范文一:英语影评作文初二
八年级英语上册作文范文
一、关于旅行需注明:时间、地点、人物、天气、事件、
食物、感受。
My Vacation To Beijing
Last summer I went to Beijing on vacation with my family.
The weather was sunny and hot. We visited the Great Wall on the first day. There were many people on theGreat Wall. The next day, we visited the Palace Museum and Tian’
an Men Square.
We took many photos there. We also visited some other interesting place—Beijing Hutong.For dinner, we ate
something special—Beijing duck. It was delicious. We had great fun there. I hope to go there again.
二、关于朋友的短文可以提及:名字、外貌、他喜欢做什
么、与你有哪些相同和不同,最好加一些对朋友的看法.
My best friend and I Every one needs friends, so do I. I have many friends, but Mary is my best friend. Let me tell you something
about her. She is 14 years old. She is tall and thin. She has
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two big eyes. She is smart. And she is very funny. She likes telling jokes, and she often makes me laugh. We have many things in common. We are both outgoing in our class. We both like sports and math. And we both enjoy
Playing computer games. However, we also have some differences. She is good at playing Tennis, so she always wins in tennis. I am smarter than her, so I always get better grades than her.I think friends are like books, you don’t
need a lot of them as long as they are good. So I hope we can be friends forever.
三、写频率相关的作文:会使用频率。例文:介绍你的朋
友Kate的生活习惯
Kate’s habits
Kate is my best friend. She studies hard at school, and she likes reading very much. She often reads some useful and interesting books at home. Sometimes she uses the Internet.
She can listen to music on the Internet. It’s relaxing.She is
pretty healthy. She exercises three or four times a week. She walks to school every day.
She has good eating habits, too. She eats vegetables and fruit every day.
四、我最会喜欢的电视节目:写出节目名、叙述内容以及
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喜欢的原因
My favorite TV show my favorite TV show is China’s Got
Talent.The talent show tries to look for the best singers, the most exciting magicians, the funniest actors and so on. All kinds of
People join the show to show their talents. Some people are truly talented. When you watch the shows, you can play a role in deciding the winner. The winner usually gets a good prize.
I like it because it gives people a way to make their dreams come true.
五、影评:需注意时态;介绍电影类型、主人公、故事大
意、以及个人看法。 The Lion King The Lion King is a great movie. I like it very much.It’s a cartoon. It‘s a story of
Sambas. Samba’s father was the king. But his uncle Scar killed his father. When Sambas grew up, he came back to the forest and became the true king of the forest. Sambas are hard-working, and he has many good friends. He is also kind so he can become the true king. I think it is fantastic. And if you plan to watch a movie, choose The Lion King.
六、根据提示以My Dream Job为题写一篇短文(unit 6)
提示:(1)想成为一名记者(2)打算给报纸写文章 (3) 高
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中以后想去北京上大学 (4)想在一家电台工作并环游世
界
When I grow up, Im going to be a journalist. Next year, Im going to write articles for magazines and newspapers. Im going to a university in Beijing after high school. Maybe Im going to find a part-time job and save some money. Next, I’
m going to work for a TV station as a journalist. Then I am going to travel all over the world.
七、请以―未来的学校生活‖为主题,写一篇英语短文。要
求:灵活运用一般将来时。 School life in the future I think
school life in the future will be more colorful and interesting. We students will have classes only in the morning. We won’
thave homework after school. We will have more free time to take part in all kinds of activities in the afternoon. For example, we
will play sports, visit the museums and go to the movies. If we are ill, we will study at home. We will listen to the teacher on the Internet.
八、 My life in the future
My life in the future In ten years, I think I will be a teacher. I will live in Beijing, because I love it. I will work with children and make friends with (和...做朋友)them. I
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love children, so
I’ll be happy every day. I will live in an apartment(公寓)
with my parents, because I
Don’t like living alone. I like pets very much, so I will have many different pets, maybe a lovely dog. Every day I will go out for a walk with it. In my holiday I will go to visit some famous places. In the future I think my life will be more interesting and our world will become more beautiful.
九、你写一篇制作爆米花(popcorn)的小短文。注意使用
first,next,then, finally等表示过程的词 How to make
popcorn
I like popcorn very much. I learned from my mother how to make popcorn. Now let me show you the ways.
First you put the popcorn into the popcorn machine. Next, turn on the machine. Wait for several minutes. Then pour the popcorn into the bowl. And put some salt on the popcorn. Finally you can eat the popcorn.
十、根据提示写一封60-80字的信。Tom 邀请Li Ping 参
加他这周日的生日宴会,但Li Ping的父母出差要到下个月
回来,奶奶又卧病在床,需要人照顾。再说英语考试即将来
临,因此,无法前去参加生日宴会。Li Ping感到很抱歉,
只好写信辞谢。
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Dear Tom,
Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. Id love to go,but I cant. My parents are out on business. They are coming back next month. And now I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And I also need to study for my coming English exam. Im very sorry but I cant go to your party. Thank you for asking me. I hope you can have a good time. From Li Ping
十一、 假如某英语报社的―未来职业‖班正在征稿,请以
if I become a teacher...为题,写一篇60词左右的短文。
I want to be a teacher when I grow up. If I become a teacher, Ill try my best to teach my students well. In the class, Ill be strict with(对...) them. After class, Ill play with them. If they are in need, Ill help them. Im sure Ill be a good friend of them and a good teacher. I hope Ill be a teacher when I grow up. I believe there is nothing difficult in the world if you put your heart into it. Do you believe me?
篇二:英语作文影评
ó,ó?×???ó??à
????Kramer vs. Kramer is a 1979 film which tells the story of a divorce and its impact on everyone involved, including the couples young son. In Kramer vs. Kramer,
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Joanna Kramer, a Smith College graduate, is a stay-at-home mother for her son Billy. Feeling confined in this role, and neglected by her husband Ted, Joanna leaves the marriage in order to find herself a life.
????Ted, who has been focusing on his career in advertising, and was just given his agencys biggest new account, is shocked by Joannas decision and is left to raise Billy by himself. With the help of his neighbor and Joannas friend, Margaret, Ted comes to understand why his ex-wife Joanna left. In the process, he also becomes more invested in raising Billy than in his job.
????About a year and a half after leaving, Joanna returns to New York in order to claim Billy, and a custody battle ensues. The courts side with the mother. But Joanna knows that his sons true home is with Ted, and she chooses to let Billy stay with his father.
????There is an amazing cultural impact in Kramer vs. Kramer which I like best. It reflected a cultural shift that occurred during the 1970s and the period of second-wave feminism, when ideas about motherhood and fatherhood were changing in American society!
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篇三:英语作文电影《2012》观后感
Yuri
After finishing the movie 2012, a character left a deep impression on me. The character is Yuri, the Russian billionaire. Although he is not the leading role in the movie, the character is portrayed very real in my opinion. According to the dialogues in the movie, we can know a lot of him.
He was an excellent boxer in the past, so he has a strong body. He also works with a good brain, so he can own great wealth. Now we can say Yuri is a successful man in business.
When disaster comes, a man true self is showed out obviously. In the whole process of escape, he is always very resolute. After getting the message that the No.3 boat is without hope, he strikes managers down and leads all the people running to the No.4 boat. At that time, he shows his good judgment. So in terms of ability, Yuri is an excellent man.
Many people describe him with selfishness and greed. Maybe it’s true. But I think he isn’t without a single
redeeming feature. On the air, he looks the picture with his wife and children, and he calls his valentine ―girl friend‖,
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never ―lover‖. Obviously he loves his wife and children deeply. For leaving his valentine behind, I consider there is no mistake because they have no love all along. As a father, he takes good care of his two sons; especially at last he
sacrifices himself for pushing his son to the boat. At least Yuri is a great father and good men loving his families deeply.
篇四:初二上英语作文范文
请以―Talking about English Learning‖为题,用英语写一
篇短文,谈谈你对英语学习的看法以及你学习英语成功的经
验,并给学习有困难的同学提几条学好英语的建议。要点如
下:
Why do you learn English?
How do you learn English?
Your suggestion(建议)。
要求: 1.短文应包括所有要点,要点顺序可以自己安排。
词数80左右。短文开头已给出,不记入总词数。 2.要求语
句通顺连贯,能表达自己的真实思想。 3.所提建议应不少
于两条。
Talking about English Learning
English is the most important and useful language in the world. It is also one of the subjects in schools. So I have
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learn English for many years. In class, I try to listen to the teacher carefully and speak English as much as possible(尽
可能多的). After class, I often go over the lessons, listen to English tapes, watch English programmes on TV, read English newspapers and so on. I study hard, so I’m good at
it.
By the way, here are some suggestions about how to learn English well for you. First, believe yourself, try to read or speak English loudly. Second, you had better learn English words by heart. Third, it is a good idea to use English as much as possible. Finally, why not find an English pen friend and write email messages to each other in English? Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.(世上无难事,只怕
有心人) So I believe our English will be better and better.
你的美国朋友John这个寒假要到中国来学习汉语,请
你给他一些建议。告诉他如何能更好地学好汉语。可能会用
到的词语:Chinese class, listen to, talk with, write emails. 要
求:语句通顺,书写工整,可用所给词语,也可适当发挥。
字数80-100,不含已给出部分。
Dear John,
I’m so glad to hear you will come to my country to learn Chinese in this winter
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holiday.______________________________________________________________ Dear John,
I’m so glad to hear you will come to my country to learn Chinese in this winter holiday. I think it is the best way to improve your Chinese. When you get here, you may go to a Chinese language school. Remember to speak Chinese as much as possible in class. You can read some Chinese newspapers or books. You can see some famous Chinese films or listen to the radio in Chinese. It can improve your listening. Besides that(除此之外), how about writing to me
in Chinese? It is good for your writing. I hope I can give you some help. See you soon.
Yours,
Lin Tao
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear you will come to Beijing. In your last letter, you asked me for some advice about how to learn Chinese. I think you’d better go to Chinese classes. You can make more friends there and read some Chinese newspapers. Why not buy a Chinese dictionary? If you don’t know the
meaning of a word, it can help you./ you can look up the word in the dictionary. Of course, I can also help you. I
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think Chinese is easy and I’m sure you can learn it well.
Good luck!
Yours,
Lin Tao
我的家乡 海盐(人口、气候、特产、人民)My
hometown---Haiyan
It is famous for Nanbei Lake and Qi Garden. There are many famous places in Haiyan, such as Nanbei Lake and Qi Garden. There are many famous writers in haiyan, such as Zhang Leping and Yu Hua. The weather in Haiyan is nice all the year round. It is not very cold in winter. And in summer, it is not the hottest in China. The people in Haiyan are very friendly. If you come to my hometown/Haiyan, we will give you a warm welcome.
寒假旅游计划(旅游地点、住宿、交通方式的选择)
1. Winter holiday is coming. I will have a holiday of about three weeks./I will have a three-week holiday. I want to go on a holiday with my family.
Where will we go ? We decided to go to Hainan Island by plane at last. Why? As we know, Hainan Island is a place of interest(名胜). The weather there is sunny all year round and the temperature is about 17 degrees, so it is neither too
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hot nor too cold. What’s more, there are many beautiful
beaches in Hainan Island. So we can do many things there, such as swimming and diving. We can also lie on the beach and enjoy the sunshine. The price of the hotel in Hainan is 300 yuan a night. Although the price is a little high, we don’
t mind it./it doesn’t matter. After all(毕竟), a pleasant
trip is the most important for us. Oh, I am looking forward to our pleasant trip to Hainan Island. I believe we will have a wonderful time there.
2. Winter holiday is coming. I will have a three-week holiday. I want to go on a holiday with my family.
Where will we go ? We decided to go to Harbin by plane at last. Why? As we know, the weather in Harbin is cold in winter and the temperature is about minus 5 degrees, so it snows a lot in winter and Harbin is like a white world in winter. I li
ke snow. What’s more, we can do many things there, such as skiing, skating and making snowmen. I believe I must have fun playing with snow. The price of the hotel in Harbin is 240 yuan a night. It is neither too high nor too low. Oh, I am looking forward to our pleasant trip to Harbin. I believe we will have a wonderful time there.
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上学方式的调查报告
There are 615 students in our school. We get to school in different ways. 240 of us get to school by bike, and it is the most popular way to get to school. 190 of us walk to school. It is the cheapest and safest way. 125 of us take buses to school, because going to school by bus is very fast. 30 of us go to school by car and 30 by taxi. Going to school by car and taxi is the most comfortable way, but it is also the most expensive way. Nobody goes to school by train.
I go to school on foot because my home is close to school. I enjoy walking to school every day because it is good for my health.
学生零花钱的用途的调查报告
The chart shows how the 50 students in Class1, Grade8 use their pocket money. About half of them use their pocket money to buy fast food. 12 of them spend their pocket money playing computer games. A few of them spend their pocket money in buying presents, clothes or seeing films. Only 7 of them spend their pocket money on books.
From the chart, we find most of them spend their pocket money on fast food and computer games. But as we know, eating too much fast food is bad for our health and playing
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computer games is a waste (浪费) of time. So as students,
we’d better spend our pocket money in the right way, such as buying books and something useful.
如何写一个人的生平
Deng Chao(邓超)
Deng Chao is my favourite actor. He is one of the most popular actors in China. He was born was the main actor in many TV plays and movies. He is becoming more and more popular with young people now. he works hard and brings much happiness to us. People like his sweet smile. We hope he will have a bright future.
Ba Jin(巴金)
Ba Jin is a famous writer and his really name is Li Yaotang. He is one of the greatest writers in Modern China. He was born in Chengdu, Sichuan In 1927, he went to France for study and returned to China in 1928. His first famous work is the Family, and he wrote it in 1933. Five years later, he wrote Spring. And Autumn came out in 1940. These books made him famous all over China. He died on October 17, 2005. Now people in China still like his works very much.
动物保护
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1. 你最喜爱的动物,它们是否处于濒危之中,濒危的原因
以及保护它们的建议
My favourite animal is pandas. They are white and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute, but now pandas’
situation is becoming very difficult. They are in danger. First, pandas don’t have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller. To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up natures parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is a good idea to raise money for them.
2.为什么要保护动物,保护动物的建议
Animals are our friends. They are part of the nature. They are very important. And we can’t live in the world without
animals. So we should be kind to them. But some people cut down lots of trees and kill some rare animals to make money, so some animals are in danger now. In order to keep the balance of the nature, we should stop people from killing them. It is our duty to protect animals. And in fact, protecting animals is protecting ourselves./ to protect animals is to protect ourselves.
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3.老虎处于濒危之中的原因、为什么要保护老虎、保护老
虎的建议
Tigers have lived in the forest for thousands of years, but now they are in danger. People cut down lots of trees, so their living areas are getting smaller and tigers don’t have
safe places to live in. And they don’t have enough food to eat,
either. So the situation is becoming very difficult.
As we know, tigers are part of nature and they are our friend, so protecting them is protecting ourselves. We should try our best to protect them. We can set up larger tiger reserves to save as many tigers as possible. We should stop people from killing tigers and let tigers and people live in peace together. Let’s take actions now!
童话故事—小红帽
Once upon a time, there was a little girl called Little Red-Cap. One day, her grandma was ill, so Little Red-Cap went to visit her. But the wolf first swallowed her grandma, and then it stayed in bed and waited for Little Red-Cap. When Little Red-Cap got there, he jumped up and ate her. At that time, a hunter passed by. He killed the wolf and cut the wolf’s stomach. At last, Little Red-Cap and her grandma were saved.
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学生用手机的优点和缺点(英语议论文)
As we know, mobile phones are important for us now. They bring great changes to our lives. Now many students have their own mobile phones. They can use them to make telephone calls to their parents, friends and teachers at any time. Mobile phones can tell them the time just like a watch. What’s more(而且)/Besides that(除此之外), they can use
them to play games and chat on QQ.
But some students spend too much time sending messages, playing games and chatting on QQ. It is bad for their study. Also, using mobile phones for a long time is bad for their health. And the prices of mobile phones are usually high and students must pay much money for the phone bills(账
单). Every coin has two sides. I think, we can make good use of mobile phones. On one hand(一方面), we can use
them to do something good for ourselves. On the other hand (另一方面), we should control (控制) ourselves and we
shouldn’t lose ourselves in playing games and chatting on QQ. In a word(总之), if we can control ourselves, mobile phones will make our life colourful.
地震知识 What to do in an earthquake?
An earthquake may hit any place at any time. Do you
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know what to do in an earthquake? Let me tell you! /Here is some advice.
First, we should keep calm and be brave. Second, don’t
run everywhere in a hurry and try to find a safe place to stay in. If we are inside, we should hide ourselves under something hard, such as a table and even a bed. When the ground stops shaking, leave the building quickly. But remember not to use the lift. If we are outside, find an open place and keep clear of cars and waterside. Don’t stand near
street lights or under power lines. If we are driving a car, we must stop our car on the side of the road.
In short, we should follow what we learned at school. We can be safe and we can also help save others.
火灾知识 What to do in a fire?
Fires often happen suddenly. What should we do to keep safe in a fire? Here is some advice.
First, we should keep calm and be brave. Second, call 119 for help and tell other people about the fire. Then leave the burning building as quickly as possible. But remember not to use the lift. Third, if there is smoke, cover our nose and mouth with a wet cloth. If our clothes are on fire, drop to the ground and roll(滚动). Finally, it is dangerous to go back
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into a burning building.
In short, follow what we learnt in school and we can be safe.
游学,天气,风俗习惯,学习中文建议
Dear Tom,
I am glad to hear that you will come to my hometown this winter holiday. In winter, it is often a little cold and snowy in my hometown and the temperature is about zero degree, so you should bring some warm clothes.
When you come here, we are celebrating the Spring Festival. So it’s important for you to know about our
customs. For example, you mustn’t do any cleaning on the
first day of the Spring festival. And you’d better not have
your hair cut or say anything unlucky during the Spring Festival month.You asked me how to learn Chinese well. I think you can go to Chinese classes. The people in my home town are very friendly, so you can make friends with them and talk with them in Chinese. That can help you improve your Chinese.
I’m looking forward to your coming and I can’t wait to
see you.
Yours,
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Tony
校园安全
How to keep safe in school?
Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his feet because of the wet floor. Therefore(因此), he had to stay in hospital for two weeks.
So I think students should always walk carefully but not run /walk carefully instead of running in the hallway. And the teachers had better keep an eye on students /look after students (照顾) after class and stop them from running.
At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.
How to Keep Safe in School?
Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example, in last school sports meeting, something bad happened to Tom during the competition. He ran so fast that he couldn’t stop at all and
then he fell down. At last his arms were broken and he had to stay in hospital for a month. So we should pay more attention to our safety in school.
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In my opinion, we shouldn’t run fast on the wet
playground. Also, I think we should follow the teachers’
advice when we are having a P.E.class. We should be careful when we go downstairs. We had better not climb the wall in the school.
We can’t have a happy life in school unless(如果不) we
are safe. So let’s take care and keep ourselves safe in school!
假如你是John,你的英语笔友Jim要来中国参观,向你
询问有关中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时节等。请你给
他写一封电子邮件,介绍一下中国的气候特点。
Dear Jim,
I’m very glad that you’ll come to visit China. You asked
me about the weather in China. There are four seasons–
spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It often rains. And winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows, especially in the north of China. If you like snow, you can come to China at this time of year. But I think the best time to visit China is in spring or autumn because it is neither too hot nor too cold. It is very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the West Lake, Mount Yellow and so on. I believe you will enjoy yourself in China. I can’t wait to see you.
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Best wishes!
Yours truly,
John
你知道你学校有那些规章制度吗? 请你用must/ mustn’t
写一写你们学校的规章制度,哪些是必须做到的,哪些是禁
止做的,并且谈谈你对这些制度的看法。注意描述准确,观
点阐述清晰,明确,语言简练。80词左右。
We have many rules in our school.
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1. We have many rules in our school. We must obey the school rules, for examples, we must listen to the teachers carefully in class. I think it is good for our study and it can make us learn better. And we mustn’t talk too loudly in the
classroom, because we need to study quietly. Besides that, we must wear school uniforms at school. And we mustn’t fight.
I think good manners are important for us in our life. We mustn’t come to school late. We must finish our homework on time. These can keep our school life better. I think school rules are useful. They can make us grow better.
In my opinion, it is good for us to obey our school rules because everyone likes a person with good
篇五:高中英语作文影评
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???Dó,ó?×???ó??à
????Kramer vs. Kramer is a 1979 film which tells the story of a divorce and its impact on everyone involved, including the couples young son. In Kramer vs. Kramer,
Joanna Kramer, a Smith College graduate, is a stay-at-home mother for her son Billy. Feeling confined in this role, and neglected by her husband Ted, Joanna leaves the marriage in order to find herself a life.
????Ted, who has been focusing on his career in advertising, and was just given his agencys biggest new account, is shocked by Joannas decision and is left to raise Billy by himself. With the help of his neighbor and Joannas friend, Margaret, Ted comes to understand why his ex-wife Joanna left. In the process, he also becomes more invested in raising Billy than in his job.
????About a year and a half after leaving, Joanna returns to New York in order to claim Billy, and a custody battle ensues. The courts side with the mother. But Joanna knows that his sons true home is with Ted, and she chooses to let Billy stay with his father.
????There is an amazing cultural impact in Kramer vs. Kramer which I like best. It reflected a cultural shift that
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occurred during the 1970s and the period of second-wave feminism, when ideas about motherhood and fatherhood were changing in American society!
????
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范文二:英语影评作文
英语影评作文
篇一:英语影评写作格式
1 Artificial Intelligence
2 Beginning
2.1 21世纪中期,由于温室效应,南北极冰川融化,地球上很多城市被淹没。此时,人类科技已经高度发达,人工智能机器人就是人类发明出来用以应对恶劣自然环境的科技手段之一,而且,机器人制造技术已经高度发达,先进的机器人不但拥有可以乱真的人类外表,还能感知自身的存在。
莫妮卡的儿子马丁重病住院,生命危在旦夕,为了缓解伤痛的心情,她领养了机器人小孩大卫(海利?乔?奥斯蒙特 饰),大卫的生存使命就是爱她。马丁苏醒,恢复健康,回到了家里,一系列的事情使大卫“失宠”,最后被莫妮卡抛弃。
在躲过机器屠宰场的残酷追杀后,大卫在机器情人乔(裘德?洛 饰)的帮助下,开始寻找自己的生存价值:渴望变成真正的小孩,重新回到莫妮卡妈妈的身边。谁也不知道他能否完成自己的心愿,脱胎换骨成为真正的人,等待他们的只是凶吉难料的
旅程
2.2 love
4 Ending
Summary and reemphasis of personal view abou
t the film
篇二:英语影评写作格式
Film Review
1 A proper title
2 Beginning
2.1 Introduction to the film (within 2-3 sentences)
2.2 Main idea (general /critical view about the film)
3 Development
3.1 Analysis of the most striking/ impressive scenes
3.2 Inspirations from the film
3.3 Film-making stuff (background/
language/ setting/ music/ dressing ?)with unique feature
4 Ending
Summary and reemphasis of personal view about the film
篇三:英语作文电影《2012》观后感
Yuri
After finishing the movie 2012, a character left a deep impression on me. The character is Yuri, the Russian billionaire. Although he is not the leading role in the movie, the character is portrayed very real in my opinion. According to the dialogues in the movie, we can know a lot of him.
He was an excellent boxer in the past, so he has a strong body. He also works with a good brain, so he can own great wealth. Now we can say Yuri is a successful man in business.
When disaster comes, a man true self is showed out obviously. In the whole process of escape, he is always very resolute. After getting the message that the No.3 boat is without hope, he strikes managers down and leads all the people running to the No.4 boat. At that time, he shows his good judgment. So in terms of ability, Yuri is an excellent man.
Many people describe him with selfishness and greed. Maybe it’s
true. But I think he isn’t without a single redeeming feature. On the
air, he looks the picture with his wife and children, and he calls his valentine “girl friend”, never “lover”. Obviously he loves his wife
and children deeply. For leaving his valentine behind, I consider there is no mistake because they have no love all along. As a father, he takes good care of his two sons; especially at last he
sacrifices himself for pushing his son to the boat. At least Yuri is a great father and good men loving his families deeply.
范文三:英语高中作文影评
篇一:英语作文点评
I Have a Dream
信阳市第三职业高级中学三(3)班 孙鹏丽
Almost every student has a colorful dream , so do I .I want to be a wealth? women .
Perhaps you will be surprised at my dream . I want to explain something about it .
My hometown it so poor that many young people have to leave home to make a living in big cities , leaving their children alone at home . That is not good to them . For lack of their parents’(转 载 于:wWW.xlTkWJ.Com 小 龙文 档
网:英语高中作文影评) take care? , some of them
become shy and awkward?,and some even
become criminals .
Therefore , if I can become a successful woman , I will set up my own company and many factories in my hometown . Then our villagers can
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get a job and steady income. At that time , they can live a happy life with their families , and avoid leaving home and the divide? from
their children . If that’s the case , my hometown
will become beautiful and prosperous .
As far as I’m concerned , only having a
dream is not enough , in order to realize my dream , I will be sure to seize every minute to study hard to make a good base to enter the society , for my dream , for my hometown and for my motherland .
点评:
1)妙语锦囊: be surprised at ...对??感到意外;
so...that...如此??以致?? ;make a living谟生;
leave ...alone把某人独自留下;set up建立;live a happy
life过幸福的生活;in order to...为了??;make a good
base打好基础。
2、 亮点展示:文章的篇幅不长,却给人以跌宕起伏之感。
这是因为小作者对文章的结构进行了精心的设计,并铺以关
键性的过渡词。如:perhaps you...或许你会??;therefore
因此;if that’s the case如果那样的话;as far as I’
m concerned就我而言。
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3、不足之处:?wealth是名词,应换成形容词wealthy。
?take care是短语动词,应将take去掉,保留名词care。
?此处应是误用:awkward是指“笨拙,不熟练”,作者想表
达的应该是“害羞胆小”所以用cowardly。?divide作名词时,
不是“分离”,而是“分水岭”的意思,故应换成separation。
4、总结:“文章情真”,小作者以细腻的笔调写出了自己
对梦想的追求。对文章的结构,小作者也进行了精心的安排,
给人以跌宕起伏之感。更为可贵的是:小作者能从身边所观
察到的现象引出了“留守儿童”这一敏感话题,叫人深思。作
为一篇课堂命题作文,小作者能在有限的时间里写出这样的
文章,实属难得。
指导教师:刘凤
篇二:英语作文电影《2012》观后感
Yuri
After finishing the movie 2012, a character left a deep impression on me. The character is Yuri, the Russian billionaire. Although he is not the leading role in the movie, the character is portrayed very real in my opinion. According to the dialogues in the movie, we can know a lot of him.
He was an excellent boxer in the past, so he has a strong body. He also works with a good brain, so he can own great
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wealth. Now we can say Yuri is a successful man in business.
When disaster comes, a man true self is showed out obviously. In the whole process of escape, he is always very resolute. After getting the message that the No.3 boat is without hope, he strikes managers down and leads all the people running to the No.4 boat. At that time, he shows his good judgment. So in terms of ability, Yuri is an excellent man.
Many people describe him with selfishness and greed. Maybe it’s true. But I think he isn’t without a single
redeeming feature. On the air, he looks the picture with his wife and children, and he calls his valentine “girl friend”, never “lover”. Obviously he loves his wife and children
deeply. For leaving his valentine behind, I consider there is no mistake because they have no love all along. As a father, he takes good care of his two sons; especially at last he
sacrifices himself for pushing his son to the boat. At least Yuri is a great father and good men loving his families deeply.
篇三:高中英语写作讲评
在高中英语教学中,语言输出是体现学生语言运用能力的
重要环节,而作文是评价学生语言运用能力的重要手段,提
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高学生的写作能力对提高学生对英语语言的认识和运用具有重要的意义。很多高中英语教师并没有意识到作文讲评课的重要性,往往只是把作文改完发给学生,让学生背诵就算完成了任务。学生不清楚自己的作文好在哪里,哪里需要改进、提高。教师下了不少功夫,可学生的语言运用能力并没有本质的提高。笔者根据自身经验总结出上好作文讲评课的准备和导学案的设计提出以下几点建议:
一、要精心备课 科学的作文讲评要求教师在课前精心准备,一是对作文本身进行分析;二是对学生错词错句情况进行统计分析,做到心中有数,目的明确。这样做能够加强讲评时的针对性和有效性。教师要对作文的类型、文体进行分析,分析试题的命题思路、考查角度和意图以及答题思路和技巧。要对学生的作文写作情况进行分析;逐项分析学生出现的错误及原因,了解学生对某个知识点的掌握程度;分析学生写作思路,正确的和错误的都要分析,以了解学生在平时学习中的弱点。
二、要触类旁通、以点带面 学生在作文写作中不可能只就某一个单词、短语或固定句式在写作中的应用,要尽可能地使学生由知识记忆向应用能力转化。因此,教师应该将这些知识点归类整理,锻炼学生的一句多译能力,尽可能使学生运用、掌握更多的句式和知识点,帮助学生形成一个完整的知识系统。通过作文考查知识的系统化,帮助学生举一反
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三、触类旁通。如,同样的第一点、第二点,学生可以用firstly、secondly,也可以用firstly、besides或what'smore等等。
三、优化讲评过程 必须重视导学案的设计,合理安排教学步骤,充分发挥学生的主体地位。积极高效的作文讲评课也应该是高水平的综合复习课,通过讲评有助于学生对所学知识进行巩固、提高,构建知识结构,提高学生解决问题的能力。教师在讲评作文时要营造和谐宽松的课堂气氛,对于学生好的句子要多给予肯定和表扬,对于学生的错句要不点名的批评,指出合理的改进建议,善于发现学生写作中的闪光点,从而调动学生的学习兴趣。 课堂实施过程,其中导学案的设计是重中之重。英语教师在准备作文讲评课导学案时一定要从以上几点出发,优化导学案。
作文讲评课导学案应该由以下四个部分组成: 第一,审题。首先要帮助学生分析作文题材、时态、人称和文中要出现的重难点短语、句式以及对文章分段。这一过程侧重于对学生写作习惯的培养,教师应该通过反复的练习和探究培养学生良好的思维习惯,使学生在拿到试卷后知道自己应该先做什么,后做什么。 第二,典型错误分析。教师可以从学生的作文中挑出一些有代表性的错句,分为谓语重复、词性误用、中式翻译等几方面,每种举两到三个错句。由学生指出问题并改正,并设置实践检验环节,举相似的句子由学生
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翻译成英语,加深学生对所犯语言错误的印象,降低再犯同类错误的机率。使学生在纠错和练习中巩固所学知识,提高对语言的理解和运用能力。这一过程可以展示在大屏幕上,同时要给学生足够的分析问题的时间,并由学生来解决问题,教师只起到引导的作用。值得注意的是,教师可以用眼神提醒犯错误的学生并指出需要改进的地方,但不能提学生的名字,否则会打击学生的积极性,害怕犯错而厌恶写作。 第三,美化句子。这一部分主要针对能力较强的学生。教师可以列举学生作文中的两个简单句或并列句,由学生来美化。可以美化为
Chinaisanoldcountrywhichhasahistoryof5000years.这样就从两个简单句变成了一个复杂句,既体现了学生的能力,又有助于学生对定语从句等复杂句的理解和运用。教师可以鼓励学生充分利用平日所学知识对句子美化、同时培养学生一句多译的能力,而不是局限在一两个句式、短语上。还要展示学生写作中的佳句,并标出学生姓名,由学生和教师共同分析点评。 第四,巩固提高。这一部分既可以当堂练习,也可以布置为作业。教师应该设计一篇与讲评作文相似的题目,由学生来完成,目的就在于对课堂讲评内容的巩固和提高。学生可以避免犯过的错误,自然而然地运用或借鉴优秀的句式或短语来美化句子,提高自己的写作水平。
在这一部分的作文批改阶段教师应该放手让同桌之间或同
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学之间结对互批。这能够培养学生的自我诊断意识、提高学生对错句的识别和修改能力。正所谓“当局者迷,旁观者清”,学生往往发现不了自己作文中的问题,但是看别人的往往能够发现不当之处。教师要指导学生从几方面来分析别人的作文,鼓励学生去发现和改正其他同学的错误,通过锻炼不断提高自身语言运用的准确性。上交后再由教师做最后的评判,定期评价学生的进步与不足,通过不断的练习使学生取长补短、养成良好的写作习惯,进而获得进步的快乐。
英语作文讲评具有鉴定、反馈和引导学生的作用,对提高高中生的语言运用能力有着重要的作用。只要坚持作文练习与讲评,学生的英语应用能力必然会有巨大的进步。
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范文四:影评英语作文 高中英语作文影评
影评英语作文 高中英语作文影评
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