范文一:作文互动约稿信
首先感谢您给我提供这么优秀的作文。
此稿件请按如下步骤完成:
【作者自述】
……
每一篇好作文的完成都有来由。是什么触动你有了这样的思考,是谁给了你这样的启发,是什么让你产生了这样的灵感,在什么样的环境里让你有了这样的成就,这些~你都可以告诉我们~告诉你的同学和老师~让大家都来了解你的作品出生前、出生时~甚至出生后的情况。400字以内。
(标题)
(正文)
【同学说】
……
找两三个好朋友说说读完你作文之后的感受吧。可以是你的同龄人~也可以是你的学姐学妹~学兄学弟,可以说说对你作文的赞美~感觉有什么不足~也可以谈谈对自己写作的启发……但一定要真实哦~一定要让全国的小读者们觉得咱们在讲真话。,从以往的稿件来看~这部分的内容同学有点不太好把握。要记住我们就像在课堂上发言评价别人的文章一样就行~千万不能写成像教师评语那么专业,
【妈妈(爸爸)说】
……
可以是爸爸说或妈妈说~也可以是爸爸和妈妈。
【老师批语】
……
这一部分就交给老师吧~老师的批语肯定比同学和家长的话更专业哦。 【编辑的话】
……
这一部分就交给我们吧。
以下是例文~可参考:
泥土的孩子
张振旭(……)
【作者自述】
记得曾经阅读过一篇题为《默默无闻的小草》的文章~赞美过小草的朴实无华~也褒扬小草顽强的生命力。因而~我对小草的情怀又添了几分。去年秋天我在郊外看到农民们正在地里刨花生~那深埋地下的一颗颗饱满的果实~触动了我的心灵。
在这个金黄的收获季节~花生静静地躲在一边。特殊的环境下为了生存和传种~它只有把子房伸入土壤中去结果实。在泥土深处~没有人注意它~可是它从不计较~因为它不需要名声~不需要声张。
心中刹那间的灵感总能给写作一些启发~带来很好的作文素材。灵感突来~一段优美的诗句~抑或是一篇精彩的作文~总会跃然纸上。这样质朴无华的描写内容~看似零零散散、信笔拈来~字里行间充满了对生活的感悟。
对于我来说~写作是一种乐趣~它蕴藏着无穷的奥秘。生活中的点点滴滴都可以记录下来~写作是一种发泄~是一种心情~它让我展开自己内心的世界。每当遇到令我惊讶、感动的事~我都会有把它写下来的冲动。于是~写作成了我最好的朋友。
你是泥土的孩子,倔强地一直呆在泥土的深处发育滋长……(作文略)
【同学说】
###:用第二人称写作文~可以更加深情地抒发自己的情感~同时像和别人在对话~显得更加亲切~有说服力。张振旭同学在描写的过程中~还给事物赋予了人性化的情感~简单的白描就能起到很好的效果。只是有些地方我觉得有点深奥~不好理解。
###:我觉得这篇作文的题目取得很好~新颖形象~使人急着想去阅读~而我自己平时写作文的时候总觉得起标题很难~能把标题起得这么好~真是佩服张振旭。作文的语言也很好~词语和句子的使用都很有功力。从整理来说~这篇文章整体营造了很唯美的意境~使人愿意而且急于读下去~而且能够引领读者领悟文章的深层意蕴。
###:文章的角度和我们平时读到的作文不太一样~很新颖~对泥土的孩子的描写也很有韵味。语言很棒~作者华丽的文笔和深厚的语言功底我自愧不如。很喜欢这篇文章。 【父母说】
爸爸:这孩子还是比较有灵性的~在老师的悉心指导和帮助下~作文水平有了长足的进步。我们认为~作文方面应给孩子提供新鲜和富有真实质感的东西~现在的考试~很多东西是有弊端的~我说的是作文~如何打开学生的思维瓶颈和语言上的障碍~单靠机械积累是不够的。虽然对这篇习作比较满意~但总觉得其思考阐释还不够通透~一些语句似是零散的拼凑。
妈妈:孩子喜欢将从生活中采撷的点滴感动~融入文章当中~化作一股灵气~让读者回味无穷。平常的每篇习作~多发自内心的感受、理解~总是别有一番风韵~透过字里行间~能让人从中领悟到点什么。写作是一件快乐是事~孩子的文字充满灵性~把握内容、体会思想感情~不刻意地写作。
【老师说】
###:本文以其独特的风貌~抒写一株把“种子深埋泥土”的平常的植物——花生。言其静态~状其动态~而无论是描写默默的静态~还是抒其不招摇的动态~都现出一种唯美的境界。由物生情、托物言志。
文章时而描写状貌~时而介绍价值~时而歌颂品格~时而赞美精神~融叙述、描写、议论、抒情溶于一体~挥墨自如~使其除了给人以美的享受之外~还让人领悟到一个更深的立意:“那些习惯抛头露面的花儿容易夭折~那些表面光鲜的果实最容易腐朽。”笔端灌注了作者真挚、浓烈的感情。
【编辑说】
,略,
范文二:写信约稿,英语作文
写信约稿,英语作文
篇一:英文约稿信件的写法 (诸光宇)
约稿信件的写法
湖北十堰东风高中 诸光宇
约稿信是向其他的作者发出为某个媒体撰写稿件的请求信件。在信中需要介绍该媒体的
栏目特点和媒体的受众范围。在约稿时要指定稿件的内容,约稿发起人即可以规定要写作的
内容~也可让被约稿人根据媒体和栏目的性质自己拟定写作题目和内容,~并且要约定稿件大
致的篇幅和交稿日期。
这样的信件一般要求写100词左右。所以内容要写简洁一些~不要长篇大论、过于详细。
若担心篇幅不够~可以适当增加少许细节和串接词。语言在流畅的基础上要适度组合和高级。
模板一:
Dear ~
I’d like to ask you to write an article for .
The “” section in our is very popular among to
做某事 . It carries articles written by某些别的被约稿人 about the 某些话题 . Would
you please write something about ? And we would especially welcome articles about
and . You can write anything relevant so long as it’
s interesting and
informative. words would be fine. Could we have your article before ?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours, 写信人名字
模板二: I’The “ section provides a nice platform for 某些媒体受众 to this section there are a wide variety of materials available to . And here are some
relevant details about the articles we are eager for.
To begin with, not only can you write something about
’s more, your article can have a title made up by yourself with a vocabulary of 数量 or so.
Last but not least, you are supposed to subscribe your article . I am looking
forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours, 写信人名字
写作实践:
假定你是李华~你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美
国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美
国朋友彼得写信约稿~要点如下:
栏目介绍;
稿件内容,
稿件长度:约400词汇
交稿日期:6月28日前天
注意:
词数100左右,
可以适当增加细节~以使行文连贯的,
开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文一写作:
Dear Peter
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries
articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write
something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome
articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high
school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400
words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文二写作:
Dear Peter
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The“Foreign Cultures”section provides a nice
platform for us students to learn more about
foreign cultures. In this section there are a wide variety of English materials available to English
learners. And here are some relevant details about the articles we are eager for.
To begin with, not only can you write something about the life of American high school
students, but also you can focus on the ways you Americans spend your festivals. What’s more, your
article can have a title made up by yourself with a vocabulary of 400 or so.
Last but not least, you are supposed to subscribe your article by June 28th. I am looking
forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
篇二:约稿类英语作文样稿
2015 全国卷 I
假定你是李华, 你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美
国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约
稿, 要点如下:
1. 栏目介绍; 2. 稿件内容; 3. 稿件长度: 约400词
汇; 4. 交稿日期: 6月28日前天 注意: 1. 词数100左
右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯的; 3. 开头
语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,I?d like to ask you to write an article for our school?s English newspaper. The “Foreign
Culture” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the the United States? And we would specially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it?s interestin
g and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your articles before June 28? I?m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua
约稿类作文要点常见句子
I’d like to ask you to write an article about sth (how to get along with my new classmates/how to make use of our spare time)
The article mainly talks about __________
You can write anything relevant so long as it?s
interesting and informative
_____words would be ok
Could we /I have your article before _______?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you
Looking forward to your reply.
大约50词左右。
篇三:高考备战:高考英语约稿信件的写法
附:高考英语作文万能句子:8种实用句型
一.开头句型 :
1.As far as ...is concerned就……而言 比如说:就
我而言 As far as I concerned 2. It can be said with
certainty that... +从句 可以肯定地说...... 3.As the proverb says~ 正如谚语所说的~可以用来引用名言名句
4.There's no denying the fact that...毫无疑问~
无可否认
5.Nothing is more important than the fact that...
没有什么比这更重要的是… 二.衔接句型 :
1.A case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是...
2 .But it's a pity that... 但遗憾的是… it’
s a pity that….遗憾的是。。。 3 .Further, we hold opinion that... 此外~我们坚持认为~...
4 .However , the difficulty lies in..+名词或者动
名词 .然而~困难在于…
5.As it has been mentioned above...正如上面所提到
的… ,可以用来对前面所说的话进行补充说明, 三.结尾
句型 :
1.I will conclude by saying... 最后我要说…
2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...
因此~我们有理由相信… 3.All things considered,总而
言之 = In a word=In conclusion
4.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the
conclusion that….通过数据我们得到的结论是~....
5.It can be concluded from the discussion that...从
中我们可以得出这样的结论 6..From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来~如果……也许更好 四.
举例句型 :
1. Here is one more example这里有不止一个的例
子 .2.Take … for example.就拿……为例子 五.常用于引
言段的句型 :
1. Some people think that …. 有些人认为…
2. I believe the title statement is valid because….
我认为这个论点是正确的~因为… 3. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that ….我无法完全同意….这一观
点的说法… 4. Along with the development of…, more and
more….随着……的发展~越来越多… 六 表示比较和对比
的常用句型和表达法 :
1. A is completely different from B.(A和B完全不
同)
2 The difference between A and B is lies in +名词
或者动名词 , A和B不同的地方是。。。, . 七 .演绎法常
用的句型:
1. There are several reasons for…, but in general,
they come down to three major ones.有几个原因……~
但一般~他们可以归结为三个主要的。
2. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.有很多
方法可以解决这个问题~但下面的可能是最有效的。 , 可
以用在保护环境等话题的作文, 3. Generally, the
advantages can be listed as follows.一般来说~这些优
势可以列举如下。 八 因果推理法常用句型:
1.Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot. 3. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, we've learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书~我们已经学
到了很多。
高考备战:高考英语约稿信件的写法 第 1 页 ,共 1
页,
范文三:英语作文写信约稿
2015 全国卷 I
假定你是李华, 你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国
节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,
要点如下:
1. 栏目介绍; 2. 稿件内容; 3. 稿件
长度: 约400词汇; 4. 交稿日期: 6月28日前天 注意: 1.
词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯的;
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,I?d like to ask you to write an article for our school?s English newspaper. The “Foreign Culture” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the the United States? And we would specially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it?s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your articles before
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June 28? I?m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua
约稿类作文要点常见句子
I’d like to ask you to write an article about sth (how to get
along with my new classmates/how to make use of our spare time)
The article mainly talks about __________
You can write anything relevant so long as it?s interesting
and informative
_____words would be ok
Could we /I have your article before _______?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you
Looking forward to your reply.
大约50词左右。
篇二:约稿信
张悟本老师:
您好~见信身体安好~冒昧向您写信,不甚打扰,恰逢国
庆中秋,先祝您
节日快乐~
我是《美食天下》杂志的编辑。久闻您在中医食疗方面颇
有研究,而我们
杂志最近恰好要推出一些关于美食养生方面的专题,特向
2
您约稿。
当下,随着人们的生活水平的提高,大家对饮食和营养的不断关注,已经
从原来的多吃点转变成吃好点,吃健康点。您出生于中医世家,6岁开始随父学
习中医,是我国著名营养学专家。近年来走遍世界各地进行中医食疗调治疾病与
养生科普宣伟,受到各地听众的热烈欢迎。而且您临床经验丰富,通过中医食疗
方法调节治疗了近百种疑难症,使众多患者重获新生,他们当中不乏被医院宣布
放弃治疗的绝望之士,被誉为中医食疗第一人。我们杂志能够和您合作,实在是
荣幸之至。
《美食天下》是一本畅销于当代美食方面的杂志,全年发售量达到400万
册,而且我们杂志以“享受美食,享受健康,享受人生。”为宗旨,在美食杂志
行奠定了“龙头老大”的地位,引领着当代的美食消费。所以您可以放心,我们
杂志绝对是有市场,有读者的。
这次杂志向您约稿的内容主要是围绕国庆中秋后的“清
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肠”。今年国庆六
十周年,恰又和中秋节相遇。因而几乎家家户户走亲访友,免不了觥筹交错,鲍
参翅肚,往往油腻过多,荤素搭配严重不平衡,酗酒,吸烟,再加上假期时间长,连续几天这么一吃,对自己的健康极为不利。因此,我杂志面临这样一群急需清
肠的人群,特向您求教。本期杂志,我们希望您介绍3-5种比较清淡的菜肴,要
有详细的制作过程,并且要介绍其疗效和作用,字数大约3000字左右。关于样
式,你可以参照我们上期杂志,或者上网.如果您同意,
将菜谱内容写好后,我们会邀请名厨照您的菜谱制作,拍摄精美的图片。在10
月10日之前务必要将菜谱和功效等完成,并将成稿寄给我们杂志社编辑部。
本次我杂志社向你提供2000元的稿费。以上要求如果您同意的话,请于9
月30日之前回复我。若有不明处,或有细节需要商榷的,我们可以继续E-mail
联系,或者直接打我电话,158****8005。
如果本次清肠专题读者反响好的话,我们杂志将会开辟养生美食专栏。像
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最近是吃螃蟹的旺季,但是大家在吃螃蟹这方面没有任何顾忌,吃存蟹,吃死蟹,或者吃了螃蟹吃柿子,所以经常吃了后拉肚,甚至要去挂水。开辟这个专栏就会
解决这些问题,帮助读者健康得吃,营养得吃,这样,我们将会有长期的合作,这样我们也是“强强联手”啊~您的中医养生也会发扬光大,而我们杂志也会越
益得完善~
万分期待我杂志和您的长期合作~
周玲 180702262009年9月25日
篇三:2015年新课标全国I卷高考英语作文范文讲解
2015年新课标全国I卷高考英语作文范文:
假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。
一、要点如下:
1、栏目介绍;
2、稿件内容
3、稿件长度:约400字
4、交稿日期:6月28日前
对于书信作文强调两点,简单&通用。需要注意书信作文三段论,把中间段的要点部分用出彩的过渡词做链接,就能写出漂亮的文章。
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二、写作提纲
根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点,列出提纲:
第一段:问候+写信背景(我校办杂志)+写信目的(套
用十大书信之“求助信“写法)
第二段:主题句+拓展句1(介绍外国生活)+拓展句2(介
绍外国节日)+拓展句3(不少于400字)+拓展句4(6.28
前交)
第三段:我希望(你能帮助我)。我相信(大家会喜欢你
的文章)。感谢你(读我的信)。请回信~
三、名师范文
Dear Peter,
How are you doing? (问候)Recently, our school
newspaper will start a column about western life and culture in order to cultivate our interests, broaden our horizons and eich our afterschool life.(写信背景+白银裤衩+八大万能利)
As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on it. (写信目的)
Here are some details about it. (经典主题句)To begin
with, you may talk about your life in your middle school, so that we Chinese students can know more about you. (简单
句+白银裤衩)Besides, you can introduce a western festival, such as the Christmas Day, the New Year or the
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Thanksgiving Day, which must be not only meaningful but also interesting. (简单句+平行并列结构+白银裤衩+八大万
能利)What’s more, your article should be at least 400 words.(简单句,不用升级,以便“长短结合”) Finally, I hope you
would be so kind as to send it to be before June 28th, so that it can be published in time. (求助信套话+白银裤衩)
Hopefully, you could do me the favor.(六大结尾句之一)
I have the confidence that everyone will like your article. (六大结尾句之二)Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer.(书信必备结尾句) I’m looking forward to
your reply and your article.(书信必备结尾句)
Best wishes,
Yours,
LiHua
第一段:It is well-known that …. is extremely important in …, through which we can ….. efficiently.
More and more people accept the importance of
There is a growing acceptance of the importance of A.
We felt very excited.
There was great /tremendous/enormous
excitement/joy/delight.
第三段,结尾:
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Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally
come to the conclusion that…
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结
论……Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that …
因此,我们最好得出这样的结论……
It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).该是我们
停止这一趋势的时候了.
of …
毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视.
Obviously, …, it is essential that …
显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…
Only in this way can we … 只有这样,我们才能……
In conclusion, ….It is advocated that we should ……
Undoubtedly contribute to /lead to/result in
Due to 替换because of
Spare no efforts to do 替换try one’s best to do
As a matter of fact替换in fact
t
提出建议:
It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).该是我们
停止这一趋势的时候了.
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of …
毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视.
Obviously, … If we want to do something … , it is essential that …显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…
Only in this way can we … 只有这样,我们才能……
篇四:2015高考英语作文(1)
全国卷1
假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美
国节日风俗和中学生生活的短
文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。 要点如下:
1、栏目介绍; 2、稿件内容 3、稿件长度:约400字 4、
交稿日期:6月28日前
Dear Peter,
How are you doing? Recently, our school newspaper will started a column about western life
and culture in order to cultivate our interests, broaden our horizons and eich our afterschool
life. As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on it.
Here are some details about it. To begin with, you may talk about your life in your middle
school, so that we Chinese students can know more about
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you. Besides, you can introduce a
western festival, such as the Christmas Day, the New Year
or the Thanksgiving Day, which must be
not only meaningful but also interesting. What’s more,
your article should be at least 400 words.
Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to be
before June 28th, so that it can be
published in time.
Hopefully, you could do me the favor. I have the confidence that everyone will like your
article. Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer.
I’m looking forward to your reply and
your article.
yours,
Li hua
全国卷2
假如你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老
人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth
Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容
包括:
1.出发及返回时间;2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。
Dear Lucy,
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How are you doing? I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school.
Recently, our class plan to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the old there and
eich our afterschool life. As the vice monitor, I would like to invite you to come with us.
Here are some details about this activity. To begin with, we will leave the school by bus at
8:00 AM and return at 5:00 PM. Besides, there will be a lot of activities such as making Chinese
dumplings and giving performances, which will be not only meaningful but also interesting.
Hopefully, you would like the plan and join us. I have the confidence that we will have a
great time there. Thanks for reading my letter. I am looking forward to your reply and your
decision.
北京卷
今年全国新课标I卷高考英语作文的题目为:假设你是红
星中学高三学生李华。请根据
以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍在“传统文化进校园”活动
中,向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程,
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并以“A Day with a Craftsman”为题,给校刊“英语角”写
一篇英文稿件。
一个面团a piece of dough;
面人dough figurine
Last weekend was memorable when we had a meaningful and interesting experience
on traditional culture.
Early in the morning, a 90-year-old craftsman was invited to our class, bringing a large
suitcase of tools and materials. We all wonder what were in it, clapping our hands, feeling rather
curious.
Then, he sat down to show us the process of making a dough figurine. It was very kind
and patient of him to explain every step of it. So careful were we that we quickly mastered the
way of doing it, starting to make our own “artwork” using a piece of dough, while the craftsman
walked among us to give us instructions.
Half an hour later, we all finished our own pieces, including a Monkey King, a rabbit, a
spacecraft, a princess and so on. Thanks to the craftsman,
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a sense of excitement and
achievement immediately filled in the classroom.
From this experience, I learned that it is our responsibility as well as our joy to protect
the tradition. What a meaningful day it was!
天津卷
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你校拟向美国友好交
流学校的中文班捐赠一批图
书。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联
系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学
校参加夏令营时带去赠书。
1、自我介绍;
2、拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;
3、询问对方的其他需求。
Dear Chris,
This is Li Jin, an 8 grade student from Chenguang Middle School, China. As the president of
the Student union, I want to talk with you about the donation of books on behalf of my school.
Im very glad that there are so many American students loving Chinese. I think Chinese is an
intersting language. of course, I guess it is not so easy for
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you to learn it. Actually, to help you
learn Chinese well,we will donate to your class 300 books
which are all about traditional Chinese
history. With these books, I hope that all of you can know
more about Chinese history and
culture. Also maybe they can help you learn Chinese smoonther.
By the way, do you have any other help? If there is any
demand, I would very happy to help.
Yours,
Li Jin
广东卷
请根据以下信息,介绍国外医疗行业出现的一项新技术。
内容包括:
技术名称:DNA检测检测方法:唾液样本分析 检测费用:
125英镑
检测时长:4到6周
检测用途:
1. 预测重大疾病2. 预知食物偏好3. 提示合适的锻炼方
式检测影响:
1. 增强健康意识
2. 易引起过度焦虑
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*唾液样本:saliva sample
DNA Detection
We can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses,predict whether
people are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise.People should pay 125 pounds for it.It takes four to six weeks to finish the report.After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies.It may cause too many worries.
安徽卷
某英文杂志正在举办以 Fancy yourself as an interviewer
为主题的征文活动,请你 以“A Famous Chinese I Would
Like to Interview 为题, 写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:
1. 采访的对象;
2. 采访的原因;
3. 想提的问题。
one possible version:
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.
I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest
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astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.
湖南卷
2015年湖南高考英语作文题目:
请以老师当众表扬你为话题,用下面所给的句子开头,续
写一篇英语短文。
As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.
2015年湖南高考英语作文精选范文
As a student,I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates。
Today,the teacher praised me, because i discipline is very seriously.
I was quite pleased, unique sense of accomplishment. I cant wait to tell my mom as I got home.. Mother is also happy for me, I hope I continue to work hard. Although the
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teacher praised me, but I am not proud. Because, the only better in the world, no best. I will always strive to climb one after another in the peak of life.
江苏卷
请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150
词左右的文章.
[写作内容]
1. 用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2. 结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;
3. 根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个
人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。
[写作要求]
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句; 2. 作文中不能出
现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
2015年江苏高考英语作文精选范文
One possible version:
The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s ives. The
three selections presented above are typical examples.
Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, there
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is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing
number of cars these years. What爷s worse, some drivers,
cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.
In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without
them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don’t
secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody’s duty to
observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.
重庆卷
请就以下话题,按要求用英文写作。
If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say?
要求:
(1)作出回答并说出理由;
(2)词数不少于60;
写作二(满分20分)
Bookcrossing. Com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该
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网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式:一是自由分享(wild
release),即把书放在指定地点,由其他参与者自由获取;
二是定向分享(controlled release),即直接传递给另一位参
与者。假设你是李华,请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括:
?表明写信目的
?选择一种分享方式
?简述作出该选择的理由
?希望了解更多信息
注意:(1)词数不少于80;
(2)在答题卡上做答
(3)书信格式及开头已给出(不计入总词数)
2015年重庆高考英语作文精选:
写作一参考
Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and
reset my goals.
写作二参考
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Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.
You’ve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.
If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.
湖北卷
请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,有英语写一篇短文。
Questioning is a bridge to learning. When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer,you will learn.
2015年湖北高考英语作文精选范文
Questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.
Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class. Although the answer seemed
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a little strange, nobody but I doubted it. Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. Half an hour later, I managed to find the correct answer. When I showed my answer to him, the teacher praised me for my independent thinking.
From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.
山东卷
假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节
日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,
要点如下:
1.栏目介绍。
2.稿件内容;
3.稿件长度:约400词汇
4.交稿日期:6月28日前天
Dear Peter,
How are you doing? (问候)Recently,our school newspaper
will started a column about western life and culture inorder to cultivate our interests, broaden our horizons and eich ourafterschool life.(写信背景+白银裤衩+八大万能利) As a
result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on it. (写信
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目的)
Here are some detailsabout it. (经典主题句)To begin with,
you may talk about your life in your middle school,so that we Chinese students can know more about you. (简单句+白
银裤衩)Besides,you can introduce a western festival, such as the Christmas Day, the New Yearor the Thanksgiving Day, which must be not only meaningful but alsointeresting. (简
单句+平行并列结构+白银裤衩+八大万能利)What’s more,
your article should be at least 400 words.(简单句,不用
篇五:请求信
高三英语作文范文请航空公司帮你寻找行李箱
假设你是李华,于 2015年8月3日搭乘国外某航空公司
航班(flight number BA793)回国后,发现遗失了一个行李
箱(suitcase)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信,请他们帮
你寻找。
信件要点包括:?陈述写信原因?简要描述该行李?说明其
重要性?期待回复并表示感谢
Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua. I am writing to ask you to help me find my lost suitcase. When I returned on 3rd, August 2015, I took flight number BA793. My suitcase is brown but it is a special, for there is a particular picture on it. In the picture is a
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lovely panda which is eating bamboo. Now I’m very worried
because many important things, such as passport, papers, purse are all in it. I need the things badly. I would appreciate it if you can help me find the suitcase.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
申请参加图书分享活动
Bookcrossing. Com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该
网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式:一是自由分享(wild
release),即把书放在指定地点,由其他参与者自由获取;
二是定向分享(controlled release),即直接传递给另一位参
与者。假设你是李华,请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包
括:?表明写信目的
?选择一种分享方式?简述作出该选择的理由?希望了解更多
信息
【参考思路】一、表明写信目的:申请参加该活动(添加
得知消息),二、选择一种分享方式:二者选一
三、阐述理由四、书信结尾(添加希望)
Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of
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books.
You’ve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.
If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.
写信给外教转达对英语课的希望
作为班长,请你根据以下内容给新任外教Mr. Smith 写
一封信, 向他表示欢迎并转达同学们对英语课的希望:
1. 介绍西方文化;2. 组织多样活动;3. 关注学生发音。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing on behalf of my class to extend our warm welcome to you. Here are some of our expectations for your English class.
First, we’d like to have topics in class about Western culture. We are all very interested in knowing more about culture behind the language. Besides, we’d appreciate
various activities to get everyone involved in speaking English. Last but not least, please give us some guidance and
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training in our pronunciation, because we all hope to speak English fluently and clearly just as you native speakers do.
Thank you very much. Looking forward to meeting you!
Yours,
Chris
假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美
国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约
稿。一、要点如下: 1、栏目介绍; 2、稿件内容 3、稿件
长度:约400字 4、交稿日期:6月28日前
Dear Peter,
Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. In order to make students know more about American culture, our school has decided to set up a column to publish some articles written by American students. Hearing the news, I was very happy. I couldnt wait to tell you about it .As far as I know you are very good at writing and you always dream of becoming a writer in the future .I think its a good opportunity that you are eager to get.
Here are some more requirements about the article.
Firstly, you are expected to write about American festivals and middle school student’s everyday life. Most important
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of all, you are required to hand in your article before June 28th. In my opinion, by doing so not only can you improve your writing skills but also can you become popular in China. I hope you can finish it as soon as possible.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
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范文四:写信约稿英语作文
高考作文--信件复习公开课导学案
【学习目标】
1.总结12种信件;
2.掌握信件的基本写作套路。
【重难点】
熟记各种信件的基本套路及基本套句
基础知识回顾
一(高考常考信件的类型(共12种)
申请信,建议信,感谢信,道歉信,告知信,邀请信,
求助信,咨询信,祝贺信,投诉信,推荐信,约稿信
二(信件的分段
1. 首段:(问候,自我介绍,写信背景,写信目的)
2. 主体段:(具体问题,具体分析)
3. 尾段:(结束语)
【自我总结】
1.首段(问候,自我介绍,写信背景,写信目的)
(1)常用的问候:
___________________________________________________
____________
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_______________________________________________________________
(2)常用的自我介绍(陌生人时):
__________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________
(3)常用的写信背景套句:
________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
(4)写信目的:So, I am writing to do sth.
申请信:
________________________________________________________________ 建议信:
________________________________________________________________ 感谢信:
________________________________________________________________ 道歉信:
2
________________________________________________________________ 告知信:
________________________________________________________________ 邀请信:
________________________________________________________________ 求助信:
________________________________________________________________ 咨询信:
________________________________________________________________ 祝贺信:
________________________________________________________________ 投诉信:
________________________________________________________________ 推荐信:
________________________________________________________________ 约稿信:
________________________________________________________________
2. 主体段:尽量写成主题句+支撑句结构
1
(1) 总结各种信件主体段的主题句:
【原因】
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There are three main reasons why……….
【建议】
Here are some suggestions for you.
【措施】.
Here are some workable/effective measures to deal with….
【告知信.细节】
?Here is the essential information you need to know.
?I want to tell you some details about…..
【求助】
Here are my problems that have been disturbing me these
days.
【邀请,活动安排】
Here is a brief schedule about this activity.
【约稿信】
Here are some relevant details about the articles we are
eager for.
【投诉信】
There are some main reasons why I am not content with…
【推荐信】
There are some main reasons why I recommend ………..
(2)各支撑句需要添加的过渡词;
?表示多方面的过渡词:首先:
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__________________________________________ 其次(此
外):____________________________________
最后:_________________________________________
?表示两方面的过渡词:一方面:
________________________________________ 另方面:
________________________________________
3. 结尾段:
申请信:
________________________________________________________________ 建议信:
________________________________________________________________ 感谢信:
________________________________________________________________ 道歉信:
________________________________________________________________ 告知信:
________________________________________________________________ 邀请信:
________________________________________________________________ 求助信:
________________________________________________________________ 咨询信:
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________________________________________________________________ 祝贺信:
________________________________________________________________ 投诉信:
________________________________________________________________ 推荐信:
________________________________________________________________ 约稿信:
________________________________________________________________
实战演练 假定你是李华,你所喜爱的global mirror周报
创刊五周年之际征集读者意见,以下内容给主编写信祝贺。
2
依据
1.说明你是该报的忠实读者
2.赞赏该报优点
1.)兼顾国内外新闻.
2.)介绍名人成功故事.
3.提出建议: 刊登指导英语学习的文章
?写作思路分析
?遣词造句
首段: 问
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候:________________________________________________________
自我介绍:我是李华,我是贵报忠实读者。
翻译:
________________________________________________________
写信背景:global mirror周报创刊五周年
句子化:我得知贵报创刊五周年。(能否翻译出来,)
简单化:我得知你们报纸要过五岁生日了。
翻译:
________________________________________________________
写信目的:我写信表达衷心祝贺。
翻译:
________________________________________________________
中间段1:主题句(优点):贵报有两大优点。
简单化:我喜欢你们报纸有两个理由。
翻译:
_________________________________________________________
支撑句1:兼顾国内外新闻
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句子化:你们报纸报道了来自国内外的新闻。
翻译:
_________________________________________________________
加细节:
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
支撑句2:介绍名人成功故事
句子化:名人成功故事被介绍在你们报纸上。
翻译:
__________________________________________________________
加细节:
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中间段2:建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章
句子化:我有一个建议,你们应该刊登指导英语学习文章。
翻译:
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结尾:Best wishes!
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【组句成章】(支撑句添加适当的过渡词,再利用万能尾
巴句型加细节)
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
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【小牛试刀】
假如你是李华,你的外国朋友John想通过阅读提高汉语
水平,了解中国文化,希望你为他推荐一本中文书籍。请你用
英语给他回一封信,内容包括以下要点:
1. 推荐阅读《西游记》Journey To The West;
2. 推荐的理由;
3. 鼓励他坚持阅读,学好中文。
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篇二:英文投稿邮件写作模板
一、最初投稿Cover letter
Dear Editors:
We would like to submit the enclosed manuscript entitled “Paper Title”, which we wish to be considered for publication in “Journal Name”. No conflict of interest exits in the submission of this manuscript, and manuscript is approved by all authors for publication. I would like to declare on behalf of my co-authors that the work described was original research that has not been published previously, and not under consideration for publication elsewhere, in whole or in part. All the authors listed have approved the manuscript that is enclosed.
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In this work, we evaluated …… (简要介绍一下论文的创
新性). I hope this paper is suitable for “Journal Name”.
The following is a list of possible reviewers for your consideration:
1) Name AE-mail: ××××@××××
2) Name BE-mail: ××××@××××
We deeply appreciate your consideration of our manuscript, and we look forward to receiving comments from the reviewers. If you have any queries, please don’t
hesitate to contact me at the address below.
Thank you and best regards.
Yours sincerely,
××××××
Corresponding author:
Name: ×××
E-mail: ××××@××××
二、催稿信
Dear Prof. ×××:
Sorry for disturbing you. I am not sure if it is the right time to contact you to inquire about the status of my submitted manuscript titled “Paper Title”. (ID: 文章稿号),
although the status of “With Editor” has been lasting for
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more than two months, since submitted to journal three months ago. I am just wondering that my manuscript has been sent to reviewers or not?
I would be greatly appreciated if you could spend some of your time check the status for us. I am very pleased to hear from you on the reviewer’s comments.
Thank you very much for your consideration.
Best regards!
Yours sincerely,
××××××
Corresponding author:
Name: ×××
E-mail: ××××@××××
三、修改稿Cover letter
Dear Dr/ Prof..(写上负责你文章编辑的姓名,显得尊重,
因为第一次的投稿不知道具体负责的编辑,只能用通用的
Editors):
On behalf of my co-authors, we thank you very much for giving us an opportunity to revise our manuscript, we appreciate editor and reviewers very much for their positive and constructive comments and suggestions on our manuscript entitled “Paper Title”. (ID: 文章稿号).
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We have studied reviewer’s comments carefully and have
made revision which marked in red in the paper. We have tried our best to revise our manuscript according to the comments. Attached please find the revised version, which we would like to submit for your kind consideration.
We would like to express our great appreciation to you and reviewers for comments on our paper. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you and best regards.
Yours sincerely,
××××××
Corresponding author:
Name: ×××
E-mail: ××××@××××
四、修改稿回答审稿人的意见(最重要的部分)
List of Responses
Dear Editors and Reviewers:
Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’
comments concerning our manuscript entitled “Paper Title” (ID: 文章稿号). Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important guiding significance to our researches. We have
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studied comments carefully and have made correction which
we hope meet with approval. Revised portion are marked in
red in the paper. The main corrections in the paper and the
responds to the reviewer’s comments are as flowing:
Responds to the reviewer’s comments:
Reviewer #1:
1. Response to comment: (……简要列出意见……)
Response: ××××××
2. Response to comment: (……简要列出意见……)
Response: ××××××
。。。。。。
逐条意见回答(来自:WWw.Zaidian.Com 在点网:写信约
稿英语作文),切忌一定不能有遗漏
针对不同的问题有下列几个礼貌术语可适当用用:
We are very sorry for our negligence of ……...
We are very sorry for our incorrect writing ……...
It is really true as Reviewer suggested that……
We have made correction according to the Reviewer’s comments.
We have re-written this part according to the Reviewer’s suggestion
As Reviewer suggested that……
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Considering the Reviewer’s suggestion, we have ……
最后特意感谢一下这个审稿人的意见:
Special thanks to you for your good comments.
Reviewer #2:
同上述
Reviewer #3:
××××××
Other changes:
1. Line 60-61, the statements of “……” were corrected as “…………”
2. Line 107, “……” was added
3. Line 129, “……” was deleted
××××××
We tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes in the manuscript. These changes will not influence the content and framework of the paper. And here we did not list the changes but marked in red in revised paper.
We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers’ warm work
earnestly, and hope that the correction will meet with approval.
Once again, thank you very much for your comments and
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suggestions.
五、文章接受后可以考虑感谢一下负责你文章的编辑或主
编(根据需要) Dear Prof. ××××××:
Thanks very much for your kind work and consideration on publication of our paper. On behalf of my co-authors, we would like to express our great appreciation to editor and reviewers.
Thank you and best regards.
Yours sincerely,
××××××
Corresponding author:
Name: ×××
E-mail: ××××@××××
六、询问校稿信件(如果文章接受后时间较长)
Dear ×××:
Sorry for disturbing you. I am not sure if it is the right time to contact you to inquire about the status of our accepted manuscript titled “Paper Title” (ID: 文章稿号),
since the copyright agreement for publication has been sent to you two months ago. I am just wondering that how long I can receive the proof of our manuscript from you? I would be greatly appreciated if you could spend some of your time
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for a reply. I am very pleased to hear from you.
Thank you very much for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
××××××
Corresponding author:
Name: ×××
E-mail: ××××@××××
七、文章校稿信件
Dear Mr. ×××:
Thanks very much for your kind letter about the proof of our paper titled “Paper Title” (ID: 文章稿号) for
publication in “Journal Name”. We have finished the proof reading and checking carefully, and some corrections about the proof and the answers to the queries are provided below.
Corrections:
1. In ****** should be **** (Page ***, Right column, line***)
2. In **** the “*****” should be “****” (Page ****, Right column, line****) Answers for “author queries”:
1. *********************.
2. **********************
3. **********************
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We greatly appreciate the efficient, professional and rapid
processing of our paper by your team. If there is anything else we should do, please do not hesitate to let us know. Thank you and best regards.
Yours sincerely,
××××××
Corresponding author:
Name: ×××
E-mail: ××××@××××
篇三:约稿信
约稿信
翻译:
1. 我想要你写一篇关于如何利用空闲时间的文章。
I would like to ask you to write an article about how to make use of our spare time.
2. 你能在6月一号前交稿吗,
Could I have your article before 1st June.
3. 期待你的回复。
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
4. 稿件长度大约400字。
400 words would be fine
Dear Peter
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I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s
English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section provides a nice platform for us students to learn more about foreign cultures. In this section there are a wide variety of English materials available to English learners. And here are some relevant details about the articles we are eager for.
To begin with, not only can you write something about the life of American high school students, but also you can focus on the ways you Americans spend your festivals. What’s
more, your article can have a title made up by yourself with a vocabulary of 400 or so.Last but not least, you are supposed to subscribe your article by June 28th.
I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作实践:
假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节
日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,
要点如下: 栏目介绍; 稿件内容;
稿件长度:约400词汇 交稿日期:6月28日前
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注意: 词数100左右;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯的; 开头语已为你写
好。
首段:
主体:
尾段:
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Dear Peter
How are you doing? Recently our school newspaper will start a column about
western life and culture in order to cultivate our interest, broaden our horizons and eich our after school life. As a result, I’d like to ask you to write an article on it.
Here are some details about it. To begin with, you may talk about your life in your middle school, so that we Chinese students can know more about you. Besides, we would
especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, which must be not only meaningful but also interesting. What’s more, 400 words
would be fine, and could we have your article before June 28?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
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篇四:作文投稿信件
《关心下一代周报》的编辑老师:
你们好~
我是盛泽实验小学的负责德育的一名语文老师,这个学期我们刚刚征订了你们的报纸,一开始家长们并不十分响应,毕竟现在的语文、数学、英语方面的杂志太多了。在老师们的努力下,同学们对这份报纸有了好感。像上面的一些发明的故事,一些习作他们比较感兴趣,有的学生还问:”周老师,我们的作文不比他们差,能投稿吗 孩子们的话语给了我灵感,确实我们学校是作文特色学校,但是总在自己学校的论坛上,自己的校刊校报上登载,很少到外面的杂志上投稿。所以我想现在起坚持帮他们投稿,如果一学期有幸入取几篇,哪怕是一篇,那他们一定也会兴奋不已吧~一定会对这份报纸刮目相看吧~
怀着虔诚的心投上我们的几篇习作,敬请阅看。
盛泽实验小学周菊芬 2008年11月14日
篇五:用英文巧妙回复SCI期刊编辑信件
用英文巧妙回复SCI期刊编辑信件
众所周知,外审专家对于文章的主要批评意见是非常重要的,因此作者对于这些意见的回复也是尤为关键。本文就如何用英文就其意见进行回复做一下简单说明:
1、In reply to the referee’s main criticism of paper,it is
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possible to say that 您的回复:外审专家对于表1中xxx所提
出的问题现已改正。而后面的一些小改动则不会影响文章对
结果的解释。One minor point raised by the referee concerns of the extra composition of the reaction mixture in Figure 1 has now been corrected.Further minor changes had been made on page 3,paragraph 1(line 3-8)and 2(line 6-11).These do not affect our interpretation of the result.
2、我非常仔细地阅读了外审专家的意见,而且我认为文
章仅仅因为缺少xxx而被拒绝刊登的。我承认本应在丈中包
含XXX 然后这仅是出于对文章简洁的考量,没有提供相关
数据而非疏忽。I have read the referee’s comments very
carefully and conclude that the paper has been rejected on the sole grounds that it lacked toxicity data.I admit that l did not include a toxicity table in my article although perhaps I should have done.This was for the sake of brevity rather than an error or omission.
3、谢谢您对于我文章“XXX”的回复以及外审专家的意见。
我们已经仔细研究了他们的意见,并做了相应的改正,希望
获得他们的认可。Thank you for your letter of—and for the
referee’s comments concerning our manuscript entitled.We have studied their comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with their approval.
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4、我随信附上修过的文章,其中增添了在外审专家建议下
新做的实验
报告,可进一步证实原有结论 I enclosed a revised manuscript which includes a report of additional experiments done at the referee’s suggestion.You will see that our original findings are confirmed.(
5、我们附上依照审稿专家的意见修改的原稿,其中修改
部分用红色划
线标注。We are sending the revised m manuscript according to the comments of the reviewers.Revised portion
are underlined in red.
6、外审专家的意见对我们很有帮助,我们已经按照这些
意见对原稿做
了修改。We found the referee’s comments most helpful and have revised the m manuscript.
7、很高兴得知审稿专家对文章的好评we are pleased to
note the
favorable comments of reviewers in their opening sentence.
8、感谢你的来信。我很高兴稿件经修改后可在XXX杂志
发表。Thank
you for your letter.I am very pleased to learn that our
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manuscript is acceptable for publication in Cancer Research with min0r revision(
9、为此,我们进行了一系列进一步的实验,结果见炙5
的总结。由此
我们得出结论内在的因素起不到什么作用。We have
therefore completed a further series of experiments,the
result of which are summarized in Table
5.From this we conclude that intrinsic factor does not account.
10、我们删除了对文章不重要的段落。We deleted the
relevant passage
since they are not essential to the contents of the paper.
11、我觉得外审专家对于XXX的评论有些误解。I feel that
the reviewer’s
comments concerning Figures 1 and 2 result from a misinterpretation of the data.
12、如果在我们的系统中有非蛋白抑制剂,我们就会将其
设为控制组。
We would have include a non-protein inhibitor in our system,as a control,if one had been available.
13、我们希望保留表4,在结果部分新加入的一段话帮助
解释了其存在
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的意义。We prefer to retain the use of Table 4 for reasons that it should be clear from the new paragraph inserted at the end of the Results section.
14、尽量审稿专家并不认为有必要测量细胞的温度,我们
却不这样认
为。Although reviewer does not consider it is important to measure the ternperature of the cells,we consider it
essential.(
15、页眉标题已改为“”。The running title has been
changed to.
16、在材料与方法段中已包括了xxx的细节。The Materials
and Methods
section now includes details for measuring uptake of isotope and assaying hexokinase.
17、原稿中对于xxx的描述不正确,现已纠正。很感谢外
审专家的指
正。The concentration of HAT media(page1 2 paragraph 2)was incorrectly stated in the original manuscript.This has been rectified.The authors are grateful to the referees for pointing out their error.
18、依照两位外审专家的建议,现增添了对于XXX的讨
论。As suggested
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by both referees,a discussion of the possibility of laser action on chromosome has been included(page16,paragraph
2).
19、较原来的图片,我们在新的一组图片中增加了对比例
尺的定义。
We included a new set of photographs with better definition than those originally submitted and to which a scale has been added.
20、根据外审专家的意见,我们已重新绘制了图3和4。
Following the
suggestion of the referees,we have redraw Figure 3 and 4.
21、我在炙章的正文和参考文献中增加了对投稿后发表的
另外两篇文
章的引用。这两篇文章是:Two further papers,published
since our original submission,have been added to the text and Reference section.These are:
22、很感谢外审专家的宝贵意见,希望修改后的文章更公
平的、完整
地记录了我们的研究工作。我们相信修订的稿件可以达到
出版要求。We should Iike to thank the referees for their helpful comments and hope that we have now produced a m ore balance and better account of our work W e trust that
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the revised manuscript is acceptable for publication.(
23、我非常感谢您和外审专家对于文章修改方面给予的帮
助。希望修
后稿件可以在责刊发表。I greatly appreciate both your
help and that of the referees concerning improvement to this paper.I hope that the revised manuscript is now suitable for publication.
24、很感掰您和外审专家对于稿件修改方面的建议。I
should like to
express my appreciation to you and the referees for suggesting how to improve our paper.
25、很抱歉由于额外新做实验而导致返修稿件时间上的延
误。I
apologize for the delay in revising the manuscript.This was due to our doing an additional experiment,as
suggestedby referees.
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范文五:英语作文,写信约稿
英语作文,写信约稿
篇一:英文文章的投稿注意事项
【写作前准备】
1、自己的实验结果是否够发一篇SCI文章,
2、适合发表在什么杂志,是选择专业期刊,还是综合期刊,
3、为什么类型的投稿,Types of submission,,比如Articles,论著,,Reviews,综述,,Reports,报告,,Letter to editor,来信,等。
4、该杂志的影响因子,Impact factor,是多少~每年发表多少文章,是否有过本土中国人在上面发表,,便于评价自己的文章被接收的可能性,。
6、有没有下载该杂志最新的投稿须知,Instructions for
authors,,
7、是否弄清楚了投稿须知各个条目的意思,
8、是否接收网上投稿(Submission on line),一般有网上投稿的杂志更为方便,,
9、是否收版面费(Page charges),如果论文被接收~自己的经济能力能否支付该杂志的发表全部费用。
10、手头有多少相关内容的文献,,越多越好~这样写作的时候能借鉴他们的思路和语句~对分析讨论的开展也很
有好处,
【写作环节】
1、不要用中国式的思维去写英文句子。
2、套用老外的写作思路,比如前言第1段写对疾病的认识及重要性~第2段对基本背景知识的介绍~第3段如何引出研究问题。讨论部分往往每一段第一句为该段的中心句。,
3、格式一定要严格按照所投杂志的要求来排版,可以参考投稿须知的要求和该杂志最近发表的文章~要做到一模一样~这样编辑认为你是认真对待的,。
4、避免使用首次发现~该研究特别有意义的语句,老外喜欢你陈述事实~是不是首次发现由别人说了算~有没有意义需要时间来检验,。
5、首页有什么特殊要求,比如是否写清了通讯作者,Corresponding author,和页眉标题,Running title,~Running title是否符合字符数要求~一般50个字符以下。首页是否要求标明全文字符数,The number of characters
must be listed on the title page,。首页是否要求提供关键词,Key words)~现在很多杂志在正式出版的时候是看不到关键词的~他多数目的是为了编辑好选择审稿专家。
6、摘要是否为有特殊格式,比如格式摘要:目的~方法~结果~结论,~是否有字数限制,比如205个字以下,。
7、注意参考文献,References,一定要符合杂志的格式~
参考文献的数目是否有限制。是否不能引用正在出版的,In press,文章或未公开的,Unpublished data,数据。
8、是否引用了较多著名杂志的文章为参考文献,大家看影响因子超过10的杂志文章~他们引用的文献多数也是来自10以上的杂志~也就是说你投高影响因子的杂志就尽量不要引用低档杂志的文章~这是一条潜规则,。
9、引用了几篇该杂志的文章作为参考文献,有的杂志有明确要求要引几篇~有的没有要求~但是编辑在还是喜欢你多引他们杂志的文章,。
10、写完后最好先找一个在国外呆过几年的中国人修改第1次,这样能纠正明显写作错误和表达~又明白你的写作意思,~然后再找一个英语为母语的人修改,最好是学医的~这样能够纠正一些微小错误和表达习惯,。最终的目的是即使退稿也不是因为语言问题。人家修改完了注意在回信中致谢,Thank you very much for the excellent and
professional revision of our manuscript. In future~ I will send you my English manuscripts for proofreading!
I will acknowledge your help in the footnote.,和在文章中致谢,We thank *** for critical reading of the
manuscript.,。
11、注意文章中不要有中文输入法情况下的标点符号,老外的计算机操作系统可能识别为乱码或者为非法程序,。
12、标点符号是否正确,空格是否恰当,
13、注意缩写的格式~时间表示的格式~希腊字母的格式。
14、该斜体的地方是否是斜体,in vitro~in vivo等,。
15、材料与方法中试剂后的厂家是否该杂志的要求,有的不但要标明公司名字和国家~还要城市名~货号,。
16、是否进
行了伦理道德的申明。,如果进行了动物实验和人体实验,。
17、图表是否符合杂志的数目(Number)、大小(Size)和分辨率(Resolution)要求,有几副彩图,建议能设臵为灰度的图就改成灰度的图~比如一些统计结果图。因为彩图收费,Color charges,是很贵的,。
18、图的格式类型是否有要求~一般只接收EPS或TIFF格式。图的模式是否有要求~比如过去一般要求是CMYK模式~现在很多杂志要求RGB模式。
19、图表是放在后面~还是插入在文章中。,看投稿须知要求,。
20、字数是否符合杂志要求,有的杂志对字数也有要求。比如最多8个版面。他一般会告诉你怎么推测自己的文章占几个版面~比如有的杂志大约是8000个字符数(characters)
,包括空格,为一个版面,。
21、全文的字号是否符合要求。,一般是12号字(12-point)~双倍行距,Double space,,。
22、是否进行了致谢,国外的文章一般都会致谢。一般要求写受什么基金资助~谁对文章改了~谁进行了技术帮助~谁提供了一些实验材料等,其中很多杂志基金资助一般写在Footnote中,。
【准备投稿】
1、是否了解了该杂志的投稿程序,
2、如果有网上投稿~是否了解其使用方法,
3、是否为投稿和以后的交流准备了一个国际通用的油箱。建议尽量使用hotmail.com~yahoo.com~gmail.com等邮箱。如果用国内的邮箱可能会给带来意想不到的麻烦。
4、杂志是否只接受通讯作者的投稿。
5、是否要投稿费,Submission fee,
6、是否准备好了投稿信Cover letter,~该杂志在投稿信中是否有明确要求,有的有明确要求~必须申明他所列的一些申明~类似中国的无一稿两投~无泄密~无版权纠纷等,
7、稿件的格式,File formats,。例如投稿是否只接收PDF格式的文件。
8、是否要求自己提供一些审稿人名字~如果要求~你了解了这些审稿人的地址和电子信箱了吗,,因为编辑要你提供他们详细的联系方式,
9、最后检查一遍文档是否有错误。
【投稿】
1、是否已经在该杂志网站上申请一个用户名,注意保管好用户名和密码,
2、登入在线投稿系统按要求填写后~检查是否投稿成功,一般会有显示~有的直接在系统上就显示~并能下载自己上传的稿件打开~有的是系统自动回复一封确认信到你的油箱,。
3、是否记住了自己的文章编号,The manuscript
identification number,,以后与编辑联系的时候~就可以在Email邮件主题中写上自己的文章编号,
4、是否获得了编辑的初步意见,编辑首先要初看一下是否符合该杂志的要求~下列情况编辑可能就不会分发给审稿人了而直接拒绝~比如语言问题~老外看不懂~内容不适合本杂志的征稿范围,~一般系统上会显示~如果进入了下一个环节~就要耐心等待。
5、在审稿的过程中是否有焦躁情绪~最容易犯的问题就是写信去催。非常不礼貌~一般至少2个月后去信询问较为合适。好的杂志一般都是按照杂志本身的时间规律去办事的~不用你问~到了那个时间就会给你消息。
【结果及后续事情】1、被拒绝(Reject)~根据反馈意见继续努力。,对文章重新修改后~可以选择低一级的杂志
投,
2、被告之返修(Revision)。,已经迈出成功的一步,。请一定按照审稿人的意见逐一进行修改~该补充实验的就补充实验~不能完成的要解释。回信中一定要注意语气~不要用刻薄的词语~要感谢审稿人的意见~并逐条回答。让编辑一目了然~你做了那些修改。,一般情况是审稿人一审到底~一直到审稿人没有意见,。
3、一般要经过几次修改后~才会出现你最喜欢的结果---接收,Accept,。
4、按照要求签署版权转让协议书,Assignment of
copyright,~注意什么地方要打印~什么地方要手写~什么时间必
须返回协议书。
5、交纳所有费用,一般会给你一个详单~是否需要单行本~需要多少单行本~都很贵~建议不要算了。还会询问支付方式~是用信用卡(credit card)还是支票(check)。
6、费用支付。是否有信用卡,到中国银行去问问~我们平时用的多是借记卡,~是否了解支票和外汇的使用,老外一般是不希望外汇的。有的只接收本国银行的支票,。
7、校正清样。基金号是否写错~作者名字是否写错,大部分杂志是不允许投稿后增减作者的,。有的杂志清样校正后的稿子是不允许再改动的。再改动是要收钱的~而且延误
出版。
8、一般网上先出文章的电子版。
篇二:2016年全国卷英语作文之信件公开课(非常全面))
高考作文--信件复习公开课导学案
【学习目标】
1.总结12种信件,
2.掌握信件的基本写作套路。
【重难点】
熟记各种信件的基本套路及基本套句
基础知识回顾
一(高考常考信件的类型,共12种,
申请信~建议信~感谢信~道歉信~告知信~邀请信~
求助信~咨询信~祝贺信~投诉信~推荐信~约稿信
二(信件的分段
1. 首段:,问候~自我介绍~写信背景~写信目的,
2. 主体段:,具体问题~具体分析,
3. 尾段:,结束语,
【自我总结】
1.首段,问候~自我介绍~写信背景~写信目的,
,1,常用的问候:
___________________________________________________
____________
_______________________________________________________________
,2,常用的自我介绍,陌生人时,:
__________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________
,3,常用的写信背景套句:
________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
,4,写信目的:So, I am writing to do sth.
申请信:
________________________________________________________________ 建议信:
________________________________________________________________ 感谢信:
________________________________________________________________ 道歉信:
________________________________________________________________ 告知信:
________________________________________________________________ 邀请信:
________________________________________________________________ 求助信:
________________________________________________________________ 咨询信:
________________________________________________________________ 祝贺信:
________________________________________________________________ 投诉信:
________________________________________________________________ 推荐信:
________________________________________________________________ 约稿信:
________________________________________________________________
2. 主体段:尽量写成主题句+支撑句结构
1
(1) 总结各种信件主体段的主题句:
【原因】
There are three main reasons why……….
【建议】
Here are some suggestions for you.
【措施】.
Here are some workable/effective measures to deal with….
【告知信.细节】
?Here is the essential information you need to know.
?I want to tell you some details about…..
【求助】
Here are my problems that have been disturbing me these days.
【邀请,活动安排】
Here is a brief schedule about this activity.
【约稿信】
Here are some relevant details about the articles we are eager for.
【投诉信】
There are some main reasons why I am not content with…
【推荐信】
There are some main reasons why I recommend ………..
(2)各支撑句需要添加的过渡词,
?表示多方面的过渡词:首先:
__________________________________________ 其次(此
外):____________________________________
最后:_________________________________________
?表示两方面的过渡词:一方面:
________________________________________ 另方面:
________________________________________
3. 结尾段:
申请信:
________________________________________________________________ 建议信:
________________________________________________________________ 感谢信:
________________________________________________________________ 道歉信:
________________________________________________________________ 告知信:
________________________________________________________________ 邀请信:
________________________________________________________________ 求助信:
________________________________________________________________ 咨询信:
________________________________________________________________ 祝贺信:
________________________________________________________________ 投诉信:
________________________________________________________________ 推荐信:
________________________________________________________________ 约稿信:
________________________________________________________________
实战演练 假定你是李华~你所喜爱的global mirror周
报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见~以下内容给主编写信祝
贺。
2
依据
1.说明你是该报的忠实读者
2.赞赏该报优点
1.,兼顾国内外新闻.
2.,介绍名人成功故事.
3.提出建议: 刊登指导英语学习的文章
?写作思路分析
?遣词造句
首段: 问
候:________________________________________________________
自我介绍:我是李华~我是贵报忠实读者。
翻译:
________________________________________________________
写信背景:global mirror周报创刊五周年
句子化:我得知贵报创刊五周年。,能否翻译出来,,
简单化:我得知你们报纸要过五岁生日了。
翻译:
________________________________________________________
写信目的:我写信表达衷心祝贺。
翻译:
________________________________________________________
中间段1:主题句,优点,:贵报有两大优点。
简单化:我喜欢你们报纸有两个理由。
翻译:
_________________________________________________________
支撑句1:兼顾国内外新闻
句子化:你们报纸报道了来自国内外的新闻。
翻译:
_________________________________________________________
加细节:
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
支撑句2:介绍名人成功故事
句子化:名人成功故事被介绍在你们报纸上。
翻译:
__________________________________________________________
加细节:
________________________________________________________
中间段2:建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章
句子化:我有一个建议~你们应该刊登指导英语学习文
章。
翻译:
_________________________________________________________________
结尾:Best wishes!
3
【组句成章】,支撑句添加适当的过渡词~再利用万能尾
巴句型加细节,
Dear Editor-in-Chief~
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【小牛试刀】
假如你是李华~你的外国朋友John想通过阅读提高汉语
水平,了解中国文化~希望你为他推荐一本中文书籍。请你
用英语给他回一封信~内容包括以下要点:
1. 推荐阅读《西游记》Journey To The West;
2. 推荐的理由,
3. 鼓励他坚持阅读,学好中文。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4
篇三:怎样写英文投稿信
Dear Prof. XXXXX,
Here within enclosed is our paper for consideration to be published on "(Journal name)". The further nformation about the paper is in the following:
The Title: XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
The Authors: XXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXX and XXXXXXXXXX
The authors claim that none of the material in the paper has been published or is under consideration for
publication elsewhere. I am the corresponding author and my address and other information is asfollows,
Address: Department of XXXXXXXXX,
Tsinghua University,
Beijing, 10084,
P.R.China
E-mail: XXXXX@mail.tsinghua.edu.cn
Tel: 86-10-62785001
Fax: 86-10-62785001
Thank you very much for consideration!
Sincerely Yours,
Dr. XXXXXXXXXXX
投稿信举例:
Dear Dr(:
Enclosed are three copies of a manuscript by Rose N (Dipaola~Donna A(Gallo~and Tom N(Roberts titled
“Hepatitis C Virus Infection in Long-Term Transfusion Patients”(It is submitted to be considered for publication as a“Original Article" in your
journal(This paper is,?Neither the entire paper nor any part of its content has been published or has been accepted elsewhere (It is not being submitted to any
other journal(
We believe the paper may be of particular interest to the readers of your journal because the study it reports stated the HCV infection rate among long-term transfusion patients is higher than that of the general population and of short-term transfusion patients(
Correspondence and phone calls about the paper should be directed to Rose N(Dipaola at the following
address~phone and fax number~and e-mail address:
Rose N (Dipaola~MD
Institute of Internal Medicine
Cleveland Clinic Foundation
9500 Euclid Ave(
Cleveland~OH44195~USA
Tel:1-216-444-5360
Fax:1-216-444-9580
E-mail:dipao,cesmtp (ccf. Org
Thanks very much for your attention to our paper(
Sincerely yours~
Rose N(Dipaola
修改稿
Dear Editor,
We are pleased to answer the questions of the reviewers’ and the manuscript (Manuscript number…)
has also been extensively revised
according to the comments (resubmitted online).
Question #1:
Answer:
Question #2:
Answer:
Best wishes,
Sincerely yours,
Name