这里有一封写给奶奶的信,(当然也应该算亲人哈。)
dear grandma,
Long time no see.How's it going?I hope grandpa is well now.I was sorry to hear that he was ill in bed.
I finished my end-of-year exams last week and got my report card today.I was very nervous when I see the envelope in the mail,but luckily I did okay this time.My Spainish teacher said my listening was good ,and I was happy. But my Science teacher said that I was lazy,which isn't true.It's just that I found science really difficult!And I hope I can have a good vacation.
Okay,that's about all the news I have for now.Daddy and Mummy send their love.
Love,
XXX
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你稍稍修改那么一下下哈。可能会有点点多,被选成分多些总是好的~
可以删一些咯。总之这是篇不错的文章,(我是指你如果在上初二以下)初二以上可能这些词就有点点不好了。
如果你觉得不好可以给我发消息,
~~~随时等候,愿意服务~~~是春野步的回答宗旨!
写一些他比较喜欢的(人、事)分散他的注意力,或者告诉他除了已经失去的亲人以外还有更多的人在关心他,让他为其它在乎他的人让他节哀顺变……
write some of his favorite (people and things) distract his attention, or told him that in addition to lost loved ones and more people care about him, he cares about his people let him grief ... ...
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