范文一:雅思小作文地图题
雅思小作文地图题
篇一:雅思小作文地图题范文
现在停车场改成了一个剧院。
The car park has been removed and replaced by a theatre.
城镇A的家庭数量从1937年到2020年将翻一番。
The number of homes in Town A is likely to double
(is likely to= is predicted to /is estimated to/is projected to/is
expected to )
又可为:
It is likely that the number of homes in Town A will double.
(it is likely that = it is predicted/estimated/projected/ expected
that?..)
细节变化
地图每个细节变化都要提到,不要忽视一个细节
语态
雅思小作文地图题写作用被动语态,因为叙述的是一个事实,
被动语态表达的更加的清晰,准确。
如: 2000年在城镇A 新建了一个医院:A new hospital was
established in Town
A in 2000.
2014年开始,流程图与地图题的频率已经于其他图表题的频
率不相上下,甚至有超过他们的趋势,2014年截止9月20日地
图题已经考了4次,流程图也是4次。你还在备考时忽略这两种
图吗,
地图题句式总结:
1. A lies/is situated in/is located in/on/to the east of B.
A 位于B的东面
2.A covers an area of about?.square meters/ hectares.
A的面积大概有。。。平方米/公顷
A covers a small area in 1980.
在1980年 A的面积很小。
3.A, which used to be located in?., is replaced by?.
原本位于。。。的A由。。。取代
4. next to/ adjacent to B, A remains unchanged throughout the period.
毗邻B的A在这期间没变。
5. It is clear/apparent/evident that the sharpest difference lies in?
很明显,最大的不同在于。。。
6. The map describes how a village/dock called ? expanded/developed from ? to?
地图描述了一个叫。。。的小镇/码头 由。。。扩大到。。。
7. A disappeared/vanished in 1990, when?.
1990年A消失了,在那时。。。
第一段改写题目。
第二段总体概述。
第三段没有变化的部分。
第四段发生变化的部分。
地图题就是这么简单~你学会了吗,
The map describes how a village named Strokeford developed from 1930 to 2010. It is clear that the sharpest difference is that large stretches of farmland in 1930 were replaced by houses in 2010. It is also evident that the Gardens in 1930 disappeared and a retirement home was erected in that place.
River Stoke which lies to the east of the village and the Bridge, which is located to the north of the village, remained the same throughout the four score years. A road whi
ch cuts through the village and which is connected to the bridge is another facility which remained largely unchanged.
Two shops, one big and another small, situated along the road vanished and instead some new homes were built along a newly-built side road. The primary school expanded, with two large houses lying by its side. The retirement home in 2010 was on the original site of the gardens.
地图描述了一个叫Strokeford的村庄从1930年到2010年的发
展。
地图很清晰的显示了最大的变化是1930年的大片农田变成了
2010年的住宅。同样明显变化是1930年的花园在2010年变成了
疗养院。
位于村庄东面的stoke河和位于村庄北面的大桥在80年间都没
有变化。贯穿小镇的公路,与桥相连,是另一个仍然没有变化的
设施。
之前在路边的一大一小两个商店消失了,取代它们的是一些新
的住宅,沿着新建小路建成。小学面积扩大了,边上建起了两间
大教室。2010年公园原址建起了一个养老院。
WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the development of the village of
Kelsby between 1780 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main
features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
首先注意两个点:
1. 时态:本文的时间是明确的,是三个过去的时间,因此全文
应当使用一般过去时。有些地图会有将来的规划,那么则应使用
相应的一般将来时。
2. 顺序:该图属于动态的地图题,这种类型的地图题一律按照
时间顺序来写。在这道题中,也就是按照图的顺序依次来写,不
要把元素拆开。如果是静态的地图题(即不涉及时间变化的题型),则按照空间顺序来写。
下面跟着上海环球雅思的老师一起来分析文章的写作。
第一段:引言段。
引言段就是把题目进行改写。原文中的diagram,可以替换成
three maps/ illustrations.原文中的shows,可以改为illustrate/ demonstrate/ indicate等词。宾语development,可以替换成
changes,也可以改为宾语从句how the village of Kelsby developed/
changed. 题目中给出的时间比较模糊,可以具体化为in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
【例文】The three maps illustrate how the village of Kelsby
changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
第二段:介绍1780年的情况。
1780年的情况只涉及到静态的数据,因此只需要用存在句即可
表达,不涉及任何变化的单词。但是,考生非常容易把这些元素
全部用there be这个句型来表达,从而导致句式单一。表示存在
的句型除了therebe之外,还有非常简单的have句型,还有lie/ be located/ be situated 这样的结构。另外还有一种倒装句型,比如
“桌子上面有一本书”,可以翻译为on the desk is a book.
除此之外,要注意几个元素的顺序问题。这里有四大元素:住
宅区homes,树林woods
,农
场farms,还有一条河流river。理论上只要按照一定的空间顺序
(比如顺时针、逆时针,从左到右)都是可以的,但是要考虑家
庭数量的变化是导致其它所有变化的根本原因,因此建议先写。
还有就是土地单位的表达,land是不可数名词,因此不能说
aland,只能说a piece of
land。为了表达更加精确,可以用a plot of land(一小块),a stretch
of(一长片),a large expanse of (一大片)。
另外还有注意方位词的表达。地图题中常用的方位词有:in the
east/ west/ south/ north of ? ; in the eastern/ western/ southern northern part of ?; 如果是在角落,可以用in the southwestern
corner of ? ; 在河流的上/下游:at the lower/ upper reaches of the river; 在河岸:alongside the riverbank, 在河流的南端:at the
southern end of the river.
【例文】In 1780, Kelsby had only 100 homes. There was a large expanse of woods in the eastern part of the village and four plots of farmland in the centre. In the west was a river flowing from north to south.
第三段:介绍1860年的变化。
这一年的变化并没有时间先后,因此还是按照空间顺序来进行。
图上多了一个元素,即道路和桥梁的修建。需要特别注意的是,
因为考虑到和上文的呼应,这两个元素一定要放在后面讲,而家
庭数量的增加和农场、树林面积的减少应当先讲。这个原则我们
简称叫“先拆后建”原则、
第二点是时间的表达问题。上文中刚刚出现过in 1780,这里还
是用in 1860的话,句式上就会出现重复。因此可以按照动态图里
面学过的表达方法,把年份用作主语,用saw/ witnessed这两个
词把数据引出来。
第三点是“建”这个词的英文表达。常见的词有build, construct(一般建筑物),
erect(高大的建筑物),establish/ set up(无建筑的物体或抽象
的机构),pave(道路的修建)。另外,如果涉及到拆除,则需要
记住demolish, pull down, knock down 这些单词。需要重点指出的
是,这些表示“建”和“拆”的词都应当使用被动语态,这一点
和普通流程图是一致的。
【例文】The year 1860 saw a doubling of the number of homes,
but the size of farmland and woods was halved. In the same year, a
bridge was constructed over the river and a road was paved linking
the river to the residences.
第四段:介绍2000年的变化。
首先还是时间的表达,这里可以再换一种结构,比如140 years later/ After 140 years。首先还是“先拆后建”,先说树林农场彻底
消失,然后在交代新的元素:学校和操场。要记住的是,道路是
不需要交代方位的,只需要把起点和终点表达出来即可,用link A
to B或者connect A with B这类词组连接。因此,道路的描写应放
到学校、操场的后面。
【例文】140 years later, the number of homes more than doubled to 500, but farms and woods completely disappeared. In their places, several school
buildings and sports facilities were constructed at the south-eastern corner of the village, which were connected with the residential areas in the north via a newly-build road. Some shops opened up along the river bank and a large stretch of wetland for birds was established at the southern end of the river.
The maps below show the civic square of the town of Smallville in 1980 and
now.
图例虽然纷繁复杂,但是究其本质,第一张图永远在描述所谓
的“方位”,也就是,我们需要在这张图中描述清楚图中的东西南
北,各自坐落了什么事物。其余的图,永远在描述所谓的“变化”,
相当于在第一张图的草稿基础上,描述第二张图发生的“加变化”
和“减变化”,“恒定变化“以及“转化变化”。
搞定了这两组词汇的说法,地图题就再也不是让考生们闻风丧
胆的题目了。
第一组:方位词
在这个方面,需要注意的是,我们需要准备好两者之间的所有
可能的位置关系,除了最基本的A在B的东西南北方以外,还需
要掌握一些特定的限定表达,比如A在B的角落等等。基础表达:
A在B的东西南北方(内部/接壤/不接触):A is in /on / to the
east/west/south/north of B.
高阶表达:
A在B的东西南北方(内部):A is in the
eastern/southern/western/northern partof B.
A在B的东西南北角落:A is at/in the
eastern/southern/western/northerncorner of B.
A坐落于距离B??远处:A is(数字)kilometers / miles to the east / west / south /north of B.
A和B很近:A is near /next to /close to B.
A在B的对面:A is opposite / on the opposite side of B
第二组:变化词
其实,地图题目当中蕴涵的变化,从本质来说,无非是三种,
一种为所谓的“加变化”也就是在原本基础上出现了新增的部分,
另一种为“减变化”,也就是原本的内容出现了缩减。所谓“恒定
表达”,即前后没有发生变化。还有一种涉及到了两种内容之间的
转化,被称之为“转化表达”。
加变化:
A尺寸上变大了?:The size of A has been enlarged by?
A被建造在B:A is constructed / established in B.
A被增建在B:A is added to B.
减变化:
篇二:雅思小作文详解6:地图题
【9分作文盛宴】考官华丽雅思小作文详解6:地图题
Simon是英国曼彻斯特的前雅思考官,由于创办雅思考试学习
网站而在全世界的考生中越来越有名气。其网站上提供大量关于
复习雅思的技巧以及颠覆性的建议,甚至还有不少Simon本人亲
笔写的满分作文。这些满分作文由于出自英国考官之手,非常地
道,言简意赅,和中国考生惯用的千篇一律的模板作文相比,着
实让人眼前一亮。点课台的Phoebe老师深感有义务要让孩子们接
触到真正可以提分的好作文,所以以后会频繁地帮大家整理并总
结这些满分作文的精华,相信大家都可以扔掉模板,写出高分作
文!
今天要分析的题目是地图——Maps。
有的学生说,地图题型相对不常见,所以备考可以忽略。针对
这种想法,Simon是这样说的:While it’s true that graphs and
charts are the most common types of question, I think it would
be very unwise
not to prepare for diagrams and maps too. What happens if you
get one of these
questions in your test and you haven’t prepared for it?
虽然不常见,但是如果平时不做任何准备,万一考到后果不堪
设想。其实地图题并没有大家想象地那么难,只要花时间仔细研
究一下Simon的范文,大家都能写出一篇好作文。
请看今天的题目,就是下面这个地图:
写作文之前,要先Plan your structure,Simon建议地图题依然
沿用4段式:
1. Introduction: what does the chart show?
2. Overview / summary: what are the most noticeable features?
3. Specific details: try to write 2 paragraphs.
接下来说地图题最难的地方——如何准确读出图中所给信息,
我们就先来分析一下,从这个地图上我们可写的信息有哪些,首
先地图上为数不多的单词或数字不可遗漏,上方那句是说这张图
展现了一个叫做Chorleywood的村庄在1868年到1994年之间的
发展情况。然后很清楚地能看出,在四个不同的时期,它的交通
设施有明显的改善。居民都住在各种路的旁边。这些只是大概的
Overview,足够写出前两段了,那还有哪些具体的细节,能够写进
第三、四段中呢?大家自己再仔细看地图,从中找中可写的Details。
接下来贴出完整满分范文,大家读的时候看一下Simon按照什
么order、挑出哪些细节来描述的:
The map shows the growth of a village called Chorleywood between 1868 and
1994.
It is clear that the village grew as the transport infrastructure
was
improved. Four periods of development are shown on the map, and each of the populated areas is near to the main roads, the railway or the motorway.
From 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood covered a small area next to one of the main
roads. Chorleywood Park and Golf Course is now located next to this original village area. The village grew along the main road to the south between 1883 and
1922, and in 1909 a railway line was built crossing this area from west to east.
Chorleywood station is in this part of the village.
The expansion of Chorleywood continued to the east and west alongside the
railway line until 1970. At that time, a motorway was built to the east of the
village, and from 1970 to 1994, further development of the village took place
around motorway intersections with the railway and one of the main roads.
最后是词汇总结:
growth:Simon在对题目进行复述的时候用growth替换了
development,这个用法大家要记住。
infrastructure:极其高频,常出现于写作和阅读,“设施”
populated:大家平时很少用形容词的形式,其英文释意为“furnished with inhabitants,即”有人居住的“
original:最初的,原始的
intersections with:和...相交,交叉路口,听力地图题中也很常见
今天先到这儿,希望Simon的建议对大家有所帮助,以后不再怕遇见地图题,下期见~
需要更多写作技巧的点击这里~
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篇三:雅思写作地图题写作技巧
地图题写作在很多书上都没有系统的指导,它有别于数据图,
构思方面没有数据图那么复杂,但在语言驾驭,很多学生都感到
很陌生。怎么写地图题,将在下文中一一来解构。
地图题分两种,一种为地理变迁题,一种为选址题。首先我们
来看地理变迁题,它描述的是一个地方(多为一个城镇)在一段
时间的发展变化。如2006年9月A 类 TASK 1, 剑1TEST
4。就这些图形,我们来总结地理变迁题的写作要点。
时态
如果地图题反映的是一个地方在过去的一段时间的变化,文章
用一般过去时。如果地图题反映的是一个地方在将来一段时间的
变化趋势,文章用一般将来时或表“估计”的词汇。如果地图题
反映的是一个地方从过去到现在的变化,可用现完成时。
如:现在停车场改成了一个剧院。
The car park has been removed and replaced by a theatre.
城镇A的家庭数量从1937年到2020年将翻一番。
The number of homes in Town A is likely to double(is likely to= is predicted to /is estimated to/is projected to/is expected to )
又可为:
It is likely that the number of homes in Town A will double.(it is likely that = it is predicted/estimated/projected/ expected that?..)
细节变化
地图每个细节变化都要提到,不要忽视一个细节
语态
地图题用被动语态
如: 2000年在城镇A 新建了一个医院:A new hospital was established in Town A in 2000. 地图题的书写顺序:时间顺序和空
间顺序
如2006年9月A 类TASK 1
The map shows the development of the village of Kelsbey
between 1780 and 2000.
这篇文章大体框架按时间顺序,BODY 分三段分别描述:1780
年村庄,1860村庄, 2000年村庄。对每一年的描述,如1780年
村庄,我们要注意按方位顺序来描述,否则文章会出现混乱。这
就需要考生在考前对方位词进行总结。地图题的方位我们说东西
南北,不说成左右。
A在B 的东方/西方/南方/北方
A is/ lies/ is located/ is situated in/on / to the
east/west/south/north of B
(in 表A 在B 内部, ON 表A 和B接壤,TO 表A 和B 分开)
A 在B 内部的某个部位
A is in the eastern/ southern/ western/ northern part of B.
A在B 西北部的120 千米处
A lies 120 km to the northwest of B.
A 在B?..角落
A is at/in the south-eastern corner of B ( at 表示A 在B 外部, in
表A 在B 内部) 在河流或道路的南边/北边等
On the south/southern side of the river
On both sides of the road
On the other side
临近马路的地区 The area adjacent to/ near /next to/ just off the
road
在道路或河流的最南端 At the southern end of the river
A 在B 的对面 A is on the opposite side of B/ A is opposite B
A 在B 东部的边界上(A 在B外部)A is on the eastern border of B
A 在B 东部边缘上 (A 在B 内部)A is on/ along the eastern edge of B
“变化”词汇
地图题描述的是一个地区的变化,那么“变化”词汇必须过关。
分析发现,变化包括两种:图形原有事物的改变,图形新添事
物。
我们先看图形原有事物的改变:
原有事物可说成: The original/previous/former garden
原有事物尺寸上变大/变小:
The size of the library has been
enlarged/extended/halved/reduced by half
原有事物在数量上增多或减少:
The number of homes has increased/risen/grown/reduced /decreased/dropped/fallen/
doubled/ tripled/ quadrupled to 500.
原有事物没了:
The farms completely disappeared/were removed.
原有事物被改为:
A becomes B
A is
transformed/reconstructed/redeveloped/converted/changed/turned over to/ into B
A is replaced /substituted by B = A gives way to B
图形新添事物
A newly-built road
A new car park was built/established/set
up/constructed/completed and opened in the middle of B
A new IT centre has been added to the library
The year 2000 saw two additions to the land: a pond in the northern part and a vegetable garden on the opposite side.
地图题第二类为选址题 如剑5 TEST 3 TASK 1
The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. 为一个城镇的超市选址, 有两个位置 S1 和S2 供选择。选址题并不难写,主要注意两点:
位置描述
优缺点
这篇文章我们BODY段可分两段,分别陈述:
S1的位置及位置相应的优缺点
S2的位置及位置相应的优缺点
其中表位置的方位词已在前文有总结,
同理, 2006 年2 月A 类Task 1: The diagram below shows the
problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions
我们BODY 段可分两段,分别陈述:
Solution 1 的解决方案和相应的优缺点
Solution 2 的解决方案和相应的优缺点
其中,解决方案实际还是要涉及一些方位词。
总之,对于地理变迁题,建议考生考前要充分的掌握上述五点,勤加练习,选址题则把握位置和优缺点两个要害,地图题的写作就会明朗化。
地图题在雅思小作文写作中可以说考的频次非常低,顶多一年一次而已。尽管如此,我们也不能忘了这方面写作的准备,否则你会觉得它很难而在雅思实际考试中乱了阵脚。小编对此就有血的教训。备考时忽视了地图题,结果考试的时候就碰上了。
其实,地图题写作并没有你想象的那么难啦。请问,你在生活中有没有“选房”或“选校”的经历呢,有没有想过你“家乡近些年发生的变化”呢,大家都有吧~顺此,我就要再问你了,若有两处房子或两所学校供你选择的话你会考虑哪些因素进行比对呢,你家乡从过去到现在到底发生了哪些具体的变化呢,好好想想吧。一通百通,如你对此相通了,雅思地图题的解题思路也就有了、通了~纵观历次雅思地图题写作,我们不难发现无非就是“两位置方案的二选一”或“某处事物新旧变迁的过程描述”。不管“二选一”还是“过程描述”,请注意,一定不要忘了要结合地图中所体现的“人文与地理环境”进行相互的“比较与对比”且体现“比对结果”;而这里的比对,前者是“横向比对”,强调各自“优缺点比对”,后者则是“纵向比对”,强调“新旧变化”。解题思路有了,那么剩下的是语言上的事情了。在语言上,请你注意以下几个方面:首先,平时要多积累表示“方位、比对、变化”等方面的词汇和句子表达;其次,要注意时态的选择,“二选一”型常用一般现在时态,而“过程描述”型则要视题目而定,往往综合运用一般过去时态、一般现在时态和现在完成时态;最后,要注意语态的把握,要主动与被动相互结合运用,记住适当被动能给考官好印象,但切忌出现人称代词。
请结合小编上述内容,操练以下经博主改编成的地图题范文选词填空练习,以加强你的雅思地图题写作。(笔者这里特注,题目与范文都来自《剑5》TEST3 中的TASK 1)
The picture illustrates/demonstrates/compares two possible locations for a supermarket (which is) planned in the town of Garlsdon with a population of 65,000.
One proposed site is in the countryside, northwest of Gralsdon. One advantage for this plan is that it is close to the residential areas in the north, therefore the local inhabitants have an easy access to it. What is more, the place is twelve kilometres away from Hindon where 10,000 residents live. These people are potential customers for this market.
The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
Another proposed location is located/situated in the centre of Garlsdon ( There is no traffic in this zone). One advantage for this place is that local residents/inhabitants/people are among the potentail customers. What is more, it is 25 km northwest Cransdon( population 29,000) and northeast Brandson. For these reason, there will be a better prospect for business and more potential customers.
The map reveals two possible locations of a supermarket for town of Garlsdon with a population of 65,000.
It can seen from the picture that S1(one suggested location) is a
cite/place in the countryside which is closer to the town of Hindon where approximately 1000 local residents live and which is 12 kilometers to the northwest of Garlsdon. Also noteworthy is the fact that this cite is located near maioad, therefore, potential customers have an easy access to this place by car.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first potential location ( ____) is outside the town itself, and is sited just off _____to the town of Hindon, lying 12 kms to the north-west. This site is in the ______and so would be able to accommodate a lot of car parking. This would make it _____ to shoppers from both Hindon and Garlsdon who could travel by car. As it is also close to the railway line linking the towns to Cransdon (25 km to the south-east), a potentially_____ number of shoppers would also be able to travel by ____.
________, the suggested location, _____, is right in the town centre, which would be good for local residents. Theorically the store could be accessed by road or rail from the surrounding towns,
including Bransdon, _____as the central area is a _____ zone, cars would be ____ to park and access would be difficult.
_______, neither site is appropriate for all the towns, but for customers in Cransdon, Hindon and Garlsdon, the out-of-town site (S1) would probably offer ____ advantages.
The first potential location (S1) is outside the town itself, and is sited just off the main road to the town of Hindon, lying 12 kms to the north-west. This site is in the countryside and so would be able to accommodate a lot of car parking. This would make it accessable to shoppers from both Hindon and Garlsdon who could travel by car. As it is also close to the railway line linking the who towns to Cransdon (25 km to the south-east), a potentially large number of shoppers would also be able to travel by train.
In contrast, the suggested location, S2, is right in the town centre, which would be good for local
residents. Theorically the store could be accessed by road or rail from the surrounding towns, including Bransdon, but as the central area is a no-traffic zone, cars would be unable to park and access would be difficult.
Overall, neither site is appropriate for all the towns, but for customers in Cransdon, Hindon and Garlsdon, the out-of-town site (S1) would probably offer more advantages.
范文二:雅思小作文地图写作
雅思写作 task 1 地图 Corrine
地 图 写 作
地图写作套句
一(开头段
1. The two maps display/describe the differences/changes between the exiting and the future layout
of ________. It is obvious that/as can be seen from the maps that some locations of buildings
will be changed or removed and some buildings will be added. 2(The new/planned layout of _____in____(year) is considerably different from that in ____(year).
3. The new/planned layout of _____in____(year) differs considerably from that in ____(year).
二(中间段
1. 位于
1 A be located at the junction of C and D.
2.At the junction of A and B, there lies C/ there is a C. 3.The A at the junction of B and C
4.The A standing along the B
5 The A along the B street
6 The A beside the original C
7.The A between C and D
8. In the northwest of A, there lies a B.
2. 取代
1. The A will substitute for B, whereas A will substitute for B. 2. The A well be removed.
3. The A will be shifted to the original location of B. 4. The A will be moved to the original location of B. 5. A will be constructed/built/ there instead.
6. The A turns to be B.
7.The A replace the former B.
3. 新增 a A will be added.
4. 不变1. The A remain the same as before.
2. The A is still there.
1
雅思写作 task 1 地图 Corrine
三(结尾段
1. In the light of the two maps, we can find the redevelopment of the _____is a great project and
the arrangement of the new one is more reasonable/ advantageous/ beautiful.
2. Overall, the new arrangement looks more advantageous and beautiful than the old one for the
development of _____.
3. The _____has a new image.
四(写作技巧
1. 被动语态
2(连接词
To start with
While/whereas
in addition /meanwhile
last
which
五(其他
Link A and B
Divide A into
On the edge of
Road cross river
Bridge over river, link …with
Residential area
Commercial buildings
2
范文三:雅思小作文地图题
雅思小作文题型多样,其中就包括地图题,本文将详细讲解雅思小作文地图题写作技巧。 评分标准
?TA – Task Achievement 任务完成情况
?CC – Coherence and Cohesion 意合与形合
?LR – Lexical Resource 词汇资源
?GRA – Grammatical Range and Accuracy 语法广度与精确度
审题
The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and
present.
文章结构
第一段
交待写作目的
第二段
描述1995年的地图
第三段
meet the construction drawings provided strength and workability of construction requirements, mixing ratio must be determined by test. Construction when you need to change the mix of cementitious material, retesting, and submitted to the supervisor for approval. (2) mixing of cementitious materials, should be carried out strictly according to the test to determine the ingredients of ingredients, no tampering, ingredient weighing errors should be allowed subject to the following: cement ? 2%; sand, gravel is ? 3%, water, additives ? 1%. (3) the cementitious material in the mixing process should remain of coarse and fine aggregate water stability, according to changes in moisture content of aggregate and adjust water to ensure the accuracy of the water/cement ratio. (4) mixing time of cementitious materials: mechanical mixing of not less than 2~3min, not artificial mix. Local small artificial mixture of dry mix at least three times, then wet-mix to uniform color, can be used. (5) with cementitious materials should be mixed. Cementitious materials allowed interval should be determined through experiments, or refer to the table selected. Segregation during transport and storage, water mortar and masonry before mixing again, initial setting of cementitious materials shall not be used. Cementitious materials allow breaks when laying temperature (?) allowed interval (min), ordinary Portland cement and slag Portland cement 20~309012010~201351805~10195/8.4.5 and pozzolana cement masonry masonry with Pu casting method, the process is: masonry preparation – material selection ? puts pulp placed stone ? ... 8.5 8.5.1 masonry mortar for construction of masonry sand in the sand, and sift the sand shall not include grass-roots and other debris. Sand clay does not exceed 5%. Mixing of mortar 350L mortar mixer. Mixing time, finished feeding, and shall not be less than 1.5min, the batching process, cement batching error control within ? 5%. Mortar mix used cement mortar used in the blended into 3h, such as a temperature of over 30 ? c during the construction period, within 2H of the blended into finished, such as the phenomenon of cement mortar, mix again in front of the building. 8.5.2 brick material according to the design requirements, using precast concrete hollow brick, sourced locally. Brick games on to the site, with the supervision and sampling personnel of party a random sampling, compression test, qualified before the masonry. 8.5.3 masonry (1) water wet prior to brick and masonry, and moisture control in 10~10%, non-dried bricks on the wall. (2) according to the axis of the walls of the brick walls where the pop-up and the sideline, bricks, build the first pendulum, from the mortar joint width when laid brick, pay attention to window location effect of mortar joint. Seven separate masonry
拿现在的地图和95年的做对比
第四段
总结全文
第一段
This report compares how the village of Ryemouth has developed and changed since the year of 1995.
题目:The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
第二段
As is clearly described in the first picture, Ryemouth was a coastal city which was divided into three parts by two roads. In the southern part, there was a fishing port on the sea, with a fish market located in the north and a coffee shop in the north-east. A block of shops was situated on the opposite side of the market?
第三段
In the second picture, the village changed a lot. The fishing port has been removed and the fish market is replaced by apartments. Several restaurants also occupy the place of the shops on the roadside. Moreover, a parking lot is newly built on the east of the hotel. In addition, ?
第四段
Overall, based on the brief description above, it is clear that the general layout of the village does not change a lot, while some newly-built facilities and housing has ornamented the small village.
meet the construction drawings provided strength and workability of construction requirements, mixing ratio must be determined by test. Construction when you need to change the mix of cementitious material, retesting, and submitted to the supervisor for approval. (2) mixing of cementitious materials, should be carried out strictly according to the test to determine the ingredients of ingredients, no tampering, ingredient weighing errors should be allowed subject to the following: cement ? 2%; sand, gravel is ? 3%, water, additives ? 1%. (3) the cementitious material in the mixing process should remain of coarse and fine aggregate water stability, according to changes in moisture content of aggregate and adjust water to ensure the accuracy of the water/cement ratio. (4) mixing time of cementitious materials: mechanical mixing of not less than 2~3min, not artificial mix. Local small artificial mixture of dry mix at least three times, then wet-mix to uniform color, can be used. (5) with cementitious materials should be mixed. Cementitious materials allowed interval should be determined through experiments, or refer to the table selected. Segregation during transport and storage, water mortar and masonry before mixing again, initial setting of cementitious materials shall not be used. Cementitious materials allow breaks when laying temperature (?) allowed interval (min), ordinary Portland cement and slag Portland cement 20~309012010~201351805~10195/8.4.5 and pozzolana cement masonry masonry with Pu casting method, the process is: masonry preparation – material selection ? puts pulp placed stone ? ... 8.5 8.5.1 masonry mortar for construction of masonry sand in the sand, and sift the sand shall not include grass-roots and other debris. Sand clay does not exceed 5%. Mixing of mortar 350L mortar mixer. Mixing time, finished feeding, and shall not be less than 1.5min, the batching process, cement batching error control within ? 5%. Mortar mix used cement mortar used in the blended into 3h, such as a temperature of over 30 ? c during the construction period, within 2H of the blended into finished, such as the phenomenon of cement mortar, mix again in front of the building. 8.5.2 brick material according to the design requirements, using precast concrete hollow brick, sourced locally. Brick games on to the site, with the supervision and sampling personnel of party a random sampling, compression test, qualified before the masonry. 8.5.3 masonry (1) water wet prior to brick and masonry, and moisture control in 10~10%, non-dried bricks on the wall. (2) according to the axis of the walls of the brick walls where the pop-up and the sideline, bricks, build the first pendulum, from the mortar joint width when laid brick, pay attention to window location effect of mortar joint. Seven separate masonry
WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the development of the village of Kelsby between 1780 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
新东方樊黎明:A类雅思地图题写作攻略
首先注意两个点:
1. 时态:本文的时间是明确的,是三个过去的时间,因此全文应当使用一般过去时。
有些地图会有将来的规划,那么则应使用相应的一般将来时。
2. 顺序:该图属于动态的地图题,这种类型的地图题一律按照时间顺序来写。在这道
题中,也就是按照图的顺序依次来写,不要把元素拆开。如果是静态的地图题(即不涉及时
间变化的题型),则按照空间顺序来写。
下面我们一起来分析文章的写作。
第一段:引言段。
引言段就是把题目进行改写。原文中的diagram,可以替换成three maps/ illustrations. 原
文中的shows,可以改为illustrate/ demonstrate/ indicate等词。宾语development,可以替
换成changes,也可以改为宾语从句how the village of Kelsby developed/ changed. 题目中给
出的时间比较模糊,可以具体化为in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
【例文】The three maps illustrate how the village of Kelsby changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
第二段:介绍1780年的情况。
1780年的情况只涉及到静态的数据,因此只需要用存在句即可表达,不涉及任何变化
的单词。但是,考生非常容易把这些元素全部用there be这个句型来表达,从而导致句式单
一。表示存在的句型除了there be之外,还有非常简单的have句型,还有lie/ be located/ be situated 这样的结构。另外还有一种倒装句型,比如“桌子上面有一本书”,可以翻译为on the desk is a book.
除此之外,要注意几个元素的顺序问题。这里有四大元素:住宅区homes,树林woods,
农场farms,还有一条河流river。理论上只要按照一定的空间顺序(比如顺时针、逆时针,从
s: masonry preparation ith Pu casting method, the process i–meet the construction drawings provided strength and workability of construction requirements, mixing ratio must be determined material selection ? puts pulp placed stone ? ... 8.5 8.5.1 masonry mortar for construction of masonry sand in the sand, and sift the sand shall not include grass-roots and other debris. Sand clay does not exceed 5%. Mixing of mortar 350L mortar mixer.by test. Construction when you need to change the mix of cementitious material, retesting, and submitted to the supervisor for Mixing time, finished feeding, and shall not be less than 1.5min, the batching process, cement batching error control within ?approval. (2) mixing of cementitious materials, should be carried out strictly according to the test to determine the ingredien 5%. Mortar mix used cement mortar used in the blended into 3h, such as a temperature of over 30 ? c during the construction pets of ingredients, no tampering, ingredient weighing errors should be allowed subject to the following: cement ? 2%; sand, gravriod, within 2H of the blended into finished, such as the phenomenon of cement mortar, mix again in front of the building. 8.5.el is ? 3%, water, additives ? 1%. (3) the cementitious material in the mixing process should remain of coarse and fine aggrega2 brick material according to the design requirements, using precast concrete hollow brick, sourced locally. Brick games on to te water stability, according to changes in moisture content of aggregate and adjust water to ensure the accuracy of the water/the site, with the supervision and sampling personnel of party a random sampling, compression test, qualified before the masonrcement ratio. (4) mixing time of cementitious materials: mechanical mixing of not less than 2~3min, not artificial mix. Local sy. 8.5.3 masonry (1) water wet prior to brick and masonry, and moisture control in 10~10%, non-dried bricks on the wall. (2) acmall artificial mixture of dry mix at least three times, then wet-mix to uniform color, can be used. (5) with cementitious matecording to the axis of the walls of the brick walls where the pop-up and the sideline, bricks, build the first pendulum, from trials should be mixed. Cementitious materials allowed interval should be determined through experiments, or refer to the table he mortar joint width when laid brick, pay attention to window location effect of mortar joint. Seven separate masonry selected. Segregation during transport and storage, water mortar and masonry before mixing again, initial setting of cementitious materials shall not be used. Cementitious materials allow breaks when laying temperature (?) allowed interval (min), ordinary Portland cement and slag Portland cement 20~309012010~201351805~10195/8.4.5 and pozzolana cement masonry masonry w
左到右)都是可以的,但是要考虑家庭数量的变化是导致其它所有变化的根本原因,因此建
议先写。
还有就是土地单位的表达,land是不可数名词,因此不能说a land,只能说a piece of land。
为了表达更加精确,可以用a plot of land(一小块),a stretch of(一长片),a large expanse of (一
大片)。
另外还有注意方位词的表达。地图题中常用的方位词有:in the east/ west/ south/ north
of ... ; in the eastern/ western/ southern northern part of ...; 如果是在角落,可以用in the
southwestern corner of ... ; 在河流的上/下游:at the lower/ upper reaches of the river; 在河岸:
alongside the riverbank, 在河流的南端:at the southern end of the river.
【例文】In 1780, Kelsby had only 100 homes. There was a large expanse of woods in the eastern part of the village and four plots of farmland in the centre. In the west was a river flowing
from north to south.
第三段:介绍1860年的变化。
这一年的变化并没有时间先后,因此还是按照空间顺序来进行。图上多了一个元素,即
道路和桥梁的修建。需要特别注意的是,因为考虑到和上文的呼应,这两个元素一定要放在
后面讲,而家庭数量的增加和农场、树林面积的减少应当先讲。这个原则我们简称叫“先拆
后建”原则、
第二点是时间的表达问题。上文中刚刚出现过in 1780,这里还是用in 1860的话,句式
上就会出现重复。因此可以按照动态图里面学过的表达方法,把年份用作主语,用saw/
witnessed这两个词把数据引出来。
第三点是“建”这个词的英文表达。常见的词有build, construct(一般建筑物),erect(高
大的建筑物),establish/ set up(无建筑的物体或抽象的机构),pave(道路的修建)。另外,如
果涉及到拆除,则需要记住demolish, pull down, knock down 这些单词。需要重点指出的是,
这些表示“建”和“拆”的词都应当使用被动语态,这一点和普通流程图是一致的。
【例文】The year 1860 saw a doubling of the number of homes, but the size of farmland and woods was halved. In the same year, a bridge was constructed over the river and a road was paved linking the river to the residences.
第四段:介绍2000年的变化。
首先还是时间的表达,这里可以再换一种结构,比如140 years later/ After 140 years。首
先还是“先拆后建”,先说树林农场彻底消失,然后在交代新的元素:学校和操场。要记住
的是,道路是不需要交代方位的,只需要把起点和终点表达出来即可,用link A to B或者
connect A with B这类词组连接。因此,道路的描写应放到学校、操场的后面。
【例文】140 years later, the number of homes more than doubled to 500, but farms and meet the construction drawings provided strength and workability of construction requirements, mixing ratio must be determined by test. Construction when you need to change the mix of cementitious material, retesting, and submitted to the supervisor for approval. (2) mixing of cementitious materials, should be carried out strictly according to the test to determine the ingredients of ingredients, no tampering, ingredient weighing errors should be allowed subject to the following: cement ? 2%; sand, gravel is ? 3%, water, additives ? 1%. (3) the cementitious material in the mixing process should remain of coarse and fine aggregate water stability, according to changes in moisture content of aggregate and adjust water to ensure the accuracy of the water/cement ratio. (4) mixing time of cementitious materials: mechanical mixing of not less than 2~3min, not artificial mix. Local small artificial mixture of dry mix at least three times, then wet-mix to uniform color, can be used. (5) with cementitious materials should be mixed. Cementitious materials allowed interval should be determined through experiments, or refer to the table selected. Segregation during transport and storage, water mortar and masonry before mixing again, initial setting of cementitious materials shall not be used. Cementitious materials allow breaks when laying temperature (?) allowed interval (min), ordinary Portland cement and slag Portland cement 20~309012010~201351805~10195/8.4.5 and pozzolana cement masonry masonry with Pu casting method, the process is: masonry preparation – material selection ? puts pulp placed stone ? ... 8.5 8.5.1 masonry mortar for construction of masonry sand in the sand, and sift the sand shall not include grass-roots and other debris. Sand clay does not exceed 5%. Mixing of mortar 350L mortar mixer. Mixing time, finished feeding, and shall not be less than 1.5min, the batching process, cement batching error control within ? 5%. Mortar mix used cement mortar used in the blended into 3h, such as a temperature of over 30 ? c during the construction period, within 2H of the blended into finished, such as the phenomenon of cement mortar, mix again in front of the building. 8.5.2 brick material according to the design requirements, using precast concrete hollow brick, sourced locally. Brick games on to the site, with the supervision and sampling personnel of party a random sampling, compression test, qualified before the masonry. 8.5.3 masonry (1) water wet prior to brick and masonry, and moisture control in 10~10%, non-dried bricks on the wall. (2) according to the axis of the walls of the brick walls where the pop-up and the sideline, bricks, build the first pendulum, from the mortar joint width when laid brick, pay attention to window location effect of mortar joint. Seven separate masonry
woods completely disappeared. In their places, several school buildings and sports facilities were
constructed at the south-eastern corner of the village, which were connected with the residential
areas in the north via a newly-build road. Some shops opened up along the river bank and a large
stretch of wetland for birds was established at the southern end of the river.
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范文四:雅思小作文地图题给分
雅思小作文地图题给分
篇一:雅思小作文地图题
雅思小作文题型多样,其中就包括地图题,本文将详细讲解雅思小作文地图题写作技巧。 评分标准
?TA – Task Achievement 任务完成情况
?CC – Coherence and Cohesion 意合与形合
?LR – Lexical Resource 词汇资源
?GRA – Grammatical Range and Accuracy 语法广度与精确度
审题
The map below shows the development of the village of
Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
文章结构
第一段
交待写(本文来自:www.bdFqY.cOM 千 叶帆文 摘:雅思小作文地图题给分)作目的
第二段
描述1995年的地图
第三段
拿现在的地图和95年的做对比
第四段
总结全文
第一段
This report compares how the village of Ryemouth has developed and changed since the year of 1995.
题目:The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
第二段
As is clearly described in the first picture, Ryemouth was a coastal city which was divided into three parts by two roads. In the southern part, there was a fishing port on the sea, with a fish market located in the north and a coffee shop in the north-east. A block of shops was situated on the opposite side of the market?
第三段
In the second picture, the village changed a lot. The fishing port has been removed and the fish market is replaced by apartments. Several restaurants also occupy the place of the shops on the roadside. Moreover, a parking lot is newly built on the east of the hotel. In addition, ?
第四段
Overall, based on the brief description above, it is clear that the general layout of the village does not change a lot, while some newly-built facilities and housing has ornamented the small village.
WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the development of the village of
Kelsby between 1780 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main
features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
新东方樊黎明:A类雅思地图题写作攻略
首先注意两个点:
1. 时态:本文的时间是明确的,是三个过去的时间,因此全
文应当使用一般过去时。有些地图会有将来的规划,那么则应使
用相应的一般将来时。
2. 顺序:该图属于动态的地图题,这种类型的地图题一律按
照时间顺序来写。在这道题中,也就是按照图的顺序依次来写,
不要把元素拆开。如果是静态的地图题(即不涉及时间变化的题
型),则按照空间顺序来写。
下面我们一起来分析文章的写作。
第一段:引言段。
引言段就是把题目进行改写。原文中的diagram,可以替换成
three maps/ illustrations. 原文中的shows,可以改为illustrate/
demonstrate/ indicate等词。宾语development,可以替换成
changes,也可以改为宾语从句how the village of Kelsby developed/
changed. 题目中给出的时间比较模糊,可以具体化为in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
【例文】The three maps illustrate how the village of Kelsby
changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
第二段:介绍1780年的情况。
1780年的情况只涉及到静态的数据,因此只需要用存在句即
可表达,不涉及任何变化的单词。但是,考生非常容易把这些元
素全部用there be这个句型来表达,从而导致句式单
一。表示存在的句型除了there be之外,还有非常简单的have句型,还有lie/ be located/ be situated 这样的结构。另外还有一种倒装句型,比如“桌子上面有一本书”,可以翻译为on the desk is a book.
除此之外,要注意几个元素的顺序问题。这里有四大元素:住宅区homes,树林woods,农场farms,还有一条河流river。理论上只要按照一定的空间顺序(比如顺时针、逆时针,从
左到右)都是可以的,但是要考虑家庭数量的变化是导致其它所
有变化的根本原因,因此建议先写。
还有就是土地单位的表达,land是不可数名词,因此不能说a land,只能说a piece of land。为了表达更加精确,可以用a plot of land(一小块),a stretch of(一长片),a large expanse of (一大片)。
另外还有注意方位词的表达。地图题中常用的方位词有:in the east/ west/ south/ north of ... ; in the eastern/ western/ southern
northern part of ...; 如果是在角落,可以用in the southwestern corner of ... ; 在河流的上/下游:at the lower/ upper reaches of the river; 在河岸:alongside the riverbank, 在河流的南端:at the
southern end of the river.
【例文】In 1780, Kelsby had only 100 homes. There was a large
expanse of woods in the eastern part of the village and four plots of
farmland in the centre. In the west was a river flowing from north to
south.
第三段:介绍1860年的变化。
这一年的变化并没有时间先后,因此还是按照空间顺序来进
行。图上多了一个元素,即道路和桥梁的修建。需要特别注意的
是,因为考虑到和上文的呼应,这两个元素一定要放在后面讲,
而家庭数量的增加和农场、树林面积的减少应当先讲。这个原则
我们简称叫“先拆后建”原则、
第二点是时间的表达问题。上文中刚刚出现过in 1780,这里
还是用in 1860的话,句式上就会出现重复。因此可以按照动态图
里面学过的表达方法,把年份用作主语,用saw/ witnessed这两
个词把数据引出来。
第三点是“建”这个词的英文表达。常见的词有build,
construct(一般建筑物),erect(高大的建筑物),establish/ set up(无
建筑的物体或抽象的机构),pave(道路的修建)。另外,如果涉及
到拆除,则需要记住demolish, pull down, knock down 这些单词。
需要重点指出的是,这些表示“建”和“拆”的词都应当使用被
动语态,这一点和普通流程图是一致的。
【例文】The year 1860 saw a doubling of the number of homes, but the size of farmland and woods was halved. In the same year, a bridge was constructed over the river and a road was paved linking the river to the residences.
第四段:介绍2000年的变化。
首先还是时间的表达,这里可以再换一种结构,比如140 years
later/ After 140 years。首先还是“先拆后建”,先说树林农场彻底
消失,然后在交代新的元素:学校和操场。要记住的是,道路是
不需要交代方位的,只需要把起点和终点表达出来即可,用link A
to B或者connect A with B这类词组连接。因此,道路的描写应放
到学校、操场的后面。
【例文】140 years later, the number of homes more than doubled to 500, but farms and
woods completely disappeared. In their places, several school buildings and sports facilities were constructed at the south-eastern corner of the village, which were connected with the residential areas in the north via a newly-build road. Some shops opened up along the river bank and a large stretch of wetland for birds was established at the southern end of the river.
篇二:雅思小作文地图题范文
现在停车场改成了一个剧院。
The car park has been removed and replaced by a theatre.
城镇A的家庭数量从1937年到2020年将翻一番。
The number of homes in Town A is likely to double
(is likely to= is predicted to /is estimated to/is projected to/is
expected to )
又可为:
It is likely that the number of homes in Town A will double.
(it is likely that = it is predicted/estimated/projected/ expected
that?..)
细节变化
地图每个细节变化都要提到,不要忽视一个细节
语态
雅思小作文地图题写作用被动语态,因为叙述的是一个事实,
被动语态表达的更加的清晰,准确。
如: 2000年在城镇A 新建了一个医院:A new hospital was
established in Town
A in 2000.
2014年开始,流程图与地图题的频率已经于其他图表题的频
率不相上下,甚至有超过他们的趋势,2014年截止9月20日地
图题已经考了4次,流程图也是4次。你还在备考时忽略这两种
图吗,
地图题句式总结:
1. A lies/is situated in/is located in/on/to the east of B.
A 位于B的东面
2.A covers an area of about?.square meters/ hectares.
A的面积大概有。。。平方米/公顷
A covers a small area in 1980.
在1980年 A的面积很小。
3.A, which used to be located in?., is replaced by?.
原本位于。。。的A由。。。取代
4. next to/ adjacent to B, A remains unchanged throughout the period.
毗邻B的A在这期间没变。
5. It is clear/apparent/evident that the sharpest difference lies in?
很明显,最大的不同在于。。。
6. The map describes how a village/dock called ? expanded/developed from ? to?
地图描述了一个叫。。。的小镇/码头 由。。。扩大到。。。
7. A disappeared/vanished in 1990, when?.
1990年A消失了,在那时。。。
第一段改写题目。
第二段总体概述。
第三段没有变化的部分。
第四段发生变化的部分。
地图题就是这么简单~你学会了吗,
The map describes how a village named Strokeford developed from 1930 to 2010. It is clear that the sharpest difference is that large stretches of farmland in 1930 were replaced by houses in 2010. It is also evident that the Gardens in 1930 disappeared and a retirement home was erected in that place.
River Stoke which lies to the east of the village and the Bridge, which is located to the north of the village, remained the same throughout the four score years. A road which cuts through the village and which is connected to the bridge is another facility which remained largely unchanged.
Two shops, one big and another small, situated along the road vanished and instead some new homes were built along a newly-built side road. The primary school expanded, with two large houses lying by its side. The retirement home in 2010 was on the original site of the gardens.
地图描述了一个叫Strokeford的村庄从1930年到2010年的发
展。
地图很清晰的显示了最大的变化是1930年的大片农田变成了
2010年的住宅。同样明显变化是1930年的花园在2010年变成了
疗养院。
位于村庄东面的stoke河和位于村庄北面的大桥在80年间都没
有变化。贯穿小镇的公路,与桥相连,是另一个仍然没有变化的
设施。
之前在路边的一大一小两个商店消失了,取代它们的是一些新
的住宅,沿着新建小路建成。小学面积扩大了,边上建起了两间
大教室。2010年公园原址建起了一个养老院。
WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the development of the village of
Kelsby between 1780 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main
features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
首先注意两个点:
1. 时态:本文的时间是明确的,是三个过去的时间,因此全文
应当使用一般过去时。有些地图会有将来的规划,那么则应使用
相应的一般将来时。
2. 顺序:该图属于动态的地图题,这种类型的地图题一律按照
时间顺序来写。在这道题中,也就是按照图的顺序依次来写,不
要把元素拆开。如果是静态的地图题(即不涉及时间变化的题型),
则按照空间顺序来写。
下面跟着上海环球雅思的老师一起来分析文章的写作。
第一段:引言段。
引言段就是把题目进行改写。原文中的diagram,可以替换成
three maps/ illustrations.原文中的shows,可以改为illustrate/ demonstrate/ indicate等词。宾语development,可以替换成
changes,也可以改为宾语从句how the village of Kelsby developed/
changed. 题目中给出的时间比较模糊,可以具体化为in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
【例文】The three maps illustrate how the village of Kelsby
changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
第二段:介绍1780年的情况。
1780年的情况只涉及到静态的数据,因此只需要用存在句即可
表达,不涉及任何变化的单词。但是,考生非常容易把这些元素
全部用there be这个句型来表达,从而导致句式单一。表示存在
的句型除了therebe之外,还有非常简单的have句型,还有lie/ be located/ be situated 这样的结构。另外还有一种倒装句型,比如
“桌子上面有一本书”,可以翻译为on the desk is a book.
除此之外,要注意几个元素的顺序问题。这里有四大元素:住
宅区homes,树林woods
,农
场farms,还有一条河流river。理论上只要按照一定的空间顺序
(比如顺时针、逆时针,从左到右)都是可以的,但是要考虑家
庭数量的变化是导致其它所有变化的根本原因,因此建议先写。
还有就是土地单位的表达,land是不可数名词,因此不能说
aland,只能说a piece of
land。为了表达更加精确,可以用a plot of land(一小块),a stretch
of(一长片),a large expanse of (一大片)。
另外还有注意方位词的表达。地图题中常用的方位词有:in the
east/ west/ south/ north of ? ; in the eastern/ western/ southern northern part of ?; 如果是在角落,可以用in the southwestern
corner of ? ; 在河流的上/下游:at the lower/ upper reaches of the river; 在河岸:alongside the riverbank, 在河流的南端:at the
southern end of the river.
【例文】In 1780, Kelsby had only 100 homes. There was a large expanse of woods in the eastern part of the village and four plots of farmland in the centre. In the west was a river flowing from north to south.
第三段:介绍1860年的变化。
这一年的变化并没有时间先后,因此还是按照空间顺序来进行。
图上多了一个元素,即道路和桥梁的修建。需要特别注意的是,
因为考虑到和上文的呼应,这两个元素一定要放在后面讲,而家
庭数量的增加和农场、树林面积的减少应当先讲。这个原则我们
简称叫“先拆后建”原则、
第二点是时间的表达问题。上文中刚刚出现过in 1780,这里还
是用in 1860的话,句式上就会出现重复。因此可以按照动态图里
面学过的表达方法,把年份用作主语,用saw/ witnessed这两个
词把数据引出来。
第三点是“建”这个词的英文表达。常见的词有build, construct
(一般建筑物),
erect(高大的建筑物),establish/ set up(无建筑的物体或抽象
的机构),pave(道路的修建)。另外,如果涉及到拆除,则需要
记住demolish, pull down, knock down 这些单词。需要重点指出的
是,这些表示“建”和“拆”的词都应当使用被动语态,这一点
和普通流程图是一致的。
【例文】The year 1860 saw a doubling of the number of homes, but the size of farmland and woods was halved. In the same year, a bridge was constructed over the river and a road was paved linking the river to the residences.
第四段:介绍2000年的变化。
首先还是时间的表达,这里可以再换一种结构,比如140 years
later/ After 140 years。首先还是“先拆后建”,先说树林农场彻底
消失,然后在交代新的元素:学校和操场。要记住的是,道路是
不需要交代方位的,只需要把起点和终点表达出来即可,用link A
to B或者connect A with B这类词组连接。因此,道路的描写应放
到学校、操场的后面。
【例文】140 years later, the number of homes more than doubled to 500, but farms and woods completely disappeared. In their
places, several school
buildings and sports facilities were constructed at the south-eastern corner of the village, which were connected with the residential areas in the north via a newly-build road. Some shops opened up along the river bank and a large stretch of wetland for birds was established at the southern end of the river.
The maps below show the civic square of the town of Smallville in 1980 and
now.
图例虽然纷繁复杂,但是究其本质,第一张图永远在描述所谓
的“方位”,也就是,我们需要在这张图中描述清楚图中的东西南
北,各自坐落了什么事物。其余的图,永远在描述所谓的“变化”,
相当于在第一张图的草稿基础上,描述第二张图发生的“加变化”
和“减变化”,“恒定变化“以及“转化变化”。
搞定了这两组词汇的说法,地图题就再也不是让考生们闻风丧
胆的题目了。
第一组:方位词
在这个方面,需要注意的是,我们需要准备好两者之间的所有
可能的位置关系,除了最基本的A在B的东西南北方以外,还需
要掌握一些特定的限定表达,比如A在B的角落等等。基础表达:
A在B的东西南北方(内部/接壤/不接触):A is in /on / to the
east/west/south/north of B.
高阶表达:
A在B的东西南北方(内部):A is in the
eastern/southern/western/northern partof B.
A在B的东西南北角落:A is at/in the
eastern/southern/western/northerncorner of B.
A坐落于距离B??远处:A is(数字)kilometers / miles to the east / west / south /north of B.
A和B很近:A is near /next to /close to B.
A在B的对面:A is opposite / on the opposite side of B
第二组:变化词
其实,地图题目当中蕴涵的变化,从本质来说,无非是三种,
一种为所谓的“加变化”也就是在原本基础上出现了新增的部分,
另一种为“减变化”,也就是原本的内容出现了缩减。所谓“恒定
表达”,即前后没有发生变化。还有一种涉及到了两种内容之间的
转化,被称之为“转化表达”。
加变化:
A尺寸上变大了?:The size of A has been enlarged by?
A被建造在B:A is constructed / established in B.
A被增建在B:A is added to B.
减变化:
篇三:雅思A类小作文之地图题写作攻略
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雅思A类小作文之地图题写作攻略
摘要: 如果地图题反映的是一个地方在过去的一段时间的变
化,文章用一般过去时。如果地图题反映的是一个地方在将来一
段时间的变化趋势
地图题分两种,一种为地理变迁题,一种为选址题。首先我们
来看地理变迁题,它描述的是一个地方(多为一个城镇)在一段时间
的发展变化。如2006年9月A 类 TASK 1, 剑1TEST 4。就这些
图形,我们来总结地理变迁题的写作要点。
时态
如果地图题反映的是一个地方在过去的一段时间的变化,文章
用一般过去时。如果地图题反映的是一个地方在将来一段时间的
变化趋势,文章用一般将来时或表“估计”的词汇。如果地图题
反映的是一个地方从过去到现在的变化,可用现完成时。
如:现在停车场改成了一个剧院。
The car park has been removed and replaced by a theatre.
城镇A的家庭数量从1937年到2020年将翻一番。
The number of homes in Town A is likely to double
(is likely to= is predicted to /is estimated to/is projected to/is expected to )
又可为:
It is likely that the number of homes in Town A will double.
(it is likely that = it is predicted/estimated/projected/ expected
that?..)
细节变化
地图每个细节变化都要提到,不要忽视一个细节
语态
地图题用被动语态
如: 2000年在城镇A 新建了一个医院:A new hospital was
established in Town A in 2000.
地图题的书写顺序:时间顺序和空间顺序
如2006年9月A 类TASK 1
The map shows the development of the village of Kelsbey
between 1780 and 2000.
这篇文章大体框架按时间顺序,BODY 分三段分别描述:1780年村庄,1860村庄, 2000年村庄。对每一年的描述,如1780年村庄,我们要注意按方位顺序来描述,否则文章会出现混乱。这就需要考生在考前对方位词进行总结。地图题的方位我们说东西南北,不说成左右。
? A 在B 的东方/西方/南方/北方
A is/ lies/ is located/ is situated in/on / to the
east/west/south/north of B
(in 表A 在B 内部, ON 表A 和B接壤,TO 表A 和B 分开)
? A 在B 内部的某个部位
A is in the eastern/ southern/ western/ northern part of B.
? A在B 西北部的120 千米处
A lies 120 km to the northwest of B.
? A 在B?..角落
A is at/in the south-eastern corner of B ( at 表示A 在B 外部,
in表A 在B 内部)
? 在河流或道路的南边/北边等
On the south/southern side of the river
On both sides of the road
On the other side
? 临近马路的地区
The area adjacent to/ near /next to/ just off the road
? 在道路或河流的最南端
At the southern end of the river
? A 在B 的对面
A is on the opposite side of B
A is opposite B
? A 在B 东部的边界上(A 在B外部)
A is on the eastern border of B
? A 在B 东部边缘上 (A 在B 内部)
A is on/ along the eastern edge of B
? “变化”词汇
地图题描述的是一个地区的变化,那么“变化”词汇必须过关。
变化包括两种:图形原有事物的改变,图形新添事物。
我们先看图形原有事物的改变:
? 原有事物可说成:
The original/previous/former garden
? 原有事物尺寸上变大/变小:
The size of the library has been
enlarged/extended/halved/reduced by half
? 原有事物在数量上增多或减少:
The number of homes has increased/risen/grown/reduced /decreased/dropped/fallen/
doubled/ tripled/ quadrupled to 500.
? 原有事物没了:
The farms completely disappeared/were removed.
? 原有事物被改为:
A becomes B
A is
transformed/reconstructed/redeveloped/converted/changed/turne
d over to/ into B
A is replaced /substituted by B = A gives way to B
? 图形新添事物
A newly-built road
A new car park was built/established/set up/constructed/completed and opened in the middle of B
A new IT centre has been added to the library
The year 2000 saw two additions to the land: a pond in the northern part and a vegetable garden on the opposite side.
地图题第二类为选址题 如剑5 TEST 3 TASK 1
The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. 为一个
城镇的超市选址, 有两个位置 S1 和S2 供选择。选址题并不难
写,主要注意两点:
? 位置描述
? 优缺点
这篇文章我们BODY段可分两段,分别陈述:
S1的位置及位置相应的优缺点
S2的位置及位置相应的优缺点
其中表位置的方位词已在前文有总结,
同理, 2006 年2 月A 类Task 1: The diagram below shows the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions
我们BODY 段可分两段,分别陈述:
Solution 1 的解决方案和相应的优缺点
Solution 2 的解决方案和相应的优缺点
其中,解决方案实际还是要涉及一些方位词。
范文五:雅思小作文详解6:地图题
【9分作文盛宴】考官华丽雅思小作文详解6:地图题
Simon 是英国曼彻斯特的前雅思考官,由于创办雅思考试学习网站而在全世界的考生中越来越有名气。其网站上提供大量关于复习雅思的技巧以及颠覆性的建议,甚至还有不少Simon 本人亲笔写的满分作文。这些满分作文由于出自英国考官之手,非常地道,言简意赅,和中国考生惯用的千篇一律的模板作文相比,着实让人眼前一亮。点课台的Phoebe 老师深感有义务要让孩子们接触到真正可以提分的好作文,所以以后会频繁地帮大家整理并总结这些满分作文的精华,相信大家都可以扔掉模板,写出高分作文!
今天要分析的题目是地图——Maps 。
有的学生说,地图题型相对不常见,所以备考可以忽略。针对这种想法,Simon 是这样说的:While it’s true that graphs and
charts are the most common types of question, I think it would be very unwise
not to prepare for diagrams and maps too. What happens if you get one of these
questions in your test and you haven’t prepared for it?
虽然不常见,但是如果平时不做任何准备,万一考到后果不堪设想。其实地图题并没有大家想象地那么难,只要花时间仔细研究一下Simon 的范文,大家都能写出一篇好作文。
请看今天的题目,就是下面这个地图:
写作文之前,要先Plan your structure,Simon 建议地图题依然沿用4段式:
1. Introduction: what does the chart show?
2. Overview / summary: what are the most noticeable features?
3. Specific details: try to write 2 paragraphs.
接下来说地图题最难的地方——如何准确读出图中所给信息,我们就先来分析一下,从这个地图上我们可写的信息有哪些,首先地图上为数不多的单词或数字不可遗漏,上方那句是说这张图展现了一个叫做Chorleywood 的村庄在1868年到1994年之间的发展情况。然后很清楚地能看出,在四个不同的时期,它的交通设施有明显的改善。居民都住在各种路的旁边。这些只是大概的Overview, 足够写出前两段了,那还有哪些具体的细节,能够写进第三、四段中呢? 大家自己再仔细看地图,从中找中可写的Details 。
接下来贴出完整满分范文,大家读的时候看一下Simon 按照什么order 、挑出哪些细节来描述的:
The map shows the growth of a village called Chorleywood between 1868 and
1994.
It is clear that the village grew as the transport infrastructure was
improved. Four periods of development are shown on the map, and each of the populated areas is near to the main roads, the railway or the motorway.
From 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood covered a small area next to one of the main
roads. Chorleywood Park and Golf Course is now located next to this original village area. The village grew along the main road to the south between 1883 and
1922, and in 1909 a railway line was built crossing this area from west to east.
Chorleywood station is in this part of the village.
The expansion of Chorleywood continued to the east and west alongside the
railway line until 1970. At that time, a motorway was built to the east of the
village, and from 1970 to 1994, further development of the village took place
around motorway intersections with the railway and one of the main roads.
最后是词汇总结:
growth:Simon在对题目进行复述的时候用growth 替换了development ,这个用法大家要记住。
infrastructure:极其高频,常出现于写作和阅读,“设施”
populated:大家平时很少用形容词的形式,其英文释意为“furnished with inhabitants, 即”有人居住的“
original:最初的,原始的
intersections with:和... 相交,交叉路口,听力地图题中也很常见
今天先到这儿,希望Simon 的建议对大家有所帮助,以后不再怕遇见地图题,下期见!
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