understand and remember the rules, But when we speak or write with the words and rules in mind, we find it difficult to express it in English smoothly or corredtly.On the contrary, those who keep on practising listening,speaking,reading and writing English can communicate in English at ease and fluently.For anther exemple, a skilled driver may talk with others while driving.Both learning and driving require plenty of practice for the mastery of skills.Evidently, practice is important.If you want to improve your study and work, you should remember that: Well begun is half done;actions speak louder than words; strike while the iron is hot; practice with zeal and interast,practice with persistence and patience, practice with positive attitude and self-confidence. Last but not least , practice makes perfect.and miracls!What Is Happiness?What is happiness? Perhaps different people have different views on happiness.Some people think that material satisfaction would bring happiness.But in fact they overlooked the fact that true happiness comes from the realization of your career/cause you persue which contributes the success of others as well as your own. Some peopole try every means to make money at the expense of others' interest . These people harm others to benefit themselves,They think the greater sum of money they make, the happier they will be. On the contrary, some people think that spiritual satisfaction is the greatest happiness.They do everything for the people. They live, work, and sacrifice their lives for the people.In my opinion, I believe, one's value lies in the value of serving the people, the country and the whole societyI am sure those who make contributions, big or small, to our country will be regarded as the happiest people,They should be recognized and respected. The point is what you can do,but not how people look on you.It is how much you contribute ,not how much you gain,I think this is the true meaing of life that everyone of us should have.“熟能生巧”意思是指一个人经常做某一件事,他就能非常熟练地做它。
在做某一项工作时,有过大量实践的人要比没有大量实践的人做得又快又好。
就以学英语为例吧。
我们学英语时,必须学习语法、单词和短语,要理解和记住这些规则对我们来说并不难。
但当我们用这些单词和规则说或写时,就发现很难用英语流利而正确地表达。
相反,不断练习英语听说读写的人能用英语随意交谈。
再举一个例子,一个熟练的司机能边开车边与他人交谈。
学英语和开车都需要大量实践来掌握技能。
显然,实践是很重要的。
若想提高你的学习和工作,就该记住良好的开端是成功的一半,行动比语言响亮,实践要有热情和兴趣,实践要有恒心和耐心,实践要有积极他度和自信心。
最后同样重要的是,熟能生巧,熟能创造奇迹。
幸福是什么?也许不同的人对幸福有着不同的看法。
有人认为物质上的满足将带给人幸福,但实际上,他们忽略了这样一个事实:真正的幸福是所追求事业的实现,这种事业不仅有利于自己而且也有利于他人。
有些人想尽各种办法去谋取他人的利益,损人利己。
在他们看来,赚的钱越多,就越幸福。
相反,有些人认为精神上的满足才是最幸福的。
他们为人民做各种事情,为人民而活、而工作,甚至为人民贡献自己的生命。
在我看来,一个人的价值体现在为人民、为国家和为整个社会的服务之中。
我相信那些为国家做贡献的人,无论他们的贡献是大是小,都会是最幸福的人,他们会得到人们的承认和敬佩。
人生的价值是你做了些什么,而不是人们怎么看待你,是你贡献了多少,而不是你得到了多少。
我认为这才是我们每个人应该具备的生命的真正意义。
那个没注意题目,是什么网络红人的。
对不起!不过这篇我觉得还不错啦!(嘻嘻!)
英语作文范文!四级水平,急急急
On Cultivating the Sense of Gratitude On college campuses across the nation, there is a noticeable phenomenon that we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college students lack the sense of gratitude, one of the countless traditional virtues of this ancient land with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years. These young adults were not and are not aware of the huge importance of expressing gratitude to those who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so forth. Personally, I deem that the root cause of students without a graceful heart is that they receive an education not valuing the moral sphere. I strongly believe that joint efforts from folks across society are the final remedy for this social headache. As young university students of the new era, we should make our own contributions to this cause. Imagine a world without the sense of gratitude. This kind of world is doomed to failure. Simply put, we should join our hands to heighten our awareness of fostering a graceful heart. Only in this way can we build our society into a harmonious one. My fellow students, I beg you to act from now on.2010年6月大学英语四级押题作文:大学生使用信用卡现象 On Credit Card At present, a wide vareity of credit cards issued by major banks and shopping malls are thriving in colleges and universities across the nation, with a multitude of college students making up a growing population of card holders. Indeed, one out of five students is estimated to be in possession of at least one credit card, and the figure is expected to be on the steady increse, the latest data published by Yangtze Evening Post suggests. Like anything prior to the emergence of this small piece of plastic, the increasing popularity of credit card on campus has both bright and dark sides. On the one hand, young adults in college, free from the trouble of pocketing a considerable sum of cash, could enjoy the convenience of credit cards and purchase expensive goods by installments. On the other hand, however, the irresponsible and excessive use of the cards by these youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school incapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take them years to pay off. On my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credit card may bring, we couldn't afford to ignore a conspicious fact: in most cases, parents are our sole financial sources.Instead of spending without any restrict, we are supposed to put studies on the top of our agenda and move ourselves beyond heavy dependence upon our parents.2010年6月英语四级作文预测:社会不文明现象 On Uncivilized Behaviors We cannot fail to notice that countless uncivilized behaviors exist in our daily lives, such as spitting, talking loudly, littering, saying nasty words in public places and so forth. All these are bad manners that we should not lose sight of. As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years, China is witnessing a surge in improper acts that every Chinese citizen should feel ashamed of. Uncivilized behaviors by a host of Chinese both at home and abroad have seriously affected China's image, according to an editorial posted on People Daily's official website. As Chinese, we should not get offended when others point out our weaknesses but should focus more attention on improving ourselves. We should strive to identify the causes of those improper behaviors and find ways to eliminate them. There are a host of causes, I would argue, behind this trend. To name only one: the lack of moral education. The government should wage a massive moral campaign to fight against this trend and we ourselves should endeavor to behave decently in our daily lives. As college students of the new age, we should take the leading role.2010年四级作文预测题目:食品安全问题 On the Food Security Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media. The problem of food security has become a hot button across society. The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People Daily. There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide. First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem. More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend. As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never. Prompt and strict measures should be ...
请英语高手帮我点评一下我的四级作文(语法、用词)
" Mute English"among Chinese studentsA phenomonon of "Mute English"appears among Chinese students because they can't TALK IN English to with their classmates ,friends and foreigners.There are two reasons for this situation.First ,most of Chinese students STUDY English for their examinationS ,they pay more attention to written testS and neglect of spoken language .It is a failURE to ChinA'S education .SecondLY ,many Chinese students are so shy and unconfident in English class THAT they always LISTEN carefully ,but not put up their hands to answer teacher's questions .If the Chinese students solve this problem ,as I see it ,they must cover the following points:first ,don't study hard for examiationS,but FOR the konwledge; secondLY,they should pay attention to spoken lanuage ; AT last,if they meet the foreigner in A supermarket or A restaurant ,they should talk with the foreign people boldly.In a word,learning English or another foreign lanuage is AN interesting THING ,not a burden.WE shouldn't study only for examinationS.
评大学公共四级英语作文!急~
1.要多看一些课外书 积累一些好词好句 2.平时要多多注意观察生活中的事情 3.平时可以随意的练练笔 一次性可以少写一点 但要保证质量 4.可以把自己写的文章多多修改 上初中,最令人发愁的就是作文了。
以前上小学时作文得分很容易,只要文章没有病句,叙述清楚,基本上就能的高分,但初中就不一样了。
我刚上初中的时候,第一次月考,作文就被减了9分。
我觉得,作文分数低,其中的一个原因是对初中的考试还不适应。
小学时的试题好多都是课本上的知识,把课本上的重点内容背熟,答起题来就比较轻松,能够有很充裕的时间写作文,加之作文简单,所以作文基本没问题。
但初中试题的基础题很少,大多都是课外的,需要思考理解,题量增大,难免会不适应,这就会影响到作文的发挥,甚至写作文时头脑会一片空白,毫无头绪。
时间长了,对考试适应了,可能会好些。
(这是我上了初中以后的感觉,不知你是不是和我一样) 我觉得,首先应弄明白,初中作文和小学作文有太大的不同。
要求都不只是没有语病、文笔流利、字迹清楚等这些基础的东西。
初中作文有时是材料作文,这需要准确的把握中心,如果知道了中心内容,但不知该如何写起,那么可以从多个角度去领会材料主旨,从中选择自己最拿手的、最好写的去写。
如果,只是给了一个话题,或者将题目补充完整等简易类型的作文要求,在确定作文题目时要慎重,因为整篇作文都要围绕题目展开,或者可以先写作文,最后写题目,这样题目和正文比较容易保持一致,以免出现题、文不对应的问题。
写作文时,要确定每一段要写些什么,考虑一下怎么去体现主题,要是杂乱无章的,给阅卷老师的印象就不好了。
如果考试时实在没有时间想这些,就凭感觉写,但一定要有条理。
另外,注意文笔的修饰,给文章添色。
现在,中学生写文章最大的问题就是没有气势,对于这一点我也很苦恼,不知怎么能是文章有气势,尽量去做吧! 多读多练,实践出真知。
平常注意积累,建议你到网上去看一些文章,网上的作文都很好的,很让人受益。
平常多写些,可以写一些小诗,或无聊的时候写一小段,考试时或许会用的上。
平时多写,对自己提高写作能力很有帮助,这点我深有感触! 还有,写作文重在创新,标新立异,如果只是围绕老观点展开论述,会让人没有兴趣。
对了,在考试时,有三个点一定要着重写好:题目、开头、结尾。
如果擅长写题记的话可以写题记。
总之,写好初中作文需要一定的功底,一篇好的考试作文会让阅卷老师心情舒畅,得高分自然不成问题 希望可以帮到你!加油!
求新英语四级作文 范文
四六级考试越来越使模板无用武之地,阅卷老师在阅卷的过程中最多的是关注同学们的用词和句型的使用。
高分作文标志 1:四级120-150字;六级150—180字; 2、是否长短句交叉; 3、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项: 1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that… 3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。
(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen one's competitive edge代替enhance one's competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。
这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I By Simmy I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly替换very thrilling替换exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb. be interested in sth. google替换search an army of替换a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity替换more and more popular Coincident with…非常地道的词汇,表达“与…一致”的意思,替换With… Advancement替换development Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换enter into Current ( currently )替换now Appeal to sb.替换sb. be interested in sth. Growing individuals替换more and more people It is no exaggeration to say经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email. For a start替换To begin with We can, freely, search用了插入语的写作手法 our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动 Additionally替换In addition / Besides Deliver替换send There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying. There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先There is no denying that这个句型,还有however作为插入语,function in the disservice of替换do harm to Emerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing ) Net citizen网民,属于精彩用词 As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds替换Every coin has two sides Computers do play,do强调 Positive替换important / good等 A slice of替换a part of Unfavorable替换bad Impacts替换effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of…使用插入语 Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象,merits/ virtues)替换advantage ( defects替换disadvantage ) Facet替换aspect 各位同学,上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点,作文怎么会不得高分呢! 以下是30个最经典的...
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英语四级作文范文
议论文举例第一步:网上各种议论文模板,背一个第二步:使用合适的连接词和短语(属于加分的细节)第三部:词汇,不要important,interesting,i think,we know...我们写作老师直接说这种低级词汇一出来分数高不了。
查找你自己常用的这种词汇,用高级词汇替换,背诵下来,直接用。
tips:模板里的一二三原则不要用first,second……这种模板要背就背个tobegin with,then,furthermore,finally或者to start with,next,in addition,finally 或者 first and foremost,besides,last but not least这样的。
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大学英语四级作文范文:过度依靠网络好还是不好
生活中有无数件琐碎的小事,正是这些小事串起我们丰富多彩的生活.随着时间的流逝,许多小事已经渐渐消失在记忆的星空中.然而,这件事虽然过去很久了,可是现在想起来,依旧是历历在目.记得那是一个阳光明媚的清晨,我和妈妈出去骑车兜风.正当我春风得意哼着小曲一路畅通的时候,“咔嚓”一声——自行车“罢工”了.我下车一看,原来是车链子掉了.“哎呀,这可怎么办才好啊!”我和妈妈试图把链子安上去,可它就是不听使唤,无论我们怎样努力,还是没有将它“降服”.后来,我彻底地对这辆“破”自行车失去了耐心,又急又气,真恨不得把它揍扁,然后再踹上几脚以发泄我心中的烦躁.“怎么了?小姑娘,车坏了?”我抬头一看,只见路边一位衣衫褴褛的老头和我们搭讪.我心想:和老头穿的衣服真破,他会不会跟我要钱?“修车啊?我以前干过,肯定能修好!”我和妈妈将信将疑地把自行车交给了老爷爷.他把自行车推到路旁,修整好掉下来的铁链,再一节一节挂上去.但铁链像个顽皮的孩子,挂了这头,又掉了那头.十分钟过去了车一样没有修好.此时,老爷爷一边擦着汗,一边嘟囔,“咦?奇怪了,今天是咋了?铁链咋不听使唤了?这种新式自行车就是不好使.”说着,老爷爷一用力,却不小心把手夹在齿轮和铁链中间.这时,殷红的鲜血不断地从他的手指上渗出来.我吓得不知所措地大叫:“老爷爷,您的手!”他不慌不忙地把手指放在嘴里吮去了鲜血,用大拇指摁着伤口,说:“不怕,孩子,咱农村人,这种事多了,不算啥!”我忐忑不安地看着老爷爷说:“算了,别修了,我把他推到修车摊上去好了!”“没事!”老爷爷头也不抬,仍旧与自行车努力“奋战”.终于,自行车修好了!老爷爷长吁了一口气,想站起来,却一个踉跄坐在地上.我赶忙过去扶他,他摆摆手,说:“没事!”.不知怎么的,我的泪水不停地在眼眶里打转.是因为修好了自行车而开心?是因为老爷爷助人为乐的精神让我动容?还是因为刚才丑陋的想法让我羞愧?我心里顿时五味混杂……至今,我还是忘不了哪佝偻的身影和那双粗糙的渗着鲜血的双手!
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