雅思写作范文 急!
参加过雅思考试的同学都深有体会,跟许多烤鸭们一样视雅思作文为雅思考试中的难中之难。
有此感的原因是,即使有观点,看得懂题目,却找不到合适的句子来表达,也无法写出高分的文章。
所以雅思培训 查看更多雅思培训的内容>>查看雅思培训课程>>申请雅思培训试听课程>>的专家们为各位雅思考生们总结了大作文的必备句式,让你轻松搞定雅思写作。
以下是雅思考试短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式,每组句式的功能相同或相似,考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1-2个,做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。
在这里雅思辅导老师需要提醒考生们,盲目的套用句式是不可取的,必须首先做到对这些句式的理解和熟悉,经过大量的练习,才能轻松自如地应用在自己的作文中。
一、表示原因 1、There are three reasons for this. 2、The reasons for this are as follows. 3、The reason for this is obvious. 4、The reason for this is not far to seek. 5、The reason for this is that... 6、We have good reason to believe that... 例如: There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. Firstly, people's living standard has been greatly improved. Secondly, most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like. Last but not least, more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life. 注:如考生写第一个句子没有把握,可将其改写成两个句子。
如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this. 这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
二、 表示好处 1、It has the following advantages. 2、It does us a lot of good. 3、It benefits us quite a lot. 4、It is beneficial to us. 5、It is of great benefit to us. 例如: Books are like friends. They can help us know the world better, and they can open our minds and widen our horizons. Therefore, reading extensively is of great benefit to us. 三、表示坏处 1、It has more disadvantages than advantages. 2、It does us much harm. 3、It is harmful to us. 例如: However, everything divides into two. Television can also be harmful to us. It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television. 四、表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1、It is important(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible、for sb. to do sth. 2、We think it necessary to do sth. 3、It plays an important role in our life. 例如: Computers are now being used everywhere, whether in the government, in schools or in business. Soon, computers will be found in every home, too. We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age. 五、表示措施 1、We should take some effective measures. 2、We should try our best to overcome (conquer、 the difficulties. 3、We should do our utmost in doing sth. 4、We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced、with. 例如: The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious. Therefore, we must take some effective measures to solve it. 六、表示变化 1、Some changes have taken place in the past five years. 2、A great change will certainly be produced in the world's communications. 3、The computer has brought about many changes in education. 例如: Some changes have taken place in people's diet in the past five years. The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek. Nowadays, more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein, and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins. 七、表示事实、现状 1、We cannot ignore the fact that... 2、No one can deny the fact that... 3、There is no denying the fact that... 4、This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in. 5、However, that's not the case. 例如: We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution. To solve these problems, we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution. The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment. 八、 表示比较 1、Compared with A, B... 2、I prefer to read rather than watch TV. 3、There is a striking contrast between them. 例如: Compared with cars, bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable. Firstly, they do not consume natural resources of petroleum. Secondly, they do not cause the pollution problem. Last but not least, they contribute to people's health by giving them due physical exercise. 九、表示数量 1、It has increased (decreased、 from...to... 2、The population in this city has now increased (decreased、 to 800,000. 3、The output of July in this factory increased by 15% compared with that of January. 例如: With the improvement of the living standard, the ...
雅思写作5分作文
雅思写作测试的是英文水平而不是你思想有多深刻,只要你的论证是合理的就可以了,不需要记太多那些偏词难词。
5分对大多数人来说是没有问题的,只要你有6级的水平应该可以,建议如果基础差的话就去看一些模板,就别去背范文了,范文的指向性太狭隘 了,雅思那么多题目也没那么多时间背那么多范文了,去买本慎小嶷的《十天突破雅思写作》帮助会比较大,而且易于理解,这试我都要考第四次了,祝福我吧,我也是卡在写作那里5.5分,唉!原因是我没恒心不想看书...
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范文: In mycountry, for the sake of stable social security andwelfare system(社保和福利体系), peopleused to be limited to(限制)a single workplace for a whole life. However,as time passes, this is no longer the case especially nowadays when people arefree to choose their occupation. Topursue a better career or break through a professionalbottleneck (突破职业瓶颈), ratherthan secure a stable income (确保稳定的收入), young people usually opt to change their job.In addition, numbers of graduates with little working experience have notdeveloped a clear perspective of their life career. It is reasonable for themto be exposed to various workplaces, orienting to themarket needs (适应市场的需求)insociety and trying to find out their strengths and interests. This mobility of work force (劳动力的流动性)allowsboth employees and employers to freely make their selection in the workforcemarket according to specific or tailored needs. As a consequence, they are morelikely to be matched appropriately and get satisfied in career. Meanwhile theworkplaces can be infused with more vitality and innovation under thiscircumstance. In addition, job hoppers (跳槽的人)tend to obtain diverse working experience (多样的工作经验), hence developing a high ability of adaptationto new environment. However,there are surely risks when young people change their job too frequently. Inthat case, their loyalty can be questioned. Worse still, they are not able to settle down(安定下来) until their 30s or 40s, which usually leads to a postponed (推迟) marriage and childbirth. Additionally, changing job probably meanschanging their residential places (居住地), and this instability can influence theirfamily members negatively. On top of family relationship, their social relationnetwork can also be impaired (被削弱). To sum up, free flow of labor force mainly results from policies which intend to (意图) encourage a more lively employment. Hopping job in moderate (温和的) frequency is helpful for young people to adapt to thesociety and recognize their personal aptitudes (天资) and ambitions in professional development. Buttoo much hopping would be harmful to their success.
雅思写作需要提前背范文吗 能考到原题嘛?
雅思写作的评分标准指的是考察考生写作的逻辑性、文章结构、语言等综合能力,很多考生想通过背诵雅思写作范文达到高分的目的,但事实证明,雅思写作考试不是靠死记硬背几个话题就能过关的,那么到底雅思写作高分是否真的需要背诵范文呢? 经常会有雅思考生问:“我要背范文吗?”、“ 老师,多给点实用范文,让我能确保6分。
”机械地背诵范文对任何考生而言都无太大意义,只有理解性的学习范文才会对很多考生有所帮助。
目前雅思考生大致分成三大类: 一、语言能力很低,文法几乎不通,词汇量也极其有限,写作目标分为5分。
这类学生最希望通过背诵几篇范文能够在考试时混个5分。
可很多时候,事与愿违,个别学生日夜苦背, 积累了十多篇文章,结果还是连5分都未到。
这类学生最大得问题有两个:不能独立地写出一句完整正确的单句并且考试看不懂题目。
这俩个问题,后者更为致命。
考生甲:在写大作文时把population(人口)认为是pollution(污染), 并在文中运用了大量自己被诵过的范文的句子,结果成绩为3分。
考生乙:大作文题目:“Sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Job training and education should replace it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?" 该考生未看懂题目第一句话,通篇在撰写曾经写过的教育与职业为题,得分3.5。
建议:要想让自己在写作考试中取得一个基本分,第一关是要看懂题目。
因此,建议词汇量特别小的考生平时多看考过的考题,网上有每次的考题回忆,培训课堂一般都会发放。
由于雅思考题话题重现率非常高,故而熟练掌握以前的题目对应考时读懂题目会有很大帮助。
考生丙:只会使用不做任何变化的套句,自己无法写出一句正确完整的单句。
考试得分4。
建议:在背套句的时候,一定要多做常见功能性句子的填空式练习,并注意词性的正确使用。
不宜写太多长句或复杂句。
以掌握基本句型和话题性词汇为主。
凡目标为5分的考生,备考时应注重题意的理解,写作基本模板的训练和简单句式的练习,尤其注意常见单词的词性正确使用。
二、有能用于简单沟通的词汇量,能撰写常见句式,单句撰写熟练。
写作目标分数:6分。
这类学生是目前人数最多的,一般在突六和精六班级。
该类学生学习潜力也较大,在审题没有大的差错时,一般得分5分到5.5 之间。
这类学生在自己阅读范文时,喜欢积累难词和复杂句式,部分学生在考试时过度倾向于用生僻词汇,长句可写4-5行,甚至一段一句。
这些学生普遍存在的问题是论证能力差,扣题不紧,对句子功能的把握不强。
建议:在老师的指导下,批判式的学习范文,在积累词汇和句式的基础上,重点把握句子的功能以及主体段论证的展开。
关注审题的精确性和相关主题的论证材料积累。
句式长短句合理使用,不宜写过长句子,绝不能出现一段一句的情况。
三、有很扎实的语言功底的考生,写作目标7分或以上成绩。
挑选各种题型的范文简单阅读即可。
完全没必要去研读范文,否则只会误导自己。
建议:注重同一话题不同角度的出题方式,确保自己的展开角度紧扣题目指令。
可精读雅思阅读书籍及国外报刊的议论文,多积累地道语言和英语国家的文化背景和实例。
考前可尝试实战模拟。
对于所有的学生,范文的背诵都无太大意义,但审题这关对每位考生而言都极其重要。
希望各位考生能充分利用现有的写作范文资料,阅读资料和网络资源,加强审题训练和语言基本功的练习,争取在实战中取得佳绩。
雅思写作模板的问题
我参加的是新东方的培训班……那个老师其实不太主张我们背模板,他说背的话容易限制思路,你如果想超过6或者6.5就比较困难,最推荐的是背最新的雅思剑桥里面考官写的范文。
他说全都背下来,然后自己每三天练习一篇真题。
最重要的是要学会自己改文章,他说也许你写要花40分钟,但是一开始自己改作文大概要花两个小时,反复的琢磨。
一开始比较辛苦啦,但是后面就越来越熟练,对提高写作水平和十分有帮助,现在剑桥已经出到7了吧...
托福写作大作文和雅思写作一样吗
一、大作文的区别 雅思大作文和托福大作文都是以议论文为主,雅思写作满分为9分,要求在40分钟之内写出250字以上的作文,托福写作满分为30分,要求在30分钟之内写出300字以上的作文。
两者的区别主要体现在以下四个方面:1. 评分标准 从评分标准来看,雅思大作文和托福大作文都要求主旨扣题、论证充分、结构严谨,但是两者对语言要求的严格程度不一样。
在雅思大作文的评分标准中,对语言质量的要求占了一半比重。
四项评分标准中,有两项分别考查的是词汇和语法,评分标准十分严格,中国考生的分数普遍偏低,7分以上的高分很少,而且几乎没有满分。
而在托福大作文的四项评分标准中,只有一项考查语言质量。
这意味着,一篇主旨扣题、论证充分、逻辑性强的托福文章,即使语言不那么完美,甚至还有小错误,也可以得到理想的分数,比如27、28分。
2. 话题类型 雅思大作文和托福大作文的话题类似,常见的话题包括教育、科技、媒体、政府、环境、社会。
但是总体而言,雅思话题偏重学术,托福话题偏重生活,像托福写作中常见的朋友、金钱、娱乐、成功等话题,在雅思写作中并不常见。
因此考生在练笔时,要针对不同的话题进行相应的练笔,并积累相关的词汇和论据。
托福题目(偏重生活): 雅思题目(偏重学术):3.文章结构 雅思大作文和托福大作文整体都由三部分组成,分别是introduction, body和conclusion,可以写成四段式或五段式。
但是,雅思大作文通常采用双边论证,平衡写法,审题时要明确两个对立面,写作时两个对立面都要有相应的主体段,比如一段写正方,一段写反方,要客观辩证的看待问题, 否则会被认为写作偏题。
而托福大作文通常采取一边倒,主体段全力支持正方,比如写三个主体段论述正方的原因或优势,对于反方几乎不提,否则会被认为观点不明、思路混乱。
考生一定要注意两者论证角度的不同。
4.论证方法 雅思大作文和托福大作文都可以使用例证法来支持论点。
但是,雅思不可以举个例,不能说for example,I …或者my friend…,正确的做法是举范例、说群体,比如young people,old people,teachers,students, parents,children等等。
雅思举例要表述简洁,概括性强,不可以长篇大论。
而托福最常用的论证方法就是例证,举例可以五花八门,可以是个例,也可以是范例,可以是自己的,也可以是他人的,可以是中国的,也可以是外国的,可以是当代的,也可以是历史的。
而且举例要具体详尽,一个例子可以写几十字,甚至上百字。
二、小作文的区别 雅思与托福的小作文截然不同,几乎不具可比性。
雅思小作文以图表题为主,要求在20分钟之内写出150字以上的作文,写作任务是对图表中的数据和信息进行描述、对比、概括和总结,主要考查单项写作技能。
而托福小作文是个综合任务,考查读、听、写三种技能,要求在20分钟之内写出200字左右的作文,写作任务是总结陈述所听到的学术性话题的观点,并建立所听观点与所读观点之间的联系。
雅思写作地图题怎么写 雅思写作地图题攻略
文章结构第一段交待写作目的第二段描述1995年的地图第三段拿现在的地图和95年的做对比第四段总结全文第一段This report compares how the village of Ryemouth has developed and changed since the year of 1995.题目:The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.第二段As is clearly described in the first picture, Ryemouth was a coastal city which was divided into three parts by two roads. In the southern part, there was a fishing port on the sea, with a fish market located in the north and a coffee shop in the north-east. A block of shops was situated on the opposite side of the market…第三段In the second picture, the village changed a lot. The fishing port has been removed and the fish market is replaced by apartments. Several restaurants also occupy the place of the shops on the roadside. Moreover, a parking lot is newly built on the east of the hotel. In addition, …第四段Overall, based on the brief description above, it is clear that the general layout of the village does not change a lot, while some newly-built facilities and housing has ornamented the small village.
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