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范文一：漫画式作文开头

漫画式作文开头

篇一:英语漫画类作文写作指导

2013高考英语书面表达总复习

写作指导 (2) 漫画类作文

第一段:描述图画(Part 1 Describe the picture)

1. The picture is talking about/shows?

2. The picture shows a common phenomenon.

3. The picture describes an interesting

phenomenon.

4. 4. In the picture, there are?/?is (are) doing? 5. The picture above is about ? 6. ?Let’s look at the picture above/first. 第二

段:解释，说明和分析图片 (Part 2 Interpret the picture) It seems

very ridiculous that?However, this kind of story is performed

everywhere. The picture shows that?It is the exact reflection of?

The picture indicate that we? Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that?

第三段:给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法 (Part 3

Give your opinions)

1. I think/believe that 5. ?should?

2. As far as I’m concerned, 6. It is better/advisable to?

3. In my opinion, 7. I consider it necessary?

4. From my point of view,

写作模板:

As is vividly shown in the picture/pictures(drawing/drawings) above, 图画的内容。The

picture/pictures(drawing/drawings)tells/tell us that 这个图片的大

致反映的意思。

The implied meaning of the picture(注意，同上进行单复数的处理)

should be taken into account seriously. First/To begin with, 揭示涵

义/原因/结果1，Second/What’s more, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2。

Last but not least/Finally, 揭示涵义/愿意/结果3(如果有的话)。

And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon) has

arisen the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people.

In my view / point of view (or As for me), We should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems followed in the picture. First, we should 具体的措施1. And then we have to / must

具体的措施

上图描绘的是现在人类面临的窘境。请你根据对下面这

幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述这种现象，说明

其产生的原因及后果，并发表你的看法。开头已给出。

In the cartoon, we can see a man talking to a paper bird kept in his cage and beside him is a vast

desert dotted with endless tree roots. Obviously, birds have lost their homes as people have cut down all the trees. As a result, humans have lost their animal friends.

The scene may seem ridiculous and unbelievable to us, but it may become a reality in the future if we go on developing economy regardless of thedamage caused to the environment. Now in some places, trees have been cut down without limits. Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests in 20 or 30 years and many species will die out. It is really a terrible thing.

Therefore, we should realize the importance of environmental protection and live in harmony with

our animal friends.

孩子的成长和教育试射和热议的话题，现如今父母包揽一切、

孩子过度依赖现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文

写一篇短文。

内容要求: 1.描述漫画内容;

2.分析漫画揭示的问题;

3.提出你的观点。

注意: 1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数;

2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯;

3.词数120 左右;

4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇:铺路pave the way

From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long

red carpet.___________________

篇二:全国卷漫画式作文

漫画式作文——思辨能力

2016高考

立意:奖惩背后、进步与退步、教育(家庭教育)、暴力(惩罚方式)

怎么写: 开头:点材料，分析，提出论点

是什么教育的方式:奖惩

为什么成绩功利化:进步与退步;片面追求成绩,升学率;培养什么样的人才,

怎样做家庭教育的方式应多元化，正确引导，辅以奖惩

结尾:点材料，扣题，升华

事例:牛奶瓶的故事，傅雷家书，三字经养不教父之过，孟母三迁，曾国藩的家书

2007年高考摔了一跤

从家庭、学校和社会的角度:人生旅途遇到坎儿“摔了一跤”是常有的事，作为家长、学校、社会，没有必要放不下心而是应该鼓励孩子跨过这道坎，坚强地站起来。

从孩子的角度:(1)在成长过程中“摔跤”是很正常的，不要手足无措，不必苦苦等待谁来搀扶，而应主动地站起来。只有这样才能锻炼顽强的意志品质，才能适应当今社会的激烈竞争，才有坚强面对未来克服更大困难的勇气。(2)“摔跤”后不能怨天尤人，(转载自:www.BdfQy.Com 千叶帆文摘:漫画式作文开头)责怪“西瓜皮”害人或“道路”不平，应该多找自身原因;从“摔跤”中汲取教训，才能在人生之路一帆风顺抵达目的地。

从双方角度:孩子易“摔跤”，这里面有很多原因——家长的溺爱、学校的封闭教育、社会的过度呵护，剥夺了孩子经历锻炼的机会;而有些年轻人，则存在严重的依赖心理。

2010年都什么年代了，有鱼还捉老鼠

立意一:居安思危

温水煮青蛙的故事，富二代、啃老族等社会热点现象

立意二:享受权利、赐予与履行义务、职责

强烈的角色意识，时刻不忘自己的身份和职责，即使在巨大的利益、诱惑面前，依然能够履行职责、恪尽职守。

立意三: 正确认识传统价值观念

“都什么年代了，有鱼吃还捉老鼠。”社会越是进步文明越是发达，这些传统价值观念中的精神财富就越会显现他们的价值观念，

并受到人们的重视，是永远不会过时的。

篇三:英语6级漫画式作文模板

漫画式作文模版

第一段

1.How impressive the cartoon is in describing one of the most

widespread social phenomenon concerning + 考试主题名词。

2.As we can see from this picture，图画描写句(一到两句)。

第二段

1.What is shown in the picture has a lot to do with our life and

society。

2.It is believed and shared among the public that+你的观点一。

3.举实例或者说明观点一。

4.In addition, there is certain element of truth in saying that+你的观点二(或者相反)。

5.Just as a famous figure puts it, 如果不知道什么名言就自己创一句。

6.As is universally acknowledged,你的观点三(或者相反)。

第三段

如果漫画主题是积极方面的:

1.In my personal sense, I strongly hold that+主题名

词 should be advocated openly and enthusiastically。

2.On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourse

lves to eich our minds。

3.On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be more persis

tent。

4.It is far beyong any question that only when we pay attentio

n to it can we make it better sooner or later。

如果漫画主题是消极方面的:

1.In my personal sense, I strongly hold that 主题名词 should be

prevented immediately。

2.On the one hand, we should be sensible enough to resist thi

s trend。

3.On the other hand, it is important to keep people aware of t

he serious consquences of 主题名词。

4.It is far beyong any question that only when we attach impo

rtance to it can we see a colorful and harmonious future soon

er or later。

范文二：英语四六级作文开头中间结尾漫画作文的模式

开头:

1)对立法——先引出其他人的不同看法，然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法，适用于有争议性的主题。

[1] When asked about..., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ?. But I think/view a bit differently.

[2] When it comes to ...., some people believe that?. Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true. There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements, but I tend to the former/latter.

[3] Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that..... They claim/ believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....

)现象法——引出要剖析的现象或者问题，然后评论。 2

[1] Recently the rise in the problem/phenomenon of ... has caused/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern. [2] Recently the issue of the problem/phenomenon of ...has been brought into focus/into public attention. [3] Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.

3)观点法——开门见山，直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法。

[1] Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that... [2] Now there is a(n)growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to....

[3] Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ....

[4] Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that....

4)引用法——先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法，来引出文章要展开论述的观点。

[1] "Knowledge is power." This is the remark made by Bacon. This remark has been shared by more and more people. [2] "Education is not complete with graduation." This is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion.

[3] "...." We often hear statements/words like those/this.

[4] We often hear such traditional complains as this "....".

5)比较法——通过对过去、现在两种不同的倾向、观点的比较，引出文章要讨论的观点。

[1] For years, ...had been viewed as .... But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ..., people .... [2] People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now share this new idea. 6)故事法——先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣，引出文章的主题。(建议少用)

[1] Once in (a newspaper), I read of/learnt..... The phenomenon of ... has aroused public concern. [2] I have a friend who ... Should he ....? Such a dilemma we are often confronted with in our daily life. [3] Once upon a time, there lived a man who .... This story may be (unbelievable), but it still has a realistic significance now.

结尾:

结论性--------- 通过对文章前面的讨论 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点 .

[1]. From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw the conclusion that ??

[2]. In summary/In a word ， it is more valuable ??

2-2 后果性------ 揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重后果.

[1]. We must call for an immediate method ， because the currentphenomenon of ?? ， if allowed to proceed， will

surely lead to the heavycost of ??

[2]. Obviously ， if we ignore/are blind to the problem ， there isevery chance that ?? will be put in danger .

号召性 -------- 呼吁读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意.

[1]. It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of ??

[2]. It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency .

2-4 建议性 -------- 对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见, 包括建议和具体的解决问题的方法.

[1]. While it cannot be solved immediately， still there are ways. Themost popular is ?? Another method is ??

Still another one is ??

[2]. Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward thesituation.

方向性的结尾方式 ---- 其与建议性的唯一差别就是对问题解决提出总的, 大体的方向或者指明前景.

[1]. Many solutions are being offered here ， all of them make somesense， but none is adequate enough. The problem

should be recognized in awide way .

[2]. There is no quick method to the issue of ??， but ?? might behelpful/beneficial.

[3]. The great challenge today is ?? There is much difficulty ，but ??

意义性的结尾方式 --------> 文章结尾的时候,从更高的更新的角度指出所讨论的问题的重要性以及其深远的意义!

[1]. Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success， butthe pay off might be worth the effort . It will not

only benefit but alsobenefit ??

[2]. In any case， whether it is positive or negative， one thing iscertain that it will undoubtedly ??

Nowadays many people prefer (______)because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally speaking,its advantages can be seen as follows.On one hand,(______).One the other hand,(_______).

But every sword has two blades.The negative aspects are also aparent.One of the prominent disadvantages is that (______).To make matters worse,(______).

Through the above analysis,I believe that The Positive aspects far outweighs its negative aspects.Whatever effects it has,one thing is certain,(_____) itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses which is put on it that determines its value to our

society.

Some,others and I

There is no consensus among people as to the view of (_____).The opinions vary from person to person. Some people hold the idea that (____).A case in point is that (_____).

On the other hand, other may have a quite different view. According to them,(_____).The most typical example is that (______).

Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments,I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extend,but (_____) is more convincing.

My view

When asked about (_____),some people hold the idea that (_____).As far as they are concerned,(______).But I could not agree with them in several points.In my opinion,(_____).The reason for my choice are listed as follows.

First of all,(______).In addition,(______).Last but not the least,(______).

For the reasons mentioned above,I firmly believe (______).

Hot issue

With the development of the society,with the advent of (______).we have to face a problem that (______).

What are the reasons for it?To start with,(______).Moreover,(______).Furthermore,(______).

In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken. For one thing, it is hight time that people all over China realized the importance of (______);for another,the government should issue laws and regulations to put the situation under control.

Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that.... ?Killing Time Indoors

Nowadays a growing number of people, especially the 20s or 30s, tend to stay indoors for most of their spare time, especially on holidays. Some spend the majority of the time online chatting, blogging, shopping, dating or playing computer games. Some sit with their eyes glued to the television screen, day and night.

People's opinions vary when it comes to this way of killing time. A great number of people maintain that staying indoors is cheap, comfortable, and most importantly, very safe. Others, however, frown upon staying indoors for too long. They are worried that lack of physical exercise and face-to-face communication with others will do harm to people’s body and mind.

Personally, I don't think staying indoors for most of the day should be advocated. Instead, people in all ages, their physical conditions permitting, should be encouraged to spend more time outdoors. The brilliant sunshine, the pleasant green space, the interactions with other people, etc. are all good for people's health, both physically and psychologically. ?Will Internet Media Replace Traditional Media?

1. 网络媒体的出现在很大程度上影响了传统媒体的存在

2. 有人认为网络媒体会取代传统媒体，理由是??

3. 我的看法

范文:

Will Internet Media Replace Traditional Media?

Suppose you are going to spend a whole month in a remote island and you are allowed to bring only one thing with you, what are you going to bring? If you are smart enough, you should bring a laptop with WIFI. Actually, for the young

generation, a computer with access to the internet can be everything that traditional media may stand for and even more than that.

The Internet is so penetrating in people’s lives that many people believe it will replace the traditional mass media in the near future. In their eyes, with internet, you can watch TV programs, listen to music and sing, make friends and talk to your friends, read news and books, receive and send mails, make comments about things, and even do shopping. Whatever a traditional media can serve you, it works for you better.

In my opinion, internet media does bring great convenience to people’s lives, reducing time and cost for people who want to

be informed of the world news. However, no matter how all-mighty internet is, some traditional media are worthy to be kept. For example, paper newspapers and books are better for sight while radio is more portable than a computer. 作文话题:

?Campus Safety

1. 校园安全十分重要

2. 因此，学校应当??

3. 我们自己应当??

范文:

Campus Safety

Campus security and safety is a big issue and has become a focus in education, especially when tragic events happened time and time again on caroms. The recent stampede at a middle school in Hunan Province is still fresh in our memory. It took the lives of eight teenagers and injured 26 others.

The tragic events serve as a wake-up call. It warns that to safeguard the students, there is still much to be done. Schools across the country should take safety education seriously and conduct it compulsorily. Besides, they should revise their emergency preparedness plans and tighten security. For example, security guards should patrol on campus around teaching buildings and student dorms, and enforce strict entrance checks, barring entry to anyone carrying a gun or a knife. As students, we should enhance our awareness of safety — that is, being aware of safety issues and of potential hazards in

our daily life. For example, foresee the possible incidents and keep away from crowded places. Lock the dorm at night or whenever we are alone in the dorm. If possible, we should also have some first-aid training in order to help us survive emergency situations.

?Reform of English Education

1. 目前要求改革大学英语教育的呼声很高

2. 产生这一现象的原因

3. 你认为应如何改革英语教育

范文:

Reform of English Education

As college English education is greatly emphasized with the rapid development of global communication，the defects that

exist in the current educational system are open to more criticism - It is widely acknowledged that a thorough reform of college English education should be under way.

People ask for English education reform mainly because of the inadequacy of college English education under the current system. On the one hand, many college English teachers underestimate the role interest plays in English learning and keep preaching in class. On the other hand, under the current system, most Chinese students tend to separate vocabulary memorizing, grammar, listening, speaking, reading, and writing from each other and therefore their English is also “broken” in this way. This has also greatly contributed to the “dumb English” of many Chinese students.

In my view, to reform English education, colleges and universities should encourage students to speak English in class and hold more activities to promote students' oral English. Teachers should focus on attracting students with vivid teaching and arouse students' enthusiasm in learning English. With the collaboration, the reform of college English education will surely yield plentiful fruits.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying “Happiness

is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” You can cite examples to illustrate your points and then

explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problem and be happy, you should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

?【参考范文】

To solve problem, to taste happiness

“What is happiness?” is a cliché topic. Everyone has a different definition to the true meaning of happiness. For Franklin

Roosevelt, “happiness is not the mere possession of money; it lies in the joy of achievement, in the thrill of creative effort.”

For Elbert Einstein, “if you want to live in a happy life, tie it to the goal, not the people or the things.” Although the two

great men grant different definitions to happiness, there is something in common, that is, happiness derives from the

capacity to solve problems. I believe that this is true.

There is no denying that life is full of problems. Let’s take environmental pollution for example. Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. Fortunately, this public hazard has drawn our greatly attention and many effective measures are

being taking to solve it. In fact, now the public are benefiting more and more from pollution prevention and control. We can

enjoy clear air, health food and beautiful scenes again. Isn’t this happiness?

All in all, indeed, equipped with the ability to cope with problems should suppose to be happiness. In other worlds, in the

middle of problems lies happiness.

【参考译文】

解决问题，品味幸福

“何为幸福,”这是一个老生常谈的话题。每个人对幸福的真正含义都有不同的定义。对罗斯福而言，“幸福并不

只是拥有财富，真正的幸福在于取得的成就和创造带来的激动。”而对爱因斯坦来说:“如果一个人想要生活幸福，

他就应该寄希望于目标而不是人或事。”尽管两位伟人对幸福赋予了不同的定义，但是有一点却是共同的，那就是，

幸福来源于解决问题的能力。我非常认同这一点。

无可否认，生活中总是充满问题。以环境污染为例。环境污染极大的威胁了我们的生存。幸运地是，这一公害已经

引起了人们的极大关注并且诸多有效措施被用来处理该问题。事实上，如今人们从治污当中得到越来越多的好处。

我们可以重新享受清新的空气、健康的食物和美丽的风景。这难道不是一种幸福吗,

总之，具备解决问题的能力就是一种幸福。换言之，幸福总在问题中。

漫画作文:

Part 1 Describe the picture

The picture is talking about/shows?

The picture shows a common phenomenon.

The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.

In the picture, there are?/?is (are) doing?

The picture above is about ?

?Let’s look at the picture above/first.

How impressive the cartoon is in describing one of the most widespread social phenomenon concerning + 考试主题名词.

Let’s take a closer look at the drawing. 图画描写句(一到两句). Simply designed as the drawing seems to be, the symbolic meaning is as deep as occeans. The author’s real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us secure what hides

behind the ice burg.

Part 2 Interpret the picture

It seems very ridiculous that?However, this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture shows that?It is the exact reflection of?

The picture indicate that we?

Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that?

This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among?

What is shown in the picture has a lot to do with our life and society. It is believed and shared among the public that not only

+ 与生活/社会联系的核心句一 but also +与前一句意思相近的句子【注意倒装】. 举例子(3句)[具体举，不要写

许多人怎么样，乱编就行，别写自己，比如我的邻居或者我的朋友某某什么的]. In addition, there is certain element of truth in saying that + 与生活/社会联系的核心句二 rather than + 与前面意思相反的句子. Just as a famous figure puts it, 如果不知道什么名言就自己创一句. As is universally acknowledged, 与生活/社会联系句三.

Part 3 Give your opinions

I think/believe that

As far as I’m concerned,

In my opinion,

From my point of view,

?should?

It is better/advisable to?

I consider it necessary?

如果漫画主题是积极方面的:

In my personal sense, I strongly hold that 主题名词 should be advocated openly and enthusiastically. On the one hand, we

should be sensible to encourage ourselves to enrich our minds. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be more persistent. It is far beyong any question that only when we pay attention to it can we make it better sooner or later! 如果漫画主题是消极方面的:

In my personal sense, I strongly hold that主题名词should be prevented immediately. On the one hand, we should be

sensible enough to resist this trend. On the other hand, it is important to keep people aware of the serious consquences of + 主题名词. It is far beyong any question that only when we attach importance to it can we see a colorful and harmonious future sooner or later!

?随着人民生活水平的提高，人们愈发关注食品质量安全。“三鹿”奶粉事件引起人们广泛关注:商家的社会责任

感与企业道德，人们健康的相关法律保证。

根据下图写一篇150词左右的短文。可以切合题意有所发挥。短文首句已给出，不记入总词数。

As we can see from the cartoon, manufacturers, milk stations, milk cows and even grass are trying in vain to make excuses for the misconduct. After careful consideration, we come to realize that the drawer wishes to call our attention to the

lack of social responsibility and business ethics.

With the change of people’s ideology, people take it for granted that we make a fortune. Driven by the pursuit of profit, some manufacturers go to extremes to make money by providing the customers with fake or inferior products. A case in point is “Sanlu milk powder”, which is confirmed to contain a poisonous chemical. As a result, numerous innocent infants become the victims of the milk food. In the long run, such illegal acts not only damage the dairy industry, but the credibility of the social mechanism.

To my mind, it is high time we took effective measures to prevent such crime from happening again. It is advisable to pass related laws to punish whoever produces poisonous food.

Only in this way can we establish a harmonious society where manufactures take up more social responsibility and credibility and people enjoy healthy food.

?下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题，有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通。请你根据对该漫画

的理解用英语写一篇短文。该文应包含以下要点:1(该漫画告诉了我们什么;2(你对此现象的看法 3(我们该如

何主动和父母亲沟通。

漫画caricature

Modern technology has many advantages. While we enjoy the fun and convenience of the Internet, we also experience some new problems. This caricature describes one of them. It shows that the teenage boy is enjoying chatting online so much that he refuses to talk to his parent. I think it might be common, but it is totally unacceptable. Nothing can replace face-to-face communication no matter how easy or interesting it is for us to chat with people from across the world on the Internet.

In most Chinese families, there is only one child. Obviously, we are the centre of our parents’ attention. Many parents

are willing to do anything to make sure that we live a good life. It is understandable that they want to know what’s

happening to us, what kind of friends we make and how we are getting on with our studies.

I think we should let them know us well. For example, we can tell them what’s going on in school when we have dinner

or turn to them for advice when we have problems.

In that way, I’m sure the relationship between us and our parents will become better and better.

范文三：漫画题英语作文开头

漫画题英语作文开头

篇一:英语四、六级作文开头、中间、结尾、

漫画作文的模式

开头:

1)对立法——先引出其他人的不同看法，然后提出自己的看法

或者偏向于某一看法，适用于有争议性的主题。

[1] When asked about..., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ?. But I think/view a bit differently.

[2] When it comes to ...., some people believe that?. Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true. There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements, but I tend to the former/latter.

[3] Now, it is commonly/generally/widely

believed/held/acknowledged that..... They claim/ believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....

2)现象法——引出要剖析的现象或者问题，然后评论。

[1] Recently the rise in the problem/phenomenon of ... has caused/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.

[2] Recently the issue of the problem/phenomenon of ...has been brought into focus/into public attention.

[3] Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.

3)观点法——开门见山，直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题

的看法。

[1] Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that...

[2] Now there is a(n)growing awareness/recognition of the

necessity to....

[3] Now people become increasingly aware/con(本文来自:

www.bdFqY.cOM 千叶帆文摘:漫画题英语作文开头)scious of

the importance of ....

[4] Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that....

4)引用法——先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法，来引出文

章要展开论述的观点。

[1] "Knowledge is power.This is the remark made by Bacon. This remark has been shared by more and more people.

[2] "Education is not complete with graduation.This is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion.

[3] "....We often hear statements/words like those/this.

[4] We often hear such traditional complains as this

"....".

5)比较法——通过对过去、现在两种不同的倾向、观点的比较，

引出文章要讨论的观点。

[1] For years, ...had been viewed as .... But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ..., people ....

[2] People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now share this new idea.

6)故事法——先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣，引出文

章的主题。(建议少用)

[1] Once in (a newspaper), I read of/learnt..... The phenomenon of ... has aroused public concern.

[2] I have a friend who ... Should he ....? Such a dilemma we are often confronted with in our daily life.

[3] Once upon a time, there lived a man who .... This story may be (unbelievable), but it still has a realistic significance now. 结尾:

结论性--------- 通过对文章前面的讨论 ,引出或重申文章的中心

思想及观点 .

[1]. From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw

the conclusion that ??

[2]. In summary/In a word ， it is more valuable ??

2-2 后果性------ 揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重后

果.

[1]. We must call for an immediate method ， because the

currentphenomenon of ?? ， if allowed to proceed， will surely lead

to the heavycost of ??

[2]. Obviously ， if we ignore/are blind to the problem ， there

isevery chance that ?? will be put in danger . 号召性 -------- 呼吁

读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意.

[1]. It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of ??

[2]. It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency .

2-4 建议性 -------- 对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见, 包括建

议和具体的解决问题的方法.

[1]. While it cannot be solved immediately， still there are ways.

Themost popular is ?? Another method is ?? Still another one is ??

[2]. Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward thesituation.

方向性的结尾方式 ---- 其与建议性的唯一差别就是对问题解决

提出总的, 大体的方向或者指明前景.

[1]. Many solutions are being offered here ， all of them make

somesense， but none is adequate enough. The problem should be recognized in awide way .

[2]. There is no quick method to the issue of ??， but ?? might

behelpful/beneficial.

[3]. The great challenge today is ?? There is much difficulty ，but ??

意义性的结尾方式 -------- 文章结尾的时候,从更高的更新的角

度指出所讨论的问题的重要性以及其深远的意义!

[1]. Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success，

butthe pay off might be worth the effort . It will not only benefit but alsobenefit ??

[2]. In any case， whether it is positive or negative， one thing

iscertain that it will undoubtedly ??

Nowadays many people prefer (______)because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally speaking,its advantages can be seen as follows.On one hand,(______).One the other hand,(_______).

But every sword has two blades.The negative aspects are also aparent.One of the prominent disadvantages is that (______).To make matters worse,(______).

Some,others and I

There is no consensus among people as to the view of (_____).The

opinions vary from person to person. Some people hold the idea that (____).A case in point is that (_____).

On the other hand, other may have a quite different view. According to them,(_____).The most typical example is that (______).

Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments,I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extend,but (_____) is more convincing.

My view

First of all,(______).In addition,(______).Last but not the least,(______).

For the reasons mentioned above,I firmly believe (______).

Hot issue

With the development of the society,with the advent of (______).we have to face a problem that (______).

What are the reasons for it?To start

with,(______).Moreover,(______).Furthermore,(______).

In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures

should be taken. For one thing, it is hight time that people all over China realized the importance of (______);for another,the government should issue laws and regulations to put the situation under control.

Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that.... ?Killing Time

Indoors

don't think staying indoors for most of the day should be advocated. Instead, people in all ages, their physical conditions permitting, should be encouraged to spend more time outdoors. The brilliant sunshine, the pleasant green space, the interactions

with other people, etc. are all good for people's health, both physically and psychologically.

?Will Internet Media Replace Traditional Media?

1. 网络媒体的出现在很大程度上影响了传统媒体的存在

2. 有人认为网络媒体会取代传统媒体，理由是??

3. 我的看法

范文:

Will Internet Media Replace Traditional Media?

generation, a computer with access to the internet can be everything that traditional media may stand for and even more than that.

The Internet is so penetrating in people’s lives that many people

believe it will replace the traditional mass media in the near future. In their eyes, with internet, you can watch TV programs, listen to music and sing, make friends and talk to your friends, read news and books, receive and send mails, make comments about things, and even do shopping. Whatever a traditional media can serve you, it works for you better.

In my opinion, internet media does bring great convenience to people’s lives, reducing time and cost for people who want to be informed of the world news. However, no matter how all-mighty internet is, some traditional media are worthy to be kept. For example, paper newspapers and books are better for sight while radio is more portable than a computer.

作文话题:

?Campus Safety

1. 校园安全十分重要

2. 因此，学校应当??

3. 我们自己应当??

范文:

Campus Safety

preparedness plans and tighten security. For example, security guards should patrol on campus around teaching buildings and student dorms, and enforce strict entrance checks, barring entry to anyone carrying a gun or a knife.

As students, we should enhance our awareness of safety — that

is, being aware of safety issues and of potential hazards in our daily life. For example, foresee the possible incidents and keep away from crowded places. Lock the dorm at night or whenever we are alone in the dorm. If possible, we should also have some first-aid training in order to help us survive emergency situations.

?Reform of English Education

1. 目前要求改革大学英语教育的呼声很高

2. 产生这一现象的原因

3. 你认为应如何改革英语教育

范文:

Reform of English Education

As college English education is greatly emphasized with the rapid development of global communication，the defects that exist in the

current educational system are open to more criticism - It is widely acknowledged that a thorough reform of college English education should be under way.

People ask for English education reform mainly because of the

inadequacy of college English education under the current system. On the one hand, many college English teachers underestimate the role interest plays in English learning and keep preaching in class. On the other hand, under the current system, most Chinese students tend to separate vocabulary memorizing, grammar, listening, speaking, reading, and writing from each other and therefore their English is also “broken” in this way. This has also

greatly contributed to the “dumb English” of many Chinese

students.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying “Happiness is not the

absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” You can

cite examples to illustrate your points and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problem and be happy, you should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

?【参考范文】

To solve problem, to taste happiness

“What is happiness?” is a cliché topic. Everyone has a different

definition to the true meaning of happiness. For Franklin Roosevelt, “happiness is not the mere possession of money; it lies in the joy of achievement, in the thrill of creative effort.” For Elbert Einstein,

“if you want to live in a happy life, tie it to the goal, not the people or the things.” Although the two great men grant different

definitions to happiness, there is something in common, that is, happiness derives from the capacity to solve problems. I believe that this is true.

There is no denying that life is full of problems. Let’s take

environmental pollution for example. Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. Fortunately, this public hazard has drawn our greatly attention and many effective measures are being taking to solve it. In fact, now the public are benefiting more and more from pollution prevention and control. We can enjoy clear air, health food and beautiful scenes again. Isn’t this happiness?

All in all, indeed, equipped with the ability to cope with problems should suppose to be happiness. In other worlds, in the middle of problems lies happiness.

【参考译文】

解决问题，品味幸福

“何为幸福,”这是一个老生常谈的话题。每个人对幸福的真

正含义都有不同的定义。对罗斯福而言，“幸福并不只是拥有财富，

真正的幸福在于取得的成就和创造带来的激动。”而对爱因斯坦来

说:“如果一个人想要生活幸福，他就应该寄希望于目标而不是人

或事。”尽管两位伟人对幸福赋予了不同的定义，但是有一点却是

共同的，那就是，幸福来源于解决问题的能力。我非常认同这一

点。

无可否认，生活中总是充满问题。以环境污染为例。环境污染

极大的威胁了我们的生存。幸运地是，这一公害已经引起了人们

的极大关注并且诸多有效措施被用来处理该问题。事实上，如今

人们从治污当中得到越来越多的好处。我们可以重新享受清新的

空气、健康的食物和美丽的风景。这难道不是一种幸福吗,

总之，具备解决问题的能力就是一种幸福。换言之，幸福总在

问题中。

漫画作文:

Part 1 Describe the picture

The picture is talking about/shows?

The picture shows a common phenomenon.

The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.

In the picture, there are?/?is (are) doing?

The picture above is about ?

?Let’s look at the picture above/first.

How impressive the cartoon is in describing one of the most widespread social phenomenon concerning + 考试主题名词. Let’s

take a closer look at the drawing. 图画描写句(一到两句). Simply

designed as the drawing seems to be, the symbolic meaning is as deep as occeans. The author’s real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us secure what hides behind the ice burg.

Part 2 Interpret the picture

It seems very ridiculous that?However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.

The picture shows that?It is the exact reflection of?

The picture indicate that we?

Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that?

This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among?

What is shown in the picture has a lot to do with our life and society. It is believed and shared among the public that not only + 与生活/社会联系的核心句一 but also +与前一句意思相近的句子

【注意倒装】. 举例子(3句)[具体举，不要写许多人怎么样，

乱编就行，别写自己，比如我的邻居或者我的朋友某某什么的]. In

addition, there is certain element of truth in saying that + 与生活/

社会联系的核心句二 rather than + 与前面意思相反的句子. Just

as a famous figure puts it, 如果不知道什么名言就自己创一句. As

is universally acknowledged, 与生活/社会联系句三.

Part 3 Give your opinions

I think/believe that

As far as I’m concerned,

In my opinion,

From my point of view,

?should?

It is better/advisable to?

I consider it necessary?

如果漫画主题是积极方面的:

In my personal sense, I strongly hold that 主题名词 should be

advocated openly and enthusiastically. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to eich our minds. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be more persistent. It is far beyong any question that only when we pay attention to it can we make it better sooner or later! 如果漫画主题是消极方面的:

In my personal sense, I strongly hold that主题名词should be

prevented immediately. On the one hand, we should be sensible enough to resist this trend. On the other hand, it is important to keep people aware of the serious consquences of + 主题名词. It is

far beyong any question that only when we attach importance to it

can we see a colorful and harmonious future sooner or later!

?随着人民生活水平的提高，人们愈发关注食品质量安全。“三

鹿”奶粉事件引起人们广泛关注:商家的社会责任感与企业道德，

人们健康的相关法律保证。

根据下图写一篇150词左右的短文。可以切合题意有所发挥。

短文首句已给出，不记入总词数。

With the change of people’s ideology, people take it for granted

that we make a fortune. Driven by the pursuit of profit, some manufacturers go to extremes to make money by providing the customers with fake or inferior products. A case in point is “Sanlu

milk powder”, which is confirmed to contain a poisonous chemical. As a result, numerous innocent infants become the victims of the milk food. In the long run, such illegal acts not only damage the dairy industry, but the credibility of the social mechanism.

To my mind, it is high time we took effective measures to prevent such crime from happening again. It is advisable to pass related laws to punish whoever produces poisonous food.

Only in this way can we establish a harmonious society where manufactures take up more social responsibility and credibility and people enjoy healthy food.

?下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题，有些孩子沉溺于

网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通。请你根据对该漫画的理解用英

语写一篇短文。该文应包含以下要点:1(该漫画告诉了我们什么;

2(你对此现象的看法 3(我们该如何主动和父母亲沟通。

漫画caricature

In most Chinese families, there is only one child. Obviously, we are the centre of our parents’ attention. Many parents are willing to

do anything to make sure that we live a good life. It is understandable that they want to know what’s happening to us,

what kind of friends we make and how we are getting on with our studies.

I think we should let them know us well. For example, we can tell them what’s going on in school when we have dinner or turn to them for advice when we have problems.

In that way, I’m sure the relationship between us and our parents will become better and better.

篇二:英语漫画作文题目

漫画类作文先描述图画再发表自己看法

范文:简要描述图片，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的

补习和培训的看法。

(一) 内容要点:

1( 描述文字说明:

1) 学生被迫上很多补习班

2) 无兴趣可言

2( 议论文字说明:

1) 太多的补习班是浪费时间

2) 学习要有兴趣

3) 家长不要强迫孩子参加补习

4) 表达希望

(二)One possible version:

Look at this picture. You will understand better ―Too much work

makes Jack a dull boy‖. He has to go to so many training classes besides his school classes. Life is no fun at all for him. Holidays and

weekends have become dull work-days. He is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest.

In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please don’t force these students to do

what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they

will do better than we expect!

2. 根据图画内容，以―We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter‖题，用

英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点，不得逐条

翻译。

1.简单描述漫画的内容;

2.作业负担过重;

3.精讲精练;

4.参加体育锻炼和社会活动。

We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter The girl says to the woman, ―

If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure

As is well-known, we Chinese students that we do every day is to listen to our teachers’ lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless.

more physical exercise and make us stronger, and we will have more spare time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all mentally and physically

healthier.

3. 请根据下面的漫画，以―What Will the Child Become?‖为标

题，写一篇短文。要求:

1 词数100左右，不包括已给出的开头部分;

2 内容要包括对本漫画画面的描述以及你自己对这一

现象的看法。

参考词汇:电子琴—— electronic piano

What Will the Child Become?

Look at this picture. It is a picture of a family of five. Who is the ―King‖ of the family? The only child! He is

riding

is His is his grandmother doing behind? She is But what will the child become in the future? He’ll think of himself more than

anyone else. He’ll become no good for the world.练习5(

4. 下面这幅画描述了一个情景。请根据中文提示以―They’re

Thinking Along the Same Line‖为题写一篇短文。注意:1 短文须

忠实描述图画内容，可发挥想象适当增加细节也可进行简单评述，

但短文必须连贯。2 词数100字左右。

They’re Thinking Along the Same Line

Here we see two men of a similar type. They Neither of them wants to give way to the other. Great minds think alike. Today their minds happen to run along the same line: ―Anyway he wouldn’t

dare to run into me.‖ In no time they’ll crash into each other, fall to the ground and roll together into the same ditch. Hopefully, from

this incident, they will draw the same

篇三:英语漫画作文范文

漫画类先描述图画再发表自己看法

范文:简要描述图片，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的

补习和培训的看法。

(一) 内容要点:

1( 描述文字说明:

1) 学生被迫上很多补习班

2) 无兴趣可言

2( 议论文字说明:

1) 太多的补习班是浪费时间

2) 学习要有兴趣

3) 家长不要强迫孩子参加补习

4) 表达希望

(二)One possible version:

Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work

makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to go to so many training classes besides his school classes. Life is no fun at all for him. Holidays and

weekends have become dull work-days. He is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest.

In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for

many students. They might do better when they show interest in

what they are learning. Please don’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they

will do better than we expect!

(三)文章结构和套语:

Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work

makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to ? besides his school classes. Life is ?. ? have become ?. He is ?

In my opinion, ? for many students. They might ?when

they ? what they are learning. Please don’t ?what they?, and

when learning is fun, surely ?

1). 开头:

Look at this picture.

The picture shows that?

From this picture, we can see?

2)(衔接句:

1. As we all know, ?

2. As is well-known, ?

3. It is well known that?

4. In my opinion, ?

5. As far as I am concerned, ?

6. This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.

3)(衔接词

1(表示时间顺序:first/ firstly, then, next, after, after that, during, throughout, before, later, while, meanwhile, at present, by now, finally, in the end, at last, at that time, in the past, immediately等。

2(表示递进关系:and, also, furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition, above all, what’s more, what’s better, in the same way

等。

3( 表示方位:near (to), far (from), in (the) front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the

right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside等。

4( 表示因果关系:as, since, for, so, because, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a result,

because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, therefore等。

5(表示目的:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to/ that, for the sake of等。

6(表示列举和顺序关系:first, second, third, next, then, finally, lastly, after that, first of all, to begin with, for one thing......, for

another......等。

7(表示解释和说明:for example, for instance, that is, namely, that is to say, such as, in other words, and so on等。

8(表示转折和对比关系:but, yet, sill, anyway, while, however,

(al)though, on the contrary, only, on the other hand, for all that, in contrast, similarly, at the same time, just like, just as等。

9(表示概括和总结:altogether, therefore, in conclusion, in brief, on the whole, in short, in a word, generally speaking, generally, as has been stated等。

练习1(

根据图画内容，以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter”题，用英

语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点，不得逐条翻

译。

1.简单描述漫画的内容;

2.作业负担过重;

3.精讲精练;

4.参加体育锻炼和社会活动。

We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter The girl says to the woman, “If

you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure ”

As is well-known, we Chinese students which our teachers have given us. All that we do every day is to listen to our teachers’

lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless.

us stronger, and we will have more spare time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all mentally and physically healthier.

练习2(

Directions: write an English composition in over 120 words bases

on the picture and the instructions given below.

简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的

感想。

He tells her that unless she puts her heart into learning, she can’t ride She warns her that if she doesn’t be careful, she will get

off the

hurt. The girl’s grandmother i

练习3(

The Tutor Mother Invited

can’t swim at all. But the mother hen wants her babies to learn to swim

following the tutor. We can imagine the final result.and daughters to when they grow up. However,

练习4(

请根据下面的漫画，以“What Will the Child Become?”为标题，

写一篇短文。

要求:1 词数100左右，不包括已给出的开头部分;

2 内容要包括对本漫画画面的描述以及你自己对这一现象的看

法。

参考词汇:电子琴—— electronic piano

What Will the Child Become?

Look at this picture. It is a picture of a family of five.

Who is the “King” of the family? The only child! He is

he is! His grandfather is holding an umbrella over

What is his grandmother doing behind? She is But what will the child become in the future? He’ll think of himself more than

anyone else. He’ll become no good for the world.

练习5(

下面这幅画描述了一个情景。请根据中文提示以“They’re

Thinking Along the Same Line”为题写一篇短文。注意:1 短文须

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帷? 词数100字左右。

They’re Thinking Along the Same Line Neither of them wants to give way to the other. Great minds think alike. Today their minds happen to run along the same line: “Anyway he wouldn’t dare to

run into me.” In no time they’ll crash into each other, fall to the ground and roll together into the same ditch. Hopefully, from this incident, they will draw the same

练习6(

目前中国学生的负担越来越重，减负的呼声日益高涨，但减负

的结果如何呢,请根据下面两幅图，以“The Change of Load”为

题用英语写一篇短文。

The Change of Load

At present, many students can’t afford the heavy tuition, for

which many of them will

范文四：作文开头结尾素材

高考作文素材（1）——开头结尾优美语段集锦

★★精彩开头30例★★

●青春是用意志的血滴和拼搏的汗水酿成的琼浆——历久弥香；青春是用不凋的希望和不灭的向往编织的彩虹——绚丽辉煌；青春是用永恒的执著和顽强的韧劲筑起的一道铜墙铁壁——固若金汤。

●信念是巍巍大厦的栋梁，没有它，就只是一堆散乱的砖瓦；信念是滔滔大江的河床，没有它，就只有一片泛滥的波浪；信念是熊熊烈火的引星，没有它，就只有一把冰冷的柴把；信念是远洋巨轮的主机，没有它，就只剩下瘫痪的巨架。

●站在历史的海岸漫溯那一道道历史沟渠：楚大夫沉吟泽畔，九死不悔；魏武帝扬鞭东指，壮心不已；陶渊明悠然南山，饮酒采菊??他们选择了永恒，纵然谄媚诬蔑视听，也不随其流扬其波，这是执著的选择；纵然马革裹尸，魂归狼烟，只是豪壮的选择；纵然一身清苦，终日难饱，也愿怡然自乐，躬耕陇亩，这是高雅的选择。在一番选择中，帝王将相成其盖世伟业，贤士迁客成其千古文章。

●只有启程，才会到达理想和目的地，只有拼搏，才会获得辉煌的成功，只有播种，才会有收获。只有追求，才会品味堂堂正正的人。

●如果说友谊是一颗常青树，那么，浇灌它的必定是出自心田的清泉；如果说友谊是一朵开不败的鲜花，那么，照耀它的必定是从心中升起的太阳。多少笑声都是友谊唤起的，多少眼泪都是友谊揩干的。友谊的港湾温情脉脉，友谊的清风灌满征帆。友谊不是感情的投资，它不需要股息和分红。（友谊可以换其他词语）

●盈盈月光，我掬一杯最清的；落落余辉，我拥一缕最暖的；灼灼红叶，我拾一片最热的；萋萋芳草，我摘一束最灿的；漫漫人生，我要采撷世间最重的——毅力。

●如果说生命是一座庄严的城堡，如果说生命是一株苍茂的大树，如果说生命是一只飞翔的海鸟。那么，信念就是那穹顶的梁柱，就是那深扎的树根，就是那扇动的翅膀。没有信念，生命的动力便荡然无存；没有信念，生命的美丽便杳然西去。（划线处可以换其他词语） ●毅力，是千里大堤一沙一石的凝聚，一点点地累积，才有前不见头后不见尾的壮丽；毅力，是春蚕吐丝一缕一缕的环绕，一丝丝地坚持，才有破茧而出重见光明的辉煌；毅力，是远航的船的帆，有了帆，船才可以到达成功的彼岸。

●爱心是一片照射在冬日的阳光，使贫病交迫的人感到人间的温暖；爱心是一泓出现在沙漠里的泉水，使濒临绝境的人重新看到生活的希望；爱心是一首飘荡在夜空的歌谣，使孤苦无依的人获得心灵的慰藉。

●心的本色该是如此。成，如朗月照花，深潭微澜，不论顺逆，不论成败的超然，是扬鞭策马，登高临远的驿站；败，仍滴水穿石，汇流入海，有穷且益坚，不坠青云的傲岸，有“将相本无主，男儿当自强”的倔强。荣，江山依旧，风采犹然，恰沧海巫山，熟视岁月如流，浮华万千，不屑过眼烟云；辱，胯下韩信，雪底苍松，宛若羽化之仙，知退一步，海阔天空，不肯因噎废食。

●快乐=物质/欲望。这是美国经济学家萨缪尔森提出的快乐方程式。从经济学的观点看，物质消费越大，欲望越小，快乐就越大，正应了中国人的一句古话“知足常乐”。反之，如果一个人的物质消费有限，而欲望无穷大，将会怎样呢？路瓦栽夫人有那么多“梦想”，又有那么多“陶醉”，她怎么能不痛苦、伤心呢？

●俄国作家契诃夫说：“有大狗，有小狗，小狗不该因为大狗的存在而心慌意乱。所有的狗都应该叫，就让他各自用上帝给他的声音。

●成熟是一种明亮而不刺眼的光辉，一种圆润而不腻耳的音响，一种不需要对别人察颜观色的从容，一种终于停止了向周围申诉求告的大气，一种不理会哄闹的微笑，一种洗刷了偏激

的淡漠，一种无须声张的厚实，一种并不陡峭的高度。

●爱，有的时候不需要山盟海誓的承诺，但她一定需要细致入微的关怀与问候；爱，有的时候不需要梁祝化蝶的悲壮，但她一定需要心有灵犀的默契与投合；爱，有的时候不需要雄飞雌从的追随，但她一定需要相濡以沫的支持与理解。

●微笑着，去唱生活的歌谣，不要埋怨生活给予了太多的磨难，不必抱怨生命中有太多的曲折。大海如果失去了巨浪的翻滚，就会失去雄浑；沙漠如果失去了飞沙的狂舞，就会失去壮观。人生如果仅去求得两点一线的一帆风顺，生命也就失去了存在的意义。

●即使青春是一枝娇艳的花，但我明白，一枝独放永远不是春天，春天该是万紫千红的世界。即使青春是一株大地伟岸的树，但我明白，一株独秀永远不是挺拔，成行成排的林木，才是遮风挡沙的绿色长城。即使青春是一叶大海孤高的帆，但我明白，一叶孤帆很难远航，千帆竞发才是大海的壮观。

●生命不是一篇"文摘"，不接受平淡，只收藏精彩。她是一个完整的过程，是一个"连载"，无论成功还是失败，她都不会在你背后留有空白；生命也不是一次彩排，走得不好还可以从头再来，她绝不给你第二次机会，走过去就无法回头。

●试试看——不是像企鹅那样静静的站在海边，翘首企盼机会的来临，而是如苍鹰一般不停的翻飞盘旋，执著的寻求。试试看——不是面对峰回路转、杂草丛生的前途枉自嗟叹，而是披荆斩棘，举步探索。试试看——不是拘泥于命运的禁锢，听凭命运的摆布，而是奋力敲击其神秘的门扉，使之洞开一个新的天地。微笑着，去唱生活的歌谣。

●能够破碎的人，必定真正活过。林黛玉的破碎，在于她有刻骨铭心的爱情；三毛的破碎，源于她历经沧桑后一刹那的明彻与超脱；凡高的破碎，是太阳用黄金的刀子让他在光明中不断剧痛，贝多芬的破碎，则是灵性至极的黑白键撞击生命的悲壮乐章。如果说那些平凡者的破碎泄漏的是人性最纯最美的光点，那么这些优秀的灵魂的破碎则如银色的梨花开满了我们头顶的天空。

●春蚕死去了，但留下了华贵丝绸；蝴蝶死去了，但留下了漂亮的衣裳；画眉飞去了，但留下了美妙的歌声；花朵凋谢了，但留下了缕缕幽香；蜡烛燃尽了，但留下一片光明；雷雨过去了，但留下了七彩霓虹

●宽容，是一种坦荡，可以无私无畏，无拘无束，无尘无染。宽容，是一种豁达，是比海洋和天空更为博大的胸襟，是宽广和宽厚的叠加，延续和升华。宽容有度，宽容无价，宽以待人，这是人生处世的基本法则。

★★精彩结尾20例★★

●01、巴尔扎克说过“不幸，是天才的进升阶梯，信徒的洗礼之水，弱者的无底深渊”。风雨过后，眼前会是鸥翔鱼游的天水一色；走出荆棘，前面就是铺满鲜花的康庄大道；登上山顶，脚下便是积翠如云的空蒙山色。在这个世界上，一星陨落，黯淡不了星空灿烂，一花凋零，荒芜不了整个春天。人生要尽全力度过每一关，不管遇到什么困难不可轻言放弃。《直面苦难》

●02、站在历史的海岸漫溯那一道道历史沟渠：楚大夫沉吟泽畔，九死不悔；魏武帝扬鞭东指，壮心不已；陶渊明悠然南山，饮酒采菊??他们选择了永恒，纵然谄媚诬蔑视听，也不随其流扬其波，这是执著的选择；纵然马革裹尸，魂归狼烟，只是豪壮的选择；纵然一身清苦，终日难饱，也愿怡然自乐，躬耕陇亩，这是高雅的选择。在一番选择中，帝王将相成其盖世伟业，贤士迁客成其千古文章。

●03、只有启程，才会到达理想和目的地，只有拼搏，才会获得辉煌的成功，只有播种，才会有收获。只有追求，才会品味堂堂正正的人。

●04、虽然你现在还只是一株稚嫩的幼苗。然而只要坚韧不拔，终会成为参天大树；虽然你现在只是涓涓细流，然而只要锲而不舍，终会拥抱大海；虽然你现在只是一只雏鹰，然而只要心存高远，跌几个跟头之后，终会占有蓝天。

●05、冰心说道：“爱在左，同情在右，走在生命的两旁，随时撒种，随时开花，将这一径长途，点缀得香花弥漫，使穿枝拂叶的行人，踏着荆棘，不觉得痛苦，有泪可落，却不是悲凉。”

●06、悲观的人，先被自己打败，然后才被生活打败；乐观的人，先战胜自己，然后才战胜生活。悲观的人，所受的痛苦有限，前途也有限；乐观的人，所受的磨难无量，前途也无量。在悲观的人眼里，原来可能的事也能变成不可能；在乐观的人眼里，原来不可能的事也能变成可能。悲观只能产生平庸，乐观才能造就卓绝。从卓绝的人那里，我们不难发现乐观的精神；从平庸的人那里，我们很容易找到阴郁的影子。

●07、坚持的昨天叫立足，坚持的今天叫进取，坚持的明天叫成功。

●08、如果只看到太阳的黑点，那你的生活将缺少温暖；如果你只看到月亮的阴影，那么你的生命历程将难以找到光明；如果你总是发现朋友的缺点，你么你的人生旅程将难以找到知音；同样，如果你总希望自己完美无缺，假设你的这一愿望真的能如愿以偿，那么你最大的缺点就是没有缺点。

●09、喜马拉雅直冲霄汉，可上面有攀爬者的旗帜；撒哈拉沙漠一望无垠，可里面有跋涉者的脚印；阿尔卑斯山壁立千仞，可其中有探险者的身影；雅鲁藏布江湍急浩荡，可其中有勇敢者的故事。

●10、流逝的日子像一片片凋零的枯叶与花瓣，渐去渐远的是青春的纯情与浪漫。不记得曾有多少雨飘在胸前风响在耳畔，只知道沧桑早已漫进了我的心爬上了我的脸。当一个人与追求同行，便坎坷是伴，磨难也是伴。

●11、月有阴晴圆缺，人有悲欢离合，命有否泰变化，年有四季更替，熬过长夜，你便能见到黎明，饱受痛苦，你便能拥有快乐，耐过寒冬，你便无须蛰伏，落尽寒梅，你便能企盼新春。

●12、没有蓝天的深邃，可以有白云的飘逸；没有大海的壮阔，可以有小溪的优雅；没有原野的芬芳，可以有小草的翠绿。生活中没有旁观者的席位，我们总可以找到自己的位置，自己的光源，自己的声音。

●13、或许是命运的不幸注定要将自己缤纷多彩的梦撞碎；或许是天地的无情终归要将自己继日的辛勤当做泡影放飞，或许是许许多多的难以理解却又实实在在的障碍与挫折早已将意气丰发的拼搏与百折不挠的进击化为道道忧愁阵阵孤寂，那么就请在凄惨中反省我们自己吧！

●14、“成功的花，人们只惊羡它现时的明艳；而当初的芽，却浸透了奋斗的泪泉，洒满了牺牲的血雨。”（冰心语）我们每个人都渴望成功，那么我们就应该在刚刚起步的时候，用我们无悔的付出，去浇灌隔那刚刚萌芽的种子。

●15、每一滴水都折射出一个多彩的世界，每一双眼睛都嵌进一个多彩的世界，每一条泛着清丽的旋律的小溪都闪烁着美的光辉。不要空叹人世的无奈，且用美丽的心情来看待人世的繁华多彩，细细品味那无处不在的美吧！

●16、也许你只是一株稚嫩的幼苗，然而只要坚忍不拔。终会成为参天大树；

也许你只是一条涓涓小溪，然而只要锲而不舍，。终会拥抱大海；

也许你只是一只雏鹰，然而只要心存高远，跌几个跟头，终会翱翔蓝天。

●17、当雏鹰尚嗷嗷待哺于巢穴之中，观望蓝天白云之时，它已有了梦想，那就是振翅九霄，与蓝天搏击，与白云共舞；当骏马休憩于栅栏之中，昂首长嘶之时，它也已有了梦想，那就

是奋蹄原野，驰骋天下。

●18、冰雪覆盖的时候，我们需要一团火来取暖；暗夜无边的时候，我们需要点点星光来取暖；前途茫茫时，我们需要一盏航灯来取暖??四季轮回，心里滤不去的是烦恼和忧愁，脚下略不去的是艰辛和伤痛。寒天冷日，让我们用什么来温暖迎风而立的自己？留些真诚给自己取暖吧！

●19、大海如果失去巨浪的翻滚，也就失去了雄浑；沙漠如果失去了飞沙的狂舞，也就失去了壮美；人生如果失去了真实的历程，也就失去了意义。

●20、一条幽径，曲折迂回中总会激起心旷神怡的向往；一波巨澜，潮起潮落时更能叠出惊心动魄的鸣响；一个故事，遗憾悲婉里才有肝肠寸段的凄凉；一种人生，跌宕困顿中方显惊世骇俗的豪壮。

美文佳作精彩语段：

1.生于平庸，死于平庸，是人类最大的悲剧。我们需要对平庸说一声“不”。成功的桂冠，从来就只钟情于那些不安于平庸，冲破桎梏的勇者。

我终于明白古人创造夸父逐日道渴而死的神话的意义了。从未有人想过去摘取那天空中可望不可即、光热无限的太阳，而夸父正是不安于平庸的一个，虽然他倒在追日的途中，但谁又能说，他不是成功者呢?他临死抛出的手杖，化为邓林，为后来的追日者庇荫，成就了一个伟大的神话。如若为土，为什么不能是山冈?

如若为水，为什么不能是海洋?如若为树林，为什么不能是白杨?如若为风景，为什么不能黯淡了所有风光?

迁就平庸，可能会离艰险的急流远一点，但同时，惰性就多一点，冲劲就少一点，成功的希望就渺茫一点。

世界是不完美的，正因为这样，才有无数为追求完美，逃离平庸的先人。

每个人脚下都有一方土，但并非每个人都有一条路。

不再迁就，走向成功，从拒绝平庸开始!(《迁就平庸就是毁灭成功》)

2.思想家说：沉默是一种美德。

教育家说：沉默是一种智慧。

是的，沉默与思索孪生。它使人深沉，而深沉的人更趋成熟。

是的，沉默即是力量。它使人充实，而充实的生命才会永远年轻。

有人以为：麻木是沉默；蔑视是沉默；昏睡是沉默。

不，这些都不是沉默。沉默是临产前的母腹中的胎动；沉默是春寒里芽苞中萌生的新绿；沉默是火山喷发前在地下运行的岩浆。

朋友，我们这一代正需要沉默。因为：沉默是一种气质，也是一种风度，更是一种品格。如果没有沉默，就没有孕育，就没有震荡，就没有突破。

太阳不语，是一种光辉；高山不语，是一种巍峨；蓝天不语，是一种高远；大地不语，是一种广博。

朋友，在这坎坷、曲折、布满荆棘、浪涛的人生道路上，挫折是不可避免的，关键是受挫折后的态度。此时，你要学会沉默，在沉默中镇定，在沉默中反省，在沉默中坚强，在沉默中撞击新的火花。

朋友，当你成功时，不可骄傲。此时更应沉默，在沉默中冷静，在沉默中回首，在沉默中寻找新起点，确立新的目标。

有人以为口若悬河、滔滔不绝比沉默更具魅力，其实未必。你可曾听人说：语言是银，沉默是金。语言是一时的，沉默是永久的。其实就语言和沉默二者相比而言，沉默和语言是

和谐一致、相辅相成的。如果语言是花，沉默就是它的种子；如果语言是树，沉默就是它的根须。

正像刚健往往蕴含在无情的表情中，顽强常常深藏在无望的希望中一样，尊严时时常驻在深刻的沉默中。

蛾在沉默了一冬之后，终于把飞的梦幻变成现实；大海在

沉默了一度之后，终于把惊涛的壮观推出了地平线。年轻的朋友们，难道我们在沉默之后能不托起祖国明天的太阳吗?(彭玉森《沉默》)

3.失败者箴言

(1)在人生这部雄浑的交响曲中，失败常常被谱作第一乐章。如果想躲开失败避开挑战，那只能离成功之门更远。

(2)胸怀大志的人视失败如财富，他们在接受失败的时候，也完成了灵魂的拓展与升华；意志脆弱者视失败为畏途，他们往往拒绝失败的时候，也拒绝了成功。

(3)失败，无论多大的失败，也不过是人生中的一次经历而已。因此，成功时不要过分炫耀，失败时也不要过分悲观，人生之路长着哩!

(4)失败固然不是成功，但在失败之时能接受教训，信心百倍地重新开始再次投人，这本身也是一种很大的成功。

(5)人人都有过失败，不同的是：强者的可贵在于失败后奋起，懦夫的可悲在于失败后颓废。

(6)失败，我曾尝过它苦涩的滋味，尝得多了竟也品味出甜在其中。它曾为心灵带来创伤，却也给信念播撒希望的火种。

(7)在人生的道路上，如果你从未品尝过成功的喜悦，也从未品尝过失败的苦恼，那么你的生命也许是在乎庸无为中度过的。

(8)失败不是筛子，但它能滤去你的幼稚和不切实际的臆想，使你少些单纯多些成熟，少些脆弱多些坚强。

(9)向往成功却不愿与失败交手，恰如要成为一名游泳能手却整天只会在岸上比划一样不切实际。

(10)祈望成功之路没有失败那是一厢情愿。在强者眼里，失败不是阻挡前进的障碍，而是助己攀登的阶梯。

(11)成功像水，是对所耕耘土地盼滋润而不是永久的收获；失败如风，是对理想双翼的测验，而不是无底的深渊。

(12)一次失败只能使一次成功的可能性失去，但其中包含的敢于失败的勇气，可以创造一百次成功的可能。

(14)失败的打击也许是难以忍受的。但谁能忍受得了，谁就有希望获得成功。那些只会憧憬美好的成功，却经不起失败考验的人，是绝不会有成就的。

真正可悲的不是那些总是失败的人，而是那些连失败的机会都没有的人。

(15)奋斗有可能失败，但不愿奋斗便是最大的失败。

(16)不经艰辛努力而得到的成功，即使是一次。也要比一百次的失败还不幸。

(17)当你因害怕失败而丧失追求的勇气时，你已经失败了一次。

(18)成功的殿堂由无数次失败奠基。失败一次，努力一次，回过头来，你会发现自己又向成功的目标迈进了一步。

(19)成功是对执著者的一种馈赠；失败是对追求者的一种考验。

(20)你如果能将一部分献给成功者的鲜花献给失败者，那么这世界上会有更多成功的曙光。

高考作文优美语段 50例

1、你是否羡慕过陶渊明的人生？是啊，他归隐田园，品乡间淡酒，观风中寒菊，活得多么潇洒自在！然而，你是否感受到他内心的无奈？他也有济世的抱负，却无从施展，在那个黑暗的时代容不下这一铮铮的魏晋风骨，于是他在无尽的无奈中选择出世。他的无奈，他的焦灼，他的伤痛，你懂吗？

是啊，你未曾看到，你只顾嗅五柳先生舍前寒菊的芬芳，你只顾陶醉于南山的山水，于是你羡慕他们的生命，同时埋怨自己生命的焦灼与劳累。你何时才懂得正视自己生命的欢乐，嗅一下窗棂边栀子花的芬芳？（《窗棂边的栀子花》）

2、李清照在唱什么？我相信她不是在唱“凄凄惨惨戚戚”的秋天，她在感怀春光，春太美，太绚烂；她在伤怀夏日，夏太烈，太决绝；她在痛苦冬天，冬太冷，太彻骨。所有的所有，带去她先前的安定与快乐。只有秋天，配合她凄冷的心情，告诉她这世上，另有一季，可作她人生的注脚。（《季节》）

3、苏轼的“缺月挂疏桐”，会不让人产生遐思吗？

朱淑真的“铺床凉满梧桐月，月在梧桐缺处明”，不知又有多少人体会到呢？李煜的“寂寞梧桐深院锁清秋”，那月如钩；何人能不感到秋的冷清呢？

多么凄凉的秋季！多么让人有情感——伤感的秋季啊！秋季，与梧桐，与绵雨，与缺月合照出一张照片，那张照片存在我们的心中方能永存。那张照片是对秋季的真实写照。那梧桐，也许寒鸦也不肯栖；那绵雨，也许大雁也羡慕；那缺月，也许文人墨客在寄托情感。（《季节》）

4、当你穷困潦倒时，他向你伸出了援助之手；当你失意时，他为你开启了导航灯，指引着你；当你失败时，他为你铺垫了一块块基石，让你走向成功的阶梯；当你惆怅时，他为你带来了开心果；当你不幸时，他为你送来了幸福的青鸟；当你……然而，当他累倒下，生病躺下时，你，你又为他送去了什么，带去了什么？是冷漠，还是倍致的关怀？（《滴水之恩，你以何报？》）

5、远离浮躁，回归母语，我们的灵魂将更加充实和美丽，先秦的诗经楚辞，魏晋的乐府双璧，盛唐两宋的诗词雅韵，明清的小说散文，都源源不断地为精神注入营养。“青青子矜，悠悠我心”的求贤者渴：“锦瑟无端五十弦，一弦一柱思华年”的缱绻情思：“塞上长城空自许，镜中衰鬓已先斑”的壮志难酬：“苍山负，明烛天南”的瑰丽风光都深深地印在我们灵魂深处。（《母语》）

6、还记得那个叫李春燕的汉族女子，嫁入苗寨，从此便成了照亮苗家的月亮。她居住的那座吊脚楼，她昏黄灯光下整理欠条的背影，她急步于山寨间行医治病的身姿一次次地出现在我的记忆中，时间越久，越给我长久的感动。她的无私，她的奉献，她的坚持就如同一朵玫瑰，散发着大爱的芬芳，弥漫在记忆里，时间越久越浓郁。（《花开两岸》）

7、这是个下着小雨的清晨，我们行走在泥泞的山路上。山不高，有溪水流淌而去，寒风扑面。

小雨。雨在空中回旋飘飞，密密地打在脸上，冰凉冰凉的。这沥沥稀稀的雨，向着远处延伸，终于成了一帘白幕，把天地万物遮挡得严严实实。我们在雨中前进，任这上天赐的甘霖湿透全身每一个角落，从头到脚，由嘴到心，那心里有诗在流淌，它漫过心坎，静静溢出“自在飞花轻似梦，无边丝雨细如愁。”（《诗意地生活》）

8、好像从我记事起，爷爷就一直是忙碌的。他背着锄头出去侍弄他的农田、土地；他在园子里种菜，栽果树；他去给人家帮一点力所能及的忙……很健康很快乐很自在地活着。奶奶呢，就在家里喂她的那群鸡，吆喝着两只狗，洗干净爷爷的衣裳，一边等着爷爷多年不变的“命令”：“老婆子，在干什么？快煎茶吃！”奶奶就放下手中的活计，假装埋怨地说：“这么

快就回来休息啦。”然后很认真地去为爷爷煎茶，端送到爷爷手中，与他坐着一边喝茶一边闲谈。（《诗意地生活》）

9、下雨的时候，雨丝浸润着古巷，笼罩着古巷，仿佛在小心翼翼的为一个婴儿洗浴，瓦片上的青苔，含苞的花朵都在欣喜地啜饮天降的甘霖。雨天人们是不怎么出门的，泡一壶清茶坐在藤椅上，翻翻古老的线装书，吟着《雨巷》，也会有调皮的孩子在雨中嬉戏，清脆的笑声如挂在檐角的风铃，美妙悦耳，丁香般的姑娘，举着油纸伞消失在巷口，留下背影让人遐想。这里的一切都如一首婉约的诗，一花一木都充满了灵气，营造着诗意的氛围。（《诗意地生活》）

10、云朵则是天空的粉妆。清晨的云被染成鲜嫩的粉红，如初生的婴儿的脸颊，血色柔和。黄昏的云被镀上金橙色，如斑斑锈迹，闪耀着孤独岁月逝去的光辉。有一个成语叫做“白云苍狗”，天空每日便上演着一部《白云苍狗》的电影，观众有稚嫩的孩童，有迟暮的老人，他们从变幻莫测的云朵中，或找到了童年时品尝的甜蜜的棉花糖，或找到了童话故事里云的国度。（《怀想天空》）

11、我们的思想像极了徘徊在十字路口的雏鸟。每一个方向都存在着我们可能的足迹。我们就在丰富多彩的思维方式中不断拾起或丢掉快乐。没有了思想，快乐是妄想。有人说我们是“垮掉的一代”。我不同意！因为我们有思想，懂得踏上不同的思维旅程去找寻快乐。有人说我们是“阿Q”式的新新人类。我不同意！因为我们的新思想并非“阿Q”那般愚昧麻木。我们快乐，我们的快乐是灵动的左手；我们思考，我们的思维方式是理性的右手。思维拐错了弯，便会进入快乐的墓地。当左手右手相遇，合适地交融，那便是诗意的地栖居。（《左手。右手》）

12、而茶，生于幽谷阴坡之上，浸润和风细雨的轻柔，吸取月华星辉的清幽，氤氲着若有若无的山岚野露，骨子里都透着股恬淡。而后细采嫩叶，细细手工研制。等到夜深入静，新月如钩，一壶紫砂，一注热水，高低缓就，慢慢冲泡。也不急，等着水气渐散，再一个人去细细地品舌尖上的一股恬淡，隐隐地感觉那一抹幽香融了月色山情：汇入了一片思绪的空白中，所以好饮茶的东方人，恬淡睿智，每个人都是哲人，都是思想者。

做人如饮茶，用微微淡漠，游丝般的幽香，给思绪给生活以更多的空间方可恬淡自如，从容不迫。（《空白中的独舞》）

13、而中国的画家，则会在一卷长长的宣纸上，在大片的空白中，隐隐绘出那些寂寥的山，而后就只有一片孤单的叶，无助地停留在大片的空白中，就像它孤独地飘荡在天地。有穷之描绘展现无限之情怀。而这其中，空白，一个简单而深邃的形式，便承担起此重任。利用虚无而又充实的载体去负担一个天马行空，情溢天地的境地。

这是智者的抉择。兴许人心如画，有时一点空白便要隐匿大大世界，而洞明世事之人，在于顿悟那一片的空白。（《空白中的独舞》）

14、泰戈尔说过，死之烙印将生命本真烙在生之硬币上，使它去购买那些真正有价值的东西。惟有诗意地生活，才能清明淡然的看待纷争的世界，让烦扰不再。

千舸过尽，一片汪洋，采石矶孤独地清点倒影，浊浪便是一杯煮过的酒，李白这一喝，便醉了一部唐代编年史。仗剑天涯的李白，选择了诗意地生活，于是便让历史留下了青莲居士洒脱的身影，一匹青驴，一袭青衫，让李白找寻到了生命本真的快乐。（《诗意地生活》）

15、穿越庄周梦蝶的翩跹，超脱老子骑青牛而过的函谷险塞，踏过孔子脚下不逝的东流之水，诗意地生活，蓦然回首，生命微笑。书破万卷的杜甫，选择了诗意的生活，于是便让汗青里多了一位诗中圣哲。纵然是“飘飘何所似，天地一沙鸥”的凄苦；纵然是“老病有孤舟”“凭轩涕泗流”的悲凉；纵然是“卷我屋上三重茅”“高者挂罥长林梢”的窘境；少陵亦不改己志，用

一支如椽巨笔，还原了历史本像与民生疾苦，一只小船，一席凉被，让杜甫探实到了生命的价值与意义。（《诗意地生活》）

16、诗意地生活在这古巷里，听邻家女孩的浅吟低唱，听燕子交颈的呢喃。看庭前的花开花落，望天上的云卷云舒，到黄昏，在夕阳下漫步，只叹“夕阳无限好”，不管近不近黄昏。折一枝垂柳插在蓄满清水的瓶中，尖尖的嫩芽像崭新的刚刚萌发的梦，镜子里是一片如花笑靥，花面交相映，保留一份童心，保留一片纯净，去感受生活的美好，像写诗一样去酝酿每一分情感，是古巷人们的共同特征。我热爱这片土地。这里纯净的心灵与天空，连空气的味道都有棉花糖的香，待白发苍苍时，请故乡的风再把我带回此地，吹一曲箫音，诗意地生活在这里，以终余年。（《诗意地生活》）

17、我知道，你热爱生活，尤为钟爱钢琴，高山流水间，一曲天籁踏着行云流水般的步子悠悠飘来，淡淡地，被晨风吹散了些，被夜雾浸湿了些，又被沿途的树叶遮挡了些，浅浅的悠来，跳跃的五线谱醉迷了你的心志，于是，你毫不犹豫地选择了它，静静地用心将其栽种在自己的那方“自留地”里，因为你爱，所以你暗下决心，因为你爱，所以你磨破双指亦不言弃，因为你爱，所以任着泪汗一起流，所以滴落于黑白琴键弹起你生命的独特之音。（《诗意地生活》）

18、好一块无字碑，好一个武则天，她在那片白上描绘出了一个女子的广阔胸襟与明智。她知道自己得到了太多，多得让每一个人都忌妒；她也失去了太多，多得中华五千年的文明都无法乘载她的悲哀。一切尽在不言中，留一点空白，让后世子孙揣摩她内心的骄傲与哀伤。（《无字碑歌》）

19、当我在父母的希冀中成长，优秀便成了一种习惯。他们无法容忍平庸，所以我不得不走向牢笼。他们安排着我的世界，不留一点空白给我。爸爸说，你一定是最棒的，可是他不知道，我不要做最棒的，我不想在奥数之中徜徉，也不想在字母里面徘徊。我只要，我只要一条缝隙，只构筑我的世界；我只愿，我只愿有一点空白，让我自己涂鸦。（《我只要一条缝隙》）

20、清晨起来，品一杯清茗，手捧一本《归去来兮辞》，让千百年前的悠悠山风，伴随着自己的精神，放飞到自己静谧、温馨的心灵田园，让自己的心沉淀、沉淀，在现代都市的躁动之中收获一份世外的宁静。这难道不是在诗意地生活吗？（《诗意地生活》）

21、阮籍目睹世间的浑噩不堪和好友的身首异处，借醉酒逃避现实。他的一生一直在逃避、逃避、逃避，却终因一篇《为郑冲对晋王笺》被人唾弃。嵇康则完全生活在现实之中，不肯向生活做出任何妥协，最终一曲《广陵散》成为绝响。其实人生由阮籍的醉酒向前一步便是嵇康的《广陵散》，人生由嵇康的《广陵散》向后退一步便是阮籍的醉酒，殊途同归的境遇竟是如此迥异。若是两人各向中间迈出一步，将幻想与现实稍加中和，也许就不会落得生者隐入迷幻，死者融入苍穹，只留给后人无尽的怅惘。（《梦想在现实中起舞》）

22、张允和先生亦是一位智慧的老人，她一生经历了大富大贵，也经历了战火纷飞、十年浩劫，而她却永远保有一副悲天悯人的情怀、一颗永不衰老的童心。她那悲天悯人的情怀使她正视现实并战胜现实，而她那颗永不衰老的童心则使她在任何艰难的情况下都不放弃幻想和权利。（《梦想在现实中起舞》）

23、一个人、一方冢、一生探求。

山如黛、沙如风。山还是那隐隐的青山，还是那沉淀着中华文明的青色，只是少了位从群山中走出来的佳人。沙还是意欲吞人的黄沙，还是那隔着中原与塞外的飞沙，只是多了位从中原走出来的佳人——昭君。人人都说塞外凄苦，那儿的人杀人如麻，但你不怕。没有亲身经历，道听途说，可信吗？于是你毅然踏上了出塞的马车，一路微笑，你要用行动向世人证明：

世上的事，要亲身探看，方可相信。事实证明，你赢了。塞外荒凉，但民风纯朴。你的躬行，为历史画上了最浓重的一笔。

昭君，没有被表面迷住了双眼，你亲手用躬行打造了自己的未来真哉——绝知此事要躬行。（《绝知此事要躬行》）

24、高唱赤壁东风，你潇洒成千堆雪。

坟岗茫茫，醉射天狼，杨花愁点五分，三分雄风浩荡，苏轼之才，自不必说，但让我五体投地的不是他的才华，而是那一句“事不目见耳闻而臆断其有无，可乎？”石钟山的得名多有说法，却没有一个人去躬身探求，除了他。他没有被表象所迷惑，没有被前人所扰，只是默默地验证。好一个苏轼，只为他的躬行，我五体投地。苏轼的躬行，也许只是历史的插曲，但其人格由此可见。伟哉，绝知此事要躬行！（《绝知此事要躬行》

25、周瑜在军营帐篷里来回踱着步，一只飞蛾在案台上的火烛旁飞来飞去。帐篷里忽暗忽明，帐篷门口站岗的士兵叹了口气，他明白帐篷里的人一定正被什么事烦恼着，但同时他也明白像他这样的小人物又怎能替得了一个东吴大将着想？此时，帘幡被掀开了，周瑜从里面走了出来，一身的银甲在月光的照耀下闪闪发光。他的脸上没有表情，看上去像是在犹豫什么，又好像是下定了决心。周瑜就这样站了很久，旁边的士兵也只好就这样陪他站着。一时间，天地显得无限宽广，星星满布在黑色的夜空中，就好似一颗颗珍珠撒落在了黑色的绸缎上。周瑜开始回想起几天前的事来……（《箭锋上的友谊》）

26、追溯着世界的旅途，我看到了麦哲伦环游世界的梦想，他用广阔的胸怀迎接波澜壮阔的波涛，用梦想书写着生命的厚重与责任。纵使行程中的他遭到土著人的屠戮，现实的残酷却没有将他的梦想抹杀削弱。后人沿着他梦想的轨迹，走向世界。收回目光，我看到了马丁。路德金的梦想，丑陋而顽固的现实一次又一次打击着这位“追梦者”，但他的梦想凝集了所有黑人的正义和力量，现实，终于因他的执著而跪拜在这一伟大民族战士的脚下。我又看到了徐本禹朴实无华的笑容，他没有像自己的同学一样追求花前月下香车宝马，更没有因现实的残缺而逃遁，而是倾自己的梦想于偏远支教之中。他们，都是现实中坚强的追梦者！（《相遇在梦想与现实的轨迹中》）

27、庭院深深，月光如水一般地倾泻而下，让皎洁覆盖在广大的土地上。粉蝶孤寂，烛光沉默在你忧愁密布的脸上，凝滞不开，犹如《雨巷》中撑着雨伞，结着像丁香一样忧伤的愁结的女孩。

和亲的队伍终于浩浩荡荡地出发了，载着你的思念、你的眷顾，驶向了远方。

没人知晓，你淡妆素面地走来，35作文网.35sk.com一句“我去！”让多少官员如释重负地笑了，让多少宫女在羞愧中低下了头沉默不语。

落日溶金，暮云四合，晚霞带着无尽的沉思，落在了那片青冢，云无语，草也沉默；落在了那片空白，让人忆起了你，用缕缕青丝熬成了白发沧桑，用自己的明眸点染了那一方净土，那一方空灵，那一方空白，那一道风景。（《拣尽空白，终见风景》）

28、琵琶女“此时无声胜有声”，引得那个江州司马青衫湿，何等契合，不需过多的倾诉，那一瞬间，也许我们也会穿越百年时空，仿佛面前坐着个抱着琵琶潸然泪下的女子，同情，哀愁，凄清，柔美，这一切无限的情思，又岂是那几个字所能表现的？智者总是在有意无意之间，给人们一点空间，给人们一点空白，那个部分，才是人人共有的财富，那份空白，才会巧妙将不同的人，不同的事如穿针引线般串联起来。（《点点空白，悠悠情思》）

29、“宝玉，你好……”黛玉在红消香断的尽头拼尽全劲的话让人们猜之思之。如若直接喊出“你好狠”或“你好自为之”之类的话，我想《红楼梦》的意蕴一定全无。正是这“好”后的空白让人们揣想深悟，才不致流于俗套。似乎中国文学传统对此道已深谙。

像沈从文先生《边城》里的傩送的回与不回，余秋雨先生《垂钓者》中瘦老人钓鱼否，都有同样的留点空白让人回味的意趣。

文学中的空白，发人深思。无怪乎有人说黛玉的一句不尽之言已将《红楼梦》的精华囊括呢！（《月泻树丛中》）

30、林则徐被贬伊犁，他的寂寞岂是常人能及，但他却高唱“苟利国家生死以，岂因祸福避趋之。”造福了一方百姓。韩愈被发配潮州，爱女死于途中。他的寂寞悲叹却化为了治国的动力，他在那个边远小城兴教育，修水利，受到所有百姓的拥戴，那潮州的山水竟尽姓了韩。他们的细雨不止于沾湿了衣裳，更落在了厚重的土地，滋润了一方水土；他们的闲花也不止于铺满路面，更深嵌土地，“化作春泥更护花。”他们的红线那端，是苍生百姓！他们将寂寞化为动力，去“为天地立心，为生民立命”。（《细雨闲花皆寂寞》）

31、穴鸠的现实是“决起而飞，枪榆方而止”；溪流的现实是在石缝间浅吟低唱着“靡靡之音”；老马的现实是“眼前飘过一阵鞭影，我只低头瞧着脚下”。它们早已身陷于现实的泥潭而不能自拔，麻木的心灵早已放弃了拥有梦想遥望天边的权利。于是梦想的翅膀飘然远去，现实的枷锁架在脖项。（《相遇在梦想与现实的轨迹中》）

32、一曲幽径，蜿蜒曲折中不忘了留一点空白，让入遐思空白背后“山穷水尽疑无路，柳暗花明又一村”的风景旖旎。一波微澜，波涛汹涌之后不忘了留一点空白，使人神游“星垂平野阔，月涌大江流”的雄浑壮阔、心潮澎湃的风景奇丽。一片诗词，缠绵绯测之间不忘了留一点空白，让人品味空白之后的一声长啸：“乱石穿空，惊涛拍岸，卷起千堆雪”的一片诗情到碧霄。一方净土，沉默不言中不忘了留一点空白，让人渲染出“大漠孤烟直，长河落日圆”的奇观。（《拣尽空白，终见风景》）

33、记得海德格尔曾说过，生命充满了劳绩，但还诗意地栖居于这块土地上。要感谢海德格尔，这位精神的探索者，为我的心里留下了一隅空白。让我在心烦意乱之际，能够冷静地思考，吟上一句“人生天地间，若白驹过隙，忽然而已”；让我在忙碌中，能够偷得浮生半日闲，欣赏一段“他年傍得蟾宫客，不在梅边在柳边”的还魂爱情。如五柳先生，“怀良辰以孤往，或植杖而耘籽”；如东坡先生，“颂明月之诗，歌窈窕之章”；如守着瓦尔登湖的梭罗，如遥望乞力马扎罗之雪的海明威。他们都是诗人，在属于自己的空白天地中，诗意地栖居。（《月圆是画，月缺是诗》）

34、戈多是信念。对于人的渺小，古今同感。但现代人对于机器文明的强势，内心愈感脆弱，信念的火焰更为缥缈了。诚然，人只是一根苇草，是宇宙间最脆弱的东西，但人是一根能思想的苇草，人具有万事万物无所比拟的精神力量。“人只是火花，被信念从今天送往明天。”只要信念不息，火花就不会灭。戈多的归来也就为时不远了。

戈多是理想。“少年的梦想是风的梦想，青春的思念是长长的思念。”这是北欧海员远航时所唱的歌谣，当我们踏上人生征程之时，也应想想，自己是否已准备好理想要去实现。人如果没有理想，便将陷于无边的空虚与等待中。与其让生命白白流逝，我们为何不现在就树立理想，去迎接戈多的到来呢？

戈多还是道德。在我们踏上人生的征途之时，切不可忘记当怀有一颗善良的心、带着道德上路。古人欲立身立业者，必先立德。德如风，功业如草，风在上，草必靡，无往不利。现代的人过于重利而轻义，以致缺少彼此的信任，内心怎能不感到孤单、有所希冀呢？以爱人之心协调人际关系，那么我们将时刻感到自己浸身于爱的暖流之中。（《那人却在灯火阑珊处》）

35、我有理想，我愿尽我所能为人类社会注入前进的一丝力量。我愿做到“仁者爱人”、“仁者无不爱”、“泛爱众”的博爱。我愿如“长太息以掩泣兮，哀民生之多艰”的屈平；我愿如“凭轩涕细流”，“安得广厦千万间，大庇天下寒士俱欢颜，风雨不动安如山”的杜子美；我愿如“先

天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”的范仲淹；我愿如“苟利国家生死以，岂因祸福避趋之”的林则徐。所以我拒绝空白，拒绝“穷则独善其身”。（《拒绝空白》）

36、每一滴水都折射出一个多彩的世界，每一双眼睛都嵌进一个多彩的世界，每一条泛着清丽的旋律的小溪都闪烁着美的光辉。不要空叹人世的无奈，且用美丽的心情来看待人世的繁华多彩，细细品味那无处不在的美吧！35作文网.35sk.com

37、风雨过后，眼前会是鸥翔鱼游的天水一色；走出荆棘，前面就是铺满鲜花的康庄大道；登上山顶，脚下便是积翠如云的空蒙山色。在这个世界上，一星陨落，黯淡不了星空灿烂，一花凋零，荒芜不了整个春天。人生要尽全力度过每一关，不管遇到什么困难不可轻言放弃。

38、“成功的花，人们只惊羡它现时的明艳；而当初的芽，却浸透了奋斗的泪泉，洒满了牺牲的血雨。”（冰心语）我们每个人都渴望成功，那么我们就应该在刚刚起步的时候，用我们无悔的付出，去浇灌那刚刚萌芽的种子。

39、流逝的日子像一片片凋零的枯叶与花瓣，渐去渐远的是青春的纯情与浪漫。不记得曾有多少雨飘在胸前风响在耳畔，只知道沧桑早已漫进了我的心爬上了我的脸。当一个人与追求同行，便坎坷是伴，磨难也是伴。

40、或许是命运的不幸注定要将自己缤纷多彩的梦撞碎；或许是天地的无情终归要将自己终日的辛勤当作泡影放飞；或许是许许多多的难以理解却又实实在在的障碍与挫折早已将意气风发的拼搏与百折不挠的进击化为道道忧愁阵阵孤寂，那么就请在凄惨中反省我们自己吧！

41、黑暗选择了她，她却选择诗意地生活，她用心体验大自然赋予她的一切，她用情为自己黑暗的世界画上太阳，画上彩虹，更用毅力充实着自己的智慧，完善着自己的人生，她甚至还可以笑着写出《假如给我三天光明》，她诗意地生活着，享受着，更收获着，她的名字叫海伦。凯勒。（《诗意地生活》）

42、天空投影在水的碧波中，于是有了梭罗坐在瓦尔登湖畔，垂钓水中一望无垠的夜空繁星。天空投影在人的明眸中，于是有了楚国的屈原仰望天空，吟诵奇丽诡谲的《天问》。哲人的天空，孕育了他们的灵魂。他们因此有了天空般辽阔的情思与胸襟。（《怀想天空》）

43、我只愿意相信，梵高一直生活在他的秋季。于他而言，四季的更迭只是惘然；于他而言，有葵花的地方，就有天堂。所以有人说，梵高的一生是悲哀的，因为他把心驻扎在秋天。心在秋天，则是“愁”，这也注定了他一辈子的孤独与疯狂。

大多数人认为梵高的一生是那么蹩脚与哀情，他烧焦的左手，割去的右耳也许是疼痛的，但并不一定是痛苦，自然更无法去想当然地以为他的不快乐与不幸福。也许我们宁愿相信，在这个天才画家眼里的世界是残缺的，因为我最爱的庄子说过：你不是鱼，怎么知道鱼在水里是不快乐的？35作文网.35sk.com （《季节》）

44、孤独的树枝，像母亲在门口等待的身影，一身的严寒，驱不散母亲双手的温暖。

冬天的冰冷，无法冻伤我的心，因为我有母亲编织的爱为我驱寒送暖，但是洁白的雪，可不可以不要染白我母亲柔顺的乌丝？那是我童年最美的梦啊！（《冬天里的春天》）

45、漫漫的冬季，不如春意融融，万物争光辉；不如秋意绵绵，香山红叶飞满天；更不如夏意灿烂，烈日激情回射。但冬意，是暖暖的。冬季的阳光缓缓洒下，洒尽每一个角落，温暖人心。光线轻柔而温暖，孕育着一丝丝的生机；冬季的雨水声声滴落，落入每一寸土地，喂饱每一株生命，滋润万物细无声，孕育着一丝生命。冬季并不是人们想象中那么无情，冬季只是以她的方式爱自然。如果说春季是生机勃勃的，是万物复苏的季节，那么我说冬季是孕育生机的季节，有何过之？相比之下，是不是冬季更伟大，更博爱呢？（《季节》）

46、土壤虽忍受着人们的摒弃，却毫无怨言，经历雨滴的拍打，冷风的肆虐，终于在和煦的春风里，吐纳一地的芬芳，在人们的心头，弹奏着潺潺的乐章。也许，世间某些外表丑陋不

堪的事物，它们也一直在默默奉献着，一直在为世间的美好而努力着。（《穿越百年的芬芳记忆》）

47、依稀梦中，远古先人吟唱着古老的歌谣在田间河边勤劳地耕种。从《诗经》中一路走来，我听到无数黄皮肤黑眼睛的中国人吟诵着不朽的诗篇，抑扬顿挫、断金切玉，每个字都那么妥帖，那语言仿佛活了过来，如梦谣般轻轻吟唱着中华民族的风骨和气度。（《母语如河》）

48、“江南可采莲，莲叶何田田。”汉乐府用她那独特的婀娜带着江南的清香，伴着燕语呢喃飘入人们梦中，使那梦境亦真亦幻，氤氲的水汽打湿人们的易感动的心，何其妙哉！又或是“昔我往矣，杨柳依依；今我来思，雨雪霏霏。”《诗经》的清新与明媚如同春日的黄莺穿柳，白鹭登天，将轻灵投向那一如水洗的碧空，也如同独上高楼的江南女子，将一眼隐隐的凄怨化为一汪美丽的池水，滋润、迷醉了五千年的华夏古国！这是多么的令人心向往之。（《拥紧自己的灵魂》）

49、春意。盎然。这条通往故乡的路，打扮了多少次，这条通往故乡的路，经历了多少载，那些黄尘都去了何方。依旧是车水马龙的大街，飞驰的车儿，留下一道风过的划痕，翻起一片城市的味道。西湖的四面，远远近近，高高低低都是树，这些树将湖景重重围住，只在一旁，漏着几段空隙，路才隐约可以看见。仰头轻轻呼吸，那些微小的分子中，是浑厚而又纯美的氛围。倾盆的雨洒落下来，冲走一片热浪，坚实的柏油马路，溅起一朵朵雨花，开得无比灿烂，就像这个城市兴起一样，美丽得无言再去形容。湖的一侧，荷叶间点点“繁星”仿佛在牛乳中洗过一样。一条路，平坦，湿漉。雨过之后，弥留着雨得清，雨得纯。夜，路，有灯光打在他身上，有月光为他指明，有路边的霓虹灯为他搭建舞台，他不能疲惫，不能沉睡，他要像夜一样，像一块永远也铺展不到尽头的布匹，他承载着这个天地，他要通往更远的故里。

故乡——杭州，是盛开在风景上的华丽。（《故乡在我心中》）

50、“坦然面对，笑对人生”，乐观、坚强，是热爱生命的人们所共有的“人之常情”。

年青的军官把失去亲人的痛苦，化作与死神赛跑抢救幸存者的动力；泥泞的山路上，他背着白发苍苍的老人，向安全的港湾停靠。年轻的女警官把嗷嗷待哺的孩子托付给家人，在瓦砾中抱起战胜了震魔的小生命，甘甜的乳汁绽放了天真的花蕾。“最美丽的警察”，这是人们给她的最好的评语。（《人之常情》）

范文五：作文经典开头结尾

宜都二中高三英语抢分秘籍

作文篇 3

开头段：

①It’s universally acknowledged that…（人们普遍认为…）

②

（我总认为…是非常重要的。）

③

④… (几年的学校生活教会了我很多，其中我最看重的是…)

中间段：

① If my memory doesn’t betray me, there was a time when…

/If my memory serves me well, there was a time when…

（要是我没记错的话，曾经…）

② Stuck in my mind is a story that I’m inclined to tell you to illustrate my viewpoint. There was a time when…（我突然想到了一个故事，我想用此来阐明我的观点。曾经…）

③ When it comes to this, I can’t help reflecting on one of my experiences. There was a time when…（当谈到这

时，我不禁想起我的一次经历。曾经…）

④

…

…）

⑤

/Stepping into the most stressful year of high school, I found it hard to…

（进入高中最有压力的一年，我发现很难…）

结尾段：

① From what has been mentioned above, we can safely arrive at a conclusion that…（综上所述，我们可以得出一个结论…）

②

Based on my personal experience, I’m firmly convinced that…

/ Based on my personal experience, I have every reason to believe that…

…）

③ ）

1. Hard as I tried, I failed again and again, thus making me frustrated and lose confidence in myself.

2. It was with his help that I got out of the trouble, for which I have been grateful to him.

3. So if we want to meet the shining sun on the other side of the difficulties, we should first have the courage to overcome them and then enjoy the joy of success.

4. There are days when everything goes smoothly, but there are also days that are tough. This is life.

5. I was on the point of losing heart when my friends appeared and told me that keep positive, and I would make it.

6. To my disappointment, the more worried I was about my studies, the less efficient I became.

7. Equipped with confidence, we can deal with any challenges and difficulties until we succeed.

8. If we are to make a difference, we should build up our confidence, which is of vital importance if we want to overcome any obstacles and finally achieve our goal.

9. Looking back on those days, I am impressed by their help and feel gratitude.

10. It suddenly flashed on me that one could never really avoid the shadow but could choose to face the sun.

11. The next months witnessed my efforts and progress.

12. As an old saying goes, “Nothing is difficult in the world if you put your heart into it.”

13. There is no denying that never giving up has been rooted in my mind.

14. If I focused on my dreams, whatever difficulties there were, I would be able to cope with them.

15. It was then

that I discovered what mattered more to me was the courage to face the failure and the

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