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第一段:陈述现
(小虹有话:文的第1、2句;主要用来当前的某个社会现状、势;共有5种开篇写法，没有固定的标准选哪种，选择一种容易下手的写，我已经关
文章第一句话:
1)第一句的第一种写法:就某事，人们又热
There is a heated discussion whether(通常用在选择性话题:是否年级小出国，是有
they should live off campus or live together with other roommates.(住在校，还
students should be asked to grade their teacher (是否学生应要求
students should take a part-time job in school (是否学生在期间
2)句的第二种写法:某事引发人们关注 (不用写事情的经过，用一个词儿代
Recently，the problem of “”has aroused wide concern among the public
Currently，he phenomenon of drunken driving has arouse wide concern among the public(酒后驾驶)
Currently，the frequent job-hopping of graduates has aroused wide concern among the
public.(跳
Currently，the problem of “food safety” has aroused wide concern among the public.
(食品安全)
3)句的第三种写法:社会现象变成某个“词”(这种写法最大的魅力也
程压缩成一个词!)
The newly-coined word/phrase“”may by no means sound strange to most people in this day and age.
(“”
online education网络教育;fake diplomas假证书;craze for talent shows 选秀狂热 )
4)句的第四种写法:社会趋势 (一般都写在“有越来越多的人干什么去
会现状)
There is a growing tendency nowadays that…
graduates in mounting numbers can hardly find an ideal job (就业难)
people in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for volunteer works/ various talen
t shows(选秀
students in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for students leaders selection
(竞选班干部热)
people in mounting numbers participate in the test for national civil servants. (公务员热)
undergraduates in growing numbers take the postgraduate entrance examination (考研热)
people in mounting numbers try their luck to buy lottery tickets (买彩票热)
people in mounting numbers use credit card. (信
注:people in mounting numbers 都表示“越来越多的人”，切忌写:more and more people，找死!
5)句的第五种写法:某个现象人尽皆知 (一般写比较大的，比较严重
No one in China has failed to notice the phenomenon that…
that goods in mounting numbers are wrapped in flaring boxes or bags (
that there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers who swarm into big
cities.(农工进
The economy has been developing at a considerably high speed at the expense of livi
ng environment.
(经济发展以牺牲环境为代
文章第二句话:
(小话:陈述正反观点;你只要说，针对某个事情，人们看法存在不一
再第一就开始具体论述双方的观点各是什
Does anyone hold the same attitude towards this issue ?Definitely not，actually，opinions vary from person to person.
第二段:对立观点论
(小话:文章的第3,4,5,6四句话，都写在第二段;这是字数最多，内容最
称为“猪肚”)
文章第三句话:
(提正方观点，比如说他支持什么;总体来说，有两种表示支
Some maintain that ( 表示“认为”的单词，打死都不写“think”;maintain/argue/hold/claim都可以写 )
1) 某物好处的:something is beneficial to sth. (练习:槽
2) 某物>缺点:The merits of sth. far outweigh its demerits.(练习:用机的
文章第四句话:
( 上出了论点，这就必须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个;个数的标准是数
Firstly,…secondly,…last but not least,…. (万能理由:这个只能在新东小虹的六作
文章第五句话:
( 正反对立观点作文，第三句提出正方观点，那么这句当然要提出对立
However，quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that (反方观点)，
1)
2) 某物
文章第六句话:
( 上句提论点，这句就须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个;个数的标准是数
For one thing，… for another,…(万能理由:这个只能在新东方小虹的六级写课
第三段:个人观
(文章的第7,8,9句;四六级作文，括考研作文，都要求写essay-议论文，短评，所以，写了上述对立观点的目的，其实是为了最后出自
文章第七话:To my way of thinking，… From my perspective, + 个人观点句(参
文章第八句话:( 上提出了论点，这句就必须要用论来证明，论据可以写一个，也可
文章九句话:( 再次重申自己的观点，和第七句话正好构成“总总
Given all the factors I have outlined，I strongly commit to the notion that(观点句)
或者是:Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with
the idea that…
(小虹:全文写3段9句话;第一段提出问题，第二段分析问题，第三段解决问题——亚里士德
第一段:陈述现状
(小话:文章的第1、2句;主要用来写当前的某个社会现状、趋势;共
法，没有定的标准选哪种，选择一种容易下手的去写，我已经将相关话题举
文章第一句话:
(小话:第一句话的功能，就是介绍文章写作背景，社会现状;所以呢，
立观点文”的文章第一段，第一句的写法是完全一样
The past several years have witnessed a not uncommon phenomenon that… ( 社会现
象 ).
文章第二句话:
具体描述
(将第一句话所讲的抽象的、大体的社会现象，用具体的文字描述一下，
只能这么做了!)
举例:
(第一句)Nowadays, the phenomenon of drunken driving has arouse wide concern amo
ng the public.
(第二句)Especially the young generation living in metropolis, tend to drive after drink
ing, ignoring the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat totheir precious life an
d may even endanger others.
第二段:原因或危害陈述段(分析问
文章第三句话:
(渡句，引发讨论某个社会问题、现象产生的
Ample reasons can account for this phenomenon，and the followings might be the mo
st critical ones:
文章第四句话:
(提某个社会问题、现象产生的原因;具体写几个原因，根据字数
Firstly，… secondly,….(万
文章第五句话:
(出如果我们不关注这个问题，后果很严
The problem mentioned above will bound to generate severe consequences if we keep
turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. (翻译:如果我们对这个问题视而不见，听而不闻，将产
文章第六句话:
(危害和后果分别是什么呢?)
On the one hand, … on the other hand,…
第段:原因或危害陈述段 (解
文章第七句话:
(号句，“放空话”!号召大家赶紧采取措施，投入关
Effective measures should be adopted before things get worse.
文章第八句话:
(采什么措施呢?这个在考前你都可以背下来，考试的时候用上
First and foremost，(措
1) 扬善去恶:(两面性问题，比如手机，彩票
What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least
extent
2) 大家联合起来:(一般用在解决学生的问题，心理健康啊，网
It is high time that parents，educators，and the authorities make combined efforts to
put an end to this situation.
3) 个人意识:(提高环境保护的意识
The public should enhance their consciousness of the significance of …
4) 采取行动:(这句话纯粹就是凑
We must press forward on deeper research，but research alone is inadequate, actually，
any one of us has good reason to take actions to…
5) 加强教育:(一般用在涉及面比较广的社会
A public education campaign should be launched to inform the public of the importance of
6) 府出台:(一般用在比较大的，比较严重的社会问题，如节约问题，浪
It is essential that the authorities should make and implement relevant laws and regulations to impose a heavy penalty on those who (contaminate the environment deliberately)
7) 吁相关部门加强监管:(一般用在比较大的，比较严重的社会问题。
假冒产品问题)
We should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen supervision
over
文章第九句话:
(取了措施之后，当然要有美好的远景
1) 只有采取措施，我们才
Only with these measures adopted can we put an end to this problem. (结束这个问
题)
Only in this way can(graduates find a satisfactory job and enjoy a brilliant future.)
2) 采取了这些措施
With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be
perfectly solved in the near future(我们有理由相信问题一
With these measure adopted, I strongly believe that the problem of (drunken driving)will be things of the past.(这个题将会
3) 我坚信生活美
It is deeply-rooted in my mind that a happy and bright future is awaiting us if we make every effort to …
4) 和谐社会人人追
It is deeply-rooted in my mind that the world will be a more harmonious place for us to live in.
英语6级写作模板
1-1 法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一
适用于有争议性的主题.
例如(e.g)
[1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ....... But I think/view a bit differently.
[2]. When it comes to .... , some people believe that ....... Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter ...)
[3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that .... They claim/ believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....
1-2
e.g
[1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.
[2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ...has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention)
[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.
----- To be continued !!
1-3 法 ----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的
e.g:
[1]. Never history has the change of .. been as evident as ... Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. been more visible/popular than...
[2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that...
[3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recognation ot the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ......
[4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......
1-4 引法 ----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述观
e.g:
[1]. "Knowledge is power." such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people .
"Education is not complete with gradulation." Such is the opnion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opnion.
[2]."........." How often we hear such statements/words like thoses /this .
In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this "......".
1-5 比 ------ 通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论
e.g:
[1]. For years, ...had been viewed as ... But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ... , people ....... .
[2]. People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now share this new.
1-6 法 ---- 先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣, 引出文章的
e.g:
[1]. Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt .... The phenemenon of ... has aroused public
concern.
[2]. I have a friend who ... Should he .... ? Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life.
[3]. Once upon a time , there lived a man who ... This story may be (unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now.
1-8 法 ----- 先用讨论或解答的设问, 引出自己观点, 适
6级英语写作简单模板
6级作文模板 :
1)先背 3个句子
1 Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more….. are com monly and widely used in everyday life.(讲重要性 )
2 The popularity of digital …will have great influence on our work, study and everyday l ife. On the one hand …, But on the other hand. (讲影响)
3To conclude, …..are just like a double -edged sword. With them we may have less troub le dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of the m. (结尾段)
Ps:活运用第 1句和第 2句,根据不同模板自
2)模板(2个模
1 开段:先讲重要性,然后转讲不好
中间段:措施
结尾段:先来个小转折再进
开头段 Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced ……., more and more….. are commonly and widely used in everyday life. However, what worries most of us is tha t……
中间段 Firstly….Secondly…..Lastly but in no means least……
结尾段 To conclude, …..are just like a double -edged sword. With them we may have les s trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a better-off life. However, one point sho uld be kept in mind that we should take sensible use of them , always being the master of them.
2 开头段:先讲重要性,然后转
中间段:转折 (即列出两种不同人的
结尾段:直接进入总结(即你的
开头段:It is accepted that …. Plays a significant part for both …, and what’s more , a l ot of attention is being drawn to the change of….. However, whether … deserves such an attention , people’s ideas vary.
中间段:On the one hand, some people hold the view that …..
On the other hand, a great many people insist that… .
结尾段:From my perspective, however…. (你的观点 ) . Therefore, it’s time that (
6级作文万能句(充在 ”…..” 里面万能句子,自己琢磨每句子放在哪里比较适合) 重点背:1) 5) 6) 7)句子,最全部都被过,
1) Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull ro utine of every day life. 。。。能让我们生活更美好,也就是说,。。。可以
2) For the majority of people , reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of th eir lives and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说,学习一 技术占据他们的生活和
3)。。。。。 , by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom . 。。。占据了人大部分时间,使得没空想东西(充实
4) What's save them a great deal of time
so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy o n their academic work . 住校为生省去了少时间,这样学以把更
5) Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened .
一点一,这样做可以丰富我们的知识和拓宽我
6) For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to fi nd time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late t o learn. 想过一种有意的人来说,抽
7) The majority of students believe will provide them with more opport unities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets. 兼职学生们学习个技巧,这样可
8) By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studie s, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks. 学生不仅高学习成绩,还可以获得在课
9) Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunit ies.
10) 1Sth can produce positive effects on …in more than one way. 什么东西可带来好影 2Sth may bring about negative impacts on … 什东西可
1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________.
2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______ ________. for another, ______________.
3. My experience tells me that to ______________ needs a thorough and perseveri ng process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned a bove.
4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of __________ ____.
5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________.
6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________.
7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of _____ _________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future.
8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of _________ _____.
9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For exam ple, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I pre fer to ______________.
10. In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________. If ___ ___________, it may be very useful. Whatever ______________, the key point lies in ______________.
11. Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________. As for the second idea, ______________.
12. As a popular saying goes, ______________. In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________. I believer that as long as __________ ____, we will ______________. So I am for the opinion that ______________. 13. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we shoul d take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decis ion.
14. Personally, I believe that ______________. Consequently, I’m confident that a b right future is awaiting us because ______________.
15. In my opinion, all of the people should be brave enough to show our disapprov al and criticism when confronted with ______________.
16. People are coming to realize the importance of ______________. They have be gun to try their best to ______________. We believe that ______________.
17. All in all, we cannot live without ______________ . But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.
18. Whatever you do, please remember the saying- ______________. If you unders tand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll definitely benefit a lot from it. 19. With the development of society, ______________. So it’s urgent and necessary to ______________. If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
20. It is difficult to say whether ______________ is good or not in general as it de pends very much on the situation of ______________. However, from a personal p oint of view I find ______________.
21. It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end the situation.
22. It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of _________ _____.
23. But both ______________ and ______________ have disadvantages. For examp le, ______________. Which to choose, ______________ or ______________? Carefu l consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.
24. From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusi on that ______________.
25. We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of _________ _____ is grievous, if allowed to proceed, will certainly lead to ______________. 26. No doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that _____________ _ will be put in danger.
27. We need to take a second look at the matter from a wider standpoint, otherwis e, we won’t ______________.
28. It is high time that ______________. Here are some of the measures that mig ht be taken immediately. 29. In conclusion, we should know about the problem of ______________, and object to ______________. Only in this way ______________.
30. Although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can ma ke the situation better. The most import is ______________. Another way is _____ _________. Still another one is ______________.
31. Many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is ade quate enough. The problem should be studied in depth.
32. No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ______________. But the common recognition of the importance of ______________ might be the first s tep on the right way.
33. It is clear, therefore, that the task of ______________ demands great attention. 34. We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. But once we a re on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.
35. But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way. Because I believe ______________.
36. We all know the story of ______________. this lesson tells us that __________ ____, we should ______________.
37. My own point of view is that ______________ is a normal behavior in our soci ety. There is no doubt that ______________. As an old saying goes, ____________ __.
38. If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some unde si rable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is ______________. 39. However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. I believe ______________.
40. From the graph it is evident that ______________.
41. From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in __ ____________. And I believe that ______________.
42. Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ____ __________.
43. For the reasons given above, I strongly recommend that ______________. 44. Given the factors I have just outlined, I believe that ______________.
45. Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________. 46. Recognizing the fact that ______________ should lead us to conclude that ____ __________.
47. In short, I support the statement that it is better to ______________ because ______________.
48. After pondering this question on many occasions, I have finally reached the con clusion that ______________ is something I truly want to do and it is worthwhile. 49. My point of view in ______________ largely results from the fact that _______ _______.
50. Now after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ____ __________.
51. From what has been discussed above, you can get your preference. Personally, I think ______________ has more advantages.
52. On the one hand, it has helped china ______________. On the other hand, it has increased china’s ______________, and at the same time, made great contributi ons to our national development.
53. In my opinion, to solve this problem there might be two ways. One way to tac kle this question is ______________. Another way that is worth adopting is ______ ________.
54. As far as I am concerned, I trust the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages.
55. For me, ______________ is a glory and it is the most important thing I have t o take into feasible consideration.
56. As regards me, I tend to pick ______________, for ______________. What’s m ore, ______________.
57. If I were given a choice between ______________ and ______________, I wou ld certainly prefer ______________. For me, ______________.
The World Expo in 2010(世博会)
The World Expo in 2010(2010年
The World Expo in 2010
Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asi ans. ()ur government
has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and b ase your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1) 几年大学校园内出现 “ 考
2) 产生这一现象
3) 你的看法
Certificate Craze On Campus
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文命。提纲第 1点指出一种现,提纲第 2点要求分析产这种 现象的原因, 提纲第 3点要求谈谈 “ 我 ” 对该现象的法, 由此可判断本应为现
根据所给提纲,本应含如下内容:描述近几年大校园内的 “ 考证热 ”; 分析越来越 多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因 ; 阐述 “ 我 ” 对大学生 “ 考证
高分范文
Certificate Craze On Campus
In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college st udents. [1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certi ficate [2]of some kind. [4]Why does this craze appear?
[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, [5]it is the em ployment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the ad mission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competi tion in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certifica tes at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability . In order to increase the qu alifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to ano ther.
[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to cer tificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we shoul
d focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical valu
e.
【亮点点评】
[1]祈句使用恰当。 randomly 意为 “ 随意地,随机
[2]定词使用恰当,使文章表达更严谨,增强了
[3]that引导同位语从句,修饰 the idea 。
[4]设问句引出原因,容易引起
[5]强调句型,此处是强调
[6]which引导非限制性定语从句,充当介
[7]用于引出 “ 我 ” 的
[8]“ 当谈到或提及 … 时 ” 。
[9]since引导原因状语从句,表示既定的原因,常译为 “ 既
[10]“ 只是,仅仅 ” 。 “ 而不是 ” 。
佳句临摩
1. 佳句:You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.
临摩:婚率上升尽管令人难过,但却是不争
2. 佳句:Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many em ployers measure a person’s ability.
临摩:在的三十年,发展中国家在许多方面都取得了很大的进步,其中包括健康
3. 佳句:From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to c ertificates.
临摩:我, 对于我们来说, 更重要的是尽可能提高自己的能力而不是获得更
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on t he topic Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1) 现在很多大学生都喜欢追
2) 产生这种现象的原因
3) 你如何看待这
Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文命。提纲第 1点指出一种现,提纲第 2点要求分析产这种 现象的原因, 提纲第 3点要求谈谈 “ 我 ” 对该现象的法, 由此可判断本应为现
根据所给提纲,文包含如下内容:描述目热衷于大学生追求名牌的现象 ; 分析大 学生热衷名牌的原因 ; 阐述 “ 我 ” 对学生追求的看
高分范文
Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands
Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begi n to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.
[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famou s brands. [2]Above all, in many college stu dents’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, p arents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.
[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue fa mous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumpti on ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more imp ortance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands. 【亮点点评】
[1]“ 有 … 倾向 ” 。
[2]渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、意
[3] follow 表示 “ 跟随,追求 (趋势或
[4]用于引出原
[5]which引导非限制性定语
[6] it 为形式主语,不定式为真
[7]“ 远超出他们的消费能力 ” 。 beyond 表示 “ 超出 …
[8]强句型,此处是强调主语。 not…but 连接
[9]“ 而不是 ” 。
佳句临摹
1. 佳句:It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.
临摹:大学生来说,了解校园以外的世界是非常
2. 佳句:In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students.
临摹:在世界上或许没有什么游戏
像赌博的么有害和危险了,它经常会导致一个人破产,还会玷污
3. 佳句:Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivatin g a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.
临摹:很同学经常玩电脑游戏,这是浪费时间,而不是一种有益的
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given b elow in Chinese :
1) 简单介绍个
2) 说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额
3) 保证会合理利用贷款并表明还
A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan
行文思路
本题属于景式命题,要求写一封申请信。根据所给提纲,本文应包含如内
介绍自己的情,表明写信目的:申助学贷款 ; 说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额 ; 保证合理 利用贷款并表明还款决,最
高分范文
A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan
Sep 12th, 2008
To whom it may concern,
I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writ ing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Phys ics for the following four years.
My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has sudd enly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college t uition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a R MB20,000 bank loan.
[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Song Xue
【亮点点评】
[1]“ 主修 …” ,现在分词作伴
[2]“ 超出 … 的能力范围 ” 。
[3]“ 使事情更糟糕的是 ” 。
[4]渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔
[5]“with+宾语 +宾补 ” 的独
[6]“ 我保证 …” , that 引导同位
[7]“ 不遗余力 ” 。
佳句临摩
1. 佳句:To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expec ting a major operation.
临摩:人更迷惑不解的是,很多飞机都从大海上离奇
2. 佳句:Therefore, the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my f amily, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.
临摩:于周围交通不便利,人们只得步
3. 佳句:Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my f uture career in order to pay back the loan.
临摩:国人民都不遗余力地支持北京举办
4，6级写作模板
写作模板——图表
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(
What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少) reasons behin
d the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一个原因). More i
mportantly, …(第二
写作模板——提
1. 对立
A.有人认为X 是好
B. 有人认为X 是事， 反
C.我的
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原。They also argue that 支X 的另一个原
However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give
the details of this argument: 一个例子。
There is some truth in both arguments. But I think t ……
英语四六级写作试题模——辩
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people ta
ke an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the fo
rmer/latter idea.
There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.
More importantly, 论据2.
Most important of all, 论据3.
In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
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主题句作文:是指按照所给的题目段落所给出的
落。主题句作文一般由
例如:Money
(1)Money is regarded by some people as the most impotant thing in life.__________For those people,a man with plenty of money can live happily.For example,only rich man can afford expensive cars and luxurious houses.…………
(2)But money cannot buy everything.___________For instance,no matter how much money one has,he cannot buy good health,which is essential to a good life.
Neither can be buy happiness or friendship.Thus,although money is useful in many
ways,there are still a lot of things …………
(3)There are people who ganmble or cheat to obtain money.____________Those people try to get money by dishonest means.Sooner or later,they will be punished by the law.For them,money will bring them nothing but misery.Only when money is obtained through working can it make people really happy.
主题句作文，应注意(1)应扣主题的思想，主题句
它支配着整个段落内容的发展，主题句思
2)理解每一个主题句的内容，在写题句作文时，要
各段的内容，并理解和把握个段落
4级英语写作模板
写作模板
提纲式作文
1． 对立观点式
A．有人认为X 是好
B． 有人认为X 是坏， 反
C．我的看法。
Recently the problem/discussion of…… has been brought into focus.
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原。They also argue that 持X 的另一个
However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 对X 的第个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: 一
There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一
2． 批驳观点式
A．一个错误观点。
B． 我不同意。
Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对观点的一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。（According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错观点或者受到这个错误观点影
There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论写
3． 社会问题（
A．一个社会问题
B． 产生的原因
C．对社会和我们
D． 如何杜绝。（如果
E． 前景的预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这现象的情况。（或者是一个
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论文的写
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 照辩论式议论文的
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 参照辩式议论文的写
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..
写作模板——图
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多
What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一个原因). More importantly, …(第二个原因). Most important of all, …(第三原
From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken号里的使用于那些不太好的变趋
写作模板——辩论
模版1
Recently the problem/discussion of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……（最近……问题/讨论引起了关注）. Different people have different opinions on it/Opinions on it vary from person to person. The views can be seen as follows:
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.
There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.
More importantly, 论据2.
Most important of all, 论据3.
In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版2
Recently the problem/discussion of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……（最近……问题/讨论引起了关注）. Different people have different opinions on it/Opinions on it vary from person to person. The views can be seen as follows:
People hold different views about X. Some people are in favor of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观
For one thing, 论据1.
For another, 论据2.
Last but not the least, 论据3.
To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版3
Recently the problem/discussion of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……（最近……问题/讨论引起了关注）. Different people have different opinions on it/Opinions on it vary from person to person. The views can be seen as follows:
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（论的焦点）。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观
First of all, 论据1。
Furthermore, 论据2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测
Argumentation型
1） some, others, I 型
（1）模版一
Recently the problem/discussion of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……（最
Some people hold the idea that _______________________ (观点A). A case in point is that _____________________________ (支持观点A的例
On the other hand, others may have a quite different view. According to them, ______________ (观B). The most typical example is that __________ (支持观点B的例
Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but the latter is more convincing.
（2）模版二
___________ (主题) is a common occurrence in our lives. The attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person. Some people tend to ______________ when they are asked _________________ (观点A) because _______________________ (支持观点A的原因). The most typical example is that ____________________________ (支持观点A的
However, others argue that ________________________ (观点B). They point out that _______________________ (重观点B) for the reason that _______________ (支持观点B的原
As far as I am concerned, I will choose to __________________ (你的观点) because this choice fits my personality and my life-long belief.
2） My View 型
（1）模版一
When asked about ______________ (主题), some people hold the idea that _________________________ (观点A). As far as they are concerned, _________________________ (展开点A). But I could not agree with them in several points. In my opinion, ______________________________ (观
In the first place, ___________________________ (支点B的由1). In the second place, ______________________________ (支持B的由2). In the third place, _______________________________ (支持观点B的理
For the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe ____________ (重申观点B).
（2）模版二
Some people believe that ___________________________ (A). For instance, they hold the idea that ______________________________ (支持观点A的子). And it may bring them _____________________________ (A带给他们好
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing, _____________________________ (不意的理由1). For another, _____________________________ (我不同意的理
As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, I agree to the thought that ______________________________ (重申自己的观
3）利弊型
（1）模版一
Nowadays many people prefer __________ (题) because it plays a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. On the one hand, ________________ (主的优点1). On the other hand, ___________________ (主题的优点2). But everything can be divided into two. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________ (主题的缺点1). To make matters worse, __________________________ (主题的
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________ (主题) itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.
（2）模版二
With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality. Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful. The phenomenon of ___________ (主题现象) is an example of the former / latter one.
There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects. To start with, __________________ (原因1). Furthermore, ______________________ (原2). Eventually, ________________________________ (
Good as ____________ (主题现象) is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages. The apparent example is that ______________ (缺点
On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society. There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate __________ (主题现象) and make our life more comfortable.
、引出开头
1：It is well-known to us that……（我们都知
2：Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……（最近……问题引起了关
3：Nowadays（overpopulation）has become a problem we have to face.（现今，人口过剩已成为我们不得对的问题） 4：Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.（互联网已在我的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色，它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些重
5：With the rapid development of science and technology，more and more people believe that……（随着科技的迅速发展，越
6：It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……（人们一般认为……）
7：A lot of people seem to think that……（很多人似乎认为……）
8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子（全世界都知道...）
二、表达不同观点
1：People's views on……vary from person to person. Some hold that……However, others believe that……（人们对……的观点因人而异，有些人认为……
2：People may have different opinions on……（人们对……可能会持有不同见解）
3：Attitudes towards （drugs）vary from person to person.==Different people hold different attitudes towards（failure）（人们对吸毒的态度因人
4:There are different opinions among people as to……（对于……人们的观点大不相
三、表示结尾
1：In short, it can be said that……（总之，他的意思是……）
2：From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that……（从上提到的，我们可以得出结论……） 3：Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……（把所有的这些因加以考虑，我们自然可以得出
4：Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that……（因此，我们最好的出这样的结论……）
5:There is no doubt that (job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.（毫无疑问，跳槽优点也有缺
6：All in all, we cannot live without……,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.（总之，我们没有……无法生活，但同时我们必须寻求新的解办法来面对可能出现的
四、提出建议
1：It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).（该是我们停止这一趋势的时候
2：There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……（毫无疑，对……问题应予以足够重） 3：Obviously ,if we want to do something … it is essential that……（显，如果我们想要做么，很重要的是……） 4：Only in this way can we ……（只有这样，我们
5：Spare no effort to + V （不遗余力的）
五、预示后果
1：Obviously，if we don't control the problem, the chances are that……will lead us in danger.（很明显，如果我们不能控制这一问题，很可能我们会陷入
2：No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that ……（毫无疑问，除非我们采取有效措施，否则
3：It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation（很紧迫的是应立即采取措施阻这一事态的发
六、表示论证
1：From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.(在我看来，支持第一种点比第二种更有
2：I cannot entirely agree with the idea that……（我无法完全同意这一观点）
3：As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,……（就我来说……）
4：I sincerely believe that……==I am greatly convinced (that)子句.（我真诚地相信……）
5：Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why ……（最后，坦率地说，还有另外一
七、给出原因
1：The reason why + 句 ~~~ is that +
2:This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons .First,…….Second,…….Third，……。这一现象存在有很多原因的，第一……第二……第三……
3：For one thing,…… For another thing，…… ==On the one hand,……On the other hand……一方面……另一方面……
4：I quite agree with the statement that……The reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述，即……。其主要原因如
八、列出解决办法和批判
1：The best way to solve the troubles is……解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……
2：As far as something is concerned,……就某事而言，……
3;It is obvious that……很显然……
4：It may be true that……but it doesn't mean that……可能……是对的，但这并不意味着……
5;It is natural to believe that……but we shouldn't ignore that……认为……是自然的，但
6：There is no evidence to suggest that……没有证据表明……
九、表示好处和坏处
1：It has the following advantages.它有如下优势
2：It is beneficial/harmful to us.==It is of great benefit/harm to us.它对我们有
3:It has more disadvantages than advantage.他有很多不足之处
十、表示重要、方
1：It is important(necessary/difficult/convenient/possible)for sb to do sth.对于
2：It plays an important role in our life.
十一、采取措施
1：We should take some effective measures.我们应该采取有效措施
2：We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties.我们应该尽最大努力去克服
3：We should do our utmost in doing sth.我们应该尽力去做……
4：We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with.我们应该解决我们面临的
十二、显示变化
1：Some changes have taken place in the past five years.过去五年发生了很多
2：Great changes will certainly be produced in the international communications.在国际交流中理所当然会发很多大的变化 3：It has increased/decreased from…to…他已经从…增加/减
4：The output of July in this factory increased by 15%.这个工厂7月份产量以增加了15%
十三、表明事实现状
1;We cannot ignore the fact that……我们不能忽略这个事实……
2：No one can deny the fact that……没人能否认这个事实……
3：This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.
4:be closely related to ~~ （与...息息相关）
十四、进行比较
1：Compared with A,B……与A比较，B……
2;I prefer to read rather than watch TV.
十五、常用英语谚语
1：Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩
2：All is not gold that glitters.发光的未必都是金子
3：All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马
4：A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半
5：Every advantage has its disadvantage有利必有弊
6：A miss is as good as a mile.失之毫厘，差之千里
7：Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母
8:Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母
9:It is never too old to learn.活到老，学到老
10:Knowledge is power.知识就是力量
11:Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上无事，只怕有
